小学英语即兴演讲万能模板（通用20篇）

Moonquakes are to Mid-Autumn Festival what mince pies are to Christmas. The seasonal round cakes traditionally have a sweet filling of lotus seed paste or red bean paste and often have one or more salted duck eggs in the center to represent the moon. And the moon is what this celebration is all about. Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th month，it is the time when the moon is said to be at its brightest and fullest.

There are two legends which claim to explain the tradition of eating moonquakes. One Tang Dynasty myth holds that the Earth once had 10 suns circling it. One day all 10 suns appeared at once，scorching the planet with their heat.

It was thanks to a skillful archer named Hour Yi that the Earth was saved. He shot down all but one of the suns. As his reward，the Heavenly Queen Mother gave Hour Yi the Elixir of Immortality，but she warned him that he must use it wisely.

Hour Yi ignored her advice and，corrupted by fame and fortune，became a tyrannical leader. Chang-Err，his beautiful wife， could no longer stand by and watch him abuse his power so she stole his Elixir and fled to the moon to escape his angry wrath. And thus began the legend of the beautiful woman in the moon，the Moon Fairy.

The second legend has it that during the Yuan Dynasty，an underground group led by Zhu Yuan Zing was determined to rid the country of Mongolian dominance. The moon cake was created to carry a secret message.

When the cake was opened and the message read，an uprising was unleashed which successfully routed the Mongolians. It happened at the time of the full moon，which，some say，explains why moonquakes are eaten at this time.

Moonquakes are usually stamped with Chinese characters indicating the name of the ry and the type of filling used. Some ries will even stamp them with your family name so that you can give personalized ones to friends and family.

They are usually presented in boxes of four which indicate the four phases of the moon. Traditional moonquakes are made with melted lard，but today vegetable oil is more often used in the interests of health.

Moonquakes are not for the diet-conscious as they are loaded with calories. The best way to wash down one of these sticky cakes is with a cup of Chinese tea，especially Jasmine or Chrysanthemum tea，which aids the digestion.

When I was a child, I once went camping with my family in the summer. We decided to make a barbecue in the valley. So we collected some tree sticks to make a fire. My father asked me if I could try to make a fire.

I was glad to take the job. Then I tried to set fire to the wood with a match, but produced only smoke. Then my father said, "That’s not the right way. I’ll show you how to do it. First use the small pieces of wood because they catch fire easily. Then put the larger ones on top of them."My father helped me make a big fire.

我的学校小学英语作文一：My School

Now, I am studying in Tiantao Primary School. I am a student of Grade six. The campus is beautiful. There are many tress, flowers and grass in my school. Tiantao Primary School is famous in my city. It is very good. There are two teaching buildings and a office building. There are about 600 hundred students and 40 teachers in my school. I like going to school. I can study and play games in school.

我的学校小学英语作文二：My School

My school is near a small lake. It is very beautiful. I like my school very much.

We have a high teaching building and it is big and clean. Our classroom is on the fifth floor. The computer rooms are on the third floor. We have computer classes there. We have a big library on the second floor. There are many books in it. I like reading books there. We also have music room and art rooms in the building.

There is a big playground behind the teaching building. After class, we often play basketball there.

The teachers in my school are very kind. The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.

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我的学校在一个小湖附近。它很漂亮。我非常喜欢我的学校。

我们有一座教学楼，它又大又干净。我们的教室在第五层。电脑室在第三层。我们有电脑课。我们在二楼有一个大图书馆。里面有许多书。我喜欢在那里看书。我们也有音乐室和艺术室的建设。

教学楼后面有一个大操场。下课后，我们经常在那里打篮球。

我们学校的老师都很和蔼。学生们很有礼貌和聪明。我在学校很快乐。

In summer,all kinds offruits areripe,have been listed,colorful,have everything that one expects to findthe rainy season,wecan taste thesour,sweetYang Mei;slippery,deliciousmango;not only refreshing,and thirst-quenchingwatermelon;andsparklinggrape;known as the"Queen of fruit"strawberry.Whatitis!

Summer is so beautiful,is soattractive,seductive,let us have tolove it.In summer,Ilikeyou,only one a year summer

Good afternoon,teachers! I`m very happy to introduce myself here. I`m Scott. My Chinese nameis SunZijing. I`m 13. I`m from Class1 Grade 6 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. Ihave many hobbies, such as playing ping-pong, playing badminton, listening tomusic, reading magazines and so on. My favourite food is chicken. It`s tastyand yummy. So I`m very strong. I`m a naughty boy. I always play tricks. And Ijust like staying in my room and reading books. But I have a dream, I want tobe a car-designer. Because I`m a car fan.This is me. Please remember SunZijing!Thank you very much!

The classmates, teacher wang, hello!

My name is ungho, 9 years old this year, height 1.36 meters, weight 30 kg and in grade three.

I am a lively and cheerful boy, I like sports, running, high jump, long jump, play a ball game are my strengths, and I also took part in the taekwondo training, is now red stripe, coach often praised me very well, Im very proud.

I also like to learn, not only book knowledge to master the good, and often read some books, fairy tales, classic, social science, celebrity stories, historical stories. I especially like weapon books, aircraft, tanks, guns I like it very much. Im going to good good study, invented a super plane in the future, to defend the motherland.

I also like painting, music, sachs is well.

I was industrious child, at home to help my mother do housework, I also recently learned Fried eggs.

I also love to play with classmates, all together, I am very happy, who have difficulty I are willing to help. Everybody praised me is a sensible boy.

同学们、王老师，你们好!

我的名字是成浩，今年9岁，身高1.36米，体重30公斤，上三年级了。

我是一个活泼开朗的男孩，我喜欢运动，跑步，跳高，跳远，打球都是我的长项，而且我还参加了跆拳道培训，现在已经红带了，教练经常夸我打的好，我自己也很骄傲。

我也喜欢学习，不仅书本知识掌握的好，而且经常看一些课外书，童话故事，古典名著，社会科学，名人故事，历史故事。我特别喜欢兵器方面的书，飞机，坦克，冲锋枪我都非常喜欢。我准备好好学习，将来发明一架超级飞机，来保卫祖国。

我还喜欢画画，音乐，萨克斯也吹得不错。

我还是勤劳的孩子，在家里帮妈妈做家务，我最近还学会了煎鸡蛋。

我还特别喜欢和同学们一起玩，大家在一起，我特别开心，谁有困难我都愿意帮助。大家都夸我是一个懂事的好孩子。

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1.打算做....../计划做......

intend /plan to do 打算做......

be going to do 打算做......

decide to do决定做......

determine to do决定做......

be determine to do 决定做......

make up ones mind to do 下定决心做......

2.想/希望......

want to do= would like to do想做......

hope to do希望做......

expect to do期待做......

wish to do 希望做......

consider doing 考虑做......

looking forward to doing盼望做......

dream of doing 梦想做......

cant help doing 情不自禁地做......

3.表示喜欢和感兴趣

like /love doing 喜欢做......

enjoy doing 喜欢做.......

be fond of doing 喜欢做......

be keen on+n/doing 喜欢做......

prefer to do A rather than B 宁愿做A也不愿做B

be interest in n/doing对......感兴趣

show/take interest in n/doing 对......产生兴趣

4.其他短语

keep on doing 坚持做......

keep/stop/prevent sb from doing 阻止某人做......

be busy (in) doing= be busy with +名词 忙于做......

spend time/money(in) doing =spend time/money on+名词 花费时间做......

have fun/have a good time/enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have trouble/have problem/ have difficulty (in) doing 或with +名词 做...有困难

满分句型

1.Its adj for sb to do 做...对某人来说是...

2. ...so...that ...如此...以至于...

...too...to do 太...而不能...

such...that...如此...以至于...

3.not...until...直到...才...

4. The reason why+句子is that +句子...的原因是...

5.That is why+句子 那是...的原因

6. That is because+句子 那是因为...

7.It is said that+句子 据报道...

It is reported that+句子 据报道...

8.There is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问...

9.It goes without saying that+句子 不言而喻/毫无疑问...

10. There is no need to do 没必要做...

11.There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义

12. You had better (not) do ...最好(不)做

13.How about /What about doing...怎么样?

14. I think you should do我认为你应该...

15. I suggest that you (should) do 我建议你做...

16. If I were you, I would do...我要是你的话，我会做...

Last Sunday， our class held aSpringOutingin the forest park. It was a nice day. The sun was shining brightly and the flowers were swaying in the spring breeze. We took a lot of pictures and had our favorite snacks on the bench. The girls talked about their favorite movie starts and the boys played football on the ground. We had so much fun.

I love spring outing because we don’t need to do the homework.

上个星期天，我们班组织了一次春游活动。那天真是个好天气，阳光明媚，鲜花在春风中摇曳。我们都很开心。我们照了很多的相片，并坐在长凳上吃我们最爱的零食。女孩子们谈论她们最爱的电影明星，男孩子们在草地上踢足球。我们玩得太开心了。

我爱春游，因为这一天我们不用写作业。

假如我当英语小老师，我要充分利这短短的40分钟，培养同学们学习英语的兴趣，让他们以后能自觉学习。

假如我当英语小老师，我首先要请教我的老师，家长，并去书店或者上网查资料。

假如我当英语小老师，我要认真备课，把我知道的英语知识全部教给同学。

假如我当英语小老师，我不会让同学们感到累。同学们可以随便怎么坐，只要认真听课就行。

假如我当英语小老师，我不会让同学们觉得上课没有意思。我会组织一些有意义的活动，让同学们积极参加。

假如我当英语小老师，我会买一些小东西作为奖品奖励给认真的同学。

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Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……

Hence/Therefore, wed better come to the conclusion that …

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……

There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.

All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

提出建议:

It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.

It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …

毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.

Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that …

显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we … 只有这样，我们才能……

It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……

预示后果:

Obviously, if we dont control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.

很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.

No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that …

毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.

很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.

I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点……

Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边.

I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……

In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do ….

在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智.

Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why …

给出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …

这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先，……;第二,，……;第三，……

Why did …? For one thing …，for another …. Perhaps the primary reason is…

为什么会……?一个原因是……，令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是……

I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.

我十分赞同这一论述,即……，其主要原因如下:

列出解决办法:

Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.

The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.

批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言，……

It was obvious that …很显然,….

It may be true that …, but it doesnt mean that …

可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldnt ignore that …

认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……

There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……

Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.

It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为……

Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……

With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……

A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……

引出不同观点:

Peoples views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……，然而其他人却认为……

People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.

Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.

There are different opinions among people as to …关于……，人们的观点大不相同.

Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

In our daily life, if we get on harmoniously with our friends, we’ll feel more joyous. But we’ll feel lonely without friends.When our friends feel upset or get ill, we shouldn’t ignore them or look down upon them. On the contrary, we ought to calm them down, show our love and concern to them and try our best to help them overcome the hardships. Sometimes we may have some misunderstandings or disagreements with our friends, thus we had better have a discussion with them and try to accept their good ideas instead of quarreling with them. As long as we can follow these good suggestions, we’ll find it easy to make more friends.

在日常生活中，如果我们跟朋友相处融洽，我们的心情也会更加愉悦。然而若是没有朋友则会觉得孤单。当我们的朋友忧伤或是生病时，我们不应冷落或轻起他们，相反地，我们要帮他们平抚心情，尽自己最大的努力关心他，帮助他渡过难关。有时候我们会与朋友产生误会，发生分歧，这时我们最好是跟朋友好好谈谈而不要争吵，尽量理解他的好的想法。只要我们遵循这些建议，我们会发现想要结交更多的朋友很简单。

Fifth lunar month is the Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie, afternoon day festival, may festival, ai festival, terminal five, ChongWu, midday, summer day. Although the name is different, but all around the custom of the peoples holiday is the same. The Dragon Boat Festival is Chinas two thousand years old customs, on this day, every family hanging mo_a calamus, dragon boat racing, eating zongzi, drink realgar wine, swim all ills, sweet bursa.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival, you know the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival? ! I dont know! Let me tell you! Do you remember the patriotic general chu qu yuan? I to say him!

Qu yuan is the warring states period abroad, very learned. He beside the king a few to image is his country rich and strong. Treacherous court official, listen to the words, bad king king chu qu yuan _iaoZhi e_ile. In e_ile, qu yuan heard that chu capital held by the enemy, and the people suffer, very indignation. Falls on this day, he came to the miluo river edge, with a stone, in order to jump jumped into the miluo river. Abroad people hear that cast jiang qu yuan was very sad. They rowed steadily to salvage qu yuan, with tears in their eyes, also threw rice dumplings into the river feed the fish, hope that the fish dont harm the body of qu yuan. This is may duanyang the origin of zongzi.

The Dragon Boat Festival has a lot of interesting activities. Columns such as dragon boat racing, hanging sachet, sachet, cinnabar, realgar, _iang, outsourcing to wire cloth, fragrance 4 e_cessive, again the five-color silk string into a rope buckle, for all kinds of different shape, form a series, variety, and e_quisite. Have the habit of hanging mo_a leaf, calamus.

There were so many activity in the Dragon Boat Festival!

农历五月初五为端午节，又称端阳节、午日节、五月节、艾节、端五、重午、午日、夏节。虽然名称不同，但各地人民过节的习俗是相同的。端午节是我国二千多年的旧习俗，每到这一天，家家户户挂艾叶菖蒲，赛龙舟，吃粽子，饮雄黄酒，游百病，佩香囊。

今天是端午节，大家知道端午节的来历吗?!不知道吧!那就让我来告诉你们吧!你们还记得楚国那位爱国大将屈原吗?我来说一说他吧!

屈原是战国时期出国人，很有学问。他在楚王身边做官，以形象是自己的国家富强起来。昏君楚王却听信奸臣的话，把屈原削职流放。在流放中，屈原听说楚国的都城被敌人占领，百姓遭难，悲愤极了。五月初五这一天，他来到汨罗江边，怀抱一块石头，以纵身跳入汨罗江中。出国的百姓听到屈原投江的消息，都十分悲痛。他们含着泪划着船赶来打捞屈原，还把粽子扔到江里喂鱼，希望鱼儿不要伤害屈原的身体。这就是五月端阳包粽子的来历。

端午节还有许多有趣的活动。列如赛龙舟，挂香囊，香囊内有朱砂、雄黄、香药，外包以丝布，清香四溢，再以五色丝线弦扣成索，作各种不同形状，结成一串，形形色色，玲珑夺目。还有挂艾叶、菖蒲的习惯。

端午节的活动可真多啊!

This is Lin. She is from Beijing. She studies very hard.In class she can answer theteachers questions very quickly. Lin loves her classmates and often helps them with their lessons. Everybody says she is a very good monitor.

Hello， My name is Tiger。 I am 11 years old。

Today I will talk about sport。 I like basketball， chess and football。 Basketball is my favourite sport。 Basketball is an interesting sport。 I think who play Basketball often can get cleverer and fitter than who does not。 Im good at playing basketball。 I always play it with my good friends Cookie and Simmon。 Sometimes we just play it for fun， sometimes for match。 I like match， even if we are the losers。 We run to each other， pass the ball to others， teacher always tells as to help your team to put the ball in basketball stand。 Playing basketball tells me that when you are in the team， you should do teamwork。

I like playing basketball。 Therefore I like NBA。 NBA the Lakers and Rocket are my favorite teams。 I have my favourite basketball players too 。They are Yaoming and Kobe Bryant。 On Sunday I like to watch basketball matches with my father。 I yell when they get points for their team。 I hope I can join BNA one day。 Although I am not tall enough， I want to be a good basketball player。

[小学生英语作文我喜欢的运动

Today is a fine day.And I am very lucky.

In the morning,I’m go fishing in a river with my parents.As time goes by,I am fishing a big fish.I am very happy,but my parents have no one fish.Next,I am fishing a small fish,but I still happy.Because my parents still have no one fish.It’s time to go home,I am fishing ten fishs,but my parents are only fishing a small fish.In the afternoon,I am playing football with my buddies.MingMing has the ball,he is kicking it to me.I am kicking the ball.It’s a beautiful goal. Next, PingPing has the ball,he is kicking to Mike.Now,Mike has the ball,he is kicking it.It’s a goal.Now,we are winning.

Today I am very lucky.And I am so happy.

今天是晴朗的一天。我很幸运。

在早上,我去钓鱼和我的父母在河里。随着时间的流逝,我钓一条大鱼。我很高兴,但我父母没有一条鱼。接下来,我钓鱼的小鱼,但我仍然高兴。因为我的父母还没有一条鱼。是时候回家了,我钓鱼十条鱼,但我的父母只是捕捞小鱼。在下午,我和我的朋友踢足球。明明有球,他是踢我。我踢球。那是一个美丽的目标。接下来,记者拿球,他是迈克踢。现在,迈克拿球,他是踢它。这是一个目标。现在,我们正在赢得。

今天我很幸运。和我很高兴。

Memory through the time of the tunnel, with the passage of time, a scene, a good memory, always in my mind. Graduation day, back at the former campus, listening to the sounds of singing, recalling that sweet smiling face, looking for the running of the footprints in the playground, in the hallway listening to loud singing, capturing the butterfly figure in the flowers, at the edge of the pond fish expect traces of &hellip & hellip;

The spring rain awakened the sleeping school. Wicker dancing in the air; the peach blossom smiles at us; we bend to the grass … … the warm sunshine in the lush playground, beautiful butterflies in the flowers, the bees are busy collecting nectar, everywhere filled with the laughter of classmates in the campus.

Sound “ cicadas, cicadas ” cicadas cicadas, hot summer has arrived. Sun bar, playground straight smoke, but the mood of the students have not been disturbed. Under the pavilion, corridor, pool, garden, the girls gently shaking the hands of the fans, they will breeze head bangs blow it up, the boys were naughty climbed up the tree to catch cicadas, there are people in the swimming pool!

Rustle of autumn wind, let fall unconsciously into the campus. The two row of maple teaching downstairs stands, like praetorian heroic, motionless guard us. Maple trees are the wind blows rained on the top of us. The ingenuity of the girls and make them a piece of bookmarks. Garden chrysanthemums are open, like all contests, very pretty and charming girl. Boys do not know how to cherish, the flowers are picked, upstairs to a &ldquo &rdquo The heavenly maids scatter blossoms.;!

The bitter wind brought a severe winter. The most beautiful campus is the plum blossom in the snow. Snowflake sister fell from the air, like fairies dancing in the air, set off the plum blossom red. There is a row of holly and sycamore beside the sand pit, and naughty students will pick up snowballs and throw them at the tree.

Graduation day, we review, we remember, beautiful, beautiful … …

译文：

记忆穿过时间的隧道，随着时间的蔓延，一幕一幕美好的回忆始终在脑海中荡漾。毕业那天，回头看看那曾经的校园，聆听那动听的歌声，回顾那甜美的笑脸，在操场上寻找奔跑的脚印，在走廊聆听高声唱过的歌，在花丛中捕捉蝴蝶的身影，在水池边期许鱼儿的踪迹……

丝丝春雨唤醒了沉睡着的学校。柳条在空中舞蹈；桃花冲我们微笑；小草向我们弯弯腰……和煦的阳光照在绿油油的操场上，美丽的蝴蝶在花丛上空盘旋，蜜蜂们也在忙着采蜜，校园里处处洋溢的同学们的欢笑声。

声声“知了，知了”的蝉叫，炎热的夏天到了。太阳吧操场晒得直冒烟，可同学们的心情并没有被打扰。凉亭下，走廊上，小池边，花园里，女孩子们轻轻摇动着手中的折扇，徐徐微风将他们头上的刘海吹了起来，男孩子们则调皮的爬到树上去捉蝉，还有人在池边戏水呢！

瑟瑟秋风，让秋天不知不觉的进入校园。教学楼下的两排枫树矗立着，像英勇的禁卫军，动也不动的守护着我们。树上的枫叶被风一吹，纷纷落在了我们的头顶上。心灵手巧的女生们将它们做成一片一片的书签。花园里的菊花都开了，个个争奇斗艳，像婀娜多姿的少女。可男生们一点也不懂得爱惜，将花儿都摘了，在楼上来了个“天女散花”！

刺骨的寒风带来了严冬。校园里最美的就要属雪景中的梅花了。雪花妹妹从空中飘落下来，像仙女在空中舞蹈，衬托了梅花的红。在沙坑旁有一排冬青与梧桐，顽皮的同学会拾起雪球，朝树上扔去。

毕业那天，我们回顾，我们回忆，好美，好美……

[小学毕业聚会英语作文

教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

问：“哪十字？”

“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

My name is Yu Geqin. I’m nine years old. There are three members in my family， my father， my mother and I.

My father is a teacher. He is very handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. He works very hard. He’s busy from morning to night. He’s the cleverest man of my family. He can solve the difficult problems， too.

My mother is very beautiful. She has two big eyes and her black hair is long. My mother is worker. She is good at her job. She is also a good housewife.

I have a happy family. I like it very much.

示例：

Dear ____,

I am truly sorry that_______(道歉的原因).

The reason is that ______(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

导语：每个学校都会举行运动会，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

At the elementary school today it is a sports day; all the parents and friends were invited to attend.Each class in the school was competing in one or more sports events such as relay races,distance races,ball games,parades,and so on.All the guests had small chairs to sit on at one side of the school field.There were refreshments given and a concession stand available if you wanted to buy ice-cream or candy .everyone cheered and clapped after each event.Special honors were given to individual winners,but all in all,everyone felt great that day.

【参考翻译】

在小学今天是体育运动日;所有的父母和朋友都被邀请参加。在学校的每一类中的一个或多个体育赛事，如接力赛、长跑、球类、游行的竞争，等等。所有的客人都有小椅子坐在学校的场的一面。如果你想买冰淇淋或糖果有点心和特许站可用。每个人都鼓掌欢呼后事件。特别荣誉给予个人获奖者，但所有的一切，每个人都感觉很好的那一天。

Our environment is getting worse and worse now. People throw their garbage here and there. Factories make more and more dirty water that has polluted the rivers and lakes. What should we do?

We must find ways to stop pollution. Waste water must be cleaned before it is poured into the river. People shouldn‘t throw away rubbish here and there. We should pick up the garbage around us. We‘d better plant more trees.

I‘m sure if we take care of our environment, our world will be more beautiful!

现在我们的环境越来越糟。人们把他们的垃圾这里和那里。工厂使越来越多的脏水污染了河流和湖泊。我们应该做些什么呢?

我们必须找到方法来制止污染。废水必须清洁之前倒进河里。人们不应该到处扔垃圾。我们应该捡起身边的垃圾。我们最好种植更多的树木。

我相信如果我们照顾我们的环境,我们的世界将会更美丽!