给某老师的一封信推荐三篇 写给老师的信英语【通用20篇】

The flower thanks rain, because rain to moisten it grow; goshawk Thanksgiving sky, because the sky let it fly; mountain Thanksgiving earth, because the earth it tall; I am grateful to my teacher, because the teacher opens the wisdom door, let me travel in the ocean of knowledge. As I grew up, your deep love of the teachers has been around. Yes, the teacher is a sacred profession. The teacher is the Enlightenment of the pillars of the motherland, the creator there is no teacher, how will the motherlands prosperity today? Like the teacher won Ding, hard to cultivate the motherland flowers. Teachers, though not our loved ones, but wins is our loved ones! Is undoutable. A good teacher! Time passes in a hurry, and is a teacher, the teacher, you worked hard, whenever the dead of night, you have in preparing lessons, looking at your shadow, I couldnt help wanted to say: "thank you, teacher, whenever we encounter do not understand the problem, you are patiently explained to us, watching you, I couldnt help but think to say" thank you, teacher. Whenever we naughty fun or not doing homework, you will not scold us, just give us serious reason. Let us recognize the error. It takes a hundred years. I will forget the teachers teachings. Some people say, you like, because the mountains towering, revered. I want to say, you like the sea, because Ohai Hiro, immeasurable. Thank you, teacher.

鲜花感恩雨露，因为雨露滋润它成长;苍鹰感恩长空，因为长空让它飞翔;高山感恩大地，因为大地让它高耸;我感恩我的老师，因为老师打开智慧的大门，让我在知识的海洋里遨游。在我的成长历程中，您浓浓的师爱一直伴随左右。

是啊，老师是一种神圣的职业。老师是祖国栋梁的启蒙者，创造者没有了老师,怎会有祖国今日的繁荣?老师就象圆丁,辛勤的培育祖国的花朵.老师虽不是我们的亲人,却胜是我们的亲人!无庸质疑,老师真好!

时光匆匆流逝,又是一年教师节,老师,您辛苦了,每当夜深人静的时候,您却在备课,看着您的身影,我忍不住想要跟您说:"感恩您,老师",每当我们遇到不懂的问题时,您都很有耐心的给我们讲解,看着您,我忍不住想对您说"感恩您,老师"。每当我们淘气贪玩或不写作业是，您不会骂我们，只是严肃的给我们讲道理。让我们认识到错误。

十年树木，百年树人。老师的教诲之恩我终身难忘。有人说，师恩如山，因为高山巍巍，使人崇敬。我还要说，师恩如海，因为大海浩瀚，无法估量。感恩您，老师。

我的英语老师My English Teacher

Mr. He is my Englishteacher. He is a tall and thin young man. His English is very good and we likehim talking. Besides, he can sing many English songs. We learn some simple onesfrom him. He graduated from a famous university of our country. He always tellshis stories in school. They are very interesting. I want to grow up soon and bea college student.

I have a good English teacher. Her name is Wu Fang. She is 34 years old. She has short curly hair and is of medium build, she is tall. And she has many habits!

She likes playing badminton and basketball. She is healthy.. She likes reading, singing, dancing… . She says she will be our best friend. Many students love her very much.

My English teacher is very strict(严厉) with us. Her English is really good, she gives us some advice about how to learn English well. She tells us to practice English every day. And listening to English music is also a good way to improve(改善）our English.

This is my English teacher. A popular English teacher!

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[我的英语老师作文素材

Spelling Bee 是学校为了提高我们的英语水平，让我们多学一些英语词汇，丰富我们的知识面，对英语多一些认知而举办的活动。

Spelling Bee 活动需要有初赛，复赛和决赛，拥有傲人英语成绩的我必然当仁不让，以绝对的优势进入了Spelling Bee 英语活动决赛。

Spelling Bee 决赛就要开始了，面对众多高手，我们异常紧张，我的英语老师文老师轻拍我的肩膀说“输赢不重要，重在参与，大家多注意大屏幕上的关键词，也不要着急，看准了再答，先以对为主！”我信心满满地向老师点头，抱着必胜的决心，喊着口号，带着同学们对我的信任登上了舞台。文老师对我们微微一笑，眉宇间透露出来了热情，眼睛里闪烁着的光芒无不充满了对我们的信任。

在第一环节中，我们组的分数位居第二，文老师在台下为我们鼓掌，面带一副和蔼的微笑，眼睛里的光芒很清澈，老师的掌声让我更加有信心，我也很得意。最后一环节我们想一把夺冠，但是有一名队员因超时没回答而导致我们队连扣20分，这时我的情绪一下子进入低谷，台下的同学们一阵哄笑，我的脸像染了颜料似的绯红，汗水也湿透了我的额头，打湿了我的脊背。

老师对我们糟糕的表现一定很失望吧，我忐忑地望向观众席上的他，却看到他正在给我们拍照片，并摆出了一个大拇指，用口型说：“你们是最棒的，加油！”老师的脸上依然显得那么柔美，笑容更加灿烂，我们队顿时重拾信心，保证后面的题不错，但成绩依旧趋于劣势。

比赛争分夺秒，很快结果出来了，我们队是季军，文老师急忙冲上台，开心地说：“你们真棒！不要太伤心，咱们明年再卷土重来，拿个好名次！”我们都觉得很对不起同学们和老师的期盼，但是文老师却像一把利刃看穿了我们的小心思，即使我们是季军，老师依然对我们温暖如初。老师的乌黑深邃的双眼依旧那么清澈，流露出来的笑容依旧那么灿烂。正是老师的信任给了我无限的感动与动力，我告诉自己，别灰心，明年再战。

对英语的热情是一种情怀，而我的英语老师却让我感动不已，“明年初二再卷土重来！”这句话深深刻在了我的心里挥之不去，真正的强者要融会贯通，向未来前进，老师那明亮的眼眸，对我们的信任，语重心长的话语使我的心中有一个信念，那就是过五关斩六将，明年初二再卷土重来！

It is Teachers Day today. On this special occasion I would like to extend my heartfelt congratulations to all teachers, "Happy Teachers Day!"

Of all teachers who have taught me since my early childhood, the most unforgettable one is my first English teacher in college, Ms. Zhang. It is she who has aroused my keen interest in the learning of English and helped me realize the importance of self-reliance. Born into a poor farmers family in a mountainous area and educated in relatively primitive surroundings, I found myself lagging far behind in the first class in college, which happened to be Ms. Zhangs English class. I was really discouraged and frustrated, so I decided to drop out. Ms. Zhang was so keenly insightful that she had noticed my embarrassment in class. After class, she called me into the Teachers Room and discussed the situation with me, earnestly and kindly, citing the example of Robinson Crusoe to motivate me to go ahead in spite of all kinds of difficulties. "Be a man and rely on yourself," she nudged me. The next time we met, she brought me a simplified version of Robinson Crusoe and recommended that I finish reading it in a week and write a book report. Under her consistent and patient guidance, not only has my English been greatly improved, but my confidence and courage enhanced considerably.

"Rely on yourself and be a man," Ms. Zhangs inspiring words have been echoing in my mind. I will work harder and try my utmost to lay a solid foundation for my future career. Only by so doing can I repay Ms. Zhangs kindness and live up to her expectations of me, that is, to become a useful person and contribute to society.

我有一个非常凶的老师，她是我的英语老师，她有一个厚厚的嘴唇，还有一双小巧玲珑的眼睛，她那小小的耳朵，几乎没有人注意过她的耳朵。我的英语老师姓董，我们都叫她Missdong。不过，我们的英语老师也很好，每次我们举手发言的时候，说一次，就1颗星。收起30多颗就可以换奖品了。我有一个大胆的决策，可是，肯定我们班上的同学们都不敢。我去跟Missdong说了。我说的是，劳资是中国人，不是外国人，劳资不学英语。当时，老师一听，傻了。问我，张皖玉啊，你英语成绩很好啊!为什么不喜欢英语呢?。我当时只想对老师说，我们有不足的地方，你就用我们休息时间惩罚我们好了。为什么，要霸占，我们的体育课，音乐课?我们上学的时候，偶尔会很累。但我们也坚持着上课!到了音乐课，我们欢喜的不得了，可以听音乐休息一会儿，可谁知，到头来还是英语课。我想在这儿给老师提个意见。我们表现不好就用课间时间来惩罚吧。不要夺走我们最可以放松的最爱的课好吗?老师?

Is our opening ceremony of the day, I quote the name, a near the school, the scenery beautiful attractive, is filled with the fragrance of gardenias, students and parents are busy, some busy application, some busy looking for a teacher... My mood is excited, thinking: new term comes again, perhaps in the new teacher, really hope the new teacher will gentle, tough! At that moment, my classmate Yu Dian one by one to me that she already know who our new teacher is told to leave the teacher, I listened to, immediately upstairs to sit in their seats, waiting for the arrival of the new teacher.

I was discuss with your classmates, a young teacher came in, he was wearing a bright black coat, and a pair of black trousers, he said: "hello, everyone, my name is calligraphy, is your Chinese teacher, hope everybody can like me!" The teacher went on to say: "learning is we take property, so everybody to want to study well." After listening, we all feel a lot of sense, he stood up and applauded.

Since for the teacher to the students and I stay for just one class teacher talking and laughing, like his father and the children together, I hope I stay under the guidance of the teacher education and become a learned person, the teacher always said: "we take the property of the learning is" to study these words I will work hard.

I want to study well in the future, to honor the teacher, the teacher happy, what I admire most is for the teacher to write write very well, I thought to myself, I want to leave the teacher learning, grow up to be a calligrapher, that is great! I think for the teacher to students is quite good, is a bit tough, leave the teacher mean, you dont know, big mouth, talk is deafening, face is red, like a lobster is our fault, to provoke him. Let him not high heart, I must be a good university, thanked the teacher when he grows up.

正是我们开学典礼的一天，我报完名，一走近学校，景色美的诱人，到处都有栀子花的芬芳，同学和家长忙忙碌碌，有的忙碌着报名，有的忙碌着找老师……我的心情真是激动万分，心想：新的学期又来了，也许会换新的老师，真希望新的老师会温柔、严厉啊!就在这时，我的同学一一余典给我说她已经知道我们新的老师是谁了一一留老师，我听完了，马上上楼在座位上坐好，等着新老师的到来。

我正在跟同学们讨论，一位年青的老师走了进来，他穿着一件亮亮的黑衣服，和一条黑裤子，他说了一句话：“大家好，我叫留书学，是你们的语文老师，希望的大家能喜欢我!”老师接着说：“学问是我们随身的财产，所以大家要好好学习。”我们听完以后，都觉得很有道理，便站起来鼓掌。

自从留老师来了以后，同学们和我一下课就跟留老师有说有笑，像是父亲和孩子们在一起的情景，我希望我在留老师的教育和指导下会变成一个有学问的人，老师常常都说：“学问是我们随身的财产”为了这句话我会勤奋努力学习。

我将来要好好学习，给老师争光，让老师高兴，我最羡慕的就是留老师写字写得非常好，我心想：我要向留老师学习，长大当个书法家，那就好了!我觉得留老师对同学们挺好的，就是有点凶巴巴的，留老师凶的样子，你们可不知道，嘴巴张的大大的，说话都是震耳欲聋的，脸像龙虾一样红，都是我们的错，惹找他了。让他不高心，我一定要考一所好大学，长大了报答老师。

Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.

She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.

She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.

This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?

我最喜欢的老师

嗨，我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师，但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。

她很年轻，但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌，和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。

她喜欢读书和运动。下课后，李老师经常和我们一起运动，我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。

这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?

I think she is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. She is exciting, amazing and sexy. When we first met I felt her erotic emanation. Now I know that she is extremely intelligent too. She is 25 years old, and she has a 3-year-old son. So she is a mother. A sharp mother. She has a piercing in her tongue and two tattoos, one on her stomach (an Indian man’s face) and one on her back (it is non-figurative). I like them very much. If you meet her, look at her face; it is so sweet. She has a birthmark on the tip of her nose. Sometimes I call her ”spotted nose.” It is so sweet. Really. Like a little cat. But her eyes. They are blue like the sky in spring or the ocean in a stormy night. They are so maddening. Well, let’s talk about her mouth. When she is smiling she has two little face-lines by the side of her lips. (dimples) She is the most beautiful mother in the world and she is a real muse, a muse which every poet wants, lovely, wild, tender, sweet, and deep with secrets and love. A real woman.

董老师是我的英语家教。董老师大概25岁了，她的头发是棕色的，很卷，眼睛大大的，亮亮的，脸上有几个小痘痘，长得很漂亮，人见人爱。董老师总是笑着对我们说话，不是傻笑，也不是冷笑，是一种温暖的笑容。董老师的声音甜甜的，让人感觉很舒服，真可谓听在“耳”里，暖在“心”里。记得暑假快结束的那会儿，董老师说要带我们去大禾寿司店吃寿司，我们很高兴。但是那天中午妈妈不在，董老师就对阿姨说：“我们要去吃寿司了，大概下午三点钟才能回来。”交待完毕，就领我们去吃寿司，我们从没吃过寿司，一进寿司店，坐下，端起一盘寿司就吃，（那个寿司店的寿司是摆在一个个盘子里的，盘子放在一个转盘上，盘子的颜色不一样，一种颜色表示多少钱，最后结账的时候就看你的盘子的颜色）董老师见我们狼吞虎咽的，就笑着说：“没人跟你抢！慢点吃，别呛着了！”董老师还告诉我们她自己最喜欢吃的口味——玉米沙拉和蟹籽，问我们要不要，我说：“要。”老师就让厨师给我们了一份，自己也有一份。那天，我们都很开心。这学期，董老师不再教我们了，我们都很不高兴，总想让董老师再来教我们。可是妈妈看这样我们都没什么东西学，又叫了一个老师来教我们英语。今天早上，我正在学习英语，董老师来了，我们就把那位老师给“抛弃”了，都争着给我们盼星星盼月亮盼来的“客人”——董老师拿拖鞋呢！董老师，你真是一个人见人爱的好老师！

[我的英语家教董老师英语作文

在我们班里有一个优秀的老师，他工作细心认真，从不粗心大意。

虽然这学期上对我们很严格，但是她也有能让我们快乐的学习方式。这些都是我们班的英语成绩大大提高，而她就是我们班的英语老师——田老师。 现在我们上英语课已经不会有不专心的学生了。但是，过去有，而且有好多“热爱祖国语言人士”根本就不学英语。现在这些“人士”，根本就不敢在英语课上“热爱祖国语言”了。如果人士们要一意孤行，那是要付出代价的。 上课的铃声一响，英语老师的神情就与平常时判若两人，她的眼神马上就变成了利剑。老师如炬的目光像探照灯一样，扫视着每一个角落。同学们的小动作在这样的目光里无处遁形。如某处有风吹草动，英语老师会用犀利的目光紧紧的盯着。随后，一声霹雳似的批评，会让分心的同学认真起来。接着，那倒霉的孩子就会乖乖的捧着课本，站到讲台前。更重要的是下课以后，那倒霉的孩子还要忍受英语老师长篇的思想教育。 几个回合的较量，我们班级里的所有抱有某种幻想的顽皮男都--败下阵来。过去曾耀武扬威的风云人物在英语课上统统变成了温顺的绵羊。虽然他们在背地里有过种种密谋，但是一到了英语老师的面前立刻就变成了乖孩子。 如今，田老师已经成为了我们学习生活中不可或缺的人物，就是在教授让我们受益匪浅。她每天都有认真的工作态度，详细的工作计划，优秀的工作能力。

这就是我们的英语老师——田老师。

Our new English teacher is Mr. Smith. He wears a pair of thick glasses. He is very serious and strict to us. I never saw him smile until the Teachers’ Day. On the Teachers’ Day, my classmates and I planned to give him a special gift——a smile. So the naughty John pretended to have passed out in the classroom. When Mr. Smith came in, he was so scared that he held John in his arms right away. On the way to the hospital, John burst into laughter suddenly, which made the teacher confused. After we told him that it was only a joke, Mr. Smith laughed too. We were all pleased to see him smiling at last.

有人说：一日为师，终身为父；投之以桃，报之以李；滴水之恩当涌泉相报。

但是当你成功时你又回想起你的恩师吗？在你辉煌的时刻，你怎么会想起你的老师，一个并不起眼的教师，平凡的再也不能平凡的教师，而他们呢！他们会以你为荣，并不图你的什么，因为你是他们带出来的徒弟，他们早已吧我们当做他们的儿女。这些师生之谊绝不比母爱差一丝一毫，因为他们是我们的老师。

在七中时，我有很多老师，他们都一样的爱岗敬业，和蔼可亲，对一些拔尖的学生鼓励着，对一些中等生关心着，到了满怀果实的季节，他们只有欣慰的一笑。在七中一位老师就对我非常的关心，她是我的英语老师——Misszhang。

由于我的英语不怎么好，基础差，但是我想学，老师看在眼里，当然，就对我很关心，给我搜很多的资料，然而我却没有好好的学，慢慢的我甚至厌倦了英语，所以英语成绩也就一落千丈，老师不止一次的帮助我，这些我都视而不见，认为我是她的学生，这是她应该做的，而我仍然的继续堕落下去，慢慢的：90，80，70，60，50，到了最后的44分，当我要转回河南的时候我懂得了miss张的失望与不甘，但是我知道，老师并没有对我绝望，老师永远把我当做他的徒弟。

当我猛然间失去了好多，失去了同学，友谊，老师，我感觉好无助，但是的是一股不甘的劲，因为我是张老师的徒弟，我不想让她一提起我来就是一种很失望的眼神，我想让她一提起我就觉得骄傲，因为一次离开，因为一次转学，猛然间我好像明白了许多。

心里一直有一个人在嘲笑我，你不配做misszhang的徒弟，你不觉得很丢人吗？然而我就开始慢慢的去接受英语了，一点一点的拿回属于我的辉煌。

直到现在，我可以昂首挺胸的站在每一个人都面前，可以大声的对世界上的对每一个人说：“我是miss张的学生。”因为我一点也不觉得我不够资格。

张老师我是胡文斌，曾经我让你失望过，但是现在我不会再让你失望，现在不会，以后也不会，我会好好努力的。

不管我将来走到哪，不管我成了怎麽样，变成了什么，您永远是我的错恩师。

最后，祝老师工作顺利，永远年轻。

[英语老师张老师作文

敬爱的英语老师：

您好！

时间过得飞快，不知不觉中，一年半的时间很快就过去了，和你分离的时间马上就要来了。教室里似乎仍然回荡着您清脆洪亮的声音，同学们也似乎仍能感受到您的严格和慈爱。我们，在您的搀扶下，跨上了奔驰的骏马，进入人生下一段旅途。

小小的粉笔就是您的双手，上课的铃声就是您征程上的冲锋号角。为了我们您废寝忘食，为了我们您鞠躬尽瘁，无怨无悔。多少个日日夜夜你无眠，多少回风风雨雨你闯过。一路的酸甜苦辣，一路的欢声笑语，您与我们一起度过，我们的一声感激会让你甜蜜永久。您像蜡烛一样，燃烧自己，照亮别人。俗话说的好：“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。老师是人类灵魂的工程师。”我喜欢看你为我们而高兴的样子，也喜欢看你为我们而激动的样子，个喜欢看你为我们而生气的样子，无论什么样子的你总是如此惹我喜爱。现在，我不仅会尊敬你，而且会把你看做我的好朋友，有福同享，有难同当。回想起以前：刚来这里，我们自我介绍，然后你上课使得喜怒哀乐我全都记得。虽然只有一年半，但我们相识相知，虽然只有一年半，但我们情深意长，我真有点舍不得。是您让我考100分，是您给我当英语科代表的机会，是您让我跨上了奔驰的骏马。您尽职尽责，铁面无私，作为组长也应该这样，我要向你学习。总之，千言万语道不尽，就让他化为一句话：“老师，我爱您；老师，您辛苦了！”希望你以后可以回来看看我们，我们班的活动也要来参加哦，同学们的精彩表演在等着你呢！

Dear Mrs. / Mr. XX,

I am just writing to say “thank you”.Thank you for teaching us things we need to learn, thank you for being there for us when we have any problems, thanks for your devotion and willingness to help us, thank you for the love youve shown to us.

I am lucky to have a teacher like you. And no matter what kind of person I will become, you will always have your influence on me. You taught me how to study, how to live and evenhow to be a man. From you, I learned what kind of person I want to be and what I should get from life. This means everything to me.

My dear teacher, no matter what you will always have a special place in my heart and I will remember what I have learned from you and carry the knowledge through my life!

Best wishes!

Sincerely,

X X X

[感谢老师初中英语作文例文

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Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficuit when we began to study English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class was over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss Wei!”

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

My English teacher is Miss Huang. She

is a beautiful lady. There is always a smile on her face. Miss

Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is a good dancer,

too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and

cute. Her favorite color is blue,

because blue is the color of the sky and the sea. She is my favorite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

For every student, meeting a good teacher is very important, it will change their lives. I am so lucky that I met a good teacher and she opened the new chapter of my life. I will never forget the things she taught me.

对于每一个学生来说, 遇到一个好老师是非常重要的,它将改变他们的生活。我很幸运,我遇到了一个好老师,她打开了我人生的新篇章。我永远不会忘记她教给我的东西。

When I was in high school, I felt so bored about the English class, because I did not understand it. Miss Li was my English teacher, she found my attitude to her class. One day, when the class was over, she asked me to her office. She did not blame me for sleeping in her class, instead, she smiled and asked me the opinion about her class. I said her class was a little boring and I thought she would be angry. Miss Li smiled and agreed with me. She asked me to give some opinion. I was so surprised that she was so kind. Miss Li improved her class and I became very active.

当我在高中的时候,对于英语课,我感到很无聊，因为我听不懂。李老师是我的英语老师,她发现我对她课的态度。有一天,在下课的时候,她叫我去她的办公室。她没有怪我在她的课上睡觉,相反,她笑了笑,问我对她课的意见。我说她的课有点无聊,我以为她会生气。李老师笑着赞同我。她叫我给一些意见。我很惊讶,她是如此的友善。李老师改善她的课,我变得非常活跃。

Though I enter the college, I will never forget Miss Li’s class and the things she taught me. She respects me and makes me important. I am so thankful to her.

虽然我进入了大学,我将永远不会忘记李老师的课和她教给我的东西。她尊重我,让我变得重要。我很感谢她。

Our Chinese teacher is our headteacher. Her black hair, a pair of big and black eyes, wearing a simple, generous, have knowledge very much looks. She is xu teacher.

Mr Xus language is very rich, the teaching method is very flexible. In Chinese classes, she read the text aloud fascinating, we listened to her in mandarin reading is a kind of enjoyment. Every time reading course Wen is xu teacher taught us how to have feelings of reading aloud. On one occasion, "prairie" on the class, make the teachers voice as if turned me into a guest. When the teacher read in a clear and loud voice, "what the fierceness of han who dont, tianya verdant setting sun" this sentence, I seem to see the people standing on the endless prairie, heard you talk to a strong feeling.

Mr Xu versatility. Talking about the lesson, "the destruction of the old Summer Palace" in order to let us know about the old Summer Palace. She used a colored chalk to draw the layout of the old Summer Palace, looks like a real old Summer Palace, at that time, I really envy the teacher that kind of painting.

Xu teacher of the class are very concerned about, regardless of the result is good or bad, she is equally.

I respect the teacher has a lot of, but I admire most is Mr Xu, I am proud to have such a good teacher, and proud.

我们的语文老师也是我们的班主任。她乌黑的头发，一双又黑又大的眼睛，穿着朴素、大方，看上去很有学问。她就是许老师。

许老师的语言很丰富，教学方法很灵活。上语文课，她朗读课文引人入胜，我们听她用普通话朗读简直是一种享受。每一次读课 文都是许 老师教我们怎样有感情的朗读。有一次，上《草原》这一课时， 许老师的声音仿佛把我变成了一个客人。当老师用清脆而响亮的声音读到“蒙汉情深何忍别，天涯碧草话斜阳”这句话的时候，我似乎看到了大家站在无边无际的草原上,听到了大家倾诉者惜别之情。

许老师多才多艺。在讲《圆明园的毁灭》这一课，为了让我们了解圆明园。她就用彩色粉笔画出了圆明园的布局，看起来像真正的圆明园似的，当时，我真羡慕老师那种绘画水平。

许老师对班上的同学都很关心，无论成绩好坏，她都一视同仁。

我尊敬的老师有很多，但我最敬佩的还是许老师，我为有这样的好老师而感到骄傲、自豪。

My English teacher is a beautiful girl. Her name is Fang Ling. She has two big eyes. And she has a small mouth. She likes smile. She is a sunny girl. I love her, because her English is very good. She often play with us.

This is my English teacher. A beautiful sunny girl!