初三描写网上购物英语作文（汇编20篇）

I like the flowers in full bloom in the spring, because of her beauty; like the sun like the fire, because of her enthusiasm; also like snowflakes flying in the winter, because shes lovely; but I love the fruit of the fall.

Fall to the harvest season is also coming, we came to the countryside orchard picking fruit.

Into the orchard, the first thing that catches the eye is the apple tree, one by one like a small ball so much apple red glowing, like a childs smiling face; pears like and Apple like the United States, one by one off the white coat , Exposed Huang Chengcheng body; persimmon is not far behind, clawed leaves, revealing the fat body, hanging on the branches, from a distance, like a light lantern; a string of golden banana like a necklace wear In the banana tree "neck", the banana tree dressed more beautiful. The most striking is the grapes, clusters of grapes, green and green, like a piece of agate like, shining charming glory, so you can not help but shed saliva. Went to the grapevine, tiptoe, take off a big grape, peel the skin, to see the transparent crystal like meat, people can not wait to put the meat into the mouth, gently a bite, that juice immediately Overflowing mouth, really sweet ah! People eat the first, but also want to eat second, third ... ...

At this time, the side of the children have picked up a basket full of fruit, I do not want to show weakness, learn their way, began to pick up, but I like everything, had to pick each fruit, the sky has been In the evening we are happy and happy.

Autumn orchard is really linger!

My dogs character is weird. Say it is gentle, it is really obedient. Let it lie there tease it to play, the United States and the United States looked at me, soon as not out. However, when it is eating, no matter who, that is, usually the best friend to its side will not work. It is so fierce, it is true ah, or how friends do not go to it around it? However, it came to see my grandfather will hide, for fear that grandfather see, because grandpa played it, it is so Gall bladder

If it is happy, can be cute than anyone else: turn around and turn around, the back of the tail shake to shake, as if you are affectionate. Or when you walk, rushed to your pants, let you stop walking.

It is a child can be pleasant to love! Just came to our house just full moon, the road is still bad, they learned to play their own. Walking around in the house, I do not know what to find, round little ass twisted, people laugh. Where is he beautiful, suddenly, hit the mans legs, back a few steps back, buttocks hit the wall again. Although it hit two, but it did not cry at all.

Then I do not know where to find a small ball, went to the yard to play. The small ball Diao Diao to go. It bite it all can not see the way.

I always like it and never say it. Look at it so lively and lively, not enough I like it, how could it be said?

In winter, feather like snow flying in the air, like a little elf in winter news propaganda. At this time, the beautiful flowers bloom, but also often exudes a thick fragrance.

The snow stopped, the squirrel out of a hole in a tree enjoying the scenery, the sparrow flew on to the wires singing, children make snowmen in the snow snowball fights, play happy!

My parents and I went to the park, see the wintersweet flower fall over each other to open up, seemed to welcome our arrival.

I like winter.

Yesterday, there was a discusion in our class. We talked about whether we should do housework or not. I agreed with with Sharon. She said,“The middle school students should do some housework. Because doing housework can let our parents feel relaxed. At the same time, doing housework can train us to be more useful.” I think we should do some housework. Doing housework can improve ourselves. But I also think students’ major job is studying. Doing too much housework is bad for our study. So, I think doing housework is good, but at the same time we should pay more attenion to our study. Right?

[Should the middle school students do housework初三优秀英语作文

I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。

Qingdao, located in the southeast part of Shandong Province, is a beautiful seaside city with clear air and enchanting sea view. This city, bordered by the Yellow Sea on two sides, has the largest bathing beach in Asia and produces the mellow Qingdao Beer. To the east of the city, a short distance across the Yellow Sea, lie Korea and Japan, making the city an important port for international trade.

For thirty three years, up to 1949, Qingdao was a colony of Germany . Thus, it has a great deal of European architecture. This foreign architecture -a remnant of the colonial past- now beautifies this seaside city.

The red roofs, green trees, blue sea, and azure sky form a bright and colorful picture of Qingdao. The city is sometimes known as the Switzerland of the Orient.

Surrounded by the sea on three sides, Qingdao attracts many tourists with its charming seascape. Sights like the Eight Passes Villas, Wusi Square, the Zhan Bridge, Mt. Laoshan, No.1 Bathing Beach, Badaguan Scenic Area will help you remember the city. Just walking on the sand and listening to the surf breaking on the beach becomes enjoyable.

Qingdao offers food with distinctive flavors--especially seafood. So take this chance to enjoy the delicious seafood. Also, the city is the home of the famous Qingdao (Tsingtao) Beer. Have a bottle of pure Qingdao Beer right here!

The Qingdao Municipal Government recognizes the importance of the tourism industry and has further plans to develop the local tourism. To enhance the tourism industry, the city now sponsors the Qingdao International Beer Festival, the Qingdao International Sea Festival, Beach Culture Festival, the Sea Affection Festival, and the Summer of Qingdao Festival.

Hotel "or" set off firecrackers outside, like to meet with a mysterious thing, keep happy birthday in the hotel, song warble, the whole life of the hall.

At this moment, I went in, hotel and there was a birthday song. Then, my classmate, father, mother, sister, all arrived, the students brought a birthday gift, mysterious, like afraid of be I see.

Now you should know who is your birthday? By the way, that is my birthday.

We ate a big lunch first, then get out mother bought me a cake, the fine packing box is opened, there was a very large, the three layers of fruit cake, cake has a lot of fruit, there are a little monkey is wrapped in cream? The little monkeys must be on behalf of me, because I was born in the year of the monkey, with candles, dad was in no hurry, just ten, lit candles and turned off the lights, everyone sang: happy birthday to you, I silently make a wish.

"Wow" started to cut the cake, each a just, when cake to each staff, the students are holding a cream to wipe my face, wipe out of my face, and faces up to other people, all in all, after a while, all the persons face turned into white face, cream on clothes, hair all over the place.

When we go to the toilet wash, the students have to send a gift to me, such a great gift, such as glass, toys, jewelry, mom and dad gave me a three rounds of the stem, bags and watches, cousin cousin also brought music CARDS! I am very happy.

Its really a happy birthday party!

饭店外面“噼里啪啦”的放鞭炮，像是迎接着一件神秘的事，饭店里放着生日快乐歌，歌声婉转动听，使整个大厅热闹起来。

这时，我走了进去，饭店又响起了生日歌。接着，我的同学、爸爸、妈妈、妹妹、都一一到来了，同学们带来了生日礼物，神神秘秘的样子，像是生怕被我看见。

现在你们应该知道是谁过生日了吧?对了，那个过生日的人就是我。

我们先吃完了丰盛的午饭，然后拿出妈妈给我买的蛋糕了，精美的包装盒打开，有一个非常大的，三层水果蛋糕，蛋糕上面有着许许多多的水果，中间还有一只用奶油做成的小猴子呢?这只小猴子一定是代表我的，因为我是属猴子的，爸爸不慌不忙地插着蜡烛，看好了，刚好十只，把蜡烛点燃，关了灯，大家唱起了：祝你生日快乐，我默默地许着愿。

“哇”开始切蛋糕了，每人一份刚好，当蛋糕发到每个人手中时，同学们都拿着奶油往我的脸上抹，抹完了我的脸上，又给别的人脸上抹起来了，总之，过了一会儿，所有人的脸都变成了白花脸了，奶油在衣服上、头发上到处都是。

我们去卫生间把脸洗干净以后，同学们纷纷的把礼物送给了我，这些礼物真丰盛呀，有水杯、玩具、饰品等，爸爸妈妈送我一个三轮的拉秆书包和手表，表弟表妹还带来了音乐贺卡呢!我非常的高兴。

这真是一个快乐的生日派对呀!

[描写生日派对的英语作文

This morning, it is time for us to make sandwiches, so we are very excited. We took two bread and put sausage, eggs and vegetables in it, and then we cut the bread into two other shapes.

My Mom said: “ we need to take food there, because there is one place to eat, but the food there is bad. I went to search the internet, and many people said that.” Because my Dad need to work after breakfast, so my Mom would take me there by herself. After 30 minutes, we arrived the science center.

The science center is very big, and it has every countries’ costumes on it. The whole science center look like an eye with globe. Then we went inside the science center to buy tickets. It is really cool inside. My Mom asked me to go to watch a movie, and then we went to.

Time pass quickly. It was time for us to go home, but I really happy today.

The dog was small, yellow hair, walk like a roll of small balls; big eyes like two stones, moist; sleeping lying on the ground, small ears drooping, looks like a slob; its thin and short tail swaying that is very attractive.

The dog is a good friend of human beings. This is a good word. Sometimes as long as you call it, it will catch up at once, turn around your leg, then jump on you, licking you with your tongue, and rubbing you with your body. Sometimes when you play the ball, you accidentally run the ball away, and the puppy will run past it. Its nose is everywhere like an odor detector. After a while, the puppy returns with a ball in its mouth.

The puppys character is also naive and lovely. Sometimes I fight with a kitten, and I will scold him. No matter how to beat it or curse it, it will not bite you. It will not bite you like a child who has done something wrong.

Its good to keep a dog and save the food. When we eat the leftovers, its a pity that two of them are polluting the environment. But with puppies, they can eat leftovers, which are both green and hungry. It can not only help to see the home, but also like my friend to share happiness with me.

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.With the development of industry and agriculture,cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas.Trees on the hills have been cut down,and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore,wherever we go today,we can find rubbish carelessly disposed.The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing.Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to mans existence.

We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems.For instance,new laws must be passed to place strict control over industrial pollution,the public must receive the education about the hazard of pollution and so on.We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.

成熟的麦穗低着头，那是教我们谦虚;忙碌的蜜蜂在花丛中穿越，那是教我们勤劳;温柔的水滴能击穿岩石，那是教我们坚持;飞行的大雁排成一字型，那是教我们团结。而两次考试，却教会了我”失败是成功之母“。 The mature wheat ears bow their heads, that is to teach us humility; busy bees cross in the flowers, that is to teach us hardworking; gentle water droplets can penetrate rocks.That is to teach us to persist; the flying geese are lined up in a font, that is to teach us to unite.But the two exams, but taught me "Failure is the mother of success".

记得有一次考试之前，我心想：考试呀，没关系，我去年的时候，总是名列前茅，这次肯定能考好，再说了我都和爸爸妈妈保证过了。可是，当我看到试卷上那红红的，大大的86分时，好像感觉晴天霹雳，我瞬间呆住了，我想：怎么可能，为什么会这样?在回家的路上，我低着头，红着脸，叹着气，拖着沉重的脚步，还不停地摇着头。

心想：完了，回去后，爸爸一定会把我整个身子提起来，扔到床上，扒下裤子，拿着鞋子，”啪，啪“几下，把我的屁股打开花，变成青一块紫一块的。想着想着，我来到门口，刚要伸手按门铃，又想：是按还是不按呢?我正在犹豫时，爸爸看见了我，便问成绩怎样，我胆怯地说：”8……86分。“我本以为爸爸会打我，于是我低着头，双手放在脑袋前，防备爸爸。可是爸爸不仅没打我，而且摸着我的头说：”孩子，没关系，失败是成功之母，你要想想你这些题为什么错了，下次加油就行了。“

于是，我在爸爸的帮助下，找到了自己的错点，认真订正和整理。我对试卷上的错题不断地反思，寻找错的原因，在平时的生活中，没天做一篇阅读题，在电脑上查找课外文章，补充自己的知识。到了周六，周日，我把自己锁在屋子里，卧在床上，使自己在书海中畅游。第二次考试之前，我心想：太好了，终于到我大显身手的时候了，我一定要仔细，仔细，再仔细。然后我开始更加认真地复习起课文和老师讲的重点。功夫不负有心人，我又成为了第一名。

失败，在人生中是个未知数，没人会知道它会出现几次，但是我们必须记住：不管它出现了几次，为什么会出现，只要我们拥有恒心，毅力，信心，勇气，与失败对抗的决心和坚持不懈地努力，就能取得成功。”失败是成功之母“这句话并不空虚，不经历风雨，怎能见得彩虹，一个人只有经历失败，才能取得真正的成功。就像这两次考试，如果我没有第一次考试的失败和不断地努力，会有第二次的成功吗?”失败是成功之母“这句话不仅是我的座右铭，而且也是我的好朋友。它已陪我走过了4年的小学生涯，这句话将让我一生受益。

Winter comes! Little snowflake fluttering to return to earth.

Oh, you see the snow on top of this tree, like the one after the other gulls stop on the branches; Several naughty children, the finish is not cotton candy high hung on the branches? Is grandma put small steamed stuffed bun on the limb?

I gently picked up a snowflake, you see: the six petals, glittering and translucent and bright. As winter grandpa do personally bookmarks, and sent to us, let us have a good reading. Like winter wind sister told us: an inch of time an inch of gold, an inch of gold will not buy inch of time, to cherish the time now, is to study well.

Winter morning, I cant help strolling on a narrow path in a snowy, when I walked slowly, step by step, only behind me deeply footprint seems alive one note. Snowflakes dancing in the wind, I stood in the snow, snow kissed my face, on my neck, fresh, intoxicating. I seem to become a snowball, rolling down from the top of the mountain, the mountain left a trail and a trace of snow. Snow is still flying, like a white fairy tale world. The patches of snow as if to say: "I dont make the mountain lonely; I let trees have cool and refreshing oasis, I love this world, I want to let the world of all things under my quilt meimei hibernation". At this moment, my heart seems to be washed in general, is so transparent, so white...

Once again I carefully took a snowflake, she really is a masterpiece of nature! She is so transparent, so white. But also do magic voice, voice came, the snow will gradually disappear, will once again usher in all things recovery, vibrant spring...

Ah! I love winter. All things on plating a layer of crystal, glittering, was full of praise. In winter, she is so white, is transparent like that!!

冬天来啦!小雪花飘飘洒洒，重返人间。

呵，你看这树条上的雪迹，好像一只又一只的海鸥停歇在枝条上;还是有几个顽皮的小孩子，把还没有吃完的棉花糖高高的挂在了枝丫上?莫非是老奶奶把小包子放在了树丫上?

我轻轻地拿起一片雪花，你瞧：这六瓣花，晶莹透亮。好像是冬爷爷亲自做的书签，送给我们，让我们好好读书。又好像冬风姐姐告诉我们：一寸光阴一寸金，寸金难买寸光阴，要珍惜现在的时光，好好学习。

冬天的早上，我情不自禁的在白雪皑皑的小路上散步，当我一步一步慢慢的走着，只见我身后的深深脚印似一个个活蹦乱跳的音符。雪花在风中翩翩起舞，我站在雪地上，雪花亲吻着我的脸，落在我的脖子里，凉丝丝的，令人陶醉。我仿佛变成了一个大雪球，从山顶上滚动下来，在山间留下一道又一道的雪迹。雪花还在漫天飞舞，好似一个白色的童话世界。这片片雪花仿佛在说：“是我不让山间寂寞;是我让大树有了清凉的甘泉，我爱这个世界，我要让世界的万物在我的棉被下美美的冬眠”。此时此刻，我的心好像被水洗过一般，是那样的透明，那样的洁白……

我再一次小心翼翼地捧起一朵雪花，她真是大自然的杰作啊!她是那样的透明，那样洁白。不过春姑娘也是会做魔法的，春姑娘的来到，那雪迹会渐渐消淡，会再次迎来万物复苏、生机勃勃的春天……

啊!我爱冬天。万物都镀上了一层水晶，闪闪发光，令人赞不绝口。冬天，她是那样的洁白，是那样的透明!

My writing teacher, Cissy, was the most meticulous and the strictest teacher I had ever seen. Pursuing a nearly perfect class, she had high requirement in our photos’ presentation. Although the presentation was limited within three minutes, from selecting the photos to organizing the language to thinking about the nuclear idea, all of the processes should be prepared a long time and couldn’t be dealt with causally; otherwise, you would receive her merciless comment. Any unsatisfactory words occurring in the presentation, breaking in without waiting for the students finishing their speech, she pointed out their faults by sharp words, making you heartbroken and feel like suffering a heavy rain suddenly in a sunny day. Although in simple recital, her strict style still played an important role in it. Disappointed and sad, everyone had experienced the criticism from Cissy, because she thought that not only did we lack right rhythm, but also we couldn’t express our emotion completely and adjust our volume. As a result, receiving her praise was seen as the great honor in our class. A meticulous attitude should be kept in her class. To show respect to the speaker, she didn’t allow us to whisper and after every presentation, genuine applause should be given. It was as a punishment that anyone who forgot to take her picture in the presentation would be cut down her scores and delayed her presentation in the last class. Indeed, being her students made you in risk of being engulfed by her sharp words, but in the same time, due to her strict and meticulous attitude, you would be greatly improved in writing.

我的写作老师，西西，是最细致、最严格的老师我见过。追求一个近乎完美的班级，她对我们的照片有很高的要求。虽然表现为有限的三分钟内，从选择照片来组织语言的核心理念的思考，所有的流程要准备很长一段时间不能用因果关系的处理;否则，你将接受她无情的评论。在演示文稿中出现任何不满意的话，断无等待的学生完成他们的讲话，她指出他们的错误的尖锐的话，让你伤心，觉得遭受大雨突然在一个阳光灿烂的日子。虽然简单的独奏音乐会，她严谨的作风仍然发挥了重要的作用。失望和悲伤，每个人都经历了由茜茜的批评，因为她认为我们不仅缺乏正确的节奏，但我们也不能表达我们的情感完全和调整音量。作为一个结果，得到她的赞美被视为在我们班的伟大荣誉。一个细致的态度应该保持在她的课上。为了表示对演讲者的尊重，她不允许我们在每一次演讲中轻声低语，在每次演讲之后，都应该给予真正的掌声。这是作为一种惩罚，谁忘记带她的照片在演示文稿将被削减她的分数和延迟她的介绍，在最后一节课。事实上，她的学生让你陷入了被她尖锐的言辞所吞噬的风险，但同时，由于她严谨细致的工作态度，你会在写作上有了很大的提高。

[英语作文外貌描写

The wind of autumn is a door. It took it cool and gentle, gently and gently took us into the autumn palace.

The wind of autumn is a little painter. You see, it sprinkled the powder to the dandelion, dandelion really like a parachute, floating Wawa wandering, floated the beauty of autumn. Golden powder is given to the sun flower, the golden petals really like a gold coin. The red is the sorghum, the sorghum put on the red new clothes, in the autumn wind Yaotouhuangnao, shaking non-stop, more than one, how beautiful is it? Like a burning torch!

Autumn wind, hidden very interesting things. Big yan fly south, birds take the new house, as well as chrysanthemum fairy than the United States, leaves the baby to travel, a lot of things are hiding in the wind! Carefully to listen, you will be able to hear.

Autumn wind, blowing a golden assembly number, it tells you, science days to come, the fall to be passed. The turtle indented into the shell, penguin mother weaving a warm bag, the snake is ready to skin ... ... we have to winter.

Autumn of the wind, brought us the joy of autumn, the joy of harvest.

In the animal world, I most like the cheetah.

The cheetahs really brave. Its flat and smooth, short ears. Two eyes like two, twinkle. There are two prominent muscle in on either side of the face, white, with small black spots, bead point of steel needle of a root beard. There is a a black spots. In addition to the belly is white, the remaining parts of the hair is golden. Its streamline, the whole body presents for sprinting. Its limbs is very rich, full of flexibility. Cheetahs paw is straight, can firmly in the ground, change the running direction. And it is the long tail, can have the effect of acceleration while on the run.

The running speed of cheetah is very surprising, speed is about 130 kilometers per hour, with fast on the highway running car.

But, its endurance is poor, high speed running is limited to a few seconds, so has been hailed as a sprint champion.

Cheetahs hunting is also very interesting. When it found that the deer would be around to look at the first, and see what the intruder. If not, it is with lightning speed to recover to the prey. Easily catch later, it will pull the prey to the grass, enjoy the meal. If the prey in a tree, it jump into the tree to catch the prey, big eat a meal.

The cheetah is really a lovable animals! But, now is trying to catch some criminals for their own interests cheetah, continue like this, will destroy the cheetah. Please act to protect it together.

在动物世界里，我最喜欢猎豹了。

猎豹长得真威猛。它的头平而滑，耳朵短短的。两只眼睛像铜铃一般，炯炯有神。脸的两边有两块突出的肌肉，白白的，上面有一粒粒小黑点，点上有一根根钢针般的胡须。身上有一个一个黑色的斑点。除了肚皮是白色的，其余部位的毛都是金黄色的。它的整个身躯呈现流线形，适合急速奔跑。它的四肢非常发达，富有弹性。猎豹的爪子比较直，能牢牢地巴住地面，改变奔跑方向。而它的那条长长的尾巴，在奔跑时能起到加速的作用呢。

猎豹的奔跑速度很是惊人，每小时的速度大约有130千米，跟高速公路上飞速奔跑的车子差不多。

但是，它的耐力差，高速奔跑只限于几秒钟，所以被誉为短跑冠军。

猎豹捕食也很有意思。当它发现鹿时，先会向四周观察一下，看看有什么不速之客。如果没有，它就以闪电般的速度向猎物追去。轻而易举地捉住之后，它就把猎物拖到草丛中，美美地饱餐一顿。如果猎物在树上，它就跳到树上把猎物给逮住，大吃一顿。

猎豹真是一种讨人喜欢的动物啊!可是，现在有些不法分子为了自身的利益在大肆抓捕猎豹，再这样下去，猎豹会灭绝的。请大家行动起来，一起来保护它吧。

我喜欢我们的四季，因为它们都有着独特之处，春暖花开，夏日炎炎，秋风送爽，冬雪凛冽。不过，比较起来，我还是喜欢夏季多一点！夏季，是一个充满幻想的季节，每一个人都在编织着自己美丽的梦，夏季，是一个充满勃勃勃生机的季节，不论是天上飞关翔的小鸟，还是河里畅游的鱼儿，都充分体现了生命的存在；夏季，是一幅靓丽的油画，上面有绿的野草，红红的鲜花，蓝蓝的天空，白白的云朵，还有那一望无际的七彩的大地夏季的清晨是凉爽的，看，月亮还没有下山，它把柔和的银光慷慨地赠给那一层薄薄的轻雾。于是，雾在流动，银光也在流动，把大地照得好亮好亮。清澈的河水缓缓地流淌着，闪着粼粼波光。岸上的小草轻吻着露珠，清晨的村庄在微风中呢喃着，好像在说着什么，我想，它一定在提醒我们要抓紧时间学习，不要浪费这大好时光。夏季的中午是烦闷的，火辣辣的太阳把大地烘烧得象坑房一样热，没有一丝风，路上的沙土仿佛已是闪烁地火光，酷热混和在空气里，到处发挥着盛夏的威力。

狗也都爬在地上伸出舌头来，连树上的老鸦也张着嘴喘气，偶尔刮起的一点小风，也是热浪一般，人们都躲在屋子里，大地一片宁静，只有那知了还在不知疲倦地叫着知了，知了，知了等到了下午，太阳逐渐敛起了它的酷热，空气也渐渐有了凉意。大人们三三两两地下地干活了，憋了一中午的孩子们耐不住寂寞，纷纷跳到池塘里，玩各种各样的游戏，爽朗的笑声在田野上空回荡着。好久好久夏季的傍晚是惬意的，微风时不时地吹一阵，人们搬一条凳子，拿一把芭蕉扇聚在一起聊天，打牌，小孩子们在大人缝里钻来钻去，快乐得就像那漫天飞舞的蜻蜓一样。天边的晚霞多姿多彩，美丽异常，一片片彩霞就好像是一件件精工雕琢的艺术品，光彩夺目，给夏天的傍晚披上了一层神秘的面纱。到了晚上，仍旧是热烘烘，不过夏天的夜晚有时是会下暴雨的。远远地，隐隐传来几声闷雷，树稍也微微地摇动起来。风渐渐地变大，赶走了令人讨厌的蚊子，吹干了令人难受的汗水，使人们不禁精神一振，浑身上下舒服极了。

利剑一样子的闪电刺破长空，暴雨涮啦啦地从天空倾泻下来，瞬时间，己是雾蒙蒙的一片，房屋上的水象断了线的珠子，成串成串地落在地上，溅在身上。地上的水流成了河，好一个水的世界。雨过后，天空好像洗过一样，湛蓝湛蓝的。凉风习习，拂面而来，沁人心肺。我爱这迷人的美丽的夏季！

[初三描写夏天的作文

一、认真审题，切中题意

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

三、语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用

自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：①外表特征：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，ordinary-looking等;②内心境界：

glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interested等;③感情描写：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等;④动作描写：come，go，get，have，take，bring，fetch等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：①表示并列关系的过渡词：and，aswellas，or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词：but，yet，however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词：first，andthen，

finally，after，before，atlast，atthattime，later，inthepast，immediately，inthe

meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，inthefrontof，beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also，and，then，too，inaddition，moreover，again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because，since，then，thus，otherwise，so，therefore，asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，for，actually等。

四、不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

五、锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要i(we)……到底，使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

六、书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

七、检查错误

检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories， schools， hospitals， cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

[My Home Town初三英语满分作文

The Great Wall

The Great Wall building has a long history, vast engazuowenng magnificent, is the worlds rare miracle. The Great Wall is the four corners of the world, stretching in our great motherland vast land. It looks like a great dragon, surmounts lofty hills, through the vast grassland, across the vast desert, towards the vast sea. According to historical records, more than 20 states and feudal dynasty built the Great Wall, if constructs each time the Great Wall together, about 100000 miles above. The length of the Great Wall that was built by The Qin, Han, and Ming 3 Dynasty was more than 10 kilo miles. Now our country Xinjiang, Gansu, Ningxia, Shaanxi, Inner Mongolia, Shanxi, Hebei, Beijing, Tianjin, Liaoning, Jilin, Heilongjiang, Henan, Shandong, Hubei, Hunan and other province, city, autonomous regions have the ancient the Great Wall, peak fire platform remains. Of which only the Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region the Great Wall amounted to more than 3.

The Ming Dynasty in the" outside" beyond the Great Wall, also built" inside" and" three" the Great Wall the Great Wall. " Neiguan" the Great Wall in the Northern Qi Dynasty had built for the foundation, from Inner Mongolia and Shanxi at the junction of west east “Pianguan”, the Yanmenguan, flat various pass into Hebei, and then turned to the northeast, Fangshan, Changping, the source

of all counties, to pass, and then by the North and East, Huairou to the four customs, and" outside" is connected to the Great Wall, Zijingguan as the center, generally in a north-south direction. " Three" the Great Wall in many places and" inside" the Great Wall, some places two cities are separated by only tens of in. In addition, but also to build a large number of" repeated walls". Yanmenguan area" repeated walls “to have 24 much!

The Great Wall is the working people in ancient China created the miracle. Beginning with QinShihuang, constructs the Great Wall always is a big project. According to the record, QinShihuang used the million of labors to build the Great Wall, occupy countrywide population 1 / 20! There were no machinery, in addition to earth, carrying bricks can use donkeys, goats can climb the cattle, all labor and all must rely on manpower, work environment and high mountains and lofty hills, cliff. Can imagine, no large crowds on hard work, is unable to complete the great project.

The great wall of the engazuowenng quantity, according to rough estimates, only constructs take the Ming Dynasty as an example, if its masoy, earth is used to build a thickness of 1 meter, 5 meters high walls, circled the earth for over a week. If used for paving a 5 meters wide, 35 cm thick road, it could circle the earth three or four

weeks. If all dynasties built a total of 50 thousand kilometers calculation, then this wall can rotate around the earth several weeks, this road, around the earth in thirty or forty weeks.

“Because of the terrain, with risks for plug" is the construction of the Great Wall is an important experience, in the age of QinShihuang had it down, Sima Qian writes it to" historical records". Later each dynasty build the Great Wall are in accordance with the principle of. Who built Guan Cheng pass are the right and wrong choice between two mountains canyons, or river turning point. Or flat contacts pass through, so as to control is important, and may save the manpower and materials, to achieve “If one man guards the pass, ten thousand are unable to get through. Ten thousand cannot force it," effect. Built a castle or Beacon Tower is selected in the" appeared to place" for building a wall, is the full use of the terrain, such as Juyongguan, the Great Wall in Badaling are built along the mountain ridge, some lots from the lateral walls look very steep, we receive" inside is smooth, easily defensible ." effect of. In the territory of Liaoning, Liaodong town of Ming Dynasty the Great Wall has called a precipitous wall, wall of the hill, is the use of vertical cliff, precipice slightly to split cutting you will become the Great Wall. Some places

completely using the cliffs, rivers and lakes as a natural barrier, it can be called art beats nature. The

Great Wall, as a great project, become the Chinese nation is a valuable heritage.

长城修筑的历史悠久，工程雄伟浩大，是世界少有的奇迹。长城东西南北交错，绵延伏于我们伟大祖国辽阔的土地上。它好像一条巨龙，翻越巍巍群山，穿过茫茫草原，跨过浩瀚的沙漠，奔向苍茫的大海。根据历史文献记载，有20多个诸侯国家和封建王朝修筑过长城，若把各个时代修筑的长城加起来，大约有10万里以上。其中秦、汉、明3个朝代所修长城的长度都超过了1万里。现在我国新疆、 甘肃、 宁夏、 陕西、 内蒙古、 山西、河北、北京、 天津、 辽宁、 吉林、 黑龙江、河南、山东、湖北、湖南等省、市、自治区都有古长城、峰火台的遗迹。其中仅内蒙古自治区的长城就达3万多里。

明朝在“外边”长城之外，还修筑了“内边”长城和“内三关”长城。“内关”长城以北齐所筑为基础，起自内蒙古与山西交界处的偏关以西，东行经雁门关、平型诸关入河北，然后折向东北，经来源、房山、昌平诸县，直达居庸关，然后又由北而东，至怀柔的四海关、与“外边”长城相接，以紫荆关为中心，大致成南北走向。“内三关”长城在很多地方和“内边”长城并行，有些地方两城相隔仅数十里。除此以外，还修筑了大量的“重城”。雁门关一带的“重城”就有24道之多!

长城是我国古代劳动人民创造的奇迹。自秦始皇开始，修筑长城一直是一项大工程。据记载，秦始皇使用了近百万劳动力修筑长城，占全国人口的1/20!当时没有任何机械，除运土、运砖可以用毛驴、山羊能爬山的牲畜外，全部劳动都得靠人力，而工作环境又是崇山峻岭、峭壁深壑。可以想见，没有大量的人群进行艰苦的劳动，是无法完成这项巨大工程的。

万里长城的工程量，据粗略估计，仅以明朝修筑为例，若将其砖石、土方用修筑一道厚1米、高5米的大墙，可环绕地球一周有余。如果用来铺筑一条宽5米、厚35厘米的马路，那就能绕地球三四周了。如果把所有朝代所修的总计10万里来计算，则这道长墙可绕地球十几周，这条马路，可绕地球三四十周。

“因地地形，用险制塞”是修筑长城的一条重要经验，在秦始皇的时候已经把它肯定下来，司马迁把它写入《史记》之中。以后每一个朝代修筑长城都是按照这一原则进行的。凡是修筑关城隘口都是非曲直选择在两山峡谷之间，或是河流转折之处。或是平川往来必经之地，这样既能控制险要，又可节约人力和材料，以达“一夫当关，万夫莫开”的效果。修筑城堡或烽火台也是选择在“四顾要之处”至于修筑城墙，更是充分地利用地地形，如像居庸关、八达岭的长城都有是沿着山岭的脊背修筑，有的地段从城墙外侧看去非常险峻，内侧则甚是平缓，收“易守难攻”之效。在辽宁境内，明代辽东镇的长城有一种

叫山险墙、劈山墙的，就是利用悬崖陡壁，稍微把崖壁劈削一下就成为长城 了。还有一些地方完全利用危崖绝壁、江河湖泊作为天然屏障，真可以说是巧夺天工了.长城，作为一顶伟大的工程，成为中华民族的一份宝贵遗产。

There are so many people talking about how much their mother love them, whereas seldom people realize how much love their father give them. In fact, fathers love is as strong as mothers, but normally, fathers are not very good of expressing their feelings. Fathers love is deep and silent, thats why most people think their father love them less. If you carefully go through your childhood memory, you will notice your father is always there when you need them, though they never said it out loud how much they love you, fathers like a shelter when the storm coming, fathers like a door when there is danger outside, father is someone no matter how you treat him, he will choose to bear all the pressure and let you free. So please cheer for the love of father!