中秋节七年级英语作文_初一年级英语作文(精选20篇)

Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24

hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to

twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The

temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the

highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature

would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in

Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.

每到中秋月儿圆，胖胖的月姑娘穿着美丽的黄袍子，把月光洒向人间。吃月饼、赏月是这一天必不可少的两件事情。

去年中秋节的时候，我们学校还组织了一次吃月饼的活动呢。每个人从家里带去两块月饼，班会课上所有同学的月饼放一起，互相交换。那天，我带的是桂花馅和五仁馅的月饼，我把切好的月饼分给我的好同学和好朋友们。第一个和我交换的是姚泓辰，我把我带的月饼给他，他也把自己带的月饼分给了我。我们大口地吃了起来，可是，没想到，我们吃的月饼竟然是一个口味的，我们俩个都哈哈大笑了起来。然后我又和张杰祎换月饼吃，这回是蛋黄馅的，非常好吃。自己带去的月饼有同学喜欢吃，心里会有一种成就感。吃到好朋友的月饼，更会感到无比的.幸福。同学们一边品尝着口味不同的月饼，一边欣赏着有关于月亮的美丽诗篇。一节课的时间过得非常快，大家都体会到了一种不一样的快乐。第一次和同学们一起过中秋，感觉好棒呢!

晚上，月亮升起来了，星星闪闪发光。我们全家人围坐在窗前，赏月、谈心、思念远方的亲人。小叔和小婶在天津工作，他们也在地球的某一个地方和我们一样看着同一轮月亮。我好想念他们。希望他们明年中秋能回来跟我们一起过个团圆节。

那真是个难以忘怀的中秋节!

秋天，伴随着秋姑娘的脚步悄悄地来了。一排排整齐地大雁像军人一样飞向南方过冬;白云在天空中漫不经心地散步;稻谷像在读书一样，低下头在读者大地的书。日子过得就像掉进了蛋糕堆里一样，又甜又美好……

秋天的中秋节，丰富多彩，有赏月、吃月饼、团圆饭等活动，下面我来给你一一介绍下吧。

中秋节，家家户户都挂上了又红又大的灯笼，因为灯笼代表着吉祥，也代表了团圆;还有些人家忙着准备晚上的团圆饭，忙得不可开交，厨房里“乒呤乓啷”的，就像演奏着一曲交响乐。我们家也不例外，妈妈奶奶在准备着晚上的团圆饭，爸爸和爷爷在准备红灯笼。而我呢，就成了一个小杂工，一会儿跑这，一会儿跑那，不过我很乐意帮忙。我刚跑到妈妈那边去，妈妈就给我下任务让我把米淘好。我就学着妈妈的样子之前淘米的样子，把米装在锅里，然后拿到水池去洗，可是看似很简单的一件小事，我却也是折腾了好久。我一会儿把水倒多了，一会儿把米倒在水池里了。我们忙了好一会儿，终于好了。

我看见月饼像个睡美人一样静静地躺在盘子上，就迫不及待地咬上了一口，哇!是冰激凌月饼。它外皮像雪花一样洁白无瑕，咬上一口，里面冷冰冰的陷像冰块一样，冻得我牙齿打了个颤，真是酷爽无比。

吃完了团圆饭，就到了赏月的时间了。大家边吃月饼边谈话，聊得不亦乐乎。我望着月饼心想：“嫦娥这时候在干嘛呢?她是不是在和后羿吃团圆饭呢?”刚发着呆呢，我的好朋友就来叫我出去玩。

中秋是美丽的秋天中最愉快的节日，希望每年的这一天大家都能跟亲人一起度过。如果感到幸福的话，你是不是可以和我一起拍拍手呢?

I enjoy reading books very much, because there are lots of interesting

things in them. Two years ago, I didnt like reading very much. I had plenty of

time, but I spent lots of time on playing with computers. When I was very young,

I didnt think reading book was interesting, because I found nothing more

interesting than the computer games. Ive changed now. I enjoy reading novels,

because therere lots of interesting stories. I love to read Harry Potter.

Thats a good novel. I know that it is one of the best-sellers in England. Im

always lose myself in the interesting stories. From joozone.com. I hate the

words like "to be continued" in a novel. That makes me very sad, because I dont

know the end of the story. I also hate the words like "the end", because I want

to read more. Some of my friends think that Im strange. Maybe you can find the

interesting things in a book, so dont waste your time in the computers any

more. If you read very much, you will get lots of knowledge.

今天是一年一度的传统佳节——中秋节，在这个美好的日子里，我们民安路小学追梦娃小记者团的全体成员们，一起过了一个难忘中秋节。这个中秋节特别在什么地方呢，请继续往下看吧。

早上八点钟，我拿着前一天晚上准备好的一块月饼、和爸爸一起做的灯笼，还有制作灯笼的工具，准时来到学校艺体馆，只见舞台前方挂着条幅：弘扬传统文化，情暖留守儿童，追梦娃小记者中秋节特别活动。首先乐乐老师给我们介绍了坐在主席台上的杜校长、孙主任、孙老师、范老师。杜校长热情地给我们讲话，祝我们中秋节快乐，我们这些小记者也向杜校长，向各位老师问好，送去节日祝福。接着，乐乐老师给我们介绍了中秋节的来历，还有嫦娥奔月的故事，我一下想到了我学过的一首古诗，李商隐的《嫦娥》：云母屏风烛影深，长河渐落晓星沉。嫦娥应悔偷灵药，碧海青天夜夜心。讲完中秋节的来历和有关中秋节有关的故事后，乐乐老师又请一位小记者同学给我们讲了孔融让梨的故事，孔融让梨的故事是弘扬中华传统美德的经典故事之一，是告诉人们，要养成尊老爱幼，互想迁让，不要只想自己，不想别人。然后老师们抱上来很多梨，让我们排着队，每人取一个大的和一个小的，只见同学们随手拿起二个，没有一个同学挑三拣四，大家拿着梨，脸上笑开了花。乐乐老师又请了二位留守同学说说自己的感受，通过他们的讲述，我更加懂得了，平时爸爸妈妈在身边，自己过多么幸福，也真心希望他们的父母能早点回来陪伴他们。

接着，到了做灯笼的环节，我按照前天晚上和爸爸一起做的步骤做起来，很快，一个灯笼就制作好了，我在灯笼里面贴上一张写好的谜语，然后和同桌互相交换灯笼，猜谜语，然后互相交换月饼。

通过这次的活动，我知道了中秋节的来历，感受到了学校领导和老师对留守儿童的关心，在欢声笑中，我们民安路的小记者们一起度过了一个难忘而有意义的中秋节。

My name is XXX.And Im 13 years old.My hobbies are singing,dancing and

drawing pictures.And Im a sanguine person.My favourite stars are Shu Chang and JJ Lam.I like playing computer game and reading classic

in the rest.Im studying at Xiao Shi Zhong Xin school.

My name is Liu yang. I`m a thirteen-year-old boy. I`m a student of Class Four, Grade Seven in the No.3 middle school from Luo yang . My study is well. I`m tall and strong.

I`m a diligent boy. I study hard at all my lessons. My dream is to be a knowledgeable man. I know it`s very hard. The way is very long. But I will try my best to do it well. And I belive myself. I have many hobies. They are reading, running, swimming, playing, basketball, climbing and playing table tennis. Everyday I all need some time to reading. On Saturdays I play basketball or play table tennis with my friends.

In my free time, sometimes I help my mother with housework or do what I want to do. I have a colorful life!

[新初一的英语自我介绍

Since the winter last year，the haze has occurred a lot of times.Haze is air

pollution in which is mixed up with dust， smoke and other dry particles ，and it

obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment.This

kind of air pollutant come from a variety of natural and manmade sources.

Natural sources can include windblown dust， and soot from wildfires. Manmade

sources can include motor vehicles， and industrial fuel burning， and

manufacturing operations. The one of the main cause that touches off haze is

manufacturing operations. Many factories were over measure produced the smog

that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air

pollution.

It has done great harm to our daily life.many traffic accidents happened

just because of the heavy haze weather，more and more people have to go to see

the doctor because the serious disease caused by the haze，quite a lot of flights

have to be put off，a great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the

poisonous air caused by the haze.

People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance

of protecting the environment.people all over the country are taking measures to

reduce the smog weather.the government suggests people go to work or school with

the public traffic， such as the bus and the underground.Also we should plant

more trees.One of effective solutions to help eliminate haze is to make some

chemistry changes during the manufacturing process，so it could reduce harmful

emissions which are produced by manufacturing operationsAccording to me， I

will go to school by bike or on foot， and I won’t throw the waste anywhere.in

addition， I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment as possible

as they can.would you like to tell me some good ideas?i’m looking forward to

your reply. We are all in this together! We shall survive and thrive

together!

我的母亲一直生活在农村，现在已五十多岁但她并不服老，依然种着庄稼修着菜园。一生没有太多的爱好，到老了陪着她过日子的只是田地与几间房子。

每当夜深人静或独处时，那种不需酝酿、不需前奏的想念油然而生，我的母亲你辛苦了！每次母亲到我这来，都是匆匆而来、匆匆而去。因为她不想耽误我的工作，所以这些年见面的时间少了，一见面那种话不知从何而说起的感觉多了。我知道要多陪陪她，可每次和他说及此类话题时，她总是摇头推辞，反而要我“好好工作，把学生教好，咱家以后要靠你了。我很好，你给我的钱，还有呢。”这是她对我的期望和委婉的搪塞。

在我的印象里，她总是那副装扮，不太整齐的长发，有些缩短的外衣。和人说话时那爽朗的笑，与干活时那麻利地脚板。

我的母亲她是一个苦命的人。

年轻那会儿没日没夜的干活，田里她是一把好手，家里还要操持家务，可苦了她。每年一到二三月青黄不接时，家里的吃饭就成了问题，真是勒紧裤腰带过日子。我记得那会妈妈总会盐一大缸咸菜，中午饭前那会是我最饿的时候，我总会悄悄地揭开缸盖子抓一把咸菜塞在嘴里，然后跑到没人的地方慢慢地嚼。有时实在不想吃这东西，可家里除了这之外并没有什么可以吃的了。

后来我们刚长大。本来母亲可以享享福了，可父亲却走了，这对她打击很大。父亲走的那几天，她不吃也不喝天天躺在床上。后来我外婆和我姨她们来我家住了一段日子，她才慢慢下床。那些日子是最难煎熬的，食不甘味、彻夜难眠，多少个夜晚他的枕头旁都被泪水浸湿。反过来还要劝慰我们，“你父亲去了，他不管我们了。我们还要生活，咱们都好好的”每回这话音刚落，他的喉咙就哽咽住了。我明白母亲在强颜欢笑，我也明白这话的份量。父亲走后的好几年，三十团年都没过成，说好了不许提，可吃着吃着，眼泪水啪啪直掉。上坟更不用说，母亲总在坟上打滚，哭的死去活来，我也没有去劝，但每次都是我背着回去。

前两年，我出远门打工，母亲那不忍离别但有无可奈何的样子。更是让我多少个夜晚纠结。我是一个木讷的人，往往人前的感情人后才知，于是我跟母亲通上了电话，我明白说话时不要让母亲听出在外地的不适。强作镇静地喊了一声“母亲”，眼泪不听话的顺着脸颊大颗大颗的滴在地上，我极力掩饰着调整着自己的声音。电话那头的母亲见我半天没有动静，就一遍一遍地喊我名字，我听出了母亲的着急，便不自觉地点头嘴里憋着一个字“嗯”，母亲问我到了，路上好吧？一个人在外面别急，干什么慢点。我终于忍不住了，哭了出来，也许是第一次出远门，也许是太孤单，也许是母亲的牵挂。母亲听出了我的哭声，又喊起了我的名字，接着，电话里传来了母亲一抽一抽的哭泣声。我们都停止了说话，过了一会儿，母亲的声音变正常了，说道：“你要好好的在外头干，不要让人家笑话，吃饱穿暖，不要亏待了自己。我在家里很好，不要牵挂。”

现在，我回了家乡。想把母亲接过来跟我住，好好让我孝敬孝敬她老人家。可母亲总是推三阻四说：“现在我还能干，等过两年干不动再说。”

[七年级年级写人作文1200字：我的母亲

过年了，好开心，小作者最期盼的就是春节放鞭炮，下面作文频道编辑带来了这篇1000字高一年级愉快的春节作文，希望大家认真阅读。1000字高一年级愉快的春节作文：中国的春节每一个国家都有属于自己的节日，每个民族都有属于自己的习俗，不同人过不同节、做不同的事。那么广州过春节的习俗，当然就和其它地方的不一样了。【春节作文专题】在过年的前几天，“二十四，扫尘日”。迎新首先要除旧。扫尘就是年终大扫除，北方称“扫房”，南方叫“掸尘”。在春节前扫尘，是我国民间素有的传统习俗。扫尘之日，全家上下齐动手，用心打扫房屋、庭院，擦洗锅碗、拆洗被褥，干干净净迎接新年。其实，人们借助“尘”与“陈”的谐音表达除陈、除旧的意愿。年前，在广州市各地经常都会有花市。花市里有各种各样的花、年桔，有过年吃的食品，还有风车和各型各色的小饰品。大人们去买花，小孩呢，当然就是去凑热闹了。三三两两结伴在一起，到处溜达，到处玩耍。饿了就买吃的，渴了就买喝的，看见心爱的东西，买下来就是了，真够爽的。过年，可有一大堆事情要做。人们忙着去买这买那，吃的、穿的、用的??过年，当然就少不了贴春联、贴“福”字。贴春联，是重要的年节民俗。春节前夕，家家户户都要贴上红红的春联，一副副透着喜庆和热烈的春联表达了人们迎新纳福、企盼新生活的美好愿望。在我国，人们往往用一个“福”字来表达对福运、福气、幸福的向往和追求。每当辞旧迎新的时刻，家家户户都要把“福”字贴在屋门上，意味着福气进入家门。许多地方还倒贴“福”字，利用“倒”与“到”的谐音，寓意“福到了”。到了除夕夜，家家户户都要吃团年饭。这顿晚饭，是一年中最丰盛的。肉类、菜类、豆类、海鲜食品??满满一桌都是无比丰盛的菜肴，看着就让人

垂涎三尺。在“无鸡不成宴”的广州，一大早市场就挤满了人，鸡档的老板忙得不亦乐乎。晚饭后，大家一起坐在沙发上看春晚，进行新年倒计时。过年了，人人都换上了新衣，相约出去玩耍、聚餐。最开心的肯定是小孩子了。每逢见着大人，甜甜地叫一句：“恭喜发财。”下一句“红包拿来”估计不用说你就已经拿到它了。快乐的日字总是过得那么快，一眨眼就到了元宵节。元宵节的到来，就意味着春节快要过完了，大家又必须重新回到正常的生活轨道上，学生上学、大人上班??所以对于元宵节，我是又爱又恨。爱是因为可以吃上美味的汤圆;恨是因为过完元宵就得上学了。

My holiday， do not have some fun.

During the holidays， I can do a lot of things， for example， watch TV， playing to the students home， homework， read a book， anyway， to do what they want to， take ones ease， good ah!

In the holidays， I can do they like to do things， as for me， I like to watch TV， look at it for hours， I also like to play computer games， as long as no adults at home， they can with the desire for.

In the holidays， can also not be learning problems， can be properly self-cultivation heart， express the yearning for a better future， how good ah!

My holiday do lots of things， these things make us love life more， in fact， at home on holiday， relaxing， this is not a good thing? What is there against it? What a lovely holiday ah?

Holiday， each child is longing for the day， not only can do what I want， and also my classmates to play， so free!

You like to join?

In general， the holiday is every child s idea of heaven， everyone would want to holiday to come， like a holiday!!

【译文】

我的假期，没有一些乐趣。

在假期里，我可以做很多的事情，例如，看电视，玩学生回家，作业，读一本书，不管怎样，做他们想做的事情，以舒适，好啊!

在假期，我可以做他们喜欢做的事情，至于我，我喜欢看电视，看几个小时，我也喜欢玩电脑游戏，只要没有大人在家，他们可以与渴望。

在假期，也可以不学习问题，可以适当的修养的心，表达了渴望一个更好的未来，多好啊!

我的假期做很多的事情，这些事情让我们更爱生活，事实上，在家里度假，放松，这不是件好事吗?有什么对吗?什么可爱的节日呀?

假期，每个孩子都渴望一天，不但能做我想做的事情，和我的同学玩，那么自由!

你想加入吗?

一般来说，这个节日是每一个孩子的天堂，每个人都想要假期，喜欢度假! !

Mid Autumn Festival is a traditional festival of China. It used to be as

important as Spring Festival .It is usually celebrated in September or Ocotber.

This festival is to celebrate the havast and to enjoy the beautiful moon

light.To some extent, it is like Thanks Giving day in western countries. On this

day, people usually get together with their families and have a nice meal. After

that, people always eat delicious moon cakes, and watch the moon. The moon is

always very round on that day, and makes people think of their relitives and

friends. It is a day of pleasure and happiness. Hope you have a wonderful Mid

Autumn festival!

Mid-autumn day Mid-autumn day is a special festival in China, which is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. Itfalls on the 15th day of august lunar month every year. Our Chinese will celebrate it on that day. I think there are not too many people can reject he temptation of it. I like this festival very much. I have two reasons.

First of all, mid-autumn has the deep meaning of reunite. In china, people regard mid-autumn day as very important, so no matter where they are, they will come back to their family if there is a chance. They don’t like celebrate this festival outside, which will make them feel lonely. Thus, they will go home by all means. Luckily, the government also pays great attention to this traditional festival. There are laws to make sure people have holidays in that special day. In the other word, mid-autumn festival gives a chance for family get together.

Secondly, every family will prepare a big meal in that day. All the food is delicious. It is good to have a big meal. I think nobody will not interest in delicious food. The mooncake is a necessary decoration for mid-autumn day. It tastes good, too. It is the traditional for a long time. How pleased to enjoy the glorious full moon with mooncake!

This is why I love mid-autumn festival so much. It is funny and happy time.

中秋节在中国是一个特殊的节日，是中国的传统节日。中秋节是每年农历的八月十五号。我们中国人会庆祝那一天。我觉得没有多少人可以拒绝它的诱惑。我很喜欢这个节日。我有两个理由。

首先，中秋节的深层含义是团聚。在中国，人们把中秋节看得很重，所以无论他们在哪里，如果有机会的话他们都会回到他们家人身边。他们不喜欢在外面庆祝这一节日，这会让他们感到孤独。因此，他们会竭尽全力回家。幸运的是，政府也非常重视这一传统节日。所以法律规定在这特别的日子里会放假。换句话来说，中秋节为家人团聚提供了机会。

其次，每个家庭都会在这一天准备一顿大餐。所有的食物都很好吃。有大餐吃真的很棒。我觉得没人会对美味的食物不感兴趣。月饼是中秋节的一个必需的装饰。它也很美味。这是很久以前的传统。一边赏月一边吃着月饼是多么惬意啊!

这就是为什么我那么喜欢中秋节的原因。那是快乐有趣的时光。

人们常说“月到中秋分外明”，这话相当有道理。瞅，那带着一圈金环的月儿终于升起来了。它先是金黄金黄的，徐徐穿过一朵一朵轻烟似的白云，向上升着、升着，便在一刹那间，月儿的颜色变浅了、变白了!

它高高地升起来了。圆得那样可爱，那样有趣，便像一个银色的玉盘反射出一道道白光。

啊，皎洁的月亮，您引起好多人的丰富想象：嫦娥，因偷吃仙药，被关在寂寞的广寒宫内；吴刚，被罚砍那砍不断的桂花树；小玉兔，在广寒宫里为嫦娥捣药……

我多想和吴刚往做伴，多想往慰问孤独的嫦娥，多想往逗逗可爱的小玉兔呀……

可您又那么遥远，我想借大雁的翅膀，在这欢乐的时刻飞向您的怀抱，可大雁也飞不了这么高；我想用长虹架起一座彩桥，往探望您这地球的少年，可当彩虹出现时，您却不知在何方……

瞅着这圆圆的月亮，我又思念起往世的奶奶来。她那慈祥的面庞又浮当前我的面前。一想起奶奶来，我的眼睛便湿润了，奶奶似乎也在我们身旁和我们欢度佳节。这不正应了“每逢佳节倍思亲”的诗句吗？

我凝神望着月儿，口里嚼着香甜的月饼，听爸爸讲着月亮的传闻，我又想起台湾的小朋友，直到相当晚相当晚……

人们常说“月到中秋分外明”，这话相当有道理。瞅，那带着一圈金环的月儿终于升起来了。它先是金黄金黄的，徐徐穿过一朵一朵轻烟似的白云，向上升着、升着，便在一刹那间，月儿的颜色变浅了、变白了!

它高高地升起来了。圆得那样可爱，那样有趣，便像一个银色的玉盘反射出一道道白光。

啊，皎洁的月亮，您引起好多人的丰富想象：嫦娥，因偷吃仙药，被关在寂寞的广寒宫内；吴刚，被罚砍那砍不断的桂花树；小玉兔，在广寒宫里为嫦娥捣药……

我多想和吴刚往做伴，多想往慰问孤独的嫦娥，多想往逗逗可爱的小玉兔呀……

可您又那么遥远，我想借大雁的翅膀，在这欢乐的时刻飞向您的怀抱，可大雁也飞不了这么高；我想用长虹架起一座彩桥，往探望您这地球的少年，可当彩虹出现时，您却不知在何方……

瞅着这圆圆的月亮，我又思念起往世的奶奶来。她那慈祥的面庞又浮当前我的面前。一想起奶奶来，我的眼睛便湿润了，奶奶似乎也在我们身旁和我们欢度佳节。这不正应了“每逢佳节倍思亲”的诗句吗？

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Someone says: are you a silkworm, spit of the continuous filament and die. Someone says: you are the candle, to the best of the last drop of tears to illuminate the dark night sky; Someone said, you are the morning dew, often before dawn, moistens the land silently all things... You, is my respected teacher, non-existent.

Non-existent with tall, round face, with two arch eyebrows on his forehead, under the arch eyebrows with a pair of bright and sharp eyes, she has a plausible mouth, a smile, mouth petal meniscus as quiet.

Non-existent at ordinary times is very strict with our requirements. Each lesson learned to write the book of copying, will ask us to write the word is very good, to write bad words will never let go, until it is written. Words because some students in our class wrote too fast and some bad, non-existent will let them change to come over, we all have greatly improved.

Non-existent also care about us. Remember once, I was a bit uncomfortable, go to the clinic under temperature, amount of 37.5 degrees, non-existent just said to me: "if uncomfortable, he said to the teacher, the teacher will and parents said." Non-existent for we really care about.

Teacher, I salute you! Is that you get ignorant we into the space of knowledge, sowing love with you that like the sound of a song! Like a candle, burn yourself, you give we lit the fire of hope, with your persistent enthusiasm to guide us to open our science maze! Thank you, teacher!

有人说：你是春蚕，吐不尽那绵绵的细丝至死方休!有人说：你是蜡烛，洒尽最后一滴泪去照亮漆黑的夜空;还有人说：你是朝露，常在黎明到来之前，默默地滋润着大地万物……你，就是我敬爱的老师——汤老师。

汤老师长着高高的个子，圆圆的脸蛋，额上长着两道柳眉，柳眉下嵌着一双明亮而又锐利的眼睛，她还有一张能说会道的嘴巴，一笑起来，嘴瓣儿像恬静的弯月。

汤老师平时对我们的要求很严格。每次学完课写《习字册》的时候，都会要求我们把字写得非常端正，对写的不好的字决不放过，直到写好为止。班里有几个同学的字因为写得太快而有些不好，汤老师就会让他们改过来，使我们都有很大的提高。

汤老师还很关心我们。记得有一次，我有点不舒服，去医务室量了下温度，37.5度，汤老师就跟我说：“如果不舒服，就跟老师说，老师就会和家长说的。”汤老师对我们真的非常关心。

老师，我向您致敬!是您把懵懂的我们领进知识的太空，用您那如歌的声音把爱播种!您像蜡烛一样燃烧了自己，给我们点燃希望的火种，用您那执著热情指引我们打开科学的迷宫!谢谢您，老师!

Our school is very beautiful. there are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It＇s so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.the teachers work very hard.they love us as if we were their children.When we meet some problems,our teachers often help us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!

TheTimeof a date has different standard for boys and girls. Girls always

like to be late for about ten minutes while boys always reach the destination on

time. If the girls are earlier than the boys, then the situation will become

awkward, it is not polite to let a girl wait for a boy. But sometimes girls are

always late for more than half an hour, which annoys the boys. It is said that

if you call a girl to ask her if she is on the way, then she will answer you

that she just goes out of the house, the truth is that she is still in the

house. Most girls are late for making up for a long time. It is considerate to

be late for a date for a few minutes, but it is impolite to be late for much

time.

On the evening of the Mid Autumn Festival, our whole family went to the moat to enjoy the moon.

Todays moon seems much brighter than at any other time. The moon is so beautiful! It looks like a white jade plate and a Yaotai mirror. Looking at it, I seemed to see the shadow of Change and jade rabbit. They played in the Moon Palace, and their laughter spread all over the Moon Palace. I also want to fly up and play with them, ask the ancient story of Change, touch the furry fur of the jade rabbit, and see what the beautiful moon palace is like. Also, why does Change fly to the moon... Ah, I have a lot of questions to ask. If I say, I cant say it for three days and three nights.

Looking at the bright moon, I seem to see my grandmother who I think about day and night. She is still so kind and kind; And my sister, who is always so naughty, fights with me every day... I wonder if they are the same as me, looking at a full moon and missing their relatives in the distance. Hey, "I miss my family twice during the holidays!"! May lovers in the world get married and no longer suffer from this parting!

现如今，又到了绿粽飘香的端午节，可又有几个孩子对端午节有所期盼呢？吃着香甜的粽子，能否品出那段故事呢？遥望星空，是否能隔着雾霾看到那颗最明亮的星星呢？

当韩国人将端午节申请为非物质文化遗产时，网络上有多少“愤青”猛然起身，抨击韩国“不要脸”，将别人的东西说成是自己的，但却没有一个人在自己身上寻找错误，自我反思：这些原本就属于我们的节日我们怎么过的？又还记得什么呢？

当你嘻嘻哈哈向朋友做恶作剧度过快乐的愚人节的时候，是否记得再过几天就是清明节呢？

当你在为挂满五颜六色的小礼物的圣诞树新增装饰的时候，是否记得再过几天就是春节呢？

我们又是如何对待自己的节日呢？

说到国庆节先想到的是七天的假期，却又有谁想想几十年前革命的胜利呢；

说到春节先想到的是香喷喷的饺子，却又有谁想想饺子包含的合家团圆呢；

说到端午节先想到的是多样的粽子，却又有谁想想屈原的满腔爱国豪情呢？

就像这样，我们对于自己的节日只记住了能使自己开心的事情，却忘记了它本身的意义。祖国的文化在慢慢流失，而一些人却在当“网络超人”，逞一时之豪气，却从不思考引起问题的原因。

高楼大厦在我们身边不知不觉拔地而起，在城市的边缘，我们已经很难寻觅到一条潺潺溪水环绕身边，睁眼是一望无际的稻田，闭眼是淙淙水声交织着悦耳虫鸣的地方了。

是啊，时光的长河正浩浩荡荡地流向远方，而端午节是否也在钢筋水泥间被挤压进这条长河中，越来越远，越来越淡呢？

我们永远无法理解父辈们小时那种对端午节的期盼了。我们身处的已不是那个只有端午节才能吃粽子的年代了。只要想要，各种形状、馅料任你挑选。可即使是这样，粽子已无法勾起我们的食欲，取而代之的是麦当劳、肯德基等洋食品。只要想听，各民族、各语言的歌曲任你听，可即使再美妙，也无法找回儿时奶奶教我儿歌的乐趣了。

如果，我们再不试图挽回，恐怕失去的不仅仅是一个端午节，还有其他的传统节日。随之而去的还有我们的快乐、向往与追求。你可曾知道，我们正在闪烁的霓虹灯中迷失方向！

Every child has an idol in their heart. They chase the famous star and

dream to be part of them. Look at those idols, they are young and beautiful, and

the most important thing is that they are favored by a lot of fans, so I dream

to be a star. If I were a star, first, I could make a lot of money. With these

money, I could make my parents have a better life and return their love. The

most exciting thing is to have a lot of fans. They will support me all the time.

I also could see my talents and feel so proud of myself. But being a star means

lacking of time to company our families.

初一英语过去式作文一：Summer vacation

Last summer vacation ,I had a great time. Because I went to Beijing. Beijing was very beautiful, but there was an interesting thing,it made me very happy!

One day, I got a toy tiger from my mother.So,I wanted go to the zoo.When I came to the zoo,I saw a woman and her baby first, that woman took her baby to here also see the tiger. The tiger spent time on sleeping,the woman pointed the tiger and asked her baby:"Look,what#39;s that ?#39; The baby answered:"That#39;s a big cat." Haha,yeah,

when the tiger slept , it just like a big cat!

初一英语过去式作文二：Last weekends

last weekends I was so busy.

In the morning,I visited my grandparents and had lunch together.

We had#39;t seen each other for a long time.

so I really missed them.

In the afternoon,I went out with my friends.

we had basketball games in the park.

It was a really good time for me and I was very happy.

初一英语过去式作文三：My weekend

I had a busy weekend.On Saturday morning,I cleaned the room and washed the clothes.In the afternoon,I did my homework.It was a little difficult,On Saturday evening,I went to the movies.On Sunday

morning ,I went to the library to read a book about history.Then in the afternoon ,I went to the beach.

On Sunday night,I watched an interesting talk show.

What a busy but happy weekend I had!

初一英语过去式作文四：Thursday

Thursday, August 1st

Today I went to the Palace Museum. It was cool. Then I went to the Great Wall . It was fantastic. There were many people there. In the afternon, I visited Tian’an Men Square. There were many beautiful flowers .It was really great. I went to a Beijing Hutung. It was really fun.

I enjoyed myself very much.

初一英语过去式作文五：Last summer holiday

Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner. The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.The good expression was the informce of the dophin,They could save people,also could show many things.They are very smart! I like HongKong very much !

初一英语过去式作文六：Weekend

Jenny had a busy weekend.Last Saturday morning, she did her homework and practiced speaking English at home . She watched TV and played tennis on Saturday afternoon. That night, she went to the movies. On Sunday morning , she cleaned her room and went to the beach. . On Sunday afternoon, she visited her friends and went shopping .She had a party last night. What a busy but happy weekend she had!