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【预测话题】假期打工

【预测题目】

暑假就要到了。很多学生打算在假期打工锻炼自己，可是有些家长不同意。他们认为打工既耽误学习，又不太安全。请你以“Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs?"为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法。

Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs?

【参考范文】

Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs?

Summer holiday is coming. Many students plan to have part-time jobs. But some parents disagree. They think it wastes the students’ time and it isn’t safe as well.

In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to do some part-time jobs. Firstly, they can experience different lives and get more knowledge outside school. Meanwhile, after learning about the difficulty of making a living, they will cherish what they have now. What’s more, teenagers should have chances to make decisions by themselves.

Of course, safety is the most important. Teenagers should learn to protect themselves when doing part-time jobs.

【参考译文】

青少年应该被允许做兼职工作吗?

暑假即将来临。许多学生计划做兼职工作。但一些家长不同意。他们认为这会浪费学生的时间，也不安全。

在我看来，青少年应该被允许做一些兼职工作。首先，他们可以体验不同的生活和获得更多的知识以外的学校。同时，在学习了谋生的困难，他们将珍惜他们现在。更重要的是，青少年应该有机会自己做决定。

当然，安全是最重要的。青少年在做兼职工作时应该学会保护自己。

期中考试过后，又进入一个新的学习阶段，但语文考试给我的教训却要成为一个激励我前行的事例，不能忘记。

基础丢了许多分。我的字平时还行，但是放到田字格中却不能一笔一划地书写，导致我的字因为不规范扣了分，这让我认识到无论做简单题还是难题都要本着一丝不苟的态度，这不是实力问题，而是态度问题。我的文言文做的也一般，虽然都是课外文言文扣得分，但这并不是借口，因为这些考点都可以用课内知识来解决，这反映出我的迁移能力不强，并且课外阅读量少得可怜，以后要重视每一篇文言文的学习，并尽可能地拓展，不至于在考场上慌了神。

其次阅读虽然扣分最少，却也有问题。首先语言表述分暂且不说，就单拿出一道意义题来说，虽然认出题型，找到方法，写上采分点，却最后因为方法混淆扣了分。很显然，归根结底，还是技法没有滚瓜烂熟，没有做到题法对应，要再下点功夫背技法，其重要性不容小视。

语文考试的启示给了我许多，目的不在于后悔和自责，而在于前进和拼搏。

也许我们的祖父已是年迈，但是他们依然会有一个年轻的心态。

My grandfather is over sixty. He looks younger than his real age. He was a policeman before his retirement. He has a positive attitude towards his later years of life. He does physical exercises every morning. He can read books without wearing glasses. He is so strong that he is able to lift heavy things by himself.

He loves children very much. Every Monday afternoon he is invited to a nearby school to tell stories to the children about the life and work of the policemen. All the young pupils love him very much.

关于自己的祖父是不是也是这样子的呢？同学们可以将自己的祖父写下来与大家一起分享一下哦！

初中英语写作范文：保护眼睛

眼睛对我们很重要，同学们一定要很好的保护自己的眼睛哦。

保护眼睛

Protect Our Eyes

Nowadays, there are more and more students becoming short-sighted. Some students get short-sightedness when they are little. There are fifteen students wearing glasses in my class. Being short-sighted is common among students, even in primary school. That is too serious. Therefore, we should protect our eyes carefully. When we are reading and writing, we should keep a standard posture. Besides, we should not watch TV or play computer for too long. They are bad for our eyes. And, we should do eyes exercises regularly. A good rest is also important to our eyes. In all, eyes are the windows of our mind. We should keep it healthy.

现在，越来越多的学生近视了。有些学生在很小的时候就近视了。我们班上有十五个学生戴眼镜。近视在学生中变得很普遍，甚至是在小学。这种情况很严重。因此，我们应该好好保护眼睛。当我们读书写字的时候，我们应该保持正确的姿势。此外，不要长时间看电视或玩电脑，对我们的眼睛不好。并且，我们应该有规律的做眼保健操。好的睡眠对我们的眼睛也很重要。总之，眼睛是我们心里的窗口，我们应该保持它健康。

希望同学们都能很好的保护眼睛，相信同学们会做的很好的吧，好好学习英语知识吧。

初中英语写作范文：第一次坐飞机

同学们都坐过飞机吗，下面是我对我第一次坐飞机的经历的介绍。

第一次坐飞机

My First Experience of Plane

Today I was very excited, because I traveled plane for the first time. My parents and I traveled toBeijingtoday. When the plane took off, I felt it was shaking. But I was not nervous because of excitement. After a while, it stopped shaking and flied higher. I could see the buildings on the ground. They became smaller and smaller. And finally, I couldnt see them anymore. Through the window, I could see the blue sky. It was very clear. Clouds were under the plane. They looked so different from the ground. It was amazing. I like the view very much. It took only two hours to get toBeijing. TheBeijingairport is very large and wonderful. There are many planes and people. I think my trip will be funny.

今天我很兴奋，因为我第一次坐飞机去旅游。今天父母和我去北京旅游。飞机起飞的时候，我感到它在摇晃。但是由于兴奋，我并没有觉得紧张。过了一会，飞机停止摇晃并且飞得更高了。我能够看到地上的建筑，它们越来越小，最后就再也看不到了。透过窗户，我可以看到蓝蓝的天空，很清澈。云朵在飞机下面，它们和地上看上去很不一样，那么惊奇。我很喜欢这风景。到北京花了我们两个小时。北京机场很大很壮观，飞机和人都很多。我觉得我的旅途一定会很有趣的。

通过上面我对第一次坐飞机的经历介绍，相信大家都很想坐飞机吧，相信大家一定会有机会的哦。

初中英语写作范文：寒假计划

虽然寒假已经过去了，但下面是我对我的寒假计划的介绍，希望大家看看哦。

寒假计划

Plan for Winter Holiday

The winter holiday is coming. I expect it very much, because the Spring Festival is the most important event in the holiday. First, I will relax myself. This term I work very hard, so during the holiday, I want to have fun. My families will go back to the hometown. We will get together to celebrate the Spring Festival. I like families getting together and organizing various activities. It’s funny and warm. Of course, study can’t be ignored. After the festival, I will spend some time on my study. There will be exercises for the holiday. And I will do some reviews for next term. Math is my weakness, so I must work hard to improve it. This is my plan for winter holiday.

寒假即将来临。我很期待它的到来，因为春节是这个假期最重要的节日。首先，我会放松一下自己。这个学期我学习很努力，所以假期期间我想玩玩。我的家人会回老家过节，我们将一起庆祝春节。我喜欢家人团聚在一起组织各种各样的活动，有趣而又温暖。当然，学习也是不容忽视的。春节过后，我会花些时间在学习上。我会完成一些寒假作业然后预习一些下学期的内容。数学是我的弱项，因此我必须努力提高它。这就是我的寒假计划。

上面就是我的寒假计划，希望同学们对自己的每一件事都有个自己的计划，一切都安排好，合理的安排自己的时间哦。

初中英语写作范文：这就是我

这就是我，大家对我还不熟悉吧，下面我来介绍一下吧。

这就是我

This Is Me

My name is Li Xing, a boy in fourteen years old. I come from Dalian, Liaoning Province, which is a beautiful and energetic city. Every year, thousands of tourists visit there. There are three people in my family, my parents and I. My parents are doctors who work in a big hospital in my city. I have many interests. Swimming, reading and movie are my favorites, which bring color to my busy study life. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. I work very hard to improve it, but it doesn’t work very well. Besides, I am easygoing and likely to make friends with others. Friendship is an important part of my life.

我叫李兴，今年十四岁。我来自辽宁省大连市。这是一个美丽而又充满活力的城市。每年都有成千上万的游客来这里参观。我家共有三口人，父母和我。我的父母都是大医院的医生。我有很多爱好，其中游泳，阅读和电影是我最喜欢的。它们给我忙碌的学习生活带来了很多色彩。我擅长语文和英语，而数学则是我的弱项。尽管我很努力去提高它，但是并没有很大的作用。除此之外，我也是个外向的人，喜欢和别人做朋友。友情是我生活中重要的一部分。

这就是我，一个完完整整的我，一个不一样的我，一个地球上仅有的我，希望我给大家留下很好的印象哦。

我的学习计划

下面是我对新学期的学习计划的介绍，希望同学们很好的看看下面讲解的知识。

学习计划 Study Plan

At the beginning of this term, I made a plan for my study. Now, I find that I carry it out well in the past month. I was poor in Chinese and English last semester. Therefore, I put the two subjects in the priority and I spent much time on them. Happily, I made progress in the two subjects this semester. Besides, math and physics is not so hard for me, but I must do many exercises to improve my knowledge. Half of an hour for each is necessary and I have always been doing so. The other subjects are easy for me. As long as I carefully listen to the teacher in the class and do some reviews, I can do well in them. While, it does not mean that I attach no importance to them. I make plan for my study to ensure the efficiency of my study.

开学之初，我给我的的学习制定了一个计划。现在，我发现在过去的一个月我能够很好的实行。上个学期我的语文和英语很差，因此我把这两个科目作为我的首要任务并花很多时间在上面。很高兴的是，这学期我这两科取得了进步。此外，数学和物理对我来说不是很难，但是我必须多做练习来增加我的知识。每个科目花上半个小时是有必要的，我一直都是这样做的。其他的科目对我来说很容桂。只要我课堂上认真听课，课后复习我就能够把它们做好。但是，这也不意味着我不重视它们。我给我的学习制定计划以保证我的学习效率。

通过上面我对我的学习计划的介绍，希望给同学们的学习很好的帮助，相信同学们会学习的很好的哦。

[我的初中英语作文

1、以MY Future plan为题目，100字左右

2、我决定大学毕业后当一 名中学教师，这是我孩提时代的梦想

3、我很喜欢教师在个职业，与中学生在一 起可以使自己永保青春

4、我国师资力量缺乏，主要原因是教师工作辛苦，收入低。想当老师的人很少，所以需要大批有志青年献身教育事业

中考英语作文范文：我未来的打算(My future plan)

I decided to be a middle teacher after college. （大学毕业后我决定当一名中学教师）There are many reasons contribute to this decision.（这有很多理由来说服这个决定）

Firstly, when I was a little/boy, I have been dreaming of being a teacher.（首先，当我还是个小孩时就梦想成为一名教师） It seemed so fascinate to me and I hope I can make my dream come true.（它让我很着迷，我希望我的梦想能够实现）

And, I like so much to be with middle school students. （另外，我是如此的喜欢中学生）Most of the students at that age are full of youthful spirity and I am sure their passion would pass to me.（大多数的学生都在充满年轻激情的阶段，我确信仪仗队他们的热情会传染给我） I will retain all the zest of adolescence.（我将可以使自己永保青春）

The most important reason is that our country needs plenty of teachers.（最重要的原因是我们的国家需要教师） So far, teaching is considered a tough and low-income job in China.（讫今为止，在中国，教书被认为是一项辛苦又收入低的工作） However, if we have not enough teachers, our future will lack of excellent scientist, managers, businessmen, soldiers and even goood workers and farmers.（然而，如果我们没有足够的教师，我们将来会缺乏优秀的科学家，经理，商人，士兵甚至于好的工人和农民） How can our country to be strong and wealthy? （那我们的国家怎样才能强大和富饶起来呢）I wish my country to be a better one. （我祝福我的祖国的明天会更好）I am ready to be a teacher and hope all the persons with lofty ideals may dedicate themselves to this meaningful career.（我准备在为一名教师，我也希望大家带着崇高理想献身于这有意义的工作．

Environmental Protection

环境保护

Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue. The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded. We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.

现如今我们的自然环境已经成为一个重要问题。世界人口增长如此之快以至于世界已经变得过于拥挤。我们在消耗自然资源的同时危险化学物品污染着我们生存的环境。如果我们继续这样下去，地球上的生物将不能生存。

Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.

相关人士在环境保护方面做出了一些进展。许多国家的政府已经建立法律来保护大气，森林和海洋资源以停止环境污染。

Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems. People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve(保存) our natural resources and recycle(再循环) our products. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.

同时更应该采取措施来解决环境问题。应该进一步教育人们认识到问题的重要性，应用现代的生产控制方法来节约我们的自然资源和实现产品的再循环。我们相信在将来我们会拥有一个更好的更干净的生存之地。

[初中生环境保护英语作文

My plan for may day

On May 1sh, Im going to my grandmothers home.I think that must be very significative.Because she is too old to visit me and my parents, and she must be very have in mind our.

I will go for a walk with my grandmother and buy she some summer wears.they must fit her like best. Of course , I dont think that is a easy work! So it must takes me many time.

After shopping, we will have a good rest and have lunch in my grandmothers home.

And then, I will clean the home with my grandmother.

At last, I go home.

Of course, I must finish my homewolk.

[初中英语作文之我的五一计划

人生最值得做的事，莫过于拼搏了。人若学会拼搏，虽挫不馁;若懂得拼搏，虽成功而不骄;成、败乃是人生常有的事。达观的人看得很平常，也不算什么特别的，但在得到结果前的拼搏中所获得的经验却是宝贵的。独是凡人生在世间一天，便有值得去拼搏的事。

大作曲家贝多芬小时候由于家庭贫困没能上学，十七岁时患了伤寒和天花之后，肺病、关节炎、黄热病、结膜炎等又接踵而至，二十六岁不幸失去了听觉，爱情上也屡遭挫折，在这种境遇下，贝多芬发誓要“扼住生命的咽喉”。在与病魔生命的顽强拼搏中，他的意志占了上风，在乐曲创作事业上，他的生命之火燃烧得越来越旺盛了。凡属努力拼搏过的人，那么在拼搏过程中得到的快乐都会比别人要多得多。

那么，怎样才算是成功呢?自然拼搏过了，就算是成功者了。俗话说得好，“失败是成功之母”;“成败不是永恒的，而是可以转化的。”人成功的时候，那种轻松愉快，真是不可以言语形容。越是努力拼搏，成功就越容易降临，那快乐还要加几倍哩!大抵天下事从拼搏中得来的成功才算真的成功。这种拼搏与成功的循环，便是这有活力的人间一种趣味。一翻过来，处处敢拼搏，便处处有成功;时时敢拼搏，便时时有成功。成功之权，操之在已。容国才所以说，“人生能有几回搏，此时不搏何时搏。”正是这种作用。

汉朝司马迁继承父业，立志着述史书。他游历各地，阅读了大量书籍。不料正在他着手编写《史记》时，遭到了李陵之祸的株连。但他矢志不渝，忍辱负重，身受腐弄，幽而发愤，经过十余年的艰苦奋斗，终于写成了鸿篇巨着《史记》。

正是拼搏使人们获得了成功。现在是认真看待拼搏的时候了，因为拼搏是走向成功的阶梯。

The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in winter。 It is the most important traditional festival in China。

People usually go home to spend the festival with their family。 They have a big family get-together。 The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival。 They also visit their friends and relatives。

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play。

I walk around the Peak, around the flowers are numerous, full of branches, flowers and criss-crossing, as if the fence rows. Looking down from the peak, only an immense display. full of golden-yellow flowers, Down on the ground, not for the intoxicated with the beauty of nature, this beautiful paradise like the Garden of Paradise.

Suddenly, a cold wind blowing, I began to tremble , and winter jasmine, it seems a soldier, is to resist the wind, the yellow flowers with a sword, and the wind is it a duel! I was怔住this scene, the winter jasmine as appears to be weak, so delicate, and in the cold before they are without fear.

They really tenacious vitality ah!

The Laba Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday celebrated on the eighth day of the twelfth month of the lunar Chinese calendar. "La" is the name given to the 12th lunar month and 8 is pronounced as "ba" in Chinese, which translated is "Laba." There are several legends about the origin of this festivity and we could not tell which one is true. But what we know today is that this festival started as a sacrificial offering to ancestors. It was also a time for the ancient Chinese to pray to heaven and earth that there would be a bountiful harvest. Many people hoped for good luck as well for the coming year.

农历十二月初八是中国的传统节日——腊八节，腊代表中国农历的十二月，而八是eight的发音，因此，这个节日被翻译成腊八。关于腊八起源的传说有很多，我们已经不能辨其真假。时至今日，我们确定的是这个节日起初是为了祭祀祖先，祈求丰收以及为即将来到的一年祈福。

Traditionally, the Laba rice porridge is the most important element of the festival. Generally, the porridge contains eight ingredients which can include glutinous rice, red beans, millet, Chinese sorghum, peas, dried lotus seeds and some other ingredients, such as dried dates, chestnut meat, walnut meat, almond, peanut, etc. The porridge must be boiled for many hours and then offered as a sacrifice to the ancestors. This must be done before noontime. Also, it is tradition that family members eat the porridge together. Then they leave some as a symbol of hope for a good harvest the coming year.

从传统上讲，腊八粥是腊八节最重要的元素。腊八粥通常由八种材料做成，这些材料可以是黏米，红豆，小米，高粱，豌豆，莲子和一些诸如红枣，栗子，核桃仁，杏仁，花生等谷物。粥要熬制数小时，然后作为祭品祭献给祖先。这个祭祀活动一定要在中午之前完成。之后，家人们坐在一起吃腊八粥也就成了传

Another custom is the soaking of Laba garlic. Garlic is soaked in vinegar for more than twenty days starting from Laba festival. Then when the Chinese New Year comes, the garlic and vinegar is used alongside jiaozi on the table.

腊八节的另一传统式腌制腊八蒜。从腊八节那天起，就将蒜泡在醋中二十多天，这样，到春节的时候，就可以在餐桌上与饺子同食了。

Last week, my friends asked me to spend the weekend in the house that near

the lake. It is one of my friends’ house, where their families often spend the

holiday together. Though the house was not big, the environment around was

really beautiful. In the daytime, we walked around the lake and appreciated the

beauty of nature. At night, we made some food and barbecued. It was such a happy

time that we sung and danced. We talked about our future thoughts. Before we

went to bed, we watched movies together and discussed the plot. This is the most

wonderful moment for us. We share our happiness and have no annoyance.

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the

time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy.

Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days

become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is

singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some

birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the

nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful

flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

人自生下来，情感、情绪就受到客观坏境的影响，受到偶发事件的牵动，感动就是人的感情受到冲击时的一种反应。

考生要想写好这篇文章，就需要从材料出发，充分调动生活积累，回忆曾让我们为之感动的人或事，景或情，力求从中选取内蕴丰富，值得我们咀嚼、玩味的材料，把它们组织到文章中来。此外在充分领会感动的内涵基础上，还要从全新的角度，选择一个新视角，去抒写真情。生活中处处涌动着令人感动的事情，只有善于用心捕捉，就能找到写作的切入点。

内容上，我们即可以写伟人的壮举，也可以写凡人小事;还可以写造化奇观，鬼斧神工。但切记，所写的这些都必须是令你感动的，能与读者用心交流的。要让读者感动，让生活感动，让世界感动。

写法上，既可以抒情，也可以议论。但组织起来的材料作为文章主体框架必须都是抒情、议论的基础，否则，所抒之情，所议之理，皆会成为无源之水，无本之木，这就起不到感染读者的作用，反而会让读者望而生厌。无论采取何种表达方式，都必须要把握住情感的基调，以真情感人，以深邃的思想感人。

总之，只要文章内容能恰当地围绕话题，阐发感动的深层内涵，表现积极的价值取向，就都符合要求。

[关于感动话题作文高考写作指导

No matter the day is how to spend endless， the sun always rises and falls，

flowers always bloom and wither， around heavy traffic is always fleeting， stand

at the time of the tail， we kept after the mist as ignorant of the future.

Too many people always sigh the cruelty of time and the helpless of growing

up。 In fact， growth is really a caterpillar into a butterfly process， always

undergo a metamorphosis of pain， you can better meet the chocolate as unknown

world。 All that let go or no one saw tears in a few years back， you can get

unexpected! The road of the future， whether rugged or smooth， requires you to go

and taste it alone.

Eileen Chang wrote an article about "road"， referring to the way of growth。

This road is a road that everyone must take。 Those who pass by advise the people

who are going this way not to choose the road， because it is so rough and long

that it is refuted： "since you can walk this way， how can I not go out?"。" Thus，

one after another people go through this road full of hardships， perhaps this is

the true meaning of growth。 Knowing that he might fall into it， he obstinately

persisted in his choice.

I think that the child will never grow up Peter Pam， who said he had no

regrets can not grow， we are always sad to miss the past endlessly all say

"dont grow up， never grow up， if you really can not grow up， you really dont

care? Every time there is a time of happiness。 In any case， we will grow up as

time goes by from the palm of the palm.

Growing up is like a mysterious fruit。 Some people resist it hysterically，

and some people cant wait to taste it。 But only when we grow up can we get more

and better world.

中考作文分值比例大，是初三生复习的重点，而且作文又是最容易丢分的部分。下面是小编整理的作文写作过程常见的三大禁忌，欢迎阅读。

审题不抓关键词。专家认为，在近几年的中考评卷中，发现相当一部分考生审题不抓关键词，这样在写作时就很难抓住重点，容易跑题。如 “动力来自……”这个作文题的关键词是“来自”，考生只有将“来自”作为重点才能写出好文章。不少考生没有审题抓关键字的意识，看一眼题目就急着动笔，有的考生考前背过一些范文，一到考场就往里套，不仔细审题，这样最容易“下笔千言，离题万里。”初三生要养成审题的习惯，对作文题目要逐字细看，明白题目的 要求后再下笔。

专家提醒考生，审题时还要注意文章体裁和字数要求，看看题目要求写成什么体裁的文章，字数不要超出或少于要求字数太多。

励志方面的文章，对作文素材积累很有帮助。此外，初三生还要注意古 诗词的积累，在文章中恰当地运用古诗词也是让文章增色的好办法。

文章较“平”缺少细节。一些考生写的文章没有细节，没有重点，记“流水账”一样洋洋洒洒一大篇。初三生在写作时要有两把剪刀，一把剪出自己最擅 长的一件事，另一把在这件事中剪出要重点描写的部分。如在写跑步时，早上怎么集合、怎么准备，都可以略写甚至不写，但发令枪响时自己如何紧张，跑的过程中 遇到的问题，这就需要详细描写。有细节的文章才有真情实感，才能打动人。一般来讲，一篇文章中抓住两个精彩的细节就够了，这需要考生平时苦练。

Orginate in America in the Mothers Festival. May 9,1906, American consuming

city Jia-Wei the mother misfortune of silk dies , her grief extremely. Avoid

Japan in annual mother death anniversary, Miss An Na organizes catch up the

campaign of Sai mother, encourage other person to also express the gratitude for

own loving mother with similar way.

Hereafter, she convinces people everywhere and establishes the Mothers

Festival to the appeal of all sectors of society and call. Her appeal gets warm

response.

Through draft resolution, on May 10,1913, American Senate and House of

Representatives signs by president Wilson second that announces and decides each

years May for Sunday, is the Mothers Festival.

This measure arouses world countries, is imitated one after another,

install to 1948 Na pass away , 43 countries have established the Mothers

Festival.

布局，也就是文章的结构。它是在作者掌握了材料，明确了主题后，对整个文章的构架作一个整体上的安排。这种安排不是随心所欲的，它必须遵循客观事物固有的逻辑、条理、秩序，也可以通过作者观察、认识和表现客观事物的独特思路而进行合理的调整。所以，文章的布局既有客观的规律性，又有主观的灵活性、多变性的特点。

对于中考作文，以往出现过很多新颖的结构形式，如日记、对话体、剧本、童话，还有高考作文中的处方等等，这些东西有些很不好把握，对初中生来说难度比较大，比如剧本，不是一般的初中生都能写的，虽然初中课本中有过一点训练，但，要达到一个比较优秀的水平是很难的，一旦写得不怎么样，那就很容易给人一种不伦不类的感觉。再者，那些容易掌握的，别人作过了，你再作，新颖度也就不是太大了。当然常规性作文形式的生命性还是要强得多。重要的还是要把内容与形式结合得完美一些，才是真正的作文之道。

1、片断组合式

片断组合式就是选择几个不同的材料内容，对它们进行片断叙写，然后组合在一起，来共同表现一个主题。

片断组合式在形式上几个片断各自独立，可用小标题、序号等形式隔开，前面最好还要有开头语，如题记之类，后面要有一定的结束语或者尾声什么的。

这种形式的注意点是：要找到材料的共同点，要统一于一个中心之下。另外，片断不能选得太多，两三个便好。这种形式的不足之点是对材料的处理只能是简单的，很难挖得深，但如果语言的把握好，还是可以解决这个不足的。

2、诗文组合式

诗文组合式就是在文章前或者后加上行数不要太多的诗歌，行成一种诗与文的完美结合的文章。

这种形式的注意点是：诗的行数不要太多，最好是十行以内的。另外，诗的内容要与文章的内容统一，要为文章表现主题服务。当然，诗，还要写得像诗。如在文章的开头部分引用了一首诗，结尾也可以几句诗来照应开头。

3、精美图画式

精美图画式就是在文章的开头部分用精美的语言描绘出一幅能够打动人吸引的精美图画，然后再依托图画展开文章。

这种形式的好处是能很快地吸引读者或者评卷教师，给人以良好的印象。注意点是：开头的这幅图画要精心打造，后面的发展要自然流畅。如我们初中课文《故乡》中对少年闰土月夜海边刺猹的描写，那就是一幅能给人留下深刻印象的图画。

4、人物对话式

人物对话式就是大量使用人物的语言描写来展开文章的情节。这种在以往的作文中大量存在，并不是一个新鲜的形式。但，如果这种形式运用得好，的确能给人以条理清楚、结构明晰的感觉。

这种形式的注意点是：语言的选择要有精练性和生动性，要统一于一个主题之下。中间也还可以适当的穿插一些其它描写或者记叙性的语言，使文章显得更明确一些、更完整一些。如初中课本中的《曹刿论战》、《变色龙》等。

5、对照烘托式

一、要观察景物变化的全过程。从开始到最后，凡有变化的都要细致观察。比如植物，它的发芽、开花、结果等各个生长期都有不同的特点，如果细致观察了全过程，就容易抓住它的特征进行描述。

二、捕捉景物的颜色和姿态。自然界的颜色是七彩的，自然界的万物是各具形态的。我们在观察时，就要善于捕捉到景物的颜色和姿态。

三、调动各种感觉器官来观察。有一则寓言：一天，五种器官相互争吵起来。“眼睛”瞪得圆圆地说：“没有我，你们什么也看不见!”“耳朵”不服气地说：“少了我，你们啥也听不见!”“鼻子”哼了一声：“要是没了我，你们能闻见花的芳香?”“舌头”伸得长长地说：“嘻!如果不是我，你们能尝到美味佳肴?”“身体”在一旁发起抖来。“眼睛”好奇地问：“你怎么啦?”“身体”说：“听你们这样争吵，我浑身冷飕飕的，――不知你们想过没有，要是我们互不相让，各自离散，那我们还有什么存在的价值呢?”这个寓言形象地表明一个道理：当人们观察景或物时，需要多种器官的配合。借助“五官”，往往能描绘出景物的特点。

世界上的景和物是丰富多采的，如果“眉毛胡子一把抓”，将它们都写进文章里，那样的文章肯定是繁杂冗长，不知所云。正确的做法应该是：根据中心思想的需要，有选择、有重点地状物绘景，这样笔力集中，便于写得细腻，写得丰满。围绕中心，状物写景，不是说和中心思想关系密切的就写，和中心思想关系间接的就不写。对于那些与中心思想关系密切的景或物要重点写，和中心思想关系间接的也要写，只是笔墨轻一点罢了。当然，对于那些和中心思想毫无关系的景或物，应当一律舍弃。

游踪，就是游览一个地方所经过的路线、踪迹。浏览一个地方，往往要经过许多地方，看到许多景物。行文的时候必须按照游览先后顺序记叙，清楚地交代先到了什么地方，后到了什么地方。准确地把游踪写清楚，才能够具体描述景物所处的地点、方位、特征。写清楚游踪的主要途径是“移步换景”，即随着游览、参观者的立足点不断转移，相应描述不同地点所见的景物。通过“移步换景”，游览、参观的游踪，景物的位置，景物和景物之间的空间关系，都容易描述清楚。作者如同一名导游，领着读者一个点、一个点地游览、参观。为了使状物绘景更生动、更具体、更形象，我们还可以采用多种表现手段来丰富描写，从而增添文章的情趣。常见的表现手段主要是：

一、用比喻等手法状物绘景。

着名作家老舍先生说过：“在描写时，不能不设喻。”确实这样，只有通过比喻，才能把简单的东西具体化，抽象的东西形象化。比如作者把稻穗的颜色比作“黄金般”，就生动形象地写出丰收的景象。又如作者把耶诞红比作淑女，也生动形象地写出耶诞红的美丽。不过话要说回来，比喻也要创新。如果总把某种景物的比喻固定化，那是不会增添文章的情趣的。有个伟人说过，第一个把姑娘比作鲜花的是天才，第二个把姑娘比作鲜花的是庸才，第三个则是蠢才。恐怕他说的也是这个道理。

拟人，是把没有思想感情的生物当作有思想感情的人来写，它也往往能使语言富有魅力。例如“原野上的青草，换上青翠的衣服”，作者这样一比拟，就把春去夏来的意思委婉地表达出来。把春天人格化为“春天是个插花的能手”，“春天是个美丽活泼的仙子”，“春天是个慈祥的守护神”，“春天是一位伟大的画家”。这样状物写景，文章就更富有感染力。

二、用动静结合的手法状物绘景。

有这样一则幽默故事：“动”与“静”是一对冤家。一见面总爱吵个没完。一次，“静”对“动”说：“你怎么老跟着我?让我独自呆一会不行吗?”“动”回答：“那怎么行!没有我，人家怎么能认出你来?”“静”不服气地说：“你举例说说。”“古人笔下有这么两句诗：‘蝉噪林愈静，鸟鸣山更幽。’如果不写‘蝉噪’、‘鸟鸣’的动态，怎么能知道‘林静’‘山更幽’呢?还有……”“得了，得了!这么说，我俩是形影不离呀!”“对，互相依存，共同体现”。这个故事说明：以动写静，动静结合，这是状物绘景中高妙的一着，它能使文章情趣盎然。

三、运用传说，状物绘景。

状物写景要富有活力，运用传说也是一个重要途径。我们在描写景物时，插入一些故事逸闻、神话传说、典故名言、文史资料、民俗谚语，使景和物蒙上一层神奇的色彩，不仅能使文章内容丰富，而且能使文章情趣横生。

记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.