高考英语作文语法错误扣几分（20篇）

Water

Water is very important for living things. Without water there can be no life on earth. All animals and plants need water. Man also needs water.

Water is found atmosteverywhere. Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.

As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container. When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.

Although about 70 percent of the earths surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water. So we should make good use of water on earth.

译文：

水对生物很重要，没有水，地球上就没有生命。所有的动植物都需要水。人类也需要水。

水几乎无处不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空气中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固态、液态和气态。当它是固态时，它可以像砖一样硬；当它是液态时，你可以将它从容器中倒出；当它是气态时，你看不见或感觉不到它。

虽然地球表面70％是水覆盖着，世界上仍有许多地方缺水。所以我们要好好利用地球上的水。

[高考英语满分作文： Water

Time brings the truth to light.

(时间使真相大白。或时间一到，真理自明)

Time and chance reveal all secrets.

(时间与机会能提示一切秘密)

Time consecrates: what is gray with age becomes religion.

(时间考验一切，经得起时间考验的就为人所信仰)

Time is money.

(时间就是金钱或一寸光阴一寸金)

Time flies.

(光阴似箭，日月如梭)

Time has wings.

(光阴去如飞)

Time is a file that wears and makes no noise.

(光阴如锉，细磨无声)

Time stays not the fools leisure.

(时间不等闲逛的傻瓜)

ime and I against any two.

(和时间携起手来，一人抵两人)

Time is life and when the idle man kills time, he kills himself.

(时间就是生命，懒人消耗时间就是消耗自己的生命。或时间就是生命，节省时间，就是延长生命)

Time spent in vice or folly is doubly lost.

(消磨于恶习或愚行的时间是加倍的损失)

Time undermines us.

(光阴暗中催人才。或莫说年纪小人生容易老)

Time and tide wait for no man.

(岁月不待人)

Time cannot be won again.

(时间一去不再来)

Time is , time was , and time is past.

(现在有时间，过去有时间，时间一去不复返)

Time lost can not be recalled.

(光阴一去不复返)

Time flies like an arrow , and time lost never returns.

(光阴似箭，一去不返)

Time tries friends as fire tries gold.

(时间考验朋友，烈火考验黄金)

Time tries truth.

(时间检验真理)

Time is the father of truth.

(时间是真理之父)

Time will tell.

(时间能说明问题)

What Kind of Jobs use to Work Overtime?

When it comes to overtime working, I believe manypeople will not happy but have experienced itbefore.

Do you think what kind of job usually needs to workovertime? I think it is the career like, designer.

When having task to design, they usually have to finish it in the arranging time.

In most cases, the time is very limited.

So, nearly every time they have new task, they have to work overtime.

Sometimes they have to work over night.

Of course, there are some peoples job property is similar to designer also need to work anextra shift.

Thus, I think the people like designer will have more chances to work overtime.

[关于加班的高考满分英语作文

导语：我们都说任何事物都有其两面性，所以上网也不例外。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

We should say that every coin has its two sides. So it is with surfing on line.

Generally speaking, students will benefit a lot from Internet. People can get lots of useful information through the Internet quickly ,no matter it is national or throughout the world. We can also listen to the music and chat with the friends far away.The most important of all is that we can search many foreigners who speak English as their native languge, which can help us improve our Enlish rapidly.We can send Email to our good friends in a few seconds---with the internet your friend dont need to wait for so long time as receiving a letter as before.

But it also can spread many side effects.for example ,there are some sexy news and pictures on web which will not do good to teenagers. And there are some games that can easily attract the students and even make you addict to the games so you can waste a lot of valuable time.

On the whole it will give you both good and bad things, the thing matters much is how do you make use of it.

【参考译文】

我们都说任何事物都有其两面性，所以上网也不例外。

总的来说，学生通过互联网还是受益颇多的，我们可以很快从网上取得很多有益的信息，不管是国家的还是世界的。还可以在网上听音乐和远方的朋友聊天，最重要的是可以接触到很多讲英语的外国朋友和他们当地的方言，以帮助我们快速提高英语水平。通过互联网我们远方的朋友不再像以前一样需要花很长一段时间才能收到信件，只需几分钟就可以给我们的好朋友发送邮件。

但同时也带来很多不同的影响，比如，很多不利于青少年的色情新闻或者图片在网上出现，同时还有很多易于吸引学生的游戏甚至长时间沉溺于游戏。

总的来看很多东西都有利有弊，就看你如何去利用它。

home to a strong earthquake, the people working outside xinjirufen. their first thought is that their loved ones are safe » how home-like » rush to return home as soon as possible, to participate in the rescue and rebuild their homes. but natural disasters which blocked the railway, the train decommissioning, long-distance truck capacity shortage, more than 10,000 from around the convergence of sichuan province to xian transit workers in disaster areas anxiously awaiting the return home!

qualcomm situation in the heart, blood is thicker than water. migrant workers in the disaster areas to return home affect the way the hearts of the people of xian. provincial party secretary zhao leji, governor yuan chunqing the first time made important instructions, xian municipal government immediately made arrangements to mobilize all the forces can be mobilized quickly organized the citys capacity to the fastest speed sending migrant workers to go home.

to the secretary, to the mayor, to the commander and political commissar of the past, public security, traffic, traffic police and health departments to the person in charge. migrant workers came to the middle, wenhanwennuan, a certain commitment to send them home as soon as possible, so that migrant workers have been anxious the warm comfort. metro, the mobilization of yanta, who conscientiously fulfill their duties; bureau of transportation, bus companies to mobilize, they transferred the bus in good condition; xian tourism groups to mobilize, they prepared the way migrant workers the necessary food and drink; policemen mobilized, they clear their task is to maintain order and cleared the way by police escort; oil companies to mobilize, they ensure that the fuel is sufficient; mobilization of the health system, ambulances and medical staff accompanied all the way to the bao kang; our troops mobilized, they built the road vehicles and all the necessary supplies. a few hours, xian on the mobilization of the 268 long-distance bus, eager to return home to the migrant workers send home the road.

no valentines love in the earthquake. party committees at all levels of xian, the love, the urgency of radical workers, migrant workers would like to think, to handle the affairs of migrant workers in the hearts. xian love in all walks of life, their real actions, another interpretation of "a difficult one, p plus assistance," the traditional chinese virtues.

家乡遭受强烈地震，在外打工的人心急如焚。他们的第一个念头就是，亲人可安全?家园怎么样?尽快赶回家，参加抢救，重建家园。但灾害使铁路受阻，火车停运，长途车运力不足，一万多名从各地汇聚到西安中转的四川灾区民工在焦急地等待回家!

情通于心，血浓于水。灾区民工的回家之路牵动着西安人民的心。省委书记赵乐际、省长袁纯清在第一时间作出了重要指示，西安市委、市政府立即作出了部署，要求动员一切可以动员的力量，迅速组织全市运力，以最快的速度送民工返乡。

书记来了，市长来了，司令来了，政委来了，公安、交通、交警、卫生等各部门的负责人来了。来到民工中间，问寒问暖，承诺一定尽快送他们回家，让焦急的民工得到了温暖的抚慰。新城、雁塔政府动员起来了，他们认真履行着自己的职责;交通局、公交公司动员起来了，他们调来了状况良好的大客车;西安旅游集团动员起来了，他们备好了民工路上所需的食品饮料;公安干警动员起来了，他们明确自己的任务是维持秩序，并用警车开道护航;石油公司动员起来了，他们确保的是油料充足;卫生系统动员起来了，救护车和医护人员一路相随为的是保康健;我们的部队动员起来了，他们自带车辆和路上所需的一切给养。短短的几个小时，西安就调集了268辆长途客车，把急切返乡的民工送上了回家的路。

地震无情人有情。西安各级党委、政府有情，急民工所急，想民工所想，把事情办在了民工的心坎上。西安各行各业有情，他们用实际行动又一次诠释了“一方有难，八方援手”的中华传统美德。

in some countries where racial prejudice is acute, violence has so come to be taken for granted as a means of solving differences, that it is not even questioned. what is really frightening, what really fills you with despair, is the realization that when it comes to the crunch, we have made no actual progress at all. we may wear collars and ties instead of war-paint, but our instincts remain basically unchanged. the whole of the recorded history of the human race, that tedious documentation of violence, has taught us absolutely nothing. we have still not learnt that violence never solves a problem but makes it more acute. the sheer horror, the bloodshed, the suffering mean nothing. no solution ever comes to light the morning after when we dismally contemplate the smoking ruins and wonder what hit us.

the truly reasonable men who know where the solutions lie are finding it harder and harder to get a hearing. they are despised, mistrusted and even persecuted by their own kind because they advocate such apparently outrageous things own kind because they advocate such apparently outrageous things as law enforcement. if half the energy that goes into violent acts were put to good use, if our efforts were directed at cleaning up the slums and ghettos, at improving living-standards and providing education and employment for all, we would have gone a long way to arriving at a solution. our strength is sapped by having to mop up the mess that violence leaves in its wake. in a welldirected effort, it would not be impossible to fulfil the ideals of a stable social programme. the benefits that can be derived from contructive solutions are everywhere apparent in the world around us. genuine and lasting solutions are always, possible, providing we work within the framework of the law.

before we can even begin to contemplate peaceful co-existence between the races, we must appreciate each other’s problems. and to do this, we must learn about them: it is a simple exercise in communication, in exchanging information, ‘talk, talk talk,’ the advocates of violence say, ‘all you ever do is talk, and we are none the wiser.’ it’s rather like the story of the famous barrister who painstakingly explained his case to the judge. after listening to a lengthy argument the judge complained that after all this talk, he was none the wiser. ‘possibly, my lord’ the barrister replied, ‘none the wiser, but surely far better informed.’ knowledge is the necessary prerequisite to wisdom: the knowledge that violence creates the evils it pretends to solve.

2009年北京卷高考英语满分作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

There?is?a?widespread?concern?over?the?issue?that?__作文题目_____.?But?it?is?well?known?that?the?opinion?concerning?this?hot?topic?varies?from?person?to?person.?A?majority?of?people?think?that?_?观点一________.?In?their?views?there?are?2?factors?contributing?to?this?attitude?as?follows:?in?the?first?place,?___原因一_______.Furthermore,?in?the?second?place,?___原因二_____.?So?it?goes?without?saying?that?___观点一_____.?

People,?however,?differ?in?their?opinions?on?this?matter.?Some?people??hold?the?idea?that?___观点二_______.?In?their?point?of?view,?on?the?one?hand，?___原因一_______.?On?the?other?hand,?____原因二_____.?Therefore,?there?is?no?doubt?that?___观点二______.??

As?far?as?I?am?concerned,?I?firmly?support?the?view?that?__观点一或二______.?It?is?not?only?because?________,?but?also?because?_________.?The?more?_______,?the?more?________.?

In life there are too many people are worth to thank, for example, raising our parents, the inculcation of unity and friendship among teachers, students... And the most worth me to thank is my biological parents.

Parents brought me to this beautiful world, give me a very warm home, gave me the most unselfish love, accompany me through a happy childhood. Parents to protect my time and time again I will never forget.

When I was a child I was in a ditch, mother desperate, immediately pull me up. And her hands were rough wall ground bleeding. This experience, let me know how the parents love is the most selfless.

Unconsciously already say goodbye to the happy childhood, towards the high school stage. Parents gave me again and again to encourage, make me to irresponsible parents after the examination, leading the way, have again and again.

Parents sometimes also very strict. On one occasion, my brother and I yell bloody murder to a toy, I know is wrong, but I still rakes. After the event, parents criticized the my meal, I also know my fault.

Our parents biological I repay you, parents strict teachings I bear in my mind, it is parents strict teachings, hard and selfless paying that I took to the road of the upright, on the road.

In this, please allow me to solemnly parents say to me: "mom and dad, you were laborious, thank you!"

在人生旅途中有太多太多的人值得我们去感谢，例如：养育我们的父母、谆谆教诲的老师、团结友爱的同学……而最值得我去感谢的是我的生身父母。

父母将我带到这个美丽的世界，给我一个无比温暖的家，给了我最无私的爱、陪伴我渡过一个快乐的童年。父母对我的一次次保护使我终身难忘。

小时候我被陷入水沟，母亲不顾一切，立马将我拉了起来。而她的手心却被粗壁磨得血流不止。这次的经历，让我懂得父母的爱是最无私的。

不知不觉已告别欢乐的童年，迈进中学生阶段。父母给了我一次又一次的鼓励，使我在一次次考试中不负父母所望，名列前茅，得到一次又一次的奖励。

父母有时也十分严厉。有一次，我和弟弟为了一个玩具而大吵大闹，我明知是自己不对，可我还是不依不饶。事后，父母批评了吾一顿，我也知道我的过错。

父母生身之恩我无以回报，父母严厉的教诲我谨记心头，正是父母严厉的教诲、辛勤而无私的付出使我走上正直之路，走上阳光大道。

在此，请允许我郑重地对我的父母说一声：“爸妈，您们辛苦了，感谢您们!”

Do you know what my favorite animal? Is the dog of course. My grandma keep a dog, it has a beautiful black hair, a pair of intense big eyes, four legs as fast like a rocket.

One day, I found more doghouse puppy, oh! Originally was born a bitch, a total of four. The dog is cute and naughty, every day running around in the yard, for a while to run the house, ran upstairs after a while, a moment to hide it, run it after a while, as if with a group of friends hide under, from time to time, the old dog to the dog barked two cry, as if to say: "children, dont go to far, pay attention to safety." Play with the dogs have been tired of a day, a meal, stretch and a yawn, into the arms of mother, dogs quickly into the sweet dream sweet, return in mouth every now and then a rumbling sound, as if to say talk in a dream.

The next morning, the birds singing in the branches, wake up the sleeping dog, a yawn, they stretch, rub the sleepy sleepy eyes, began to a day of happy life.

Look! How happy puppy, it is a happiness.

你知道我最喜欢什么动物吗?当然是小狗。我姥姥家养了一只小狗，它有一身乌黑亮丽的毛，一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，四只腿跑得像火箭一样快。

有一天，我发现狗窝里又多了一些小狗，哦!原来是这只母狗生的，一共四只。这些小狗又可爱又调皮，每天在院子里跑来跑去，一会跑屋里，一会跑楼上，一会躲那，一会跑这，好像跟一群小朋友躲迷藏，时不时，老狗还向小狗汪汪得喊两声，好像在说：“孩子们，别跑太远了，注意安全。”玩了一天的小狗们都累了，吃完饭，伸个懒腰，打个哈欠，投入到狗妈妈的怀抱里，小狗们很快就进入了甜甜的梦香，嘴里还时不时的发出咕咕的声音，好像在说梦话。

第二天早上，小鸟在枝头唱歌，叫醒了正在熟睡的小狗，它们打个哈欠，伸个懒腰，揉揉睡意惺忪的眼睛，又开始了一天的快乐生活。

瞧!多么快乐的小狗，真是幸福美好的一家。

导语：好的开头能使文章生色,激发读者阅读的兴趣;好的结尾,能增强表达效果,使读者思索、回味文章的思想内容。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.

在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。

同样句型包括：It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.

2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.

你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。

(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...

(2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)

3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。

类似的句型还有：If necessary…, they can…

4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.

记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。

5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic

我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。

6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.

人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。

7. I had a great first impression of American people.

我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。

8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.

我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。

9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.

随着现代科技的迅速发展，互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。

10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.

大家应该尽可能的多读书。

11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.

由于实施了改革开放政策，中国变得更加繁荣了。

12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.

我们都需要呼吸清新的空气，我们都需要饮用洁净的水，我们都需要绿地来享受。

13. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.

让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。

14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.

我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。

15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.

我们应该养成一个好习惯，明智地利用时间。

16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?

我的确想知道的是，他是否会在下个月出国?

17. Television is harmful to developing minds.

电视不利于开发心智。

18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized

孩子们都有很大的潜能，而父母却没有意识到这一点。

19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.

在过去的10年里，我们学校发生了巨大的变化。

20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.

那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。

21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quite half way.

这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。

(1)直接使用：so… that…

The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

这份工作太辛苦、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我非常累，差点半途而废。

(2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有：

(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)

22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980’s.

生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂，始建于1980年。

23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.

我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室，对老师和同学都同样开放。

24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.

我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。

25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高级词汇：increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.

工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人，而且他们有80%都是大学学历。

26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.

在校园内，学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。

27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.

现今，在农村地区还有很多孩子失学。我认为原因之一就是他们的家庭太贫困，而无法供应他们上学。

28. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.

人们应该增加对儿童教育的重视，因为他们会在祖国的未来扮演重要的角色。

29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.

到2008年，我们会看到北京像花园一样，有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。

30. How nice to hear from you again.

能再次收到你的来信真是太好了。

31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

敬盼早日回复。

I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.

我期待与你早日相见。

32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。

33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

不管你将来做什么，英语都是最重要的。

34. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。

35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.

毫无疑问，玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。

36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.

显然，早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。

写作高手使用的高难度表达：

I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.

我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。

37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.

吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.

有句名言说道：风暴使树木深深扎根。

41. It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友，刘翔。

42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.

出于英语教师世家的她，对英语有着特别的兴趣。

描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下：

diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的

modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的enthusiastic热情的

43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.

我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。

44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!

我觉得电子字典很方便，但会使人们变懒。

45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.

总之，出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。

46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.

现在，我想这真是一次成功的经历，并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。

47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

通过这次的地震，我认识到了群众的力量是无穷的。

高级名言谚语活学活用。

解释：“群众的力量是无穷的”这句名言是我们自己造的，极具威力，然后再安在毛主席的头上，更显力量。最后为了增加真实性加上时间和地点，使判卷老师误以为真，根本不敢怀疑。于是，心想：“这个句子太棒了，我都没听说过!”

造句：In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.

48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.

如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客，我会非常乐意做你的导游。

49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about the student’s using the Internet.

如今，老师和家长都对学生上网现象极为担心。

50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.

对于该问题的看法因人而异。

51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.

我们被赋予新的机会和面临着新的挑战。

52. Thank you for your consideration.

感谢你的体谅。

53. I really appreciate what you’ve done for my family and me.

我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。

We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.

如果你帮助我们小孩学英语，我们将感激不尽。

54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.

我们永远都不会忘记在一起度过的日子。

55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.

很多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性了。

56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.

报告将在10月12日3：30在报告厅举行。

57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.

学生应该知道如何利用他们的时间。

58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.

我厌倦了日复一日地做一些例行公事。

59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.

征服英语不亚于征服一座高山，都需要决心，勇气和毅力。

60. I’m disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.

我对我们队在运动会上的表现感到失望。

61. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.

到目前为止，我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。

更多表示“决心”的高级句型：

I’m determined to…

I have made up my mind to complete the task.

62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.

这个城市位于长江畔。

63. I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

两星期前收到了你的来信，我真是太高兴了。

64. I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London.

我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。

65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

最近，我们班展了开一场讨论，是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。

66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.

我不知道你是否方便多告诉我一些有关旅行的事。

67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.

可以肯定，如果开车的人少一些，空气污染就一定会减少。

68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.

我个人认为教师是世界上最重要的职业。

69. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.

我们无法想象没有纯净的水，这个世界会变成生么样子。

70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

当我沿着公园路往东走的时候，有一个老人在街的另一边从公园里走出来。

71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.

在大城市，有更多的学校和医院供人们使用。

72. Some people think that we should read extensively.

有一些人认为，我们应该有选择性地阅读。

73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.

在我看来，你结束留学后应该回国。

74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.

另一个原因，我认为你回国可以更方便地照顾你日渐年迈的父母。

75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.

我们学校通常下午四点下课。

76. I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend tomorrow’s lecture on American history.

我很抱歉，明天我不能参加那场关于美国历史的演讲。

77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.

花在教育锻炼上的时间是25分钟，只有12分钟的时间用来做家务。

78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.

你可能忘了昨天下午你花钱买了其他东西。

79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.

好习惯是成功的捷径。

80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.

那个年轻的小男孩深深地感动着我，因为我相信雷锋一直活在我们的心中。

81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.

很多新的楼房建了起来，路也都拓宽了。

82. It is more than ten months since we last met.

从我们上次见面到现在已经有十个多月了。

83. It’s very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.

每天帮助我复习功课，你真是太好了。

84. Nothing can live without air and water.

没有空气和水，任何东西都不能生存。

85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.

我宁愿住在农村，而不愿住在城市。

86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.

应阻止人们往河里扔脏东西。

87. Peter sets aside some money every month so that he can buy a new car.

彼得每月留出一点钱以便购买一辆新汽车。

88. Linda didn’t go to bed until midnight so that she could finish reading the book.

为了看完这本书，琳达直到午夜才睡。

89. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.

早睡早起有益于健康。

90. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.

越来越多的人意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。

91. Mrs. Brown is an Australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of China.

布朗女士是一个澳大利亚的老师，她有一头金黄色的头发和一双蓝色的眼睛，她去过中国的各个地方。

92. On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years.

5月8日，星期天，我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。

93. I think students should balance well between work and study.

我认为学生应该平衡好工作和学习两方面。

94. Friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.

在我们的生命中，友谊其中的一种非常珍贵的感情。

95. It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

不言而喻，青春一去不复返。

96. Last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.

最后而又很重要的一点，它必定给市民带来福利。

97. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.

随着日益迅速的经济发展，更多的问题受到我们的关注。

98. The preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern

保护森林引发人们的广泛关注.

99. As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that…

就我而言,我赞同…的观点

100. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.

不仅仅是为了我们，更是为了我们的后代，政府和普通市民应该联合起来，使这个世界变成更美好的家园。

世上没有十全十美的.人，没有人没犯过错误。我也一样，贫嘴、撕本子、迟到……这些错误，这些错误我都渐渐的淡忘了。但是有一件事，我始终铭记在心。

大概是我六岁的时候吧！那时，我有一个朋友，他叫石展。我们经常一起玩耍。

他八岁生日时，邀请我去参加他的生日派对。我到了他家，他正在洗碗，我就在他家里转。每见到一样新奇的东西，我就拿下来摸摸，好不开心！

到了他家阳台，我看见了我最爱的植物“君子兰”，它正待在一个阳光照不到的地方。“这太不公平了！”我自言自语，“凭什么它就在阳光照不到的地方？它的叶子都黄了！”我便使出吃奶的劲儿，把它搬了起来，想把它搬到有阳光的地方。谁知，我踩到了一大块青苔！脚一滑，身体就倒了下去。我本能地松开盆子，撑住地面，才不至于摔倒。可“君子兰”就不一样了，它又没手又没脚，只好和地面来个“大亲嘴”，摔得粉碎。

我慌了神，不知怎么办。“怎么办，怎么办？”我的脑经飞快地转动着，“对了！就这么办！”我快速地收拾好碎片和泥土，并走到厨房，对石展说：“石展，我该回去了！”没等石展回答，我就一溜烟地跑了出去。

回到家里，我又怕又喜。怕的是石展发现“君子兰”，喜的是他没有发现。

晚上，我正在想，该不该告诉他这件事，却听见他的哭声和大骂声。我的勇气立刻被吓了回去，我自己安慰自己：“你不说，没人知道！”

几个星期后，我想通了，我决定把这件事告诉他！

我来他家门前，敲了敲门，开门的却是一个我不认识的女孩。她告诉我，他搬家了！

这个消息就像一道闪电一样打中了我，我不甘心，又不得不甘心。我猛然想起，我有他家的电话号码！

“嘟——嘟——嘟”我拨通了他家的电话，“喂！谁啊？”“石展，是我。”“是你啊，有什么事吗？”“对不起！我把你家的‘君子兰’摔坏了！”我愿意为他会狠狠地骂我一顿，没想到，他却这么说，“‘君子兰’？哦，你说的是它啊！没事的，它本来就死了，正准备丢呢！”

放下电话，我搂着茉莉走进阳台，我突然发现，天真蓝！

①in+月、年 the morning/afternoon/evening/a week 表示时间

②on+具体某一天(几月几日)/某个假期(…Day)

③at+具体某点时间、某个假期(…Festival)/the weekend

①in…street 表示方位

②on…road/left/right

③at the…crossing/stop/某个具体的地点

①in the tree(不是树上长出来的)

②on the tree(树上原来自己长出来的)

表示时间：

① ago(……以前) later(……以后)

② before (在……以前) after(在 ……以后)

be 动词和助动词

1. be 动词(am/is/are)

主语 be 动词(原形) be 动词(过去式)

I am was He/she/it is was

We/you/they are were

2.助动词(do/does/did)

Do+非第三人称单数 +动词原形…?

…do/dont

Does+第三人称单数

…does/doesnt

Did+所有主格

…did/didnt

What do you/they/we…

+动词原形?

I/They/We+动词原形…。

What does he/she/it…

He/She/It +(动词+S)….

What did you/they/we/ he/she/it…

I/They/We/ He/She/It +动词过去式。

2013年山东高考英语作文题目：给美国朋友Tom的回信

第二节：写作(满分30分)

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件：

1. 未及时回复的原因;

2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

注意： 1. 次数：120~150;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【试题点评】

今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。

【经典套路】

第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的

第二段：“道歉”部分(相当于“写信背景”)

第三段：“假期安排”部分

第四段：补充说明+客套话

【高分范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)

How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)

Mother often complains of clothing store clothes is too expensive, and poor quality. So mother seldom go to shop to buy clothes, three days two head again and said dont have clothes to wear. I see aunt buy clothes on the Internet, so remind mom can also be bought on taobao, mother suddenly realize: "yes, I have been to buy books on dangdang, is pretty good. The clothes can also ah. Im going to try."

Almost immediately, the mother turned on the computer on taobao, wow! A lot of beautiful clothes! Looks like from the picture and the quality is very good, the price also cheap. Sure.but east west see mother, finally took a fancy to a pink quilted jacket, point into a look, the price and freight is much cheaper than clothing store. Mom also looked at the "customer reviews" this column, a lot of people said the dress of good quality. Mother then at the size, also picked up a ruler measured in own body, and finally picked l, then into the basket, at last, through online bank to pay the money.

Looking at mother excited appearance, I think online shopping is a convenient and affordable. I believe online shopping will become more and more popular among people.

妈妈常常抱怨服装店里的衣服太贵，质量又差劲。所以妈妈很少去服装店买衣服，又三天两头说没衣服穿了。我看到姑姑在网上买衣服，于是提醒妈妈也可以在淘宝上面买啊，妈妈恍然大悟：“是啊，我一直在当当网上买书，都不错的。那衣服也可以的啊。我去试试。”

于是，妈妈马上打开电脑上了淘宝网，哇!好多漂亮的衣服啊!从图片上看起来样子和质量都挺不错的，价格也便宜。妈妈东挑挑西看看，最后看中了一件粉色的棉袄，点进去一看，价格加运费比服装店里便宜得多。妈妈还看了“顾客评价”这一栏，很多人都评价说这件衣服质量不错。妈妈又看了尺寸，还拿起尺子在自已身上量了量，最后挑了l号，便放进了购物篮，最后通过网上银行交了钱。

看着妈妈兴奋的样子，我觉得网上购物真是方便又实惠。相信网上购物一定会越来越受人们的喜爱。

Here’s a little token of my appreciation for all that you have done for me over the years.这是我一点小小的心意，感谢您这么多年来所付出的一切。

There may be moms all over the world, but you’re the only one that matters to me.全世界也许到处都有妈妈，但您是我惟一最在意的。

Thank you for everything over the years, mom.母亲节快乐!妈妈，谢谢您这些年来所做的一切。

Mother’s Day is a time when mothers discover how well their children can prepar e breakfast.母亲节是妈妈们发现她们的小孩会把早餐做得很好的时刻。

We would love to fix breakfast for you mom, but we think it would be safer for us all if we took you out.妈妈，我们很乐意为您准备早餐，不过我们想，如果带您上馆子，会比较保险一点。

Moms should get more than a special day, they should get a medal of honor.妈妈们应该得到的不只是一个节日，她们该获得荣誉勋章。

When I was sick, you always stood by me.当我生病时，您总是陪伴着我。

Considering the quality of food that children make their mothers on Mother’s Day, it becomes apparent that without moms, their kids would starve to death.想想母亲节时，孩子们为妈妈所做的早餐;很明显的，如果没有妈妈，孩子们将会饿死。

I want to wish you a happy Mother’s Day.祝福您母亲节快乐。

Roses are red, violets are blue. This card on Mother’s Day is especially for you.玫瑰是红色的，紫罗兰是蓝色的。这张母亲卡是特别给您的。

Thanks for being there, mom. Happy Mother’s Day.谢谢您不断地扶持我。祝您母亲节快乐。

Sometimes it may not seem like it, but I really do love you.有时候好像不是这样，但是我真的爱您。

Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mother’s Day.今天是您休息的日子，让我们来照顾您。母亲节快乐。

We may not be angels all of the time, but we do appreciate what you do.我们也许不是一直都像天使那样乖巧，但我们确实感谢您的教诲。

On this day we honor you, dear mother.亲爱的妈妈，我们向您致敬。

On this day we all sit back and think about how much our mothers do for us.在这一天，我们将会抽空休息一下，想想妈妈们帮我们做了多少事。

We will try to make this your best Day ever.我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节。

Though it is hard to tell you sometimes, I do love you dearly, mom.虽然有时要告诉您并不太容易，但是我真的非常爱您，妈妈。

This card comes from the whole family. Happy Mother’s Day.这张卡片是我们全家合送的。祝您母亲节快乐。

I’ve tried many times to tell you, but I’ll say it again: I love you mother.我已经告诉您许多次了，但是我将再说一次：我爱您，妈妈。

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In order to provide a good guidance and reference for nearly 1000 senior high graduates in our school, the Student Union made a survey on the filling applications for the college entrance examinations among the previous year graduates. According to the statistics of the survey, half of the graduates accepted their teachers’ suggestions for the reason that teachers have a better understanding of their interests, specialties and schooling experiences. 35% of the graduates followed their parents advice as they are used to obeying their arrangements and trusted their decision. 10% of the graduates preferred to make an independent choice as they hold that nobody know them better than themselves and since it is their rights to fill applications they hope to win respect from teachers and parents. The remaining 5% just made their choices accordingly after they got the results of the final published scores and ranking.

We have an annual Mid-Autumn festival, I love Mid-Autumn festival, love its moon cakes golden and full, and love its beautiful moon circle.

Fifteen moon was round, so we decided to go to the moon in the evening of sixteen. Night, we came to the plaza, we sat down on the grass, didnt appear at that time the moon, the sky is dark blue, but in the square street lamps are festooned with colored lights, the street was filled with the festive atmosphere of the festival. People hold glowing fluorescent sticks in their hands, colorful and more beautiful in the streets. The moon seems to want to play hide-and-seek with us, never to appear. The sky had only a few scattered and faint stars. Suddenly there appeared some white in the sky, as if the moon were coming, watching the moon rising from the west. At this time the moon is not very round, there was no light, a dark clouds, the moon through the test of time and time again, finally with a perfect, beautiful gesture to show in front of people, the crowd trouble. The fireworks, the smile of fireworks and the moon made a beautiful scene. After a while, the fireworks ended and the crowd quieted down. Began to appreciate the moon, and I cant help but think of my grandma and grandpa in hometown, the Mid-Autumn festival is family reunion, how I want to my grandma and grandpa, can in the side with us to enjoy the night silent, beautiful, and the moon bright and tender. I hope the moon in my hometown is so beautiful, so round. In the moon seems to have so little drops shadow, it reminds me of the "chang e" of the story, the dribs and drabs shadows should is the goddess of the moon in the missing seed, "chang e should the regret steal the efficacious medicine, every night heart". Back home, our family around the table cut moon cakes, moon cakes have almond, ice skin, double yellow and so on, but my favorite double yellow, because it looks golden full, thin skin filling jing, taste palate is rich. Im going to eat mooncakes!

Qi shuang qiu gao, I love Mid-Autumn festival, also love the Mid-Autumn festival all customs, habits.

1.According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. 依照最近的一项调查，每年有4，000，000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。

2. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

3. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet. 没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

4. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

5.写信的开头：Very glad to receive your letter of July 13.

6.One day after school,XiaoMing passed a Café on his way home.

7.The boss had no choice but to let him in.

8.How he enjoyed himself on the computer!

9.Walking home full of fear,he was sure that he would be scolded.

10.However,other students are against the idea.

11.Sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.

12.today’s activity has taught us the new meaning of the spirit of LeiFeng:sharing with others what you have—you time,energy,or knowledge—makes you fell warm in you heart.It has truly a difference in how I feel about myself.

13.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.

14.No matter what he says，I won’t believe.

15. Thanks to the good weather，our journey was comfortable.

16. At the news of his death，she went pale with sorrow.

书面表达： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况：年龄性别学历，个人条件。英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。字数100左右。

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I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. Thanks. Li Hua

当我听说冬季奥运会将在我的城市里举行，我感到非常兴奋。我的名字是李华。我是一个高中学生，一个18岁的男孩。我想做一名志愿者。我非常喜欢英语和体育。我喜欢交朋友，我随时准备帮助别人。我可以做一个好的翻译，在每一个体育的时间。希望奥运会取得巨大的成功。希望我会被选为一个。谢谢李华

[志愿者申请 Volunteer Application高考英语满分作文

So many children take what their parents do for them for granted, they

haven’t realized the meaning of being grateful. So they always get angry with

their parents, because they don’t get what they want. According to the news that

a little girl went out of the house and refused to go home because her parents

did not give her enough pocket money. I was so shocked to hear it, I would never

ask much from my parents, because I knew they were not easy to make a living and

I am always feel so thankful for what they offer me. Even the one who gives me a

hand when I am in need, I would remember him and when I have the chance, I will

return. A grateful heart makes us a kind person and create a harmonious

environment.