关于人物描写英语作文(推荐20篇)

Winter rain, not to mention how familiar. Winter rain sister every day heaven, people happy people worry. The streets are both desolate and deserted, and are basically desolate. Winter sisters rain is rain, can choose the wind brother to trouble, the original beautiful and romantic winter rain in peoples mouth becomes annoying.

Once, I sat in the father of the battery car, just the sky floating drizzle, can be a big wind. I joked: "rain with the wind flurry, really a flower ed on the cow dung!" Dad smiled. Because the rain came, the sky became dark, and all the hearings were rain "ticking", the "rushing" sound of the rain, or the rocking of the leaves of the wind - The sound in the rain, "patronize" when it is too much! Every time the rain, everything becomes wet da da, it seems that the wind was a bath. Can snake, turtle, some hibernating animals can not accept the "bath task", just want to be over the hole in the cold winter.

There is no way, and can not hibernate, can only think of their own way to keep warm in the morning, no longer someone from morning to night out of morning practice; noon, although the day is the hottest time, to the winter, it does not meet the science; The coldest day, is like a forest silence ... ... the land is the most common puddle, and one foot down, they will splash countless small water, splashed on peoples clothes, pants, so a no Attention, clothes pants on the wet. Those small puddles, reflecting all things, the plot will even become a small tadpole swimming.

Winter rain, people happy to worry!

当你漫步在洁净的林荫道上时，你知道这美好的环境是谁创造的吗?是黎明。当你还躺在暖和的被窝里，你知道水已经开始清扫大街小巷了吗?是清洁工。

我们楼下的王奶奶，已经五十多岁了，个头不高，卷着头，看起来很精神，她上班时总穿着一身工作服，头戴一顶白圆帽，见人总是微笑着打招呼。听姥姥讲，王奶奶在清扫工作岗位上已经默默无闻地奉献了三十多年了。

记着去年冬天是一个寒冷的冬天。一天早晨，我照例早起开始跑步，刺骨的北风“呼呼”的刮着，风里还夹着雪花，我想：这样的天气，王奶奶会不会出来扫雪呢?正想着，从前面不远处传来扫帚的轻响声。我几步就跑到那个地方，往前面一看，是王奶奶。她用大扫帚把雪和树叶扫向一堆，然后她用撮子收起来，再送到垃圾车上。突然，一阵风吹来，把王奶奶刚扫的垃圾吹得到处都是。王奶奶二话没说，弯起腰来，拿起笤帚又重新扫起来。突然，王奶奶脚下一滑，滑倒了。我急忙跑去，扶住王奶奶。她说：我没事儿，你跑步去吧!

等我跑完步，学已经停了。王奶奶负责的马路上，雪已经干干净净了。马路上的另一边已经只有王奶奶推着垃圾箱。我看到了王奶奶矫健的身躯，慈祥的面庞。

想着王奶奶比山还高、比海还深的情意，我们怎么能忘怀呢!

想着王奶奶一人脏换来万人洁的辛勤工作，一种敬佩之情从我心里油然而生。

我最敬佩的人就是像王奶奶一样的清洁工人!

他不会银行没没工作，不顾冷嘲热讽，清洁环境，就是......

我曾看过这样一则漫画，有一位清洁工人的着头在扫地，一位美女手上拿着一包瓜子边走边吃，瓜子壳走到哪里就丢到哪里，当一位清洁工人就跟在美女后面，扫她掉了的瓜子壳。美女，发现后，回头大骂清洁工人，说他没素质。清洁工人没有说话，也就在默默的扫地。其实在这则漫画中才是谁才是最没有素质的呢？大家都十分清楚。

我每天都是六点钟起床的，可是让我醒来的不是闹钟，而是让而是讨厌的“沙沙沙”的声音——这是清洁工，在扫地的声音。妈妈总是嫌这些声音太吵闹。后来才发现清洁工人是那么伟大。

再一次，我和朋友在家里玩，当我们在阳光下看见清洁工人在扫地，突然有一辆白色的面包车，垃圾车里，旁边直冲去，正中垃圾车的扶手。，垃圾车翻了，死垃圾散落一地。清洁工人没有任何反应，他好像对这种状况很正常，又重新把垃圾场收拾了一次。

清洁工人们，你们默默无闻的为大家做贡献，这种品质值得我们学习。

一条可爱的狗。它的名字是"点点" 。因为有很多黑的圆圈在它的皮肤上。"点点" 是非常友好的。许多孩子喜欢和它玩。他的喜爱食物是肉骨头。 他的喜爱玩具是玩偶。" 点点" 喜欢非常跑。它跑得非常快速并且它有一个女朋友。它的名字"娜娜" 。它的皮肤也有很多黑圈子。我非常喜欢我的宠物。这是一只好宠物!!

My pet is a lovely dog.Its name is "dian dian".because there are a lot of black circle on its skin.the "dian dian" is very friendly.Many childen like play with him.His favourite food is meat bones. His favourite toy is a doll. dian dian likes to run very much.It can run very fast and it has a girl friend.its name "na na".there are a lot of black circle on its skin,too.I like my pet very much.It is a good pet!

你看过《成龙历险记》吗？我喜欢里面的小玉。因为她很厉害！

小玉头圆圆的，理了一个学生头，身子瘦瘦的，手短短的，腿长长的，脚扁扁的，声音很响亮。

有一次，成龙和老爹，还有特鲁去找水葫芦。成龙叫小玉不要去了，可是小玉非要去，成龙被小玉纠缠得受不了就只好让她去了。到了之后，成龙他们被一个人当成比赛者。比赛时，小玉一跳就过去了。可是特鲁失败了，他们没有得到水葫芦。下一关，他们轻松得过了关，对方就给了成龙他们水葫芦。

我喜欢小玉。

生活中，有许多人都喜欢帮助别人，我叔叔就是一个好榜样。

一次，在狂风加大雨的时候，我叔叔来接我，车开得很慢。

突然，来了个急刹车，还好我坐得稳，否则，一定会被甩下车。我向前望去，原来是一辆大卡车挡住了去路。叔叔一看便知到大卡车坏了。于是，我叔叔说：“我以前学过一些修车技术，我来帮你吧！”那位司机听了，万分欣喜，“那太谢谢您了！”“庭栋，稍等一下，马上就好。”我刚想说什么，但是，看着叔叔七手八脚的忙着，便不忍心说出来了。

这时，夜幕渐渐降临，风更狂了，雨更大了，风雨交加着，我在一旁埋怨着叔叔，也在一旁看着叔叔，看着那一滴滴的汗珠从头上滴下来。

一会儿，叔叔和司机从车下钻了出来，那位司机紧紧的握住叔叔的手，“真是太谢谢您了！”说完便迅速的从口袋中拿出100元人民币，往叔叔的裤袋里塞。叔叔见此情景，连忙推辞，笑着说没什么，这是我应该做的。出门在外，谁没有遇到困难的时候？这钱我不能收！司机见叔叔死活不肯收，便再一次道谢，准备开车了。

大卡车开动了。叔叔走到我面前说：“冻坏了吧！我们快回家吧！”我看着满身都是泥水的叔叔，回想着刚才的一幕幕，顿时对叔叔肃然起敬，就得他是那么高大。想起我对叔叔的埋怨，觉得自己是那么渺小。

叔叔笑着骑上了自行车，送我去回家的路上，路上，我暗暗下定决心，一定要做像叔叔那样做人。做一个踏踏实实、乐于助人的人！

Do you know which building is the greatest in China? I think it is the Great Wall.It was built about 2000 years ago. It is about 6000 kilometers long. The width of the Great Wall is between 4 and 5 meters. The height of it is between 6 and 7 meters.

你知道中国最伟大的建筑是什么吗？ 我认为是长城，建于2000多年前， 有6000多米长。长6-7米4-5宽。

You may ask how the people were able to build the Great Wall. Yes, there were no machines helping them to build easily. They used their hands, arms, legs and feet. Although it is not easy to build the Great Wall, the people in history have already finished it. That’s amazing, isn’t it?

你可能会问人们是怎么建造长城的呢。是的没有机器来帮助古人建造，他们用手，胳膊， 腿以及脚来建造。尽管建长城不容易，但是历史上的人已经完成了。 这很神奇不是吗

Now the Great Wall is a famous building. Many tourists from China or other countries are attracted to visit it. It has been a place of interest.

现在长城是一座注明的建筑物，许多来自中国和其他国家的游客被吸引来参观它。 它已经成为名胜古迹。

The Great Wall is the sign of China. It is the pride of all the Chinese.

长城是中国的标志， 是中国人的骄傲

Suddenly, the summer vacation is coming. Im happy to "one jump three feet high" but I gradually found that summer vacation is boring.

I wanted to finish in ten days, but, I have been doing for 24 days. The 30 day finally finished, father has bought me, only on Saturday and Sunday can rest a while. I dont like a holiday, but, as long as I still quite like no homework.

More like summer and winter vacation, homework, tired bad. I hope can have a holiday, and can not write my homework, how comfortable, how carefree! If the day sentient days also old, if a man love die young.

After school, I can not wait and Chen Xiaobin go to his house to see the dog, a see the dog, my heart was thinking: this little dog really cute, really want to touch it. Its body is about 20 cm long, the head and tail color is black and dark, the body is milky white. Round head, chubby body, round and big eyes sparkling, really like two glass balls. The ears of the triangle are sometimes bowed and sometimes raised.

Xiaobins mother put the index finger into his mouth, the puppy thought it had milk to drink, and relish the "milk" with relish, and in a moment it spit it out because it feels strange. It saw outsiders, like a shy little girl, at the door to play around. Aunt picked up the puppy, I could not help but touched it, feeling it like a cotton quilt as soft, but also like my home that most lovely plush dog.

It is really a loving puppy it!

Father looks really handsome: a meter of eight height, the kingdom of white face, eyes, nose straight, is a bit, I dont like his lips, chin, cheeks and always full of hard ChaCha beard, cover your mouth. Because he work busy, always have no time to shave. Mother always scolded him only know work, do not pay attention to life section, dad, "hey hey smile, continue to do his thing.

One day, my father was watching the wool spinning learn home attentively, from time to time, pen drawing something on the paper. Mother walked softly, a "EHuPuShi" have taken away the book and a pen in the past. Dad busy turned face reckon with my mother said: "have words to say, dont start work." Mother take the mirror and the razor to his presence, said angrily: "beard shaved, or dont want to take a book and a pen!" Dad, helpless and have to obediently took the razor, with cavity as the ground to say: "lady, I can do is." Who knows Hu Zicai shaved half, just someone to shout: "the factory director zhou, engineering department someone looking for you." Go daddy left the razor, mother call also called dont live, gas straight stamp...

Come back soon, my dad with a big smile. When he comes in at the door loudly rang rang: "success! Success! My invention patents!" Said, and picked up me, on my face and kissed a bite. "Oh!" I cant help but cry, dad Hu Zizhen bristly. Mother heard came and intentionally sank the face: "look of Yin and Yang hu, dont you..." Father before my mother say that finish, make a grimace, then continue to clean up his half a piece of black baby beard, return in mouth singing "from the mouth in the grass, a few days a withered flourish, razor, born again when the spring breeze blows." He put the bai juyis "farewell to assign GuYuan grass" tampering with this poem. I couldnt help laugh out "straight" 1...

Before long, however, dads lips and cheeks and gives birth to a dark beard, I know, dads work busy again...

爸爸长得真帅：一米八的个子，白净的国字脸，眼睛明亮，鼻梁挺直，就是有点我不喜欢，他的唇上、颔下腮边总是密密麻麻地长满了硬茬茬的胡子，把嘴也掩盖了。因为他工作忙，老是没时间刮脸。妈妈总是数落他只知道工作，不注意生活小节，爸爸则“嘿嘿一笑，继续忙他的事。

有一天，爸爸正在家聚精会神地看《毛纺学》，不时地用笔在纸上画着什么。妈妈轻手轻脚地走过去，一个“饿虎扑食”把书和钢笔夺了过去。爸爸忙扭过脸跟妈妈赔笑说：“有话好说，不要动手嘛。”妈妈把镜子和剃刀拿到他面前，气冲冲地说：“把胡子刮了，不然别想拿书和笔!”爸爸无可奈何，只好顺从地接过剃刀，拿腔作调地说：“夫人息怒，我遵命就是。”谁知胡子才刮了一半，就有人来喊：“周厂长，技术科有人找您。”爸爸便丢下剃刀就走，妈妈叫也叫不住，气得直跺脚……

不久，爸爸满脸笑容地回来了。他一进门就大声嚷嚷：“成功了!成功了!我的发明获专利了!”说着，抱起我，就在我脸上使劲亲了一口。“哎呀!”我不由大叫一声，爸爸的胡子真扎人。妈妈闻声走过来，故意把脸一沉：“瞧你的‘阴阳胡’，还不……”爸爸没等妈妈说完，做个鬼脸，便继续清除他那半片黑乎乎的宝贝胡子去了，嘴里还哼着“离里嘴上‘草’，几天一枯荣，剃刀刮不尽，春风吹又生。”他把白居易的《赋得古原草送别》这首诗篡改了。我不由得“扑哧”一声笑了出来……

可是，过了不久，爸爸的唇上、腮边又生出了黑漆漆的胡子，我知道，爸爸的工作又忙起来了……

I have a lovely puppy. It is a squirrel dog, it is a woman. Its name is "Chi Chi", she has been 3 months, and it is in the annual Christmas Eve birthday.

Zhizhis body is about 27 centimeters long. Its hair is gray and long, plush, feels like a mass of cotton. Its head and the ball is almost the size of a pair of black and watery eyes like two glass balls. Tail is thick and short.

Chi Chi can like me. Morning, I went to school, the dog always bowed his head, as if unwilling to let me go like. I went to it and said to it: "I want to go to school, and then play with you at noon!" After school, my first thing is to feed Chi Chi, every time I was holding the food to stay in it The head, she will use two legs to the ground, the body upright, the food swallowed, finished. I said, "Handshake." It put the little claws on my hand and kissed me earnestly. When I sleep, I sometimes use my hot tongue to lick me up.

I like puppy Chi Chi.

Yesterday, after a long meeting in the class, all the students had been told about the safe issues, then the summer vacation finally came. All of us felt so happy and liked a free bird, rushing to home quickly. I had been looking forward to this holiday for such a long time, I really needed to take some rest after studying for a semester. I have made some plans for my summer vacation. First, I wanted to spend some time to stay with my grandparents. I miss them all the time and they always tell me to visit them when I have the time. My grandma will cook the delicious food for me. Second, I want to read some books I like, such as the fiction books. I don’t have much time to read fiction books because I have to focus on my study. Summer vacation provides the time to adjust myself.

昨天,在班上开了长时间的会议后,所有的学生被告知关于安全问题,然后暑假终于到了。我们都感到很快乐,就像自由的鸟儿,飞奔回家。我一直在期待这个长时间的假期,我真的需要休息了，在学习了一个学期后。我已经为我的暑假做了一些计划。首先,我想花一些时间陪我的祖父母。我想念他们,他们总是告诉我,我有时间的时候就去探望他们。我奶奶会做美味的食物给我。其次,我想读一些我喜欢的书籍,比如小说书。我没有太多时间去阅读小说书,因为我必须专注于我的学习。暑假提给我供了时间来调整自己。

Was a cold winter day, a cold wind blowing the bare branches on the side of the road. Blow to the with the wind, with creepy, and tremble.

From cram school I just from school, mother brought home a box of eggs when I go home. Mother with the help of colleagues, will this box heavy eggs carried to the electric vehicle.

Windy that day, people walking on the road is very difficult, dont say is driving electric cars, whats more, the car was carrying two eggs and a box. When the car to a fork in the road, the car of the box of eggs yield to the test of the wind, the eggs roll down, luckily isnt bad.

My mother and I hurried out of the car to pick up the eggs, but eggs pick up one, get one, I thought to myself: when will going to pick it up! What if pick it out, will be a case of heavy eggs home?

Right against the face come a big truck suddenly, I shouted anxiously: "what can I do, bus, eggs also dont want to!"

To my surprise trucks "cheep -" to a screeching halt. Down, an aunt said: "elder sister, so late how to still take so many eggs?" Say that finish, three of them began to pick up the eggs.

Everyone firewood high flame, too soon, just pick it up. My mother and I are very grateful to the aunt, aunt and help my mother the eggs onto the vehicle. Aunt looked at the far of figure, I think that as long as everyone sacrificed a little love, the world will be how good.

是一个寒冷的冬季里的一天，凛冽的寒风吹着路边那光秃秃的树枝。大风呼呼地叫着，吹到身上让人毛骨悚然，浑身直发颤。

我从补习班刚刚放学，妈妈接我回家时带回来一箱鸡蛋。妈妈在同事的协助下，才将这箱沉重的鸡蛋抬到电动车上。

那天风很大，人们在路上行走都很困难，别说是驾驶电动车了，更何况车上还载着两个人和一箱鸡蛋。当车行到岔路口时，车上的那箱鸡蛋经不住大风的考验，鸡蛋都滚了下来，幸亏还没坏。

我和妈妈赶忙下车捡鸡蛋，可鸡蛋捡一个，滚一个，我心里想：要到什么时候才能捡完啊!就算捡完了，又怎样将一箱沉重的鸡蛋运回家呢?

忽然迎面来了一辆大卡车，我焦急地喊起来：“怎么办，车来了，蛋也别想要了!”

令我大吃一惊的是大卡车“吱——”的一声来了个急刹车。下来一位阿姨，说：“ 大姐，这么晚怎么还带这么多鸡蛋呀?”说完，三个人就开始捡起鸡蛋来。

众人拾柴火焰高，过不一会，就捡完了。我和妈妈都很感激那位阿姨，阿姨又帮妈妈把鸡蛋抬上电动车。望着阿姨远去的背影，我觉得只要人人献出一点爱，世界将会多么美好。

Winter is a clean little girl, she was a silver suitcase came to the earths mothers arms.

Winter carrying a "little flower basket" which is filled with beautiful snow, gently covered the snow covered the earth. A piece of white snowflakes like a elf dancing beautiful dance, like feathers, and like butterflies, fluttering sprinkled in the earths mothers arms. Look, has long been to the trees put on a white clothes, to the earth covered with a thick quilt ... ... afar to a fairy tale like a white world.

The children can not wait to reach out of the small hand to catch the crystal translucent snow, who knows a small snow like a naughty doll in the twinkling of an eye disappeared without a trace, turned into a stain on the clothes wet marks.

Winter also brought us endless fun. Campus get out of class we have a small footprints in the cotton-like snow, and would like to draw a beautiful picture, everyone in this flying snowflakes together to play with snow. And some in the snowball fights, that little snowball flying in the air like a bullet as quickly flew to each other, hit a lot of students clothes. And some in the snowman, they first piled up two big snowballs to do the snowmans body, give the snowman fitted with eyes, mouth ... ... snowman to do a good blow! A gust of wind blowing, the snowman seems to be waving with us smile. Campus suddenly full of laughter, to the cold winter brought a warm color.

This is the beautiful picture drawn in winter, the gift given to us in winter, ah! I love this beautiful winter, more like the winter wizard-like snow.

每当我站在阳台上，看着小区二期的那一栋栋楼房时，我的脑海里便想起了在二期工地干活的一位工人——张叔叔。

张叔叔大概三十多岁，生活十分艰苦，是从农村来到柳州找工作时被聘到我们小区二期的工地里干活的。你瞧！他的那一头浓密乌黑的头发显得多精神呀！方方正正的脸上有粗而弯的眉毛和一双炯炯有神的眼睛。眼睛下面是一个不是很挺起的鼻子，还有那一张能说会道的嘴巴。每天，张叔叔都会穿着一身非常朴素的衣服，干干净净的。见到谁都是先给一个咧嘴的微笑，让人觉得他十分可亲。而在工作上，张叔叔也是认真负责的。他从来不抱怨工地里吃的怎样、穿的怎样、住的怎样，只是默默无闻的自己的工作岗位上辛勤的耕耘着。天天都数他开工最早、收工最晚，可在发工钱是他却从不计较多少。张叔叔这种对待工作认真负责的态度，使我十分敬佩、喜欢他。

记得有一次，妈妈到二期工地上找到张叔叔，请他为我们家再二期买的车库埋水管。张叔叔想也没想就一口答应了，马上提着工具箱向我家的车库走去。可是此时天色已晚，妈妈想让张叔叔明天再来埋水管。但张叔叔说什么也不肯，硬是要现在动工，说是怕明天耽误我们时间。妈妈无可奈何了，只好提着充饱电的充电灯，和张叔叔一起来到我家的车库。在昏暗的充电灯下，张叔叔开始动工埋水管了。

他拿着笨重的锄刀，一下一下的砸着坚硬的水泥地，试图开凿出一个坑。随着时间的流逝，水泥地渐渐砸出了一个坑。但张叔叔却已经精疲力竭了。他头上渗出了细细的汗珠，干了一天活的双手已磨出了鲜血，可他全然不顾，仍然卖力的捶砸着。终于，那个坑足够埋下水管了，张叔叔松了一口气。然后，他拿出水管埋在地下，并娴熟的把另一根管子和水管接起来。很快，一大堆工序就全部完成了。张叔叔打开水龙头示范给妈妈看后，便整理好工具箱要走了。妈妈让张叔叔去我们家吃饭，可张叔叔婉转的拒绝了，头也不回的背着工具箱走了。我望着张叔叔渐渐远去的背影，心中油然升起了一种敬佩之情，并愈加喜欢张叔叔了。最近，张叔叔还被评为工地了“工作模范”了！

现在，张叔叔在我们小区里已经算是个小有名气“名人”了。人们只要一提起张叔叔，准会啧啧赞叹，说他是个认真工作、乐于助人的好工人！

Nowadays,the whales is in danger.Because many countries kill them for different use,they are dying out.To protect our earth and ocean,especially the diversity of creatures.we must realize that we should take effective measures to protect them.If the whales died out,it would have an important influence on other animals in the sea.Also,the environment will be changed.I sincerely hope that we can make our effort to save them!

如今,鲸鱼是处于危险之中。因为许多国家杀死他们不同的使用,它们灭绝。为了保护我们的地球和海洋,特别是生物的多样性。我们必须意识到我们应该采取有效措施去保护他们。如果鲸鱼灭绝了,它会对其他动物产生重要的影响。此外,环境将被改变。我真诚地希望我们可以使我们的努力拯救他们!

Autumn is a bumper season. In the autumn of a sunny, miles clear weekends, father, my mother took me and small partners to go to the orchard pick fruit.

It s near the orchard. We look from the car to the orchard: wow! Orchard densely planted a lot of fruit trees! There are apple trees, pear trees, orange trees ... ... hundreds of trees fruit trees together, just like the tree of the sea! Branches fruitful, full of sweet fruit, red apple, yellow pear pear, orange orange ... ... is really dazzling!

Finally reached the orchard. We suddenly found that the orchard also planted some chrysanthemums. These chrysanthemums are red, blue, yellow, white ... ... they are different colors, posture is also different: chrysanthemum some of the Hanbaoyufang, and some opened half, and some have blooming smile ... ... mix, very beautiful The

For a while, we started picking. We leave the basket, from the tree off one another fruit. A basket, two baskets ... ... fruit filled with a basket and a basket, the orchard is full of laughter.

I see some tourists regardless of the fruit ripe cooked into the basket, and then throw the ripe fruit again. Just listen to a farmer said: "fruit from the flowering to the results to go through how long years! You so it lost it, do not feel very waste?" I listened to him, thought: Yes, fruit ripe to experience How much wind and rain, so lost it is really wasted, it is life!

This time to the orchard, I not only appreciate the beauty of autumn, but also feel the precious life!

Since I was small, I have heard about the Great Wall, it is very long, a lot of people come to Beijingto watch it. In China, there is an old saying“One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero”. As it is so famous, I want to the site when I have a chance. I see many pictures about the Great Wall on the books, I also watch it through TV.

Every time I see it, I feel so eager to reach there. My father traveled there once, he took many pictures, this is the first time I feel so close to the site. I must work hard, so I can have money to go to there.

尊敬的各位评委，老师们：

大家好！我是来自河北省保定市高阳县龙化中学的吴永会老师。今天我说课的内容九年级下学期人物描写的作文复习。九年级学生对于写人、记事的文章已有了一定的功底。但是，在批改作文的过程中，我发现不少学生人物描写的能力并没有提高，刻画的人物形象干瘪僵硬，文章主题空洞，缺乏生活气息。

《基础教育课程改革纲要》指出“大力推进信息技术在教学过程中的普遍应用，促进信息技术与学科课程的整合，逐步实现教学内容的呈现方式，学生的学习方式，教师的教学方式和师生互动方式的变革”，这预示着我国包括语文在内的课程与教学将越来越多的渗透和发展信息技术。因此，我尝试在网络环境中进行一次人物描写作文复习的教学，有效地整合网络资源，利用主题网页，让学生在网页上浏览、学习，在网络中阅读一些相关例文，尝试写作，提高写作水平。

下面我从（出示幻灯片）教学目标、教学过程、教学反思三个方面进行说课。

一、教学目标：（出示幻灯片）

知识与技能：巩固掌握人物描写的方法。

过程与方法：通过群论坛交流、评改描写片段。

情感、态度与价值观：引导学生用心观察生活、思考生活。

教学重点：通过作文评改，引导学生掌握人物描写的方法。

教学难点：运用人物描写方法，描写生活中的人物。

二、教学过程

教学过程分为六个环节，分别是：

(一) 单刀直入，引出描写

（二） 链接百度，复习描写

（三） 进入论坛，点评描写

(四) 网上交流，评改描写

（五） 大显身手，刻画人物

（六） 合作互动，评选佳作

这几个环节，依据学生对人物描写知识的理解、巩固、掌握、运用、提高的认知规律，逐层深入，高效达成教学目标。

（一）单刀直入，引出描写

导入：在日常生活中，我们随时随地都接触着形形色色的人——无私奉献，努力工作的老师，活泼开朗、天真纯洁的邻家小妹，任劳任怨、不求回报的父母，尖酸刻薄、得理不饶人的小商小贩……人们在不同场景中的表现和举动形成了不同的性格，无论我们是主角还是旁观者，只要用心观察，细心体会，就能够用文字描写出这些生动的人物。今天，让我们再一次走进人物描写的学习中。

设计意图：简单明了的导入，吸引学生的注意力，使他们全神贯注、精神振奋。明确学习任务后，学生有的放矢，积极主动地去完成任务。这样，会取得更理想的学习效果。

（二）链接百度，复习描写

链接百度，自主学习“百度”中有关人物描写的相关知识，对“百度”中的描写片段进行赏析。

设计意图：学生通过自主学习，加深了对人物描写的理解，独立赏析，引导学生去探究新知，主动获得方法，为下一环节点评作文打下基础。

（三）进入论坛，点评描写

打开qq群论坛，阅读三篇同题同材料作文《开学第一天》，阅读完毕，以回帖的方式自由点评。

设计意图：这种自由回帖的学习方式，充分体现了学生的主体地位，充分发挥了学生的主动性、积极性、创造性，使传统的课堂教学结构发生根本性的改变。真正把作文点评的主动权还给学生，使每个学生都积极参与、相互评议、自主修改，提高了学生的语文素养和信息加工、处理能力，可以说新型的网络教学环境，把学生的创造精神与实践能力的培养落到实处。（点击回帖，学生的回帖印证了我的设计意图。）这个环节让学生进一步巩固了人物描写的方法，为评改描写做好准备。

(四) 网上交流，评改描写

阅读作文《偷梁换叉》，通过小组合作学习，进行作文评改，并回复其他小组的评改意见和建议。

设计意图：通过小组合作学习，师生互动交流，可以淡化教师“领导者”的“主导”地位，使学生的主体性和创造性在小组内得以最大程度地发挥，为实现真正意义上的交流互动奠定基础。学生提出问题的机会增加了，有利于全体学生问题意识的增强。网上交流合作，促进了“自主、合作、探究”学习方式的形成。根据同学们的评改，习作者对原文进行了修改，得到老师、同学的好评。此环节让学生进一步掌握了人物描写的方法。基于以上四个环节的铺垫，学生写作水到渠成。

（五）大显身手，刻画人物

教师布置任务：

根据自己的生活经验，写一篇叙事作文，在叙述事件的过程中完成人物描写，将习作上传至群论坛。

设计意图：在学生写作之前,运用多媒体再现情境，播放精彩的生活瞬间，激发学生的创作灵感，让学生多角度、多层次地体会和品味人物，拓宽思维的广度、增强思维的深度，再引导学生由学校生活、家庭生活联想到社会生活中的人物，通过细心观察，用心体会，学生的写作热情随之点燃。这些作文，为评选优秀作品提供了素材。

（六）合作互动，评选佳作

小组合作选出优秀作品。

三、设计意图

师生对作文进行网上评选，通过交流、探讨达成共识，创立民主、平等、和谐的课堂氛围，让学生真正成为课堂的主人，积极参与到作文评选的过程中来。

通过讨论，全班评选出了5篇优秀作文，并把这5篇作文收录到班级的《悦写越快乐》作文小册中。这是我班的作文小册子，每次作文活动我们都把评选的优秀作文收录进来，有些文章发表到博客中。

通过学习，学生巩固了人物描写的方法，并且学会了描写人物。上课时间有限，网上的交流是无限的，课后学生可以继续到网上交流，把自己对人物描写的收获、困惑和感想发表在论坛上。老师也会在网上与大家进一步交流人物描写的方法技巧。

四、教学反思

信息技术以其图像清晰、动态感强、信息量大的优势，激发了学生写作的积极性、主动性。运用信息技术突破时空的限制，把现实生活中的某些情、景、事、物搬进课堂，为学生提供了宽松、愉悦的无纸化作文环境，使学生自主修改作文，方便、快捷。群论坛扩展了学生作文交流的空间，教师既能与学生共同对习作进行评改，又能把作文评改的主动权还给学生，使每个学生都参与评议修改。学生在网络交流中互相欣赏、互相批改，提高了评改水平，写作水平也随之提高。

由于网络信息资源与生俱来的不规则性和复杂性，第二个自主学习的环节有个别学生被动地在泛滥无效的信息海洋中消磨时光，导致他们参与课堂不积极。今后，我会在激发学生的学习兴趣，改变学生漫无目的的学习习惯。同时，网络的负面影响，我们也不能忽视，教师要引导学生网络文明上网，组织好学生的网络活动。

[在网络环境中的人物描写作文教学

猜猜他是谁

他给我留下的第一印象就很深刻：脸上一片丘陵，像是红土堆就的一般。在这白皙的脸上呈现出一层火红的丘陵，不能说不显眼。让我记住他的最大特点却不是这地形，而是黑框眼镜下面的鼻子。这个大鼻子似乎有欧洲人的血统，或是阿拉伯人的基因，总之更大一些。生物课上说，这是为了减少外界空气对肺的刺激。他的家乡也许就是在寒冷的地方。

鼻子下面的嘴也很有特点。我和他说起一些荒谬的想象时，总能听到“好家伙！”“唉，好，唉呀！”之类的话。有时我觉得他很像相声的陪衬。他给我讲什么时，经常性地把骨节粗大的手伸到前方抖动，像是形容什么。他说小学同学给他起了个外号，叫“脑浆”，

我问他这是哪来的，他说，人们叫他老江，慢慢就叫成脑浆了。他说他很喜欢。

说到脑浆，他的脑浆可以说是理科思维，外加百科知识存储。他在脑浆里存下了《可怕的科学》两大系列，还把他们拿到了书柜里。至今，图书角还有二十几本呢。

Mr Qin is our history teacher. He has a wonderful name Qin Han. He is over fifty now, and he is in good health. He likes history. He is not only interested in Chinese history, but also the history of the world. He likes reading, and goes to the book shop every Saturday. He often tells us something interesting in the history, such as the Great Wall, the World War II and so on. We are all happy to have his classes. Mr Qin wrote a thick book on history and it was published last year. We all admire him!

秦先生是我们的历史老师，他有一个好听的名字秦汉。他已经年过半百，可是身体健康。他喜欢历史。他不仅对中国历史感兴趣，对世界历史也感兴趣。他喜欢读书，每星期六都去书店。他经常给我们讲一些历史上有趣的事，如万里长城，第二次世界大战等等。我们都喜欢上他的课。秦先生写了一本有关历史的厚厚的书，去年出版了。我们都很敬佩他!