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初三优秀英语范文【汇总20篇】

名利,是大家都在向往的一种权利,他是某些身份的象征,但同时他也不是很容易得到的。接下来小编搜集了初三优秀英语范文,欢迎查看,希望帮助到大家。

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初三英语作文:建议信ALetterofSuggestion

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Dear editor,

亲爱的编辑:

I have read many articles on the school magazine. I find that almost all the essays on the school magazine are about the daily trifles in the campus. It is good for us to know the whole things in the campus. But I think if there are some articls about current affairs andlearning methods must be better. Current affairs can open students’ eyes to know more about the world. Sharing learning methods can help some students find the best way for themselves to study.I hope you will find these proposals useful and put into effect as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Lei

我看过校刊上的很多文章。我发现几乎校刊上所有的文章都是关于校园里的一些日常琐事。这对于我们了解整个校园的情况是很好的。但我想如果有一些关于时事和学习方法的文章一定会更好。时事可以开阔学生们的视野,了解世界。共享学习方法可以帮助一些学生找到最适合自己的学习方法。我希望你会觉得这些建议是有用的,并尽落实。

李磊

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篇1:初三年级英语作文:徒步旅行

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I like traveling on foot With my brother in holidays.

At the very beginning, I felt very tired. I got out of breath so easily.Then my brother started to tell me some interesting stories.We walked and walked while he didnt stop telling stories. We walked a long way without knowing.

Then my brother asked me, "Are you still feeling tired?" The feelings of tiredness were already out of my mind.

我喜欢在假期跟哥哥一起徒步旅行。刚开始的时候,我还真有点吃不消,没走多远就累得上气不接下气。

于是哥哥就给我讲动听的故事。他一边讲我们一边走,不知不觉走了很远。哥哥问我:“你还累吗?”呵呵,我早把“累”这回事忘到九霄云外去了。

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篇2:初三英语作文:IntroductiontoHillaryClinton

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Hillary Clinton comes from America. She was bon on October 26th ,1947 in Chicago. She is very beautiful , she has blonde hair and blue eyes. Hillary Clinton studied law at Yale Law School from 1969 to 1973 . She worked very hard and got good grades. Then she worked as a lawyer , but now she works for the American government . Some people think that she is wise and helpul.

Hillary Clinton’s husband is Bill Clinton . She has a daughter called Chelsea Clinton . They love Hillary Clinton very much .

[初三英语作文Introduction to Hillary Clinton

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篇3:Mymother初三英语作文

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My mother is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of my daily life. For example, every morning, she wakes me up and cooks breakfast for me. When I’m in trouble, She always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers up. I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was upset. My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With her help, I become a top student in my class. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. I believe she will be proud of me in the near future

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篇4:《Happyday》初三圣诞节英语作文_初三年级英语作文1700字

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Christmas is one of the most important celebrations of the year for the western countries. it falls on the twenty- fifth of december and has the same importance as chinese new year to people with english backgrounds. the celebration is for the birth of jesus christ, who is the son of god in christianity. now days christmas is no longer only celebrated by the christians, but by most people from all over the world.

On the twenty- fourth of december everyone gets excited for it’s the day before christmas which is called christmas eve. the children are usually sent to bed early and are warned that “santa claus will only come and give you a present if you be good.” the younger kids actually believe that santa will come down the chimney on the sleigh that’s pulled by his reindeers. food like short bread and beer are prepared for santa when he comes, however most times parents just eat them. some children put socks and sacks up for the holding of the presents (that their parents put in).

Rise and shine on christmas morning! the children are always the first ones to wake up, some even do at four. present wrappers everywhere! they look into their presents with a big smile on their face and oh dear….i hope no one’s disappointed. i feel sorry for anyone that got pink underwear. children play while dinner is prepared by the adults. the christmas dinner are usually eaten together by relatives. the tradition of christmas pudding and roosters are usually eaten with deserts afterwards. the rest of the day is usually games and fun before the good days all come to an end.

I wish everyone a merry christmas and a happy new year!

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篇5:初三要毕业英语

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In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Miss, leave a long lament, I hope that the thoughts like the sky, forever bright......

At dusk there is a helpless figure, she is waiting for what. Who is that? Thats me, my friend. Will you come back?

In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Missing, leaving a long lament, I hope that the air color, forever bright.

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篇6:初三英语作文:ProblemsinMyLife

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In the life, everybody has a lot of problem. For example, I am a wonderful student. I can usually get a high mark. I study very well. But sometimes I reckless of the examination, so, I cant do it very well. After the exam, I blow it. Most of my teachers usually apprehend me, but my mother sometimes makes little of me. She usually says that, Honey, why you blew the exam, dont forget, you are an excellent student, you must study hard, and you must get the high mark next exam.

When my mother says that, I always feel very chagrin. I am not oracle, why I cant make mistakes. But my father apprehends me. He thinks I am a children, so I can make a little mistake. I always study hard after I blew the exam, because my father cheers on me. I study hard for me, for him, of course, I study hard for my mother too.

When we barge up against, dont trepidation, dont be scared, and tell the tribulation to our kiths, they can help you.

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篇7:初三英语作文:Myfamily

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I have a small but warm family. There are only four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. We live in a city of Guizhou.

My father isn’t very tall. He has short straight black hair. And he always wears a pair of glasses. I think he is clever and kind. He likes watching TV and playing chess with me.

My mother is kind of short. But she is funny. She often tell jokes. Also she is sporty. She likes tennis,ping-pong and volleyball. She is good at cooking. She can cook kinds of different food. And we like eating them.

My sister is 6 years older than me. Now she is a university student. She can speak Chinese,English and a little Japanese. She usually teaches me English when we have free time. She also likes music. She is good at singing songs.

I wear a pair of glasses, too. My favorite subject is math and English. I think they’re interesting and easy for me.

I’m funny, too. I often make my parents and sister smile.

Everyone looks happy everyday in my family. And I love my family.

[关于初三英语优秀作文:My family

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篇8:初三英语作文

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Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

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篇9:关于初三英语作文:Reading

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readingis my hobby. While reading, I can get a lot of happiness. When I m free, I often read some famous books. Books are my best friends that always keep me a good company. They often give me powers. Through reading, I can enlarge my eyes as well as widen my heart. Through reading, I become more and more knowledgeable.

读书是我的爱好。读书时,我可以得到很多的快乐。当我有空时,我经常读一些名著。书是我最好的朋友,它们总是好好陪着我。他们给了我力量。通过阅读,我开阔了视野也让我的心变宽了。通过阅读,我变得越来越知识渊博。

My favorite books are Readers and VOA. Readers cover the knowledge of culture, literature, and history, so I can benefit a lot by reading it. VOA can let me know the foreign countries better. Thanks to VOA, my oral English is improving day by day.

我最喜欢的书是读者和美国之音。读者覆盖了文化,文学,历史知识,所以我可以通过阅读受益匪浅。美国之音,可以让我更好的了解国外。由于美国之音,我的英语口语日益提高了。

This is my good habit that I will keep it forever.

这是我会一生都保持的好习惯。

[关于初三英语作文:Reading

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篇10:初三英语作文带翻译:我的朋友

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A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.

Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.

Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.

Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.

一个人的一生,有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友,将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了,和我俩个好友的交往也会少了,所以想写写她们。

黄婷慧:一晃俩年过去了,我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初,你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清,你时常问我,我也耐心的告诉你,就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过,一起哭过,吵过架生过气,还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴,我永远也不回忘记。

易媱:在我的印象中你的脾气很好,也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉,我就会跑过去捏你的脸,你总是温柔的一笑,这笑容中包括的有友谊。

一路上都有朋友的陪伴,没有朋友就没有今天的我,真的感谢朋友分支持,也许我们会分开,但是缘分。

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篇11:妈妈花园初三英语作文150字

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My mother is very good at raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the year round. Some of our plants were very small in the beginning,but now they are large and very beautiful. On top of our roof there is a big glass-enclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house to see the beautiful world my mother has made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother taking care of her plants like little children. As her real children grow older and more independent,my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is a very good way to spend one’s free time.

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篇12:2024初三英语作文:祝贺信CongratulationLetter

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Dear Sandy,

亲爱的桑迪,

I offer my warmest congratulations to you for receiving the first prize of The Olympic English competition for the middle school students. I know that you are always good at English. You often win the praise of our English teacher and always in the first place of our class. So I’m surprise at all that you become champion for this competition. However, in my mind, this match is very difficult. So I becomemore and more admire you. Sincere congratulation to you again.

我表示热烈的祝贺你接收的获得了中学生奥林匹克英语竞赛一等奖。我知道你的英语一直都很好。你经常赢得我们的英语老师的表扬而且在班里总是第一。所以我一点都不惊讶在这个竞赛中你会成为冠军。然而,在我看来,这竞赛是很困难的。所以我越来越佩服你了。真诚的祝贺你。

Best wishes,

Mandy

曼迪

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篇13:初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼英语作文

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假如你叫李华,你校初三年级同学正在开展一场讨论,主题是“初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”。请根据下面所提供的信息,用英语总结出讨论情况。

提示:

70%的学生

30%的学生

应该每天进行体育锻炼,但不要时间过长

锻炼浪费时间、使人疲劳

锻炼能增强体质,保持健康

锻炼以后很兴奋,较长时间不能投入学习

锻炼能使大脑休息,使学习效果更好

锻炼中可能会受伤

要求:语句通顺,句意连贯;词数为80词左右;发言稿的开头已写好,但不计入总词数。

Dear classmates:

I’m Li Hua After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy. Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.

On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time. They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.

[初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼英语作文

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篇14:初三关于微博的英语作文

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The girl is not my hobbies, even rarely play games online. However, Im weibo, there have been a fan for nearly two hundred people, but a lot of people envy.

On Saturday night, as usual, I open the weibo, find incredibly direct messages was written to me! May be I take "I to help you" the net, people often ask me for help, but I was the first received the letter! I am open on see, what is this:

"I was in primary school grade three, three years has always been the same deskmate, recently he always affect me, because I should to do?"

See this letter, I cant help himself a slight quiver, so ah! Deskmate always affect me, even though my grades didnt drop, but listening to lectures efficiency obviously is not good enough.

I with a sincere heart, with their own feelings, reply to her:

"First of all thank you for your trust me, so I can see from your letter you must be a clever child, your deskmate may learn bad, and naughty, but would you please more inclusive. Also, do you know why the teacher always let him be your deskmate? Thats because the teacher trust you, we cant live up to the expectations of the teacher, are you? You can help your neighbor, let he also experience the fun of learning, let him fall in love with learning, you said right?"

Looked at her and sending a smiling face, I seem to have also been infected, involuntarily smiled. Yes, ready to help others, this is the real "weibos got talent"!

I looked out the window, thinking: that star tonight, must be sunny tomorrow.

我这个女孩没什么爱好,即使上网也很少玩游戏。不过,我可是微博达人,现在已经有粉丝将近两百人了,可是有不少人羡慕呢。

星期六晚上,我照例打开微博,发现居然有人给我写私信!也许是我取“我来帮助你”的网名的缘故,经常有人找我帮忙,但我还是第一次收到信!我打开一看,大致内容是这样的:

“我上小学三年级了,三年以来一直都是同一个同桌,最近他老是影响我,我因该怎么办呢?”

看到这封信,我不禁微微一颤——自己也是这样的呀!同桌总是影响我,虽然我的学习成绩没有下降,但听课效率明显不够好。

我怀着一颗真挚的心,带着自己的感情,回复给了她:

“首先感谢你如此信任我,从你的信中我可以看出你一定是个乖巧的孩子,你的同桌可能学习不好,而且调皮,但请你多多包容。还有,你知道老师为什么一直让他做你的同桌吗?那是因为老师信任你,我们不能辜负老师的期望,是吗?你可以多帮助同桌,让他也体会到学习的乐趣,让他爱上学习,你说对吗?”

看着她发过来的笑脸,我仿佛也被传染了,不由自主地笑了。是啊,乐于助人,这才是真正的“微博达人”!

我望着窗外,心想:今夜星光灿烂,想必明天阳光明媚。

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篇15:我的梦想初三英语

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What will our world be like in 20 years.I can’t imagine. It must change a lot. If I meet myself who comes from the future, I will ask her whether my dream comes true or not.

My dream is to become an excellent interpreter. When I was in Grade 1, I began to study English. At that time, I was so excited for learning a new language. Because of English, I know that America is a beautiful and polite country. From then on, I hope I can speak English very well and have chance travel to America some day.

Nowadays, English is widely spoken throughout the world. What’s more, plenty of people have realized its importance. In order to make my dream come true, I try my best and work much harder. I start to watch America drama to practice my English. And I also read some English books now. I talk with others to practice my oral English as possible as I can. But the path to the success isn’t smooth. Sometimes I want to give up. But it’s my dream, I can’t give up easily. Shelley said” if winter comes, can spring be far behind”

On the other hand, with the development of China, more and more people are interested in our culture. Some enjoy Beijing Opera, some study Chinese Kongfu, some even learn to speak Chinese, etc. As a Chinese, of course I will help them to know more about Chinese culture. I want to be an envoy of cultural exchange between China and America. So if I am an interpreter, I will introduce China to the world. I believe if I work hard enough, my dream will come true.

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篇16:初三英语作文:HowtoLearnEnglishWell

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How to Learn English Well

English is one of the most important subjects in middle school.

Almost everyone knows that we should learn English well, but few of us know how to learn it well. Karl Marx has set a good example for us. He once said, "When one is learning a foreign language, he must use the foreign language." In this way, he could use several languages. A saying goes, "Practice makes perfect." When we learn English, we should read more, speak more, listen to English from time to time and practise writing every day. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Only in this way can we learn it well.

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篇17:2024初三寒假英语复习计划作文

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紧张了一学期的学生们迎来了寒假。但对初三的考生们来说,距中考还有短短的几个月,寒假是一个查漏补缺的好机会。在这短短的三周时间里,怎样制定复习计划,怎样在有限的时间里提高效率?

通过这学期的几次月考,发现了学生们普遍存在的一些问题,针对这些问题在寒假里进行针对性的训练是很有必要的。

1、单词掌握得不错,却不会在填单词的句子中运用,失分很多。

2、能记住重点句型,但不会灵活变换句式。

3、了解语法,却不会做时态填空。

4、能读懂短文,却做不对选项。

5、知道如何写作文,却在写作时漏洞百出。

6、选择填空马马虎虎。

7、听力很差,失分很高,尤其是分析题。

所以,针对存在的问题,为避免以后重现类似错误,为复习考试奠定一个好的基础,特做计划如下:

1、加强听力训练。希望同学们每天听一套跟中考要求一样的听力材料。就像中考听力一样要求自己。听完后核对答案。看看失分在什么地方。然后合上书再听一遍,锻炼自己的听力。坚持听上一假期,肯定有收获。

2、培养良好的写作习惯。每天背上一篇好的范文,写上一篇类似的作文,用上里边的好词好句,对于连词成句部分,不妨每天写上5个连词成句,摸索里边的规律,在做这个题的时候,先看看里边有什么词组,什么句型,这样写起来就不会摸不着头绪了,集中练上一段时间会有提高的。

3、养成阅读的好习惯。由于阅读在考试中的比重很大,所以要加大阅读的力度。每天都要练习两个阅读两个完形。做完后核对答案,对做错的题分析原因,对里边出现的生词或短语要记录下来,有必要的要背过,以此来扩大自己的词汇量。此外,要限定时间以此来提高阅读的速度和能力。

4、强化重点题型训练。针对单选题和完形填空题错误较多的情况,同学们最好在寒假里把老师上课讲的专项练习好好看一遍,把老师讲的重点例题弄懂弄明白。每个学校都有一本复习指导的书,把书吃透了,里边的题弄明白了就可以了。题要精不要太多。把自己常错的题写在一个纠错本上,经常看看巩固巩固。

5、增加词汇量。有的学生平常的词汇量很少,在做阅读完形的时候看不懂文章,短时间增大词汇量不太容易。但假期是个好机会,可以集中来记忆。可以把几本书拿来把上边重要的黑体字部分的四会单词分期分批地记忆,每单元的重要词组也要背过。再配合着题做一些词型变换的题,学会灵活运用。

6、做几套中考模拟题。要重视往年中考题,在假期里给自己规定时间来做几套中考模拟题,做做往年的中考题有特别的作用。因为每年的中考命题难度相对稳定,风格相对一致,做中考题有助于同学们摸清中考命题的“套路”,明确复习方向,最后找出自己的不足之处,作为下一次的努力目标。

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篇18:初三上册英语作文辅导

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I like to watch fictional movies and novels, because I am always attracted

by the unpredictable plots, which opens my vision. In the fiction movies, aliens

come to the earth and try to destroy the world. Human being have to fight

against the aliens with their wisdom. I can see the big world from these

stories. It triggers my interest to explore the world. At the same time, I gain

a lot of knowledge about the earth. I believe that aliens must exist in another

galaxy. When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we

can know more about the outer space. I have the great passion to explore the

universe.

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篇19:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选

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导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧:

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。

最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

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篇20:初三年级我的假期英语作文精选

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My summer vacation life is happy, rich and memorable experience. Because, in the summer vacation with my mother took me to a beautiful environment the universiade cultural park to play ah, elder sister took me to eat roast wing, brother to accompany me to play chess, and young aunt, aunt to accompany me to play CARDS, play chess, I am more than happy!

In this summer holiday, I didnt go to any computer classes. But, do homework, read, self-study "new concept English" are all I have to do every day. Sometimes I will play badminton, cycling, watch TV, play computer, help my mother do some housework within our capabilities. I also see a lot of books, learned a lot of knowledge, also learned a lot of sense.

During the universiade, and I take concrete actions to participate in the volunteer service, to different U standing to participate in and experience different activities, I also to the underground parking lot to promote "green travel". Can still finished the task well, you didnt know it, I will soon find five owners, agreed to stop driving during the universiade, or signature, do not drive me as a small host universiade, I can deliver a large force, how proud I am!

Say so, I this year summer vacation life, compared with the past, is not the same feeling, is not the same wonderful!

我的暑假生活是快乐、丰富而又难忘的。因为,暑假里有妈妈带我去环境优美大运文化园玩呀,姐姐带我去吃烤翅,哥哥陪我下棋、还有小姨和姑姑陪我打牌、下棋呢,我多开心啊!

在这个暑假里,我虽然没有去参加什么兴趣班。但是,写作业、阅读、自学《新概念英语》都是我每天必须做的事情。我有时候也会打羽毛球、骑自行车、看电视、玩电脑、帮妈妈做一些力所能及的家务事。我还看了好多书,学到了好多知识,也懂得了好多道理。

在大运会期间,我以实际行动参与到志愿者服务当中,到不同的U站去参加和体验不同的活动,我还到地下停车场去宣传“绿色出行”。还能出色地完成了任务,你没想到吧,我很快就找到5名车主,同意在大运期间停开、或者不开车的签名,我作为一名大运会的小主人,我能为大运出一份力,我是多么的自豪啊!

所以说,我今年的暑假生活,与往年的相比,确实是不一样的感觉,不一样的精彩啊!

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