寒假趣事英语作文初二（优秀20篇）

每个人都有假期,每个人的假期也与众不同,我来给大家讲讲我的假期生活吧! 今天我们一起来到了北京,去了许许多多的地方,有天坛公园、世界公园、太平洋海底公园、故宫……。最好玩的要算爬长城了，我发现台阶有的高有的低，还有的都凹了进去，害的我差点滑了下去。让我感到有股浓浓的历史气味，上长城的时候周围有许多一小段一小段的长城，爸爸说：“有可能那是地质变化！”导游说：“这是八达岭长城——水关，” 毛主席当年就是爬的这一关，听说毛主席爬水关，是因为算命先生说：“ 他和水有缘。”所以他才爬的水关。一抬头的功夫就到了好汉坡，我摇了摇旗子，高兴的跳了下来。为了快点下我握着扶手滑了下来。所以我是第一个下来的。今天的旅程很快就结束了，我玩的很开心你呢？

砰，砰砰！砰，砰砰！一阵阵巨响引起我的注意。我出去一看，哇！好多好多人都在放烟火。有的烟火好像陀螺一样，在地上转来转去；有的烟火仿佛天女散花似的，在空中撒出五彩的“花朵”；还有的有如天外流星一般，在空中飞驰而过……各种各样的烟火都有，真成了烟火的世界。

看着这些谗眼的烟火，我也好想放一下。突然，我想起爸爸也给我买了一些烟花，于是我拿起烟花就跑出去玩了。一开始，我不敢点火，因为我怕被烫着（我以前就被烫着过）。可后来，我看见别人玩得很高兴，很羡慕。于是我鼓起勇气点起了打火机。“砰”的一声，一枚烟火炸了。

我终于敢放烟火了。现在我才知道，干什么事情都要有信心和勇气才行。当然还要注意安全。

窗外已是数九寒天，猛烈地寒风呼呼的吹着，催促着在外的游子尽快回家。虽然呆在屋里，我却感觉到了阵阵凉意。

从寒假到现在，我的心一直平静不下来：期末考试我考出了相对优异的成绩，那是我真是被冲昏了头脑，想着寒假能够大玩特玩。可是寒假里我敲响了同学的大门，想要和他出去玩时我才发现，同学们都在趁着寒假抓紧学习，准备为下个学期的学习做准备。我一下愣住了，难道对我来说，考出一次好成绩就代表着重点高中的大门向我敞开了吗？我沉浸在一时的快感中对我以后的学习又有什么用？轻轻地关上同学家的门，我陷入了沉思。

在回家的路上，我看到路旁的参天白杨已经掉光了叶子，杨树被誉为边疆卫士，以挺拔的身躯和坚强的意志而著称，怎奈它们也挨不过这严酷的冬天，只露出光秃秃的树干，让人看了心疼。看到这般情景，我的心里思绪万千：连杨树都没有常绿的时候，我们这些中学生怎么能因为一时小小的成就而耽误了学习的终身大事呢？

想到这里，我快步奔回家，拿起那久违的书本，扑入知识的海洋。

窗外，杨树已发出新芽······

小作家：張廷

盼望着，盼望着，期待已久的寒假终于到了，爸爸妈妈为了锻炼我的交际能力，特地在网上批发了一些气球让我去售卖。

一个月光皎洁的夜晚，得能湖公园人流如潮，有跑步的，有唱歌的，有跳舞的……我和爸爸高高兴兴地拿着气球大声叫卖，我走在前面而爸爸走在后面暗中观察，我一边走一边喊：“卖气球了，卖气球了”，这时一个漂亮的小姐姐朝我看了过来，我立即上前问到：“小姐姐，你是要买气球吗？”“是的”她说到，“多少钱呀？”我说：“20元一个，30元2个。”她说“那我买2个吧。”我接着说：“看你这么漂亮，我再送你一个花环吧。”她接过气球和花环后开心地走开了。

我继续一边走一边喊：“卖气球哟……”这时我忽然在人群中发现了我的同班同学王佳琪，于是我对他说：“王佳琪，你来和我一起卖气球好吗？”“好呀！”他回答到，于是我们各拿几只气球一起叫卖，不一会儿我的气球卖完了，他的还余下1个，这时我告诉他，卖气球时要大声吆喝，并且要面带微笑别人才愿意买，于是他照着我说的做了，果然不一会气球就卖光了。

“叮叮叮……”我的电话手表响起来了，原来是爸爸提醒我夜色已很深了，该回家休息了，然后我和王佳琪挥手告别各自开开心心地回家了。

时间像流水一样匆匆地流走，一年一度的寒假来临了。每年这个时候爸爸妈妈就会带我和姐姐去旅游，也是我最开心的时刻。这次我们去泰国普吉岛，妈妈说那是一个热带地区。在一望无际的大海边，会有许许多多美丽的景物，还会发生很多有趣的事情。我和姐姐都非常期待这场旅行。

1月24日阳光明媚的中午，我们拖着收拾好的行李箱，往宝安机场去了。一路上我和姐姐都按捺不住激动兴奋的心情，左看右看。

大概坐了3个多钟的飞机，我们就到了泰国普吉岛机场，然后我们跟着导游转乘大巴到了我们第一天住宿的地方：五星级酒店。我和姐姐比赛谁先开门，我打开门，目瞪口呆的大叫，爸爸妈妈和姐姐同时问：“怎么啦？”我兴奋地说：“妈妈，你们快来看，这房间好大、卫生间好大、还有独立的浴缸，阳台出去还有漂亮的游泳池呢！”我住了这么多次酒店，这是最漂亮、最舒适的房了。

第二天，导游叔叔说今天一天带我们感受普吉岛的水和看大珊瑚。我们坐着快艇来到了大PP岛。就是看大珊瑚的海中央。我快速地穿上救生衣准备往水里跳时，看到蓝蓝的大海很深很深，还有好多五颜六色的小鱼，美丽极啦。姐姐跟我说小鱼会咬我的，我吓得有点不敢下海了。可是我看到比我小的小朋友都敢下去，还玩得好开心。最后我还是鼓起勇气跟妈妈一起下海了，我游到哪里小鱼就追我到哪里，太有趣了。

导游还叫我们带上泳镜把头往水里看，我看到了在很深很深的海底里有各式各样的大珊瑚，有的像漂亮的七彩蝶，有的像一个巨大的蘑菇，还有的像是一座雄伟的城堡。真是五花八门，丰富多彩呀！我们都玩得很开心，因海水太咸了，不可以长时间泡在海水里，于是我们依依不舍的离开了清澈的大海上岸了。

这次的海水活动我是由害怕到玩得很开心，我懂得了，原来什么事情都没有我们想象中的难，只要敢去尝试才知道这个事情到底难还是不难。

我最盼望的就是在除夕夜里放烟花了。

终于到了这天，大街上到处洋溢着新年的气氛。

大街上摆满了卖烟花的摊子，五花八门，五颜六色的烟花让人看得眼花瞭乱。

我和爸爸购买了几种不同的烟花。

晚上，吃了年夜饭，等不到天黑，我和爸爸，妈妈迫不及待地来到一块空地上，我开心地又蹦又跳。

我们先拿出“万花瓶”放在地上。

爸爸鼓励我让我点火。

我拿着打火机小心翼翼地朝烟花的导火线点去。

“哧”地一声，导火线被点燃了，我像一阵风似地躲到一边。

只见烟花先是冒出一股白烟，随后出现了一股小小的黄色火花，紧接着，喷出一道光彩夺目的火花，朝四贮存器喷洒出来，火花越窜越高，我们都高兴地又蹦又跳。

随后烟花在噼里啪啦的响声中消失了。

爸爸点燃了第二种烟花叫“降落伞”。

只听一声巨响，烟花往天空中射去，在天空炸出了美丽的火花，同里掉下来一个“降落伞”，五颜六色的，美丽极了。

最后我们搬出我们最大的烟花“巨无霸”。

点燃它的导火线，只见烟花像火箭一样，飞上天空，又象花朵一样绽放开来，射出红的光，黄的光，绿的光，紫的光，把人看得都入迷了。

天空中的烟花越来越多，形态各异。

有的像撑开的伞，有的像含苞欲放的花朵，还有的像数十条金色的银蛇，扭动着升上天空。

天空好似一幅美丽，迷人的画面。

夜深了，天空还是五颜六色，在天空中的烟花还不断映进我的房子里，把我的房间照得也五彩缤纷呢！

我真希望每天都能像除夕一样美丽。

[作文《寒假趣事》欣赏阅读

寒假,是每一个学生都喜欢的假期；寒假,是最快乐的时候；寒假,也是趣味最多的时候，寒假你经历了哪些趣事呢？

篇一：2018年寒假趣事作文

一个快乐而短暂的寒假悄悄地从我们的身边溜走，我们又迎来了一个新的学期，发生在寒假的趣事就像天空中的星星，数不胜数，是我心头不可抹杀的一件件往事。每一颗星星都闪闪发亮，每一件往事都刻骨铭心。

寒假的一天，我津津有味的看着作文选，突然一篇作文吸引了我，书上说茶水能“变成”墨水。我半信半疑，就决定自己也来做做这个实验验证一下。说干就干，我找来了一只碗，一把茶和一杯热水，还有必不可少的锈铁钉。

实验开始了，我按照书上步骤小心翼翼地把茶叶放进碗中冲泡。渐渐的，茶水越变越深直到变成土黄色的时候，我这才把极为重要的锈铁钉一枚一枚小心谨慎的放入变成土黄色的茶水中。完成实验后就得等待结果了。我时不时地向那碗茶水望望。到了下午，我迫不急得地去看结果，我情不自禁的发出惊叹。“哇噻！！”真是不可思议，碗中的茶水竟变成了墨水。我用钢笔吸了几滴，在书上写起字来，一个个字映入了我眼帘。真的与墨水一模一样。

我疑惑不解？我看了作文之后才知道，原来在茶汁中含有一种叫单宁酸的物质，他遇到锈体会引起化学反应，因而茶水变成了“墨水”

生活多么有趣，不可能变成了可能。篇二：2018年寒假趣事作文

寒假中有许多趣事，有一件令我记忆犹心，一想到那，我就会发出笑声。

有一次，我和妈妈一起去菜市场看到和小商贩讨价还价样子，心里痒痒的，也想试试，忽然一个收废品的，心想：终于有一个大显身手的机会了，这次我一定要把握机会。我就一直求妈妈给我一个 机会让我单独谈一次“交易”，妈妈答应了，太好了，计划成功了，我高兴地提着废品就走了。到了那里，我叫了声：“叔叔，我要卖废品，你说多少钱一斤吧？” “两毛五一斤。” 我觉得有点贵，就说：“两毛一斤吧？” “两毛就两毛，成交。” 太好了，第一次压价成功，继续进行二次，我又把价压到了一毛五，叔叔的脸上露出了惊讶又高兴的表情，我们一手交钱一手交货，我有点沾沾自喜，心想：太好了，我赚到了一毛哩，嘻嘻。妈妈走过来问卖了多少钱，我兴奋的对妈妈说：“妈妈，我告诉你啊，我占了一毛钱的光哩。”“啊？”妈妈有点迷惑不解，我又说：“那个人要两毛五一斤，我把价钱降到一毛五一斤，怎么样？你女儿我厉害吧？”不过话又说回来了，令我意想不到的是我把价钱降了那么低，那个人居然无动于衷，继续保持微笑，也不生气。 回到家，我想妈妈炫耀自己的功劳。妈妈大吃一惊，我莫名其妙： “怎么了？” 妈妈说：“他是买主，你是卖主，你应该把价钱升高而不是降低，你把价钱降得这么低他当然会笑了。” “啊！呜呜呜……” 怎么样？我的寒假趣事好不好玩？有不有趣？篇三：2018年寒假趣事作文

放寒假了，我回到老家——重庆。那里可好玩了，我印象最深刻的就是去田里收菜。

我们走到田里，看见的是一片绿油油的蔬菜，因为缺少经验，我只知道那是菜，却不知道是什么菜，大概是一些白菜和萝卜。奶奶叫我下田选几个大萝卜，我挑来挑去也看不出来哪个好，顺手拔了一个，哇！原来拔萝卜那么简单！用两只手抓住它的叶子根部，轻轻一拔就出来了。我觉得那个萝卜很小，奶奶却夸我：“你拔的这个萝卜真大呀！我从来没有拔到过那么大的萝卜。”“啊，我还以为很小呢！我们广州的萝卜都长长的，这个怎么是圆圆的呀？”“重庆的萝卜都是这样啊，我也不知道为什么。你看，那边的红萝卜还不是一样的。”我心中充满了疑问，但是没有刨根问底了。我们又拔了一些菜，准备回家。

在回去的路上，我兴奋得蹦蹦跳跳，左看看右看看，一不小心，踩进了被人松过的土里，“哎呀！”我大叫一声，脚下一滑，摔了个狗啃泥，差点真的啃泥了！我爬起来继续走，这次走得小心翼翼的，生怕再摔一跤。结果又差点撞到了树上，唉！我怎么这么倒霉呀！到这里，我要提醒大家，以后走路的时候不能三心二意，边走边玩，要不下场可能比我还惨喔！

寒假短暂而又有趣，如果每天都是这样那就好了！

初二英语作文：Friendship

A life without a friend is a life without a sun. Friendship is one of the most important things in everyones life.

Friends are who changes your life just by being a part of it, who makes you believe that there really is good in the world, who convinces you that there really is an unlock door just waiting for you to open it.

When you’re down, friends lift you up. When you lose your way, friends guide you and cheer you on.

So cherish your friend, Do not save your loving speeches.for your friends till they are dead.Do not write them on their tombstones, speak them rather now instead

初二英语作文：Information Age

Its the age of information now and information is very important in the society.we need verious of information to live a normal life.we need to know the lastest news ,listen to the weather forecast,learn about the newly published books and many other things we are interested in and want to know.

There are many way of acquiring information,for example we can watch TV,listen to radio, read newspaper and magazines and go on line which is to most popupar ,convienent and effective way now.

Living in such an age of information,what should we to to face up to the challenge of it?I think we should try our best to learn as much knowledge as we can and try to master the new techonology.

奥运英语作文 北京奥运第一枚金牌属于谁？

北京奥运第一枚金牌属于谁？(Who will win the first gold medal?)

The suspense over who will win the first Olympic medal and in which event is really a interesting thing. Chinese officials are determined to make sure China, as the host country, wins the first gold of the Games. The womens 10m air rifle - which includes two Chinese medal favorites - has its final scheduled at 10:30 am on Aug 9 and should end about 20 minutes later.

If all goes as planned, either reigning gold medalist shooter Du Li or world champion Zhao Yinghui will raise 2008s first gold at the Beijing Shooting Range.

But if Du and Zhao are too far behind in points going into the final, the rumor says, organizers will delay the last ten shots of the final while the weightlifting final goes on as planned so China can secure the gold.

I think the first gold medal must belong to we Chinese, let wait this moment together.

奥运英语作文 关于北京奥运会开幕式的

关于北京奥运会开幕式的(About Beijing Olympic Opening Ceremony)

The Olympic Opening Ceremony was an international event and the whole world was watching! The event was held in a stadium designed to seat a large group of people.

The athletes entered the stadium in a specific order. The athletes from Greece entered first in honor of the original Olympics held in Greece. Then, the other athletes followed by nation in the alphabetical order of the host country’s language. The host country’s athletes came last. So for this coming Olympics 2008, the athletes from China will enter the stadium last.

The chief of state of the host country declared the games open, followed by the raising of the Olympic Flag. Music was played and fireworks were set off in salute. Then, doves were released into the air as a symbol of peace. Runners in cross-country relays brought in the Olympic torch. The running of the torch began four weeks before the Olympic ceremony and thousands of runners took part in this. Planes and ships transported the Olympic torch to each country that lies between Greece and the host country. The most exciting moment of the Olympic ceremony was when the torch entered the stadium and lit the Olympic Flame. The Flame was kept burning until the end of the Olympic games.

奥运英语作文 关于北京奥运会闭幕式的

关于北京奥运会闭幕式的(About Beijing Olympic Closing Ceremony)

The closing ceremony must take place in the stadium after the end of all the events. The flag bearers of the participating delegations and the name-board-bearers enter the stadium in single file. Behind them march the athletes, without distinction of nationality.

The flag bearers then form a semi-circle behind the rostrum.

The President of the IOC and the President of the OCOG mount the rostrum. To the sounds of the Greek national anthem, the Greek flag is hoisted on the flagpole that stands to the right of the central flagpole used for the winners flags. The flag of the host country is then hoisted on the central flagpole, while its anthem is played. Finally, the flag of the host country of the next Olympic Games is hoisted on the lefthand flagpole to the strains of its anthem.

The mayor of the host city joins the President of the IOC on the rostrum and returns to him the Olympic flag. The president of the IOC then entrusts it to the mayor of the host city of the following Olympic Games. This flag must be displayed in the latter citys main municipal building.

After an address by the President of the OCOG, the President of the IOC gives the closing speech of the Olympic Games, which he ends with these words:

"I declare the Games of the ... Olympiad closed and, in accordance with tradition, I call upon the youth of the world to assemble four years from now at ... to celebrate with us there the Games of the ... Olympiad".

A fanfare then sounds; the Olympic flame is extinguished, and while the Olympic anthem is being played, the Olympic flag is slowly lowered from the flagpole and, unfurled horizontally, carried out of the arena, followed by the flag bearers. A farewell song resounds.

奥运英语作文：我最喜欢的中国射击运动员

奥运英语作文：我最喜欢的中国射击运动员(The Chinese sport shooter I like best)

The Chinese sport shooter I like best is Wang Yifu who was in terms of Olympic medals one of the most successful sport shooters of all times. He specializes in the 50 m Pistol and 10 m Air Pistol events.

Wang won his first Olympic medal in the Los Angeles games at the age of 23. After this, the Air Pistol event was added to the program, and this is where he has achieved his greatest accomplishments. He won the 1992 gold medal only days after a new medal in the 50 m event. His three attempts to repeat the victory have provided impressive results and very tight duels:

In the 2004 competition, Wang scored 590 once more, but lost the Olympic record to Mikhail Nestruev (Russia) who achieved 591. However, Wang Yifu chased quickly and eventually won by a margin of 0.2 points to get his second Olympic gold.

I like Wang Yifu, and I also like his great sprite.

The Winter Holiday,I like the winter holiday very much.

Though its very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival.

I can watch cartoon every day.I neednt go to school frepuently.

Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming,I can play all the time.

I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game.

So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home.

We had dinner together.Its so lively that Iam very happy.But I still have to do my homework.

On the second day of the year, I went to visit my relatives in Feicheng. My brother and I still have 3 year old little brother to play against shaving guns.

First, I first put a gun, I saw the orange yellow sparks, and then, out of white smoke. And the sound of the explosion hovered in the air.

At this time the younger brother laughs. The brother found a broken teacup. The first brother ignited the cup and buckled with a cup. After a while, it was like the sound of fart. I was very unaddicting, and I said to my brother, "lets not come three." The brother was excited and said, "OK."

The exciting moment came and the cup was fry in half. Again, the brother is clapping and clapping.

After lunch, my brother and I continued to blow the cannon.

My brother and I looked for a box and threw it into the box after it was ignited. I do not know how the brother like a stimulant, with a corn pole, beating back and forth, my brother and I startled a shout to come. But the brother is not listening to still smiling, immediately, this shave ringing, good brother still good, really scared to death.

So this time. I put it in this box and let my brother look at his brother. Who knows, his brother struggles to open his brothers line, and his brother stumbles over a stone to catch him. My brother is sitting on it, my God. Just then the parents saw it, and the blasting gun was just sound, and fortunately his brother had nothing to do.

The parents were angry and said, "pay attention to safety. You two say a lot of words to your brother."

Now I know whats safe to do. If the security cant be guaranteed, then you dont do it. At any time, security is always the first.

My Classmates I have many friends in my class. Theyre lovely and interesting. I would like to introduce some of them. Alice is very cute. Shes also kind to everyone and shes very enthusiastic. Shes always ready to help everyone， ， but our teachers always forgive her. Ben is the most talkative boy in our class. His nickname is chatterbox. He has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh Linda is a quiet student. She is good at every subject but she never shows off. Allen is a very tall boy. He plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. He often says，

playing basketball is good for your health. How about your classmates? Do you like them? Try to admire your classmates. You will be happier.

Moving is the most sincere moment of the person. It gives people a spirit of praise, but also reflects the peoples side most chastity. Maybe people would think that moving is needed, but last night, I was touched by that little moment.

Last night, the air was fresh, and a few dazzling stars were hanging in the gray sky. My mother and I decided to go shopping in the street. We stopped at the doorway of a dessert house, and my mother whispered to me, "I havent been with you for dessert for a long time. Come on, lets go in and have a bowl." I nodded, and I went in my mothers hand.

Sitting next to me was a young father and a little girl about 4 years old. The girls dress was very lovely, a pink coat and a waking jeans, and a pair of new sports shoes. The round face on the face of red microwave, the day really no evil smile hung on the face, let people intoxicated.

The little girl is playing with her father. They play a lot of games, such as palm, guessing and so on. The father and daughter created a kind of warm scene. At the moment, Bing Bing like dessert because of the two daughters presence and become warm.

At this moment, the waitress finally put the rice cakes from the kitchen - out, the little girl saw very happy, kept patting hand, happily smiled, but her attentive father stroked the little girls head, slightly in front of her smile, and then use the spoon to cut into a rice cake a. When the father carefully picked up the spoon feeding time was about to put the rice cakes in the mouth of the little girl, the little girl suddenly walked away, gently pull his fathers shirt, and said: "Daddy, daddy, I grew up, let me. My mother told me before he went to my uncles home that I could do what he could do and not make you worry too much. " The little girl kept on the corner of his father. Father listened in amazement, he gently spoon down, staring at her daughter, said: "yes, mom said, grow up to learn to do things by yourself." Then the father put the spoon in her hands, breaking off her finger and said: "come, hold it tight, dont drop." So, he put his hands on his head, watching his daughter eat.

I saw this little girl cleverly putting the spoon into the mouth every time. After eating, she made a grimace of grimace to her father and said with a grin, "its delicious, daddy, do you eat it?" Ill feed you, would you like it? " The father seemed to be thinking about something, and it was easy to go back to God and say, "well, dad wants, dad wants it!" The little girl put the spoon into the mouth of the father, and the father and daughter see smile, and a tear out of the corner of the father falls gently on the table when......

I was touched by this moment, this young girl should be so filial and sensible, and in contrast, what do I do?

Instantly moved, and left a beautiful moment, my mother and I walked out of the dessert, looked at walking in front of us and the two long leaned back, my mothers hand more real......

January26 2008

It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother’s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother’s company. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.

January27 2008

It is a special day today. My mother sent one hundred basket of red bayberries. I like to eat red bayberries. It tastes nice. When they arrived in Shanghai, they were still fresh. But most of them would be sent to my mother’s business friends. I chose the best basket of red bayberries to eat. I put the rest in my refrigerator. Red bayberry is my hometown’s special product. It is well-known in china. Many people like to eat it.

[寒假作业英语日记两篇

1.你很善于观察生活，能敏锐的捕捉一个个有意义的瞬间;你是个很有潜力的学生。

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18.你是个很有主见又不乏真知的学生，对你的观点我十分认同，但如果行文安排中结构再紧凑些，那就是锦上添花了。

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20.如许娟秀的字迹，清晰严整的结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文 学习中互相促进好吗?

[寒假趣事作文批改的评语有哪些

Spring Festival is coming,I am very happy.On this winter holiday,I went to

visit my grandparents with my parents. My grandmother is very zeal.Our dinner is

very delicious.After the dinner,the people gave me money in red envelopes.I am

very happy in this family with my grandparents.

Sometimes,we go to climb the mountains.The mountain is very high.Look!There

is a clean river near the mountain.And there are some beautiful flowers,grass

and big trees.Some trees are orange trees,the others are banana trees.Oh,I am

very tired but interesting.

I am very happy on this holiday because I like Spring Festival very

much.What about you?

My father took me out fishing today. At the beginning, we spent a long time waiting there but there was no fish. I was very impatient and didnt want to stay there. I wanted to come home. Father said to me, "Dont give up everything easily. We should keep on trying hard".

我们家最有趣的就是跳棋比赛了。晚饭过后，爸爸总会端出棋盘，大喊到：“乖女儿，下棋了！”听到喊声后，我就会拖长声音答到：“来……啦……”

The funniest thing about our family is the draughts contest. After dinner, Dad would always play the board and shout, "good girl, play chess."!" Heard the cry, I will say: "to drawl...... You......"

比赛规则是这样的：我和爸爸一组，妈妈自己一组，三局两胜，输了的一组洗碗。我和爸爸一直都是妈妈的手下败将，所以洗碗都被我和爸爸“承包”了。

The rules of the game are like this: my father and I are a team, mom team, the three game two wins, the lost group of dishes. My dad and mom was always defeated, so are the dishes I and Daddy "contract".

今天的比赛，第一局由我和妈妈先下，爸爸在一旁给我当“军师”。我改变了以往的行军路线，绕到前进，尽量不给对方“搭桥”。这一局，妈妈输了。

Today, the first Bureau by my mom and dad gave me the first, when the advisor at the side". I changed the route of the March, went around and tried not to bypass each other". The mother lost the game.

第二局由爸爸和妈妈比，我在一旁给爸爸当参谋。妈妈急的满脸通红，手忙脚乱，最终以两步之差输给了爸爸。我高兴的一蹦三尺高：“我们赢了！我们终于赢了！”爸爸也高兴得像个孩子似的手舞足蹈，哈哈大笑，妈妈不服气的说：“今天是我们让你们的，别太得意了，明天等着瞧！”边说边走向厨房。

The second game is between father and mother, and I work for my father as a staff member. Mothers anxious face flushed, confused, and finally lost to Dad by two steps. I jumped three feet high: "we won!"! We won at last!" Dad was also happy to dance like a child, laughing, and her mother was unconvinced: "today we let you, do not be complacent, and tomorrow, wait and see."!" As he walked toward the kitchen.

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It‘s to celebrate

the lunar calendar ’s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival

，families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set

off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the

festival very much ，because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes

.They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to

children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good

fortune .

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and

friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”。 People enjoy the Spring Festival

，during this time they can have a good rest .

今天是寒假的第一天，爸爸妈妈为庆祝我优异的期末成绩，决定今天包饺子！早上妈妈买了一些野菜、饺子皮和肉。我高兴极了，不住地说：“今天吃饺子喽了！

中午到了，妈妈已经在桌子边包饺子了，我在一旁看着，觉得包很简单，手就开始有点痒痒了。我便偷偷地走到桌子前，看了看妈妈包饺子的样子。

我先把饺子馅用筷子夹到饺子皮上，然后把饺子皮用手一点点的捏，嗯？怎么感觉手上湿湿的，一看原来皮破啦，妈妈说：“你放的馅太多啦！怎么能包住呢？”

我又拿了个饺子皮，少放了点馅，一点点的又捏住了，这次没漏，我高兴的把它放到了箅子上，可是却怎么也立不起来。妈妈又说：“你放的馅太少啦，怎么能立起来呢？”我有点灰心啦，这时候妈妈说：“你照我的样子来就能包好啦！”

妈妈把饺子皮托在手心上，然后夹一筷子饺子馅，放在饺子皮的正中间，再把饺子皮对折一下，用双手的拇指和食指熟练的一捏，一个胖乎乎的饺子就呈现在我的面前。

我照着妈妈教的方法开始包啦，第一个饺子的样子很难看，但总算有点模样啦。接着就是第二个、第三个，包的一个比一个好。

饺子包好啦，要开始下锅煮啦。妈妈先烧开一锅水，然后把饺子一个个轻轻的下进去，再用勺子背轻轻的推着，生怕把饺子弄破了。

不一会儿，锅开了，妈妈又往锅里添了半碗水。不时的用勺背轻轻的推着，我问妈妈为什么要添水呢？妈妈说：“煮饺子要滚三滚，饺子才能煮透，皮筋陷软”。锅又开了，妈妈又往锅里添了半碗水，然后和以前一样用勺子轻轻的推着。

饺子煮好了，要开始捞了，只见妈妈用漏勺把饺子盛出来，结果我包的煮烂了两三个，不过，吃着自己的劳动成果，心里还是美滋滋的。

寒假过去了，可我还在回味寒假中的一件趣事——放炮。放炮是新年的习俗，对我们小孩子来说，在新年是最有趣的事情。正好，今年我们是在姥姥家过的新年，也是在“爆竹声”度过的。

我们在除夕那一晚，来到姥姥家，在客厅坐了一会儿，我的舅舅和表弟表妹他们也在姥姥家。表弟表妹吵着要放炮。刚好我们也买了些炮过来。妈妈对我说“你去跟他们一起放吧。”我兴奋地说：“好啊！”其实呀，我比他们还要高兴呢！

我们飞快地跑到了一块儿空地，迫不及待地撕开了装炮的胶袋，我一看，炮的种类还真不少：冲天炮、轰炸机、地老鼠、降落伞：最常见的火柴炮和沙炮也有，烟花也有不少。

我先让他们点几枝香过来，免得到时用火机时烧到手。一切准备就绪以后，我们便可以开始放了。“先放什么好呢？”我正在沉思。

突然，我表妹对我说：“先放降落伞吧，我还没看过呢！”其他人也表示赞成。“好！”我装着一副“孩子王”的样子说道。

紧接着我把“降落伞”放在平地上，点燃了导火索，便走到一边去。只见“降落伞”“吁”的一声就飞到了天空中，就是“啪”的爆了，最有趣的来了：一个玩具小人拿着降落伞从天而降。就好像是日本人来侵略中国的战斗机爆炸了，大家看到这个情形都非常高兴。

过了一会儿，妈妈来了，高兴地对我们说：“大家一起放烟花吧！”“好啊！”很明显他们已经耐不住性子了。就这样，在黑夜中，他们拿着各自的烟花，在欢快地跑着、跳着。我不禁笑了起来！

因为我仿佛看到了祖国的希望在这黑夜中闪烁着。今年的放着炮过除夕夜，过得还真充实呀。明年，我还要来。

A sunny Sunday, usually every day and sleep until the sun father-drying bottoms climb to get up early and get up in red, wake up my mother. Drowsily mother slowly said: "Today what the section, from Why so early?" Little Red said excitedly: "Mom, do not install confused, you said that today took me to the park!"

Came to park, mother and son were two beautiful scenery attract: kids, some kite-flying, and some shooting while playing ball ...... red bumper cars, while also playing slippery slides, played with enjoying themselves, was sweating profusely.

Little Red hobbled down to holding mothers hand while walking while singing. Suddenly, a banana peel, a red block of the avenue, little red slip banana skin reminded once again to see if the banana peel to her protest, then do not fight a gas, the foot kicked the banana peel. Mom saw, as if aware of her mind like, and did not criticize her, she just pulled the banana skin side next to her while saying with great earnestness: "I know you have been slipping on banana peel, very angry, but you should From the perspective of others think that if you somehow accidentally stepped on a banana peel how to do? red listened to, very ashamed, the banana peel thrown into the bin.

Little Red looked at the move, my mother smiled.

Yes ah! Would it not everyone should be protected?