适应大学的生活用英语怎么说【汇总20篇】

Now the earth is in bad condition。 For example， in some places， the air and

water pollution is so serious that it causes many deaths。 At the same time， many

animals and plants are in danger because of the destruction of their

habitats。

Luckily， we human beings have realized the problem。 On April 22nd， millions

of people across the world do something good for the earth。 Some clean up

beaches and water， some pick up rubbish， others give speeches to call on more

people to take action。 But can we save the earth only by one day’s work? The

future of our planet depends on our efforts。 What we should do is to make every

day Earth Day。 Only by taking good care of it every day can we hope to live in

harmony with nature。

If life is a book, then the university life is the most beautiful color in the book; if life is a drama, then the university life is the most wonderful scene of the play, if life is a long journey from birth to death; then we have a college life, can see the most splendid scenery. Friends, at the best time of life, have you raised the sail to the other side of the ideal? Have you stretched out your strong wings and go to the free sky? Is it very exciting to get into the University, to make the next wish and strive for it?

In the long dream, we bided sword, those unforgettable days are still visible before the eyes. In the day of harvest in our understanding through their own efforts to accomplish one thing is how meaningful, and we walked together to the beautiful campus, stand together through storm and stress. Standing at the new starting point, I was so excited, and how was it???

However, in the university life picture spread, I found in search of searching the end are not past the heart of "the person is in the dim light of joy". The dream he found Baidu, was veiled. This time, I have been confused and wandering, but time will not stop it from footsteps, forward Zhu Ziqing wrote "when I wash my hands, in the past day from the basin; when you eat, the days from their jobs in the past; when silent, the double eyes ningran from the past. I am aware of his rush?? "yes! Time is like water, and we have a lot of things to do in our life. In order to dream, let us cherish the time, from now on a little bit of accumulation. Lets make our college life more full, rich and rhythmic. In life I hope happy with success, I know the smile in every youth season, the call of the sea: we will not let the courage to fight back in the waves, blue sky call, cannot let fly wings degradation in dark clouds.

There is a book, the book is not a word, but we can get a lot of knowledge: this book is not the author, but every one of us is the author of this book, this book is called "life". Life is everywhere in the classroom.

One morning, sunny, I harbored a happy mood, came to my house in the yard. The flowers in the yard is flourish, a breeze blowing, colorful flowers danced dance, it is refreshing. I think: the watered the flowers, I gingerly to per pot poured the water. After watering in the, I carry the flowers, touch the potted plant, the flowers are like seems very happy to me open a smiley face.

Suddenly, I saw an earthworm, with their feet to block the path of it, thought it would be "detour", can not think of it the "righteous" climbed to my feet. I wonder do earthworms couldnt see a thing? It is how to identify the direction of it?

Me with a problem, catch a worm to do the experiment. I fetched a basin exudes the fragrance of the flowers, bring a colorful toys, each put on left and right sides of the earthworm, and the worms are placed in the middle, see earthworms will move which things. Earthworms in the middle paused for a moment, slowly to the potted flower move in the past. I shall not the solution: do earthworms have no eyes?

So I went on to do an experiment. I put the potted flower replaced the onions. Who knows, the earthworm unexpectedly not hesitate to climb to the onions, which can be really strange. I think: the two experiments, earthworms crawled to the will smell things, earthworm identification method of direction will not smell related? This is just my guess, hasnt been confirmed. So, I went back home, lying on the bed to prove it.

I suddenly looked up and saw there was a thick book, the spine of the written "Encyclopedia" four words in the bookcase. I think: Yeah, I can go to check the Encyclopedia of ! Really is "where is the friends home, come without effort".

In the encyclopedia, said: as long as the earthworm in underground activities, eyes gradually degraded, can only rely on the sense of smell to identify the direction.

Someone said a sentence: "the truth was born in the one hundred question mark", through this matter, I have a deep feeling of this sentence. Life is everywhere in the classroom.

[生活处处是课堂英语作文

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I’m going to the sun on my holiday. I will go there by a spaceship. I will take a big blue spaceship.

Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super-shirt. In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes. Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table. After my home work, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice. All the things are red. Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

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假期我要去晒太阳。我将乘宇宙飞船去那儿。我要一艘蓝色的宇宙飞船。

然后我会驾驶宇宙飞船去太阳。太阳很热。所以我穿上了超级衬衫。早上，我要吃些太阳汉堡当早餐。

八点，我将和我的朋友们在那里玩。他们是超级狗和超级女孩。超级狗是黑白的。超级女生很聪明。超级女孩和超级狗喜欢和我玩。所以我和他们玩了四十分钟。然后我在一个蓝色小桌子上的红色小房间里做功课。下班后，我要吃午饭。我要吃太阳沙拉。我要给太阳宝宝做一些红色玩具熊。我要红汁、红鱼和红米饭。所有的东西都是红色的。然后我需要大量的水在太阳上，因为太阳太热了。所以我要步行去宇宙飞船。我会驾驶宇宙飞船到地球上去。

这是一个阳光灿烂的假日。

Time passes qiuckly,and the summer hoilday is coming.During the hoilday,i will have a rest to reileve my stress and do some exercises to strength my body.

Besides i will spend more time in companying my parents and doing the housework as much as possible beacuse i have paid too much attention on study that i ignored them when i was in school.

However, i will do some part-time jobs as well for it can broaden my harizon and enrich my knowledge,and therefore i can learn more and have a promising future.

[我的假期生活初中英语作文

In my summer vacation life, summarize up to three words: busy, play, sleep.

In my summer vacation life, Im very busy, under the pressure of my parents, I have to complete their task assigned me every day, even for them to do some housework every day, of course, I can also get some compensation. Once, I watch TV in the afternoon, probably because the show is too good, I have been seen for more than five o clock in the afternoon, I want to go along and see for more than six o clock in the afternoon, at that time, my homework done nearly one 5, only by my dad come back, see I wrote this only a little homework, yet and also each mop the floor, so I just bad luck, in addition to pay no today, but also fined, will write up the work, I have been to twelve o clock at night, I didnt finished the homework to take a shower sleep.

In my summer vacation life, I am very naughty, when my dad went to work in the afternoon, my mom to play CARDS, I wouldnt seriously homework, for it is written in the book of my agreement with my parents I can only play one hour a day of computer, and cant play, my mother to watch TV on computer, so I can go to play computer games, but every time I go to play, my dad is just like a clairvoyant, no matter how I disguise, but he can know. I may also be "half-hearted" (homework, while watching TV).

Now, the earths environment deteriorating, human dont save electricity, water, make the earths environment worse, and all have started their own low carbon life.

I come out some ideas for the low carbon life: multi-purpose monohydrate, a basin of water has many USES, can wash clothes, wash your hands, etc., after many people would put it out, but for me, the basin of water can do a lot of things, such as with the first wash basin of water and fruit, and then you can wash hands, put the balance of the water used to wash clothes or mop the floor, if there is more water could be left fuming toilet! When went to the toilet flush the toilet, you must double bond flush the toilet, so water saving works. Save electricity is everyone need to do one thing, every time in summer, people will put the air conditioning or fan drive down, and a drive for hours, are notoriously inefficient. Actually these are unnecessary, just need to fan can feel very cool, dont have to be so inefficient. At home also conveniently turn off temporarily dont want to open the lamp, all people want to go out, want to switch off all the lights, then compare save electricity. Televisions and computers is to get people to relax entertainment electronics, use up is very demanding, but also bad for human body radiation! So relax method is too inefficient, and the best way to relax is to find a good friend talk about the recent anecdotes, or jump rope with good friends, play badminton, and so on.

The good way to save water, electricity, hope everybody can do it. Low carbon life, starts from me, start from around things!

现在，地球环境恶化，人类不节约用电、水，使地球的环境更加恶劣，而所有人也开始了自己的低碳生活。

我来为低碳生活出一些金点子：一水多用，一盆水有许多用处，可以洗衣服、洗手等等，用完以后，许多人都会把它倒掉，可对我来说，这盆水可以干好多事，比如先用这盆水洗洗水果，然后可以洗洗手，再把剩下来的水用来洗洗衣服或者拖拖地，如果还有剩下来多一些的水可以冲冲马桶呢!上过厕所冲马桶的时候，要双键冲马桶，这样的话节水好用。节约用电是每个人必要做的一件事，每当到了夏天，人们都会把空调或者电风扇开下来，并且一开就是几个小时，非常费电。其实这些都是不必要的，只需要扇扇子就可以感到无比凉爽，不必那么费电。在家还要随手关掉暂时不需要开的灯，所有的人都要出门的话，要把所有的灯关掉，这样的话比较省电。电视和电脑是让人们放松心情的娱乐电器，用起来十分费电，而且还有对人身体不好的辐射呢!这样放松心情的方法太费电了，，其实最好的放松方法就是找一位好朋友聊聊最近的趣事，或者和好朋友一起跳跳绳、打打羽毛球等等。

这些节约用水、电的好方法，希望大家都能够做到。低碳生活，从我做起，从身边的小事做起!

Since Ive been on TV (news), when he heard the word "low carbon life" couldnt wait to run into dads in the study, asked my father; What is a "low-carbon life"?

Dad told me that low carbon life is advocating energy conservation and environmental protection, healthy idea, now, "low-carbon life" is more and more by the state, society and even ordinary people, this way of life has become a fashionable life tide.

Listened to dads words, I was determined to do a small player in the low carbon life, so I didnt wear clothes on and dont want to see of book and so on, all together, go to remote rural areas, to help those poor children.

Remember to go to school, I always let dad drove a car to pick up my work, to low carbon life, I asked my father to buy me a bike, let myself go to school by bike, school can also exercise the body, so also can reduce the car exhaust emissions.

Low carbon life can make our home more beautiful, let our life more colorful, beautiful, everywhere to reduce pollution, low carbon life starts from you and me!

自从我在电视上(新闻)听见“低碳生活”这个词后，就迫不及待地跑进爸爸的书房里，问爸爸;什么是“低碳生活”?

爸爸告诉我，低碳生活就是倡导节能环保，健康的理念，如今，“低碳生活”越来越被国家，社会甚至老百姓所接受，这种生活方式已经逐渐成为一种时尚的生活潮流。

听了爸爸的话，我下定决心，做一个低碳生活的小小参与者，于是，我把穿不上衣服和不愿意看的书等等，都集中在一起，捐给偏远的农村，帮助那些贫困家庭的孩子。

记得以前上学的时候呢，我总是让爸爸开着小汽车来接送我上班，为了低碳生活，我请求爸爸给我买辆自行车，让我自己骑自行车上学放学，这样还可以锻炼身体，又可以减少小汽车尾气的排放。

低碳生活可以让我们的家园更美丽，让我们的生活更加精彩，美好，处处减少污染，低碳生活从你我做起!

Since I was at school, I have heard a lot about college. A boy near my

house is in college now, every time I meet him, I will ask him how he feels

about campus life, he smiles and tells me many funny things.The ideal college

has been built in my mind. There is beautiful trees and flours, boys and girls

talk and walk happily, they share things together, students and teachers discuss

course. In the lake, some students talk to foreigners, what an enjoyable

situation. In order to go to my ideal college, I must work hard.

The earth is our home, the mother of mankind, the cradle of life, had been tortured by the human was scarred. It is selfless to provide us with natural resources. So, protecting the earth is our bounden duty and responsibility. Low carbon life, is our mother is the best way to return to the earth.

On one occasion, Im writing an article. But I think did not come up with a good story. A copy of the original manuscript paper be I tore up to only a few pages, at this moment, mom finds out, she reminded me: "my daughter, how do you develop such a bad habit of waste? Dont you know the paper is made of trees? If everyone is a waste of a piece of paper, and the countrys 1.3 billion people means destroying the forest, the earth is fragile, we must carefully protect the earth, we humans can live on the earth!" Listen to the mother, I feel so ashamed. Save resources, we should start from these trivial things around: save water, save electricity...

Since learned last lesson, I would never waste paper. And "good ability to learn a low-carbon life" : the water that clean out rice can be used to water the flowers, not only make more lush flowers and plants, also can save resources; Dish washing water can be used to mop the floor or flush the toilet... Believe that everyone heard a word: if humans do not add abstemious waste of water resources, so the last drop of water in the world, will be the tear of human beings. Someone once did, as long as we are the Chinese save a drop of water, and that the country can save 45 tons of water. How amazing number! Associated with the motherland of the Yangtze river and the Yellow River, are made of a trickle of water together?

Blue sky, white clouds, the mountains green trees and red flowers, birds singing, the fish in the water freely roam. What a harmony between man and nature landscape. Isnt that what people aspire to, look forward to? From this moment, protect the earth, low carbon life. Let our homes more beautiful, more green!

地球是我们的家园，这位人类的母亲，这个生命的摇篮，已经被人类折磨得伤痕累累。它是无私地为我们提供自然资源。所以，保护地球是我们义不容辞的义务与责任。低碳生活，就是我们给地球母亲最好的回报方式。

有一次，我正在写一篇文章。可我左思右想也没有想出一个好题材。一本原稿纸被我撕得只剩几页了，这时，被妈妈发现了,她提醒了我：“女儿啊，你怎么养成这么浪费的坏习惯呢?你难道不知道这些纸都是树木做成的吗?要是每一个人都浪费一张纸，全国13亿人就等于毁坏了一片森林，地球已经不堪一击，我们要精心保护地球，我们的人类才能生活在地球上!”听了妈妈的话，我感到羞愧不已。节约资源，就要从身边这些琐碎的小事做起：节约水，节约电……

自从吸取了上次的教训，我再也不浪费纸张了。并且学到了低碳生活的“好本领”：淘米水可以用来浇花，这样做不仅使花草更茂盛，也可以很好地节约资源;洗菜水可以用来拖地或冲厕所……相信大家都听过一句话：如果人类不加节制地浪费水资源，那么世界上的最后一滴水，将是人类的眼泪。有人曾做过统计，只要我们中国人节约一滴水，那全国就能节约45吨水。多么惊人的数字啊!联想到祖国的万里长江和滔滔黄河，不也是由一滴滴的水汇聚而成的吗?

蓝蓝的天空，洁白的云朵，山间绿树红花，鸟儿尽情欢唱，鱼儿在水中自由遨游。多么和谐的人与自然的风景图。这不正是人们向往、憧憬的吗?从这一刻起，保护地球，过低碳生活。让我们的家园更美好、更绿色!

Thursday, November 16 rain Left upright, raised his right foot, bouncing off his toes straight, and 45 ° angle into the ground ... the instructor shouted hoarse. Today is the first day of military training, we all suffer students, instructors stringent requirements, we do it difficult

I secretly peeping out of the side of the students, skew Tampa, Pakistan eye, brow tight, physical shaking, it seems that everyone suffered torture, Variety ... rain and tears along glowing red on the cheek as the river and under. We usually stand down the Jiaoxiaojie in these temper, not only did not cry, but very brave, look optimistic, Gangyi, Jin is not happening, indeed admirable.

Time spent at a university is a most worthwhile period in a young persons

life. This is a time when a student begins to form his or her ideas about life

in general. Attending classes and studying in the library keep a student busy

and provide him or her with access to valuable information， adding to his or her

knowledge base.

Campus life can also be rich and colorful. Most universities offer a

variety of extracurricular activities such as sports events， contests， and other

social gatherings， enabling the students to experience relief from study and

homework. Students often form lifelong friendships through the varied

experiences of university life.

During the time a student spends at university， he not only develops his

intellectual abilites，he also develops social skills as well as knowledge and

wisdom necessary for choosing a future career. By learning how to balance

intense study and recreation， a student will be well prepared for the challenges

of future responsibilities.

When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy. Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

暑假的时候，我总是会回到老家跟爷爷奶奶在一起。我喜欢那里的生活，它是如此的简单和快乐。住在乡下，我心里感受到了平静。在这里的日子似乎变得更长一些。早上，我听到公鸡的声音，好像是在唱歌，之后我就醒过来了。有时我会跑到山上去，可以听到一些鸟儿唱歌。我喜欢它们的声音。我是如此的接近大自然。我爱大自然带来的一切。绿色的树，五彩缤纷的花朵，干净的水甚至是新鲜的空气。我找到了它的美。

I’m Tom。 I’m a student in Grade 7。 My school life is interesting。 I like it very much。 I have 5 classes in the morning and 3 classes in the afternoon。 I study English， Chinese， math and some other subjects。 I like English best because it’s easy and interesting。 I don’t like math because I always meet difficulties in studing math。 I try hard but it doesnt work at all。 After class， I often play basketball with my classmates。 I go to the school library for some reading twice a week。 I like my school life。 What about yours？ Can you tell me something about it？

College is always considered as a turning point in our educational career and life. I would use adaptationas the key word when describing my first year at college.

As we enter a new school, we first have to adapt a new environment and meet new people.As we leave home and move into the school dormitory, we need to learn to live and get along with other people who have different living habit. And as we start a higher level education, we need to adopt a new way of study. Teachers are no more like the ones in high school that will push us to learn.

Instead, we have more options and spare time to do what we want.

I am glad that I have overcome the difficulties and adapted the new life of college. I have achieved a lot more than I expected at my first year of college. First of all, I have made new friends who share the same hobbies and met new teachers who inspire me in all way. Secondly, I have become more independent. I have got used to a new way of study and often study different things by myself. I can take care of myselfwithout parents being by my side all the time. Last but not least, I have learnt to make full use of my time. I believe time management is a very essential skill in college life as we have more freedom than ever before. It has helped me not to waste time and turned me into a well-organized person.

My first year at college is excellent and I really appreciate all that I have learnt this year.

I plan to go to travel alone this summer vacation. I have traveled several times, but gone with my family or friends, never did it alone. I want to do it once, so I can train myself to be stronger and more confident. I told my parents about my plan, they supported me very much, and they thought it is a good opportunity to help me grow up. They also told me many tips of traveling and prepared the package for me. I am grateful that my parents understand me and respect my decision. I won’t let them down.

我计划这个暑假独自去旅行。我曾经去旅游过几次，但是都是跟我家人或者朋友去的，从来没有自己去过。我想独自旅行一次，这样可以锻炼自己更坚强更自信。我把我的计划告诉了我的父母，他们非常支持我，还认为这是帮我成长的一个号机会。他们还告诉了我许多旅行要点，并帮我准备行李。我非常感激父母的理解以及他们对我的决定的尊重。我不会让他们失望。

今天吃完饭后，我坐在沙发上，对我的大学生活展开了无限的想象。

我，幻想到了我们的校园：东边是许多同学向往的游戏地方，几个阳光大男孩在操场是玩耍，你追我赶；西边是学校里生意葱茏的竹林，翠色一欲流的绿色让人神清气爽，；南边是我们学校知识的地方，朗朗的读书声从教室里传来；北面是敞开的学校大门，上面“长”了许多“尖刺”，为的是不让小偷轻易进入。

我，幻想到了我们的校服：走廊上，千奇百怪的涂鸦映入眼帘。“还我钓一鱼一岛！”“为中华之崛起而读书”呀，原来这些都是爱国的好青年啊！“垫‘十里香’牌鞋垫，要脚不要脸。”“喝肾宝，长生不老。”哟，这些青年长大的梦想原来是做推销员哪！“偶滴肾哪！”“今天不是个好日子。”哎，这些青年正处在伤心的境界。“偶是阎王老子，偶最大！”“我住精神病院302室。”这这———让我叫他们是什么青年好呢？

哎呀！爸爸叫我一起上街，拜拜，下次见！

My schoool life is busy and fantastic。 First， we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon。 We have to get to school before 7：30 because we have a morning class。 Second， I like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful。 We also have lots of after—school activies。 Third， our school environment is very beautiful， the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive。 So I like my school life very much。

Last week I went to mount emei in sichuan province with my family. early in the morning, we took a taxi to beijing west railway station. the station was very lively.

Half an hour later, we got on the train. on the train, we had a lot of fun. after 26 hours, we reached sichuan. there, we took many photos and had a goodtime. 5 days later, we came back to the beijing. even though my travel seemed really short, but my memory of the pleasant trip will last long.

[英语作文五一劳动节旅游生活

Three years of university life will soon be over. In these three years. I deeply feel the university campus life is good and full.

University campus life in general can be divided into several areas. First, and most important, it is the university taught in various disciplines. The reason why we have to university, the most important task is to learn. Learn all kinds of knowledge for our future work of great help. Secondly, it is the study of our campus life. University life relative to the high school life very much. We could command more time to entertainment. We can have more time to develop our hobbies. Then, in the university campus life, we can also know a lot of friends. Not only confined to their class. Because in the University, we will participate in various activities. Through these activities, we will meet many good friends. These friendships in the future are our fortune. Finally, the university life let me understand many principles. It makes me understand a man to bear responsibility. In later life, need to face all kinds of things. But also to understand his parents intentions. Understand their toil.

Through the above facts, we preliminarily know university campus life. All these States, that our university campus life is very full. However, there are a lot of students do not think so. We are all through the university entrance exam to enter the University. In high school, every day we are all in the ongoing efforts of learning. Parents in the spare time for us to arrange the various classes in high school. So, we can say that there is no spare time. To university, no one on our constraint and discipline. We do what you want to do. Dont consider things occurred as a consequence. In the course of time, most students have formed a mental laziness. Mainly in, lazy, every day in the room to play computer games have nothing to do and so on. These bad habits may destroy our life. Therefore, we must make good use of their spare time to eich them. Let him in the social development in the future. Have enough knowledge and development space.

To make a long story short, university campus life is wonderful. University campus life is a precious experience. University campus life will be our most beautiful memories.

[Campus life校园生活英语作文

My Mother

when i sat at the desk, trying to write the essay, i found it hard to set pen to paper. staring at the topic i deliberately chose for myself my mother, i felt the memory of 20 years with my mother suddenly turned into a haze, blurring my eyes to discern the past, with nothing towering, nothing flaring, nothing impressive or special enough as a landmark. the haze gradually cleared away, revealing the image of an amicable woman. i recalled a line from the famous movie sleepless in seattle. the radio column hostess asked sam, whats so special about your wife? he answered, thats millions of small things. right,trivial and commonplace, like obscure beans, yet woven into the most spectacular necklace by the power of love. my mother is ordinary, but in my eyes she is special.

my mother gave birth to me with eceptionally difficult labor. father received an emergency notice and was faced with a choice between the adult and the infant. of course,the adult. so my coming into this world was an unepected fortune at the price of mothers painful insistence. thus my 20 years began like this my mother eerted every effort to give me love, but i returned her with a deep scar that was to stay with her all through my growth.

my mother is a senior high school english teacher. under standably, she wanted her daughter to pick up english early to give her an edge to later study, which i did not understand at the age of eight. i was so obsessed with fun and games that i hated to stay peacefully with all those strange phonetic symbols and odd words. i wondered what pleasure mother seemed to have found in teaching me a,b, c. wasnt teaching at school tire some enough for her? i went on strike, refusing to spell a single word no matter how tender or severe mother tried to be with me. for the first time in my life, mother beat me, imprinting on my mind. the physical pain was gone long, long ago. but i have finally come to understand how it pained my mother to beat me for my obstinacy and disobedience, and i ache at her pain.

mother never gave up evoking in me an interest in knowledge. she placed the most emphasis on my education and took the most pleasure in my gradual formation of self-discipline in preparing myself for future development. thanks to her effort and influence, i have been doing well, not only in english, but also in my positive attitudes and conviction towards life.

now i am so grateful to my mother for everything she has taught me, but at that time it was far beyond my comprehension. as a little girl, i thought of my mother as meticulous and my father as a best playmate. i still remember i wrote in my elementary school a composition dedicated to my father about how he cared for me. naturally mother felt she was ignored, so i wrote another one for mother, intending to tell her she was so good a teacher that she sometimes had only students on mind and neglected her daughter. unepectedly, mother was gloomed and her eyes went wet. i am so sorry now for that affected composition. i am mothers daughter, and i am mothers student. i could never be neglected by mother, because i am the forever scar on her body, the forever pain on her mind, yet the forever bliss in her life.

i did not write much in the past about mothers love for me. today, this essay is for her, and for her only. i wish to let her know my regret and gratitude. i wish she could hear, i love you, mother.

简 评

古往今来，人们都说，母爱是世界上最伟大的爱。作者通过回忆历历往事，用她深情的笔调，为我们谱写了又一首歌颂母亲的赞歌，刻画了一位平凡而伟大的母亲的生动形象，让我们又一次领略到母亲无私奉献的崇高精神。

该散文文笔优美，语言纯正，声情并茂，感人肺腑，愿天下所有的儿女都能像作者一样真正感受到舐犊情深，并回报这份浓厚、纯洁的母爱。

当然，本文在事例具体、内容充实方面还有进一步改进的余地。母亲的形象也似乎略欠丰满。