初三关于元宵节的英语作文【优秀20篇】

The Olympic Games will be held this year.I am so excited and I think the games will be interesting and also fascinating.But now,the important is,how should we do with the Olmpics if I am a volunteer?To solve the problem will be extremely difficult,because nowadays lots of people devote themselves to society and you can not hold an opportunity easily.So just try my best.

We can go to the English Corner to help them to send some DIY newspapers and go to the neighborhood to tell the stories or history about Olmpics to the people who are curious to learn.Also,we can go on the streets to find the problems such as putting away the trash anywhere,saying out the impolite words.That will be meaningful.I am sure that I will succeed.Believe it,do it!

"The fifteenth day of the yuanxiao, thriving off year". The annual Lantern Festival comes! This year, mom and dad took me to the nanjing Confucius temple watching lanterns, entered the Confucius temple, weld bridge not only greeted the tiger tiger tiger tiger lantern, but also the white rabbit lamp, auspicious pigeons lamp, golden orange lamp... Is various and colourful. According to the entire nanjing Confucius temple in the Lantern Festival night like during the day.

More beautiful lanterns exhibition center, wide variety of lanterns here make a person dazzling, see all look not to come over. Look at the light peach, peach pink background, apply some on red, peach bottom has large leaves, green is both beautiful and simple. Look at the tiger lamp, made after the framework, with the shiny gold paper framework, in this way, a lifelike tiger immediately show in front of the eyes. To see the dragon lantern, chasing the orb up, whole body scales glittering, the dragons tail swing. Of the people watching couldnt help to shout: "dragons live! Live!" And...... Is really a long story! Out of the Confucius temple, firecrackers exploding in the air, as if the blasted a hole in the sky, the sky the stars from the sky and down. Quick see! Colorful fireworks from the sky in the distance, suddenly lit up the nanjing city.

Home is around ten o clock in the evening, mother gave each of us cooked a bowl of dumplings. We were eating fat away tangyuan, truly realized according to the family. Ah, the Lantern Festival, true happiness!

“正月十五闹元宵，红红火火过小年”。一年一度的元宵节来临啦!今年爸爸妈妈带我到南京夫子庙看花灯，走进夫子庙文德桥，映入眼帘的不仅有虎虎生威的虎灯笼，而且还有雪白的兔子灯、吉祥的鸽子灯、金黄色的橘灯……真是各式各样、丰富多彩。把整南京夫子庙元宵节夜晚照的如同白天一样。

花灯展示中心更为漂亮，这儿琳琅满目的花灯使人眼花缭乱，看都看不过来。看那桃灯，粉红的底色，桃尖上涂点红色，桃底有翠绿的大叶子，真是既漂亮又简单。再看那虎灯，制作好框架后，用闪闪发亮的金纸糊住框架，这样，一只栩栩如生的老虎就立刻展现在了眼前。再看那龙灯，追着宝珠上下翻腾，全身的鳞片金光闪闪，龙的尾巴不停地摆动。观看的人们情不自禁地喊：“龙活啦!龙活啦!”还有……真是一言难尽啊!走出夫子庙，爆竹在空中炸响，仿佛把天空炸开了一个洞，满天的星星从天空一下撒了下来。快看啊!远处五彩缤纷的烟花从天而降，一下子照亮了南京城外。

回到家里已是晚上十点左右，妈妈给我们每人煮了一碗汤圆。我们一家三口吃着白白胖胖的汤圆，真正体会到了团团圆圆的亲情。 啊，元宵节，真快乐!

导语：狗,作为人类最亲密的伙伴之一,对主人可谓是忠心耿耿,自古就有忠诚的美名。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Last year, my father bought a lovely pet for me. She has four white paws and a white and yellow tail. She has two small ears, two green eyes and eight whiskers on her face. Her name is Sally and she is one year old.

Do you know what it is? A cat? Yes, it is a cat. She has very short fur and she is quite small. She weighs about 2 kilograms. She is usually very friendly and quiet. We never frighten her or pull her tail or ears. She likes walking around me and playing with me.

If she is hungry, she will miaow. Usually, she eats food from a tin, but her favorite food is fish. She likes juice if it is not too cold. She likes to chase and catch mice and sometimes she plays with butterflies. Sally often plays with balls and pieces of string. She does not like dogs and she hates the rain. She likes sitting on the sofa and watching TV.

Sally is a very good friend, but she is quite lazy! She never worries because we take good care of her. She is always a happy cat.

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去年，我的父亲买了一个可爱的宠物我。她有四个白色的爪子和白色和黄色的尾巴。她有两个小耳朵，两个绿色的眼睛和八个胡须在她的脸上。她的名字是莎莉和她一岁。

你知道是什么吗? 一只猫?是的，这是一只猫。她有很短的毛皮和她是相当小。她的体重约2公斤。她平时很友好，环境安静。我们从来不吓唬她还是拉她的尾巴或耳朵。她喜欢走在我身边和我一起玩。

如果她是饿了，她会咪。通常情况下，她吃的食物从锡，但她最喜欢的食物是鱼。她喜欢的果汁，如果它不太冷。她喜欢追逐和捕捉老鼠有时她与蝴蝶玩。莎莉经常玩弄球和串片。她不喜欢狗，她讨厌下雨。她喜欢坐在沙发上，看电视。

萨利是一个很好的朋友，但她还是比较懒惰!她从来不担心，因为我们把她照顾好。她始终是一个快乐的猫。

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People often say that the earth is like our mother. She gives life to all the living things on the earth and provides us with air, food, water and other essential things we need for living.

Once she was beautifhl and rich, but now she becomes dirtier and dirtier, poorer and poorer. It is due to what we have done to her. Please have a good look at her: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wild life, and the depletion of the ozone layer…

Can she bear to see her children putting the waste here and there? Can she bear too see her children cutting down the trees and destroying the grassland, to see the acid rain destroying everything? Can we bear to see our mother suffering so much? Isn it time for us to ask ourselves whether this is the way to treat our mother?

Floods, draughts, acid rain…,these are the punishments from nature. Everyone should know that there is only one earth, lfwe go on treating her like this, it wont be fit for us to live in any longer. Its time for us to love her, take good care of her and cure her. We should save the earth so as to save ourselves.

[The Earth初三英语作文

Lantern Festival evening, my mother and I went to buy rice dumpling Vanguard. Many see the package dumplings aunt, my mother and I also participated. First, we put on gloves, then picked up a small group of dough, rub it round, flattened. Then, the filling on the dough, wrap. Finally, it is rounding. A big round dumplings born! Follow, we pack a lot of stars.

Back home, we can not wait to put the cooked rice balls. I personally do eat rice balls, sweet and fragrant, Yum! The original DIY is the most happy.

元宵节的晚上，我和妈妈去华润万家买汤圆。看见许多阿姨在包汤圆，我和妈妈也参加了。首先，我们戴上手套，再拿起一小团面团，将它搓圆、压扁。接着，把馅料放在面皮上，包好。最后，把它搓圆。一颗又大又圆的汤圆诞生了！跟着，我们又包了很多颗。

回到家里，我们迫不及待地把汤圆煮好。吃着我亲手做的汤圆，又甜又香，味道好极了！原来自己动手是最快乐的。

Lantern Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festival, is also one of the childrens favorite holiday.

Still remember when I was a child of the fireworks are diverse, drill day, a small bees, have all over the sky star, a... Every fifteen, dark night is always a bright day, decorated with are all kinds of fireworks, the reflecting pool. Spring Festival in recent years the state advocates civilization, advocating less people set off firecrackers and fireworks, less so now, the Spring Festival, the lantern in a noisy degree than before, but even so, when the Lantern Festival is still a lively scene.

After ten years of the Lantern Festival, put ten years of fireworks, however, only the most let me remember this year.

Before the Lantern Festival is spent in their own homes, only behind the dinner would be allowed to run into the street with friends. But this year is spent in my uncles house. And because of that, this years Lantern Festival didnt let me so memorable.

Sister-in-law the year before last Septembers just add a child, this year has been one and a half, it is carefree, lively and active, so the scene is particularly lively. We first had a sumptuous dinner, and then enjoy the beautiful fireworks fly kongmin light, the next step is to watch my show little nephew of the age of one and a half.

He also is very good and we in the "audience" interaction, occasionally pulled my 13 year old brother and his dance together, or go to our side to give us a kiss, when we are going to hold him and ran away quickly.

The laughter of the room, the fireworks out of the window is gorgeous. The laughter of the room through the window, across the are in full bloom of fireworks, fly far away...

元宵灯节，是中国传统的节日之一，也是孩童们最喜欢的节日之一。

仍记得小时候的烟花多种多样，有钻天坠，有小蜜蜂，有满天星，有……每到十五，漆黑的夜晚总是亮如白昼，被各色的烟花装点着，照映着。最近几年国家提倡文明春节，提倡人们少放鞭炮，少放烟花，所以现在春节、元宵的热闹程度大不如以前，然而即使如此，元宵灯节时仍是一片热闹场面。

过了十好几年的元宵节，放了十好几年的烟花，然而只有今年最让我记忆深刻。

以前元宵节是在自己家中度过，唯有晚饭后方才被允许跑到大街上与小伙伴们一起。然而今年却是在舅舅家度过。而正因为如此，今年的元宵节才让我如此难忘。

嫂子前年九月份刚添了个小孩儿，今年已一岁半了，正是无忧无虑，活泼好动的时候，所以场面格外的热闹。我们先是吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐，然后欣赏了美丽的烟花并放飞了孔明灯，接下来就是观看我一岁半的小侄子的表演。

他也很会和我们这些‘观众’互动，偶尔拉上我十三岁的弟弟和他一起跳舞，或是跑到我们身边给我们来个飞吻，当我们要去抱他时却又迅速跑开了。

房间内的笑声不断，窗外的烟花也绚烂夺目。房内的笑声穿过窗户，越过正盛开的烟花，向着远方飞去……

Yesterday, there was a discusion in our class. We talked about whether we should do housework or not. I agreed with with Sharon. She said,“The middle school students should do some housework. Because doing housework can let our parents feel relaxed. At the same time, doing housework can train us to be more useful.” I think we should do some housework. Doing housework can improve ourselves. But I also think students’ major job is studying. Doing too much housework is bad for our study. So, I think doing housework is good, but at the same time we should pay more attenion to our study. Right?

[Should the middle school students do housework初三优秀英语作文

There was a sea of people, and the lanterns were gathered together like a meeting. Its hilarious. The lantern dazzled me. The lamp has big, small, color is different, the shape is strange. The most interesting thing is the golden pig lamp. Let me introduce you!

The golden pig lamp was made of several pieces of wire, and the body was made of a few golden sponges. A few smiles on her face. Really cute! It looks like running. The pig tail of the golden pig had a note on it, which said: happy Lantern Festival.

After watching the eye-catching golden pig lamp, go to the green light!

Two hands came out from below, beside the woods and meadows. There is also an o line "stream", "brook" water is really "clear see low" ah. You can think of it as a mirror! There are two bamboo rafts in the "stream" of the word "stream". I think they must be looking at the scenery! How is it? Its beautiful!

In my memory, I will never efface the image of a common service worker.

It was last New Year when all my family members gathered together that suddenly the heating pipe broke up. The warm steam burst forth from the crack. We could do nothing but have a shot at calling the household management center. Fortunately, someone answered it and decided to send a person here.

Ten minutes later, a middle-aged man came. He quickly shut the valve, but one of his hand was hurt by a spine carelessly. Not having a rest, he replaced the broken pipe. It took him half an hour to finish replacing it. Only after that did he remember his injured hand.

In our thankful sight, he disappeared in the curtain of night. He must have been getting together with his family, but he did the job for the sake fo others’ convenience at this special night. What a nice man! I will never forget him.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：I WontForgetHim

Lantern Festival is a traditional festival in China. This years Lantern

Festival, our school organized a unique "Happy Lantern Festival" activity!

Before the activity started, I came to the activity site of writing

couplets and waited. Look! The contestants smiled one by one. They all looked

confident. You and I exchanged the written content one by one. I calmly came to

the writing desk, took out the carefully prepared brush, drove light and

familiar to write seriously, and soon a few big words came out.

Then, I quickly joined the lively activity of wrapping dumplings. Kneading

noodles is the first and crucial step in making dumplings. Our group poured the

prepared flour into the basin, poured some water, kneaded a large dough with the

help of the students parents, and then distributed it equally to each member.

Everyone thought and thought. They added all kinds of juice to the dough. After

kneading, it became colorful and very beautiful. Just listen to "the dumpling

filling is coming..." everyone, you argue with me and start wrapping dumplings.

I first squeezed the dough in the palm of my hand and patted it into a cake

shape, then closed my palm slightly and added stuffing to it. At this time, I

accidentally threw sesame sugar all over the floor in a hurry. I regret it! It

took a lot of effort to make several dumplings. The students next to them are

not like this. They pinch the dough of appropriate size, gently flatten it and

add stuffing, then put their hands up, rub it, and gently knead it into small

and exquisite dumplings. It is a sharp contrast with my dumplings, which is

enviable.

When the glutinous rice balls are put into the pot, we wait nearby. Its

called a hurry. We cant wait to eat them directly from the pot! After a long

waiting period, the glutinous rice balls finally came out of the pot. With a

gentle bite, the soft skin immediately melted away in my mouth. The smell of

fruit juice and sesame came to my nostrils and turned into a wonderful force.

Once and again, it made me particularly satisfied and gave me endless

aftertaste.

At the end of the activity, the students gathered to take a group photo of

the class. Although I stood at the edge, I smiled brightly because I was

particularly happy today. This is this years Lantern Festival - a lively

Festival!

元宵节是我国传统节日，今年的元宵节，我们学校组织了一场别开生面的“欢乐闹元宵”活动!

活动还没开始，我便来到写对联的活动现场等待，瞧!选手们一个个面露笑容，都是一副胸有成竹的样子，你一句我一句交流着书写的内容。我不慌不忙地来到书写台前，拿出精心准备好的毛笔，驾轻熟路地认真书写起来，不一会儿端端正正的几个大字就出来了。

紧接着，我又快速加入到热闹非凡的包汤圆活动中。揉面是包汤圆的第一步，也非常关键的一步，我们小组把事先准备好的面粉倒入面盆里，倒入些水，在学生家长的帮助下，揉出了个大面团，而后等分的分配给每个成员。大家各思奇想，往面团里加了各色果汁，揉搓后成了五颜六色，十分好看。只听“汤圆馅来了……”，大家你争我抢地开始包汤圆。我先把面团捏在手掌心里，拍成饼状，再手掌微微合拢，往里面加馅，就在这时不小心手忙脚乱地把芝麻糖撒了一地，后悔极了!好不容易费了九牛二虎之力搓成了几个汤圆。旁边的同学可不这样，他们捏起大小合适的面团，轻轻压平后往里加馅，然后双手往上一顶，搓一搓，轻轻一揉就成一个个小巧玲珑的汤圆，和我的汤圆放在一起，简直就是鲜明的对比，令人好生羡慕。

当汤圆下锅时，我们在旁边等着，那叫一个急啊，恨不得直接从锅里捞上来就吃!在漫长的等待期后，汤圆终于出锅了，我轻轻一咬，柔嫩的外皮在嘴里立马化掉，果汁的味儿和芝麻的味儿扑鼻而来，化为一股奇妙的力量，一次一次让我格外满足，让我回味无穷。

活动结束时，同学们聚在一起拍班级合影，我虽然站在最边上的位置，但我笑得却很灿烂，因为我今天格外开心。这就是今年的元宵节——一个热闹的节日!

My Happy Times During Winter Vacation

I often go to see my grandma and grandpa during winter vacation. They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning and breathing the fresh air in the countryside. After snow, I would like to skate and ski with my friends. When night comes, I am used to sitting by the fire and listening to grandma telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go back, I am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.

Hello, Everybody! I am very glad to stand here to give you my introduction. I am from Liangbing Middle School. I am studying in Class 1,Grade 7. I love my hometown Liangbing because it’s a very beautiful town.

I have many hobbies, such as reading books, listening to music, surfing the Internet and traveling. But listening to music is my favorite. I like pop music best. My idol are Jay. I am a lively girl. I like making friends and chatting with them. I can play the Chinese Kungfu. I passed all ten levels when I was in Grade 5.However, because of the busy study, I don’t have any free time to practise it. What a pity!I am good at Math and English and I like English better. In my opinion, it’s very easy and fun to learn and use English and this contest is a great chance for me to learn English from others. My saying is god help those who help themselves and I will never give up during my course of learning.

Now, after listening to my introduction, do you know me well?

That’s all. Thank you!

How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.

I had so many memories in three years’life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then，she has kept helping me.

Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

This year,I had an exciting Spring festival.Do you want to know about it?Let me tell you! First, I went to ocean park with my family in Hongkong.It was very relaxing there.I ate the sea food.I played with the dolphins! I was really happy there!

Then,we went to the Disneyland. It was very romantic.We enjoyed our selves there.It reminded our mind to our childhood! If we will have another chance to visit Hongkong.We will come there again!

This is my spring festival!What about you?

[盘点初三英语作文：The exciting Spring Festival

Anything can happen in this rapidly changing society. People who cant

believe in miracles are impossible to achieve miracles and to create miracles.

In fact, sometimes it is easy to get a miracle. If you dont hesitate, you can

do it. Good luck, you think, is the result of action. The only way to catch the

seemingly impossible is to go after it. It is impossible to create a miracle if

you are satisfied with the status quo, doubt everything, and fear the

failure.

Environment is a basic human existence conditions, if we destroy the environment, it is ruined our survival conditions.

At present, the ecological environment is becoming more and more bad, is the greatest influence on our water resources. According to the relevant information reported: the laying of drainage system and detergent used to grow, consume the oxygen in the water, fish died, deterioration of ecosystem. Human activities can make a lot of industrial and agricultural pollutants into the water, the water is polluted. The world each year about 4200 sewage into the river, polluting the 5. 5 trillion of fresh water.

This is how the startling fact, protect the environment is everyone duty, why want to destroy?

Lies a small river near my grandmas home, on the bottom, before my sister and brother in ones childhood often swimming in the river, and their friends to play in the water, uncles and aunts are often in the river to wash clothes, wash dishes, and now, near the river built a chemical plant, the production of waste water discharge into the river, originally the bottom stream gradually turned into a black sending out the smell of the river. The adults never go to the river to wash clothes to wash the dishes, friends never go to the river to play, too!

How I miss the crystal-clear stream! I think: cherish resources, good care environment, these are GongZaiDangDai, force and art event! If we are in such polluted water, that we can use water resources will be less and less, we destroy the environment, is destroying our living conditions.

Let us join hands to jointly protect the environment, dont let water into water, protect the environment, is our common responsibility!

环境是一个人类生存最基本的条件，如果我们破坏了环境，这等于破坏了我们生存的条件。

目前，生态环境日益恶劣，对我们影响最大的就是水资源。据有关资料报道：排水系统的铺设和清洁剂的使用有增无减，消耗水中的氧，使鱼类死亡，生态系统恶化。人类的活动会使大量的工业、农业污染物排入水中，使水受到污染。全世界每年约有4200多亿的污水排入河中，污染了5。5万亿的淡水。

这是多么让人触目惊心的事实啊，保护环境是人人有责的，为什么要破坏呢?

我外婆家附近有一条小河，以前清澈见底，我的姐姐、哥哥小时候常常在小河里游泳，和他们的小伙伴们在水中嬉戏，叔叔、阿姨们也常常在这小河中洗衣服、洗菜，而如今，小河旁建造了一个化工厂，把生产的废水排放到河里，原本那清澈见底的小河渐渐变成了黑黑的散发着怪味的小河。大人们再也不去小河洗衣服洗菜了，小伙伴们也再也不去河里嬉戏!

我多么怀念那条清澈见底的小河啊!我想：珍惜资源，爱护环境，这些都是功在当代、力及千秋的大事啊!如果我们在这样污染水，那我们可以用的水资源就会越来越少，我们破坏环境，就是破坏我们生存的条件。

让我们携起手来，共同保护环境，不要让淡水变成污水，保护环境，是我们共同的责任!

March 6th, 2014

Dear Mr Li,

李老师：

I’m sorry to tell you that I have to ask for sick leave for the whole afternoon class. Because I have a heavy headache now and feel very sick. I think I have to ask for sick leave to go to hospital for medicine. I will attend the next day classes on time.

我很抱歉地告诉你，我想请一整个下午的病假。因为我现在头很疼而且感觉很难受。我觉得我必须得请假去医院看医生。我会准时参加明天的课。

Yours repectful,

Tim

蒂姆

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要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

Today is the annual Lantern Festival. Speak of the Lantern Festival everybody will be talking about watching lanterns. The lanterns are really everything, there is the peacock lamp, bright red orange lamp, regimes, split, chang e...

The Lantern Festival this day, our family on the city square! Stroll, heart couldnt help thinking: this is to navigate in the sky, or in wonderland? I cant believe this is yuanxiao nights wandering the streets. I wear in the comings and goings of stream of people, came to the most lively place, I stand on a higher stage looked around in, saw the elegant peacock lamp, a symbol of auspicious red orange lamp, with a glass of regimes, and exquisite "split", "chang e", "wuyi scenery"... Everything in the lights of radiation this flowery glorious, really let a person too many things to see, dazzling.

But only the lamp is too boring! For people, however, public plaza have many performances, are: the dragon dance, tai chi, and so on. Especially the dragon dance is the most good-looking. A vibrant faucet is grandpa play to life. Sometimes, when grandpa also put the head turned several rounds. See come out is two big dragon, one is yellow, another is blue, very beautiful. Two dragons blowing a cloud in the sky, up and down from time to time as the wonderful modelling, driving the audience warm applause. Later, a golden dragon, it is covered with golden coat, glittering under the moon to shine on, appear very spectacular.

The moon gradually the west I unwilling to leave. But people view lamp or an endless stream, all kinds of colored lights, like stars in the sky, puts glorious greatly. Its "night drunk lanterns, only the awaken of spring thick."

今天是一年一度的元宵节。一说起元宵节大家一定会说起看花灯。这花灯可真是应有尽有，有孔雀灯、大红橘灯、走马灯、天女散花、嫦娥奔月......

元宵节这天，我们一家人在市民广场上!逛着，心里不由得想：这是在遨游天空，还是在梦游仙境?我真不敢相信这是元宵之夜的街市游逛。我在来来往往的人流中穿来挤去，来到最热闹的地方，我站在一个比较高的石台上放眼四望，看见了那典雅的孔雀灯，象征着吉庆的大红橘灯，镶有玻璃镜的走马灯，还有精巧的“天女散花”、“嫦娥奔月”、“武夷风光”......一切都在灯火中放射这绚丽光彩，真让人目不暇接，眼花缭乱。

可是只有灯火实在太单调了!不过，市民广场给人们准备了许多表演，有：舞龙、太极拳，等等。尤其是舞龙最好看。一个生机勃勃的龙头被老爷爷耍得活灵活现。有时候，老爷爷们还把龙头转了几圈。只见出来的是两条巨大的龙，一条是黄色的，另一条是蓝色的，非常漂亮。两条龙在空中吞云吐雾、上下翻腾，不时摆出一个个精彩的造型，引来观众一阵阵热烈的掌声。后来又出来一条金色的龙，它披着金色的外衣，在月亮地照耀下金光闪闪，显得十分壮观。

月亮渐渐西落我依依不舍地离开。但观灯的人还是络绎不绝，各种彩色的灯像天上的繁星一样，大放光彩。真是“一夜花灯醉，只缘春意浓。”

Days are consumed by time, and in the vortex of time, there is a memory of those forgotten memories. In preparatory department on the first floor was once very spread that yet we strongly lang lang to home, national under the teachers water, we from young children grew up, but in the teachers eyes, we are still children.

Year after year, time is in the "destiny compass" flow, new environment is meeting us constantly. At that moment in the hand of the book, time seemed to pass away, and the memory of the memory was scattered, laughing and sobbing. Its always accompanied by this sour stock.

Primary school life gradually to drain away from the fingers, it is like a book of intangible, the image of the characterization of our primary school life, until the sixth grade, the literal shu inside seem to be thin, it is very thick thick, but always cant avoid the ravages of time, we always seem to be particularly vulnerable, in which seems to be touched will become to a pulp, waiting for us only to leave, the innocence of childhood was a little bit of time to cut pieces, pieces, only disappear.

The weather-beaten campus has seen through us all, past footprints, bruises, frustrations...

One, two, three... One by one I counted, those precious articles, knowledge treasure like amber deposits in underground in one thousand, with not only books in the bookcase, and instructing teachers work wholeheartedly.

The campus is our home, the new beginning, the new beginning is here and the end...

译文

日子不断被时间吞噬，在时间的漩涡中，总蕴藏着被那些遗忘的回忆。在小学部一楼曾经传来我们那一声声铿锵有力的朗朗读书声，在老师心血的浇灌下，我们从稚嫩的孩童渐渐长大，但在老师眼里，我们还是孩子。

一年又一年，时间在“命运罗盘”中流，新的环境在不断迎接着我们。在那手持书本的一瞬间，时光似乎回逝从前，脑海里全是零零散散的记忆碎片，欢笑声，哭泣声中。总是伴随这一股股酸涩。

小学的生活渐渐从指缝中流走，它像是一本无形书，形象的刻画着我们的小学生活，直到六年级，里面的字面俞显得稀薄，它很厚很厚，但是总是避免不了时光的摧残，身在其中的我们总是显得特别脆弱，似乎一触动就会变得体无完肤，等待着我们的只剩离别，童年的天真被时间一点点地割碎，碎片呢，只有消失不见。

饱经风霜的校园看透了我们的一切，经过的足迹，伤痕，坎坷…

一本，两本，三本……我一本一本地数着，那些宝贵的文章、知识宝藏犹如千年琥珀蕴藏在地下，书柜里塞满的不仅仅是书，还有老师呕心沥血的教诲。

校园是我们的家，新的开始，新的起点在这儿启程，也在这里终结…

The annual Lantern Festival, the mother would give I buy a rabbit lamp, but when I was big Lantern Festival is let me unforgettable.

"Month as do hope tonight..." The fifteenth day of the moon is big and round, like a tracts. All of us kids in xinfeng "slipped" in the park together with his beloved lamp.

Xinfeng park is lively, everywhere decorated. One of the strange little lanterns and a lantern riddle. Some people look at the lights, some people in the guess riddles...

Our lamp have different characteristics, has attracted many tourists. Is red, red peach I pull the lamp, as long as gently pull it will slowly opened, suddenly "fly" from the inside out a walking on the Monkey King, clap for visitors watched constantly. Small yu sun wukong will wield it great. Xiao lis Long Denghui running around, eyes will shine! The day is the most lovely rabbit lamp, is also has an open lotus flower lamp.

Pull a lamp in a cheerful voice. We are a forward run side by side, in a short while chasing each other, with one for a while.

All the lights, the most is the rabbit lamp, because its kind, lovely, brought peace and happiness for our holiday.

There are many traditional festival, our Chinese nation with ethnic characteristics, I like a Chinese festival.

每年的元宵节，妈妈都会给我买兔子灯，但是在我大班那年的元宵节却让我难以忘怀。

“今夜月明人尽望……”正月十五的月亮又大又圆，像玉盘似的。我们全体小朋友一起在丰镇公园里“溜”着心爱的灯。

丰镇公园里可真热闹，到处张灯结彩。一个个奇形怪状的小灯笼上还有一个个灯谜。有的人在看灯，有的人在猜灯谜……

我们的灯各有特点，吸引了很多游客。我拉的是红红的桃子灯，只要轻轻一拉它就会慢慢地打开，忽然从里面“飞”出一个腾云驾雾的孙悟空，游人看了不停地拍手叫好。小宇的孙悟空灯会挥动它的金箍棒。小李的龙灯会跑来跑去，眼睛还会发亮呢!小天拉的是最可爱的兔子灯，小乐也有一个会打开的莲花灯。

兴高采烈地拉着灯。我们一会儿并排向前跑，一会儿互相追逐，一会儿你追我赶。

所有的灯中，最多的是兔子灯，因为它善良、可爱，给我们的节日带来了幸福平安。

我们中华名族有许多传统的节日，具有名族特色，我喜欢过中国节。