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最后一星期英文经典20篇

星期天真快乐,我喜欢星期天!愿每个小朋友的星期天都能像我一样开心,小编收集了星期天真好作文,欢迎阅读。

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“老大”进京培训,她不在的第三天,开始想她。

距离老大回来还有五天,但我觉得她好像从未离开过我们。这一切都是拜现代高科技所赐。甚至有一天上课时还要麻烦千里之外的老大关心我们黑板有没有擦干净,真是太不应该了。

在这一星期,我们留影无数。每节课上、课下,以至课间,都会被一些老师出其不意地拍下来传到老大那边,然后老大又传到微信群里。那你直接传到微信群里不就好了吗?也可以让家长们看看孩子们那未加雕琢的“嘴脸”。由于每天都有老师拍照,在几次落马之后,团结友爱的九年一班终于出现了一类机敏的同学。他们可以在老师刚掏出手机时就摆好姿势,且通知身边所有人“要照相了,赶紧转过来”云云。所以再看我们的老师发出去的一张张群像……同学们之所以能被拍出全神贯注的美感,他们功不可没。但是是否应该提醒他们一下还有监控这件事呢?

在这一星期里,我终于学会了放飞自我并完成了在英语上做语文题的夙愿。老大走之前讲完了所有新课,留给我们的只有成套的卷子和单词卷。所以在这一星期里英语课就是不停地写卷子。写完交卷,就无所事事了。有一天,在我的坚持不懈下,终于用剩下的时间写完了语文作业,并弹出了一个成就。

在这一星期里,我也同样学会了自律。大课间跑步时,就算没有人看着,也会义无反顾地“英勇就义”,冲进教学楼外那凛冽的寒风中,也许只有这时才能真正领悟老大对我们说过的那句话:我不在的时候才能体现出你们是不是真的懂事。一个人要多久才能明白老师对你说过的话呢?也许只要一节课,一天……而我,用了一个星期。

这是一个特殊的星期。在这个星期里,老大不在,也许我们也曾有过“猫不在,老鼠呛须”的时候,但更多的,还是一切如常的平静。也许生活中更多的时候就是这样,少了一双在背后盯着你的眼睛,内心反倒多了几分平静。

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篇1:满分作文英文阅读Englishreading

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假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:

1. 参加英语角的益处;

2. 坚持写英语日记的作用;

3. 英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。

注意:1. 词数:120-150;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I take an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot.

作为一个高中生,我认为英语是一个非常重要的学科。为了学好英语,除了英语课之外,我还积极参加英语角和英语课外活动,这对我来说很有好处。

In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. Besides, sometimes some foreigners are glad to join us. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. I also find it useful to keep English diaries. I have been keeping on doing it for years and it is helpfl to my English. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only by practice will we make rapid progress. Finally, EnjoyReaing contributes a lot of my improvement. Through the English website, I can read some classic English passages, poems and stories. What’s more, I can learn a lot, which play an important part in my study process.

在英语角,我遇到了很多朋友,他们和我有着相同的兴趣。此外,有时也有一些外国人愿意加入我们。通过与他们交谈,我的英语口语进步了很多。我还发现有助于保持英语日记。我一直坚持做了多年,这对我的英语有帮助。俗话说,实践是完美的。只有通过实践我们才能快速进步。最后,喜欢阅读贡献我的很多改进。通过英文网站,我可以阅读一些经典的英文文章,诗歌和故事。更重要的是,我可以学到很多,这在我的学习过程中扮演一个重要的部分。

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篇2:希望世界和平作文英文

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Although every day we ate hamburgers, French fries, drink a chocolate drink, one family reunion round together, I think this is a happy life.

Mom and dad always said joy of peace, but I am very strange, it is made up of those world war?

Some time ago, a sensation in the world of the war in Iraq, I saw the Iraqi refugee camp residents on TV, where they eat, can hear the child crying every day. Look at the battlefield, many corpses lying spread all across in confusion, these soldiers land was stained with blood, and artillery bombardment of the aircraft shot down the bomb, can whenever and wherever possible sounded, oh, this is a time of peace and happiness of life?

Now TV stations are playing Taiwan every day to be independent. China is negotiating with Taiwan. I am a Chinese and have the responsibility to pay attention to national events. I think Taiwan is an inseparable part of China, even if it has not returned to the mothers embrace of the motherland, but it is the "son" of the mother of the motherland.

Television is a popular theme of Japanese television drama, I saw Chinese workers in Japan at the scene, Chinese Japanese in order to complete the project after go home, what have suffered, and hateful to Japanese after they finish the project all day I kill them, how hateful ah, I feel sad Chineses death, and pride is more Chinese firm and inflexible spirit!

I hope the world is full of peace and never have war!

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篇3:假如我有星期八作文

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大雾还未散去,路灯还未熄灭,太阳还未升起,我便被闹钟无情地吵醒,无奈之下我只好离开温暖的被窝。洗漱完毕后,我习惯性地走向日历台,一边走,一边嘀咕着:“前两天刚上完一大堆的补习班,特长班,今天又要上学,唉!"我看着日历,”12月xx日,星期八,啊,星期八!”我惊讶的说,揉揉眼睛发现“星期八”那三个字仍然若无其事的躺在那里,我兴奋地跺着脚,笑得眼睛都快眯成一条缝了。

幸福来得太突然,我竟不知该做些什么,看着还带点阴暗的天空,我不紧不慢的整理好被子,衣着。忙了一阵后,天已经亮了,我怀着期待的心情蹦蹦跳跳地出了门。哦!原来星期八这么有魔力,让人的心情都变得明朗起来,烦恼全忘光光了。当我走在离家不远的一条马路上时,我感叹道:“马路也这么美。”高旷的天空,涂上白漆的树,路上的行人,一切是那样安静祥和。忽然一阵香气向这边飘来,我顺着香味找到了一家热闹的包子铺,看队伍还不太长,我也加入了买包子的队伍.轮到我了,我向老板要了两个香喷喷的肉包,平时都是一口一个馒头后解决早餐的我很少这样细细地品尝。吃完后我坐上公交车来到南塔公园爬山,山虽然不高,但对于我这个不常锻炼的人也足够了。进入南塔公园我便欢乐的跑跳,这里的花草树木,这里的人都可以成为让我欢乐的理由。等我爬到半山腰是已是喘着粗气,热的不行了,我再次向塔顶望去,望着塔顶,我的眼神更加坚定了,我稍稍休息了一会儿,又向高塔进发。终于到达高塔了,我异常兴奋,仔细地观察这座塔。临近午饭的时间,我急急忙忙地下山,差点就摔跤了。

下山后我找到一家小餐馆大吃起来,吃饱喝足了,我来到了“天天甜甜”想做一些饼干给爸爸妈妈吃,尽管他们对我要求高,但也是为我好。打开店门,迎面而来的是饼干的香味,店主很有礼貌地向我问好,手洗干净,材料也准备好了,我笨拙地揉面,一旁的服务员看见我狼狈的摸样立马上前帮忙,还细心的教我。在服务员的指导下面粉总算揉好了,接下来就可以任意用模具印出自己喜欢的图形,我突发奇想,用手捏出了一个“爸爸妈妈”的字,并小心翼翼的放在烤盘上,过了一小时,所有的面粉都做完了.最后一项工序也是最重要的一项工序就是烘烤,我时不时地往烘烤间里看,二十分钟到了,叮咚一声把我吓了一跳,我迫不及待地让服务员把饼干拿出来,服务员告诉我现在太烫了,等凉一点再包装.等了五分钟,饼干变暖了,我手里的盒子派上用场了,我细心的把饼干装好.抬头看了看店里的挂钟,已经四点了.当我再次走在那条马路上时,看见一位街头乞讨的老人趴在地上,他的头发乱糟糟的,衣服破旧不堪,单薄至极,我毫不犹豫地走上前去在他的碗里放了三元,还给了他一盒小饼干,那位乞讨老人不停地说着谢谢,我知道这些对我们算不了什么,但对一个流浪者已是莫大的帮助.我更希望星期八的魔力能帮助这位可怜的老人。

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篇4:父亲节英文日记

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Father, how great words; The father love, how beautiful melody. Dear dad,

when busy, can you find such a festival of fathers day?

Today, is my dads first holiday, I carefully prepared a card, then tape

posted a petal in the upper left corner. It with the aromatic, with my feelings,

as the wind blows gently, the beautiful kind hearts float into dad.

The father loves the warmth in June and Thanksgiving. When I was in

elaborate greeting card, write the handwriting which asm, I hand in trembling,

my heart in the jump, the sincere words from time to time pull at my heart!

In fact, fathers love is gentle, father use it rough hands stroked my head;

Dad with his warm words of comfort me; When he humorous language make me

laugh... At that time, I really realized the father loves the also gentle.

Dad is the pillar of the family, when his broad shoulders to assume the

burden of the family; When I found a piece of white silk on his head; When I

find the wrinkles on his face. My heart is with sour.

Generation of letters, mostly because their children mother selfless and

moved, so for the selfless love left countless love. And for the whole family

outside the hustle and bustle of the father? Nothing left.

Here, I want to sing loudly fathers love is great!

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篇5:我的入学考试英文作文

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for going on with my further studies, i took the entrance examination in a senior middle school last week。 i still remember there were more than three hundred candidates taking part in this examination。 for the first day, in the morning, chinese was easy。 we were required to write a composition of 250 words on "my home life", and give definitions and illustrations to twenty phrases。 in the afterno on, we took an english examination。 there were dictation, sentence formation, and analysis for oral english。 in the oral examination, i was questioned about my home life, my experience in the junior middle school and my future prospects。

on the second day, we were examined on history and geography in the morning and physics and chemistry in the afternoon。

“我的入学考试”英语作文译文:

为了进一步学习,我上周在一所高中参加了入学考试。我还记得参加考试的有300多人,第一天上午,语文很简单,我们要写一篇250字的作文,关于“我的家庭生活”,并解释20个短语。下午,我们考英语,有听力,造句,分析口语。口语考试时,我被问道我的生活,中学经历以及未来的希望。

第二天,我们早上考历史、地理,下午考物理、化学。

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篇6:介绍家乡的作文英文

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Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce ourcity--Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in thenortheast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has apopulation of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest inHeyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place.The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You cango boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place tospend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you cansee a lot of dinosaur egg fossils. I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

看到别人的家乡如此美丽,你是否也想介绍一下自己的家乡呢?赶紧也来写一篇介绍家乡的英语作文吧!

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篇7:描写人的英文

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My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy‘s hair are not many, he said "the intelligent head does not grow hair",daddy does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpass in one day-long.

He usually educate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently.

This is my father, I love him forever.

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篇8:我的偶像英文作文

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The theme of the 101 class is idol show.

We did not compete today, just watching the movie "Lu Xun", the film was compiled by Pu Cunxi and Zhang Yu. This documentary is about three years before the death of Mr. Lu Xuns story, tells the story of Mr. Lu Xun pen and struggle for the revolution that ningsibuqu great patriotic spirit. After seeing this film, I feel very deep. I think we should all learn from him. Maybe we cant do his kind of big, but we should all be at least a patriotic young pioneers. We are the future of our motherland, and we should try our best to win glory for our motherland.

Diaoyu Island is Chinas inherent territory, and never allow other people to infringe upon it. We are the future of our motherland, and we will join hands to protect the world!

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篇9:描写冬天的作文英文

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Winter came, and the snow was falling. The trees were so cold that they took off their green coats and put on a white coat. The earth also took off its colorful coat and put on a snow-white coat.

Suddenly, just listen to “ jichajizha ” the sound, I looked out of the window look, the original is the children in the snowman, snowball fights, play happy.

The roadside plum blossom opened, spit out the elegant fragrance, a gust of wind blowing, the petals of a plum blossom, then one fell, like the red butterfly flying down.

Well, the scenery is beautiful in winter!

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篇10:我的房间大学英文作文

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Hi,this is my bedroom. There is a big table, white curtains. The closet is near the big table. Many clothes are in the closet.The trashbin is behind the door.The mirror is under the air conditioner.Whats on the table?There is a computer. I often play computer games. Do you like my room? Whats your room like? Can you tell me, please?

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篇11:武汉和平中学英文作文

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Our shool, Wuhan Heping Middle School, lies in the center of Wuhan city。 It was just built and has the perfect size。 The school yard is two hundred meters long, one hundred meters wide, and is surrounded by trees。

When you walk throught the front gate, there is a huge garden that greets you with every kind of natural things。 To the left is the school library in which there are more than 100, 000 books。 To the right is the experiment building。 In the very middle of the school yard stands the teaching building that stretches for one hundred and fifty meters。 This teaching building has four floors with the teachers offices at either end of each floor。 Standing on the top of the teaching building, you can see a flower bed。 Behind the teaching building is a large playground on the right side。 The students often do sports here after class。 To the left lies the dining hall which can hold 500 people。 This is our school, a beautiful one。

我们的学校,武汉和平中学,位于武汉市的中央。学校刚刚建立,规模适当。校园长2百米,宽1百米,四面环绕着树木。

当你进入前门时,一个具有各种自然风景的巨大花园在欢迎你。左边是图书馆,馆内藏书10万多册。右边为实验楼。校园的正中央是长150米的教学楼。该楼共四层,两头为教师办公室。站在教学楼楼顶,你能看到楼前有一个花园,楼后右侧是一个大操场,课后同学们经常在这做运动。左边是可容纳500人的食堂。这就是我们的学校,一座美丽的学校。

Our school, Wuhan Heping Middle School, is in the center of Wuhan city。 The school yard is two hundred meters long, one hundred meters wide, and is surrounded by trees。 It is 20, 000 square meters in area。

When you walk into the school yard, you will see a wide road in front of you。 On your left, you will see the school library in which there are more than 100, 000 books。 On your right is the experiment building, Walk ahead,and you will see a beautiful garden in front of you。 When you go through it,there stands the teaching building: It has four floors with the teachers of rices at either end of each floor。 Behind it, there stands the dining-room on the left side。 To the right lies the playground where the students often play football。 This is our school, a beautiful one。

我们的学校,武汉和平中学,位于武汉市的中央,校园长2百米,宽1百米,四面环绕树木。校园占地2万平方米。

当你走进校园时,你会发现你的面前是一条宽阔的道路。左侧有一座图书馆,馆内藏书10万多册,右侧是实验楼。再往前走,是一个美丽的花园。穿过花园是一座教学楼,共四层,两头为教师办公室。在教学楼的后面,左侧是食堂,右侧是一个大操场,学生们经常在这踢球。这就是我们的学校,一座美丽的学校。

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篇12:英文日记

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A man who is careful in choosing friends will certainly derive benefit from

them. Why? Because there are more false friends than real ones in this world. To

have one real friends is better than a hundred false ones. Friends who flatter

you to your face are not true friends.

We must make friends with those who have good character and kindness of

heart. On the other hand, we should do our best to a void keeping company with

bad people.

一个小心选择朋友的人一定会从他们那里获得益处。为什么?因为在这个世界里假朋友比真朋友要多。有一个真朋友要比有一百个假朋友来得好。凡是当面奉承你的朋友不是真朋友。

我们必须和凡是具有良好品格和心地善良的人交朋友。反过来说,我们应尽力避免结交坏人。

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篇13:写给笔友的一封信英文范文

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Dear Li Lin,

Last mouth I went to spend my summer holiday in Beijing.I thought Chinese people were very kind to us.But there was a problem that I couldnt understand.When we went out,I often heard people ask me some questions like these:"Have you had your meal""Where are you going"and so on.I was puzzled about it.Can you give me some explanation?

Im looking forward to your letters.

With best wishes,

Yours,

Dave

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篇14:关于滑雪的英文

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Yesterday, the weather was good, cloudless. My father and I went to the military areplaying Ski Resort. We wear gloves, hats, armed to come to the ski slopes. Ski resort built on a hillside, looking ahead, the white snow everywhere. Built on the hillsidelike a long white carpet. I help my father in the next, put on ski boots, foot on skis, I looked at the sloping slopes, she did not hesitate to slip down. I seem to fly up, ears only hear the sound of the wind. Soon he went to the lower slope. Time always flies in the joy of particularly fast. Seeing red is gone, we reluctantly left this lovely world of ice.

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篇15:致客户的一封信英文

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Dear customers

hello everyone!

First of all, on behalf of all colleagues of _ Co., Ltd., we would like to

eXtend our sincere greetings and heartfelt wishes to our distinguished

customers!

With the support of friends from all walks of life, especially from

customers, our company has made great achievements in 20_ and continues the

development trend of e-commerce. We have withstood the competitive pressure

brought about by the instability of e-commerce and the fluctuation of a large

number of online shopping malls, and achieved fruitful results; the new shopping

mall 20_ has been revamped and launched. Taobao flagship store is also in

preparation, and is eXpected to go online by the end of this year.

The products needed by customers have always been in short supply.

Sometimes the eXtended delivery cycle has brought inconvenience or trouble to

customers. Here, I would like to eXpress my deep apology.

It is gratifying that the e-commerce Department has entered the sprint

stage, and the company will continue to strengthen investment in advertising

technology, and its factories will continue to introduce new production

lines,

Under the premise of ensuring the quality, we should strengthen the

production of products

At that time, the bottleneck of production capacity restriction will break

through at one stroke, the needs of customers will be met in time, and we will

deliver satisfactory answers for customers.

Its a great honor for us to cooperate with our distinguished customers. We

sincerely appreciate your support and cooperation. You cooperate with us in

market development to achieve mutual benefit and win-win results. We have

established a good relationship of common development with you, which will be

consolidated and strengthened under the careful maintenance and cultivation of

both sides. Your success and brilliance have brought about the development and

growth of our enterprise.

Make 100% efforts, let the customer 100% satisfaction, this is our business

purpose. The times and society are constantly progressing, and our products and

services should also keep pace with the times. We sincerely look forward to your

esteemed customers to put forward higher requirements for our products and

services, so that our enterprises can provide you with better products and

services.

On the occasion of the launch, on behalf of me and our enterprise, I would

like to eXpress my heartfelt thanks and respect to the respected customers once

again!

I sincerely wish the respected customers great success and prosperity!

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篇16:4月14日、晴、星期

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今天的日子还真是难过呢,不停的在完成我的任务,看着面前面那大堆的复习资料,像小山似的作业,我忽然间觉得很迷茫:我们这样一天到晚的拼死拼活的赶作业,到底为了什么呢?为了中考?那中考又是为了什么?疑惑,不解——为什么呢?

班会课很快就来临了,班主任和我们讲了很多,很多。她一下子将我心中的迷雾全部拨开,马上就见到了那苍茫的蓝天。是啊,在这个物质欲横流的社会上,想要在众多的人中脱引而出,只能凭学历。据说到我们这一届时,五年制大专将全部取消,也就是说:如果考不上高中,面临的,就是踏上社会,开始工作生涯。我们的压力还真是很重呢。或许,我们真的只能用成绩来说话,以分数来一较高下吧。

中考,我会竭尽全力的来迎接你的到来,加油吧!

青春,不是玩世不恭;青春,不是桀骜不驯;青春,更不是叛逆不琢。青春里洋溢着友情,让我们感悟真诚的幸福;青春里伴随着亲情,让我们体会人生的美好;青春里拥有过风雨,让我们走向成熟的季节。

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篇17:朋友眼中的我英文作文

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In the face shape like a grandmother; single eyelids eyes with Grandpa muscular body is as like as two peas; dad again; genetic white skin, smiling appearance from the mother, this is me.

My classmates say Im helpful and kind-hearted; the teacher said my understanding, is a good helper; my mother said I always "today, today"; my father said I learned calligraphy and violin is the spirit of "persist in the end, never give up;" grandma said I encounter difficulties, always think of ways to solve my sister said; eat slowly, often put into hot food to eat cold food; brother said I played very crazy, often knocked over the cup. In the eyes of everyone, I am such a person.

Like reading, I found my dream from the treasure island, holding the curiosity of the world, I want to become a traveler around the world, so I try to learn foreign languages, hope that dreams come true.

Thank you for accompanying my family, let me know how to do things, thank you for your earnest teaching, let me happy learning. Thank you for your encouragement, care and care, let me grow up safe and sound, and I will walk on the road of life.

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篇18:初中英文

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English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I

was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little

difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as

listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a

lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For

example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or

find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is

impossible if you put your heart into it。

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篇19:春节人们吃什么英文

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There are many festivals in china. And among them, I like the most  the Spring Festival. Because of it, not only  the biggest holiday of the year, but the start of a new year, but also all of us all the people, come together festival.

Before the Spring Festival, people go home, no matter where they are. Usually, we in the new years Eve dinner. Then the family sat together to share their lives or aircraft. Some people play games or go out to play. On New Years day, people get up early to meet people who say. Children can get lucky money from relatives. In the coming days, we will vit relatives to pay New Years call, give them. In a word, it  the family reunion and we all the time to enjoy it.

Th  our happy Spring Festival, Do you feel happy?

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篇20:怎样写出正确的英文好句

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每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一:整体性

句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二:连贯性

句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三:准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四:重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五:语法正确,句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。

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