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高考英语作文:低碳生活的活动(最新20篇)

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2024年高考英语作文万能句子及模板

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1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.

A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the

phenomenon(problem).

2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.

3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...

4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...

5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...

6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...

7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...

One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...

Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...

Perhaps the primary factor is that …

But the fundamental cause is that ...

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篇1:2024关于五四青年节学生活动心得摘选

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在五四青年节来临之际,为了纪念五四爱国运动,弘扬爱国精神,丰富校园文化生活,展现我院青年学生朝气蓬勃,奋发进取的精神风貌,构建良好的交流互动平台,提高我院学生的综合素质。在院团委的领导下,我们院学生会承办了以“纪念五四爱国运动”为主题的图片展活动

我们院学生会经过开例会讨论,决定主要由我们文艺部和宣传部负责本次活动。决定下来之后,我们两个部门进一步讨论,在谈论中我们自己发现要组织一个活动必需要团结合作。因为在讨论中我们意见常常不统一,总是有这样或那样的分岔,最后弄了好久才统一意见,统一意见后才开始分配工作任务。

我们是这样安排和分配工作的:

在活动前期,我们先把工作分配到各个部门,并分配我们文艺部的人进行监督工作各项工作进度,确保按时完成前期任务。我们文艺部负责活动策划书,并保证得到学院领导的批准;还要搜集和制作关于五四运动内容的图片,并粘贴在硬卡片上,做好当天悬挂的准备;我们还要搜集革命歌曲,并刻制到CD上,为五四当天可以播发渲染气氛。宣传部负责前期活动宣传,出制作板报并负责粘贴。秘书部主要负责活动用品及活动横幅。学习部负责五四运动知识竞答活动的问题及答案。其余部门做作为机动人员,配合各个部门的工作。

我们在五四活动当天就把大部分的前期工作完成得很好,美中不足的是有些部门没有完成工作,原因是有些部门没有分配好工作,没有把工作分配到个人身上,他们都认为对方做了,到头来才知道没有人做,导致没有完成任务。我们也有责任,没有真正的抓好工作监督,这是我们工作的疏忽,没有及时的提醒。在活动当天也出现了点问题,由于当天老师也组织各系学生会进行五四游园活动,是当天才决定办的,所以没有得到消息,我们的活动就会与老师的活动有冲突。知道消息后我们找到主席团询问后,我们也知道变通了,这都是为了宣传五四爱国运动,大家和在一起也是一样的,只不过我们的活动会少一些。我们就改动了策划的部分内容。

在活动中,我们是这样安排和分配工作的。在活动开始前就准备布置好现场。活动的第一项是组织各个系学生会,社团代表,各班班长及团支书进行五四爱国宣誓。在集合后就分发“红丝带”并要求戴在右手腕上,这样给我们一种鼓舞的作用,也是标志我们的爱国热情。戴好后,是到弘扬五四爱国精神环节,我们全体在场人员跟主持人读誓词。宣誓完毕后,第二项是签名,我们组织全体人员有秩序的在五四横幅上签字。签字完成后,我们的图片展正式开始,我们部门还在现场播发红歌,渲染活动气氛,以达到鼓励的作用。在图片活动旁边,我们还有干事在旁边做图片介绍,以到达更好宣传效果。

以上就是我们文艺部对五四活动的总结。我们会再接再厉,在工作中不断总结,并及时改正为取得进步。

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篇2:校园生活英语作文

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My life in school is like a candy. Sweet brings me lots of happiness.

The Chinese class made me know many words and read a lot of texts. In math class, I became good friends with numbers. Every time I get a teacher award “ smiley face ” I will stick it on the textbook.

Class is over. I play games and rope skipping with my classmates. Happy laughter floats on the campus.

My school life is rich and colorful. I love my school.

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篇3:寒假生活小学英语作文

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My winter vocation Winter holidays are coming. I am going to get up very

late at about half past nine because I feel litter tired. now I am on

vacation.

I don’t have to go to school. How wonderful ! During this vacation I can do

lots of interesting things. For example, I am going to play basketball ,

computer games and some other games. But of course, I must always remember that

I am still a student .

I am going to read a lot of books and finish my homework On New Year’s Eve

, my family will gather together eating , talking and watching TV for almost the

whole night . And there is going to be some interesting programmers on TV .

I think I am going to be very happy in this winter holiday.

我的寒假寒假。我要起床很晚九点半左右因为我觉得垃圾累。我现在在度假。

我不必去上学。多么美妙!在这个假期我可以做很多有趣的事情。例如,我要打篮球、电脑游戏和其他游戏。当然,我必须永远记住,我还是一个学生。

我要阅读大量的书籍和完成我的作业在新年前夕,家人会聚集在一起吃饭,聊天,几乎整个晚上看电视。,会有一些有趣的程序员在电视上。

我想我要在这个寒假很开心。

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篇4:我的大学生活英语

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No classical work could pervade every cubic centimeter of air with such cultural fragrance but she.

No judicious sage could merge various elements as a magnificent poem but she.

No green tree could consist of vivid cells arousing every hearts anxiety for being young forever but she.

She is my university Fudan University.

The first time I entered the campus as a freshman, I was deeply attracted by her cultural atmosphere and historical connotation. Fudan is a graceful lady who is accustomed to serenity but meanwhile each action of hers outpours her innermost tern perament. Apparently it is worth every effort to probe into her world for the sake of both physical and mental enrichment. Her humanistic spirit inspires me to care for everything around, even the most trivial one.

On the other hand, catching up with the times, Fudan is modern and smart. You see, the many age-old buildings here are actually great libraries and labs. Scientific and technological developrnent is easily smelt in the air,because she never lags behind the world.

Fabulously, such a historical and scientific school is far more than an operational mechanism. Her everlasting youth and vigor beam through every corner of the campus and the young in school vivify every piece of concrete and wood here. What makes me happy and strong is that it perpetuates me with unfading energy. And it is definitely beneficial for me to be granted enthusi。

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篇5:未来的生活学生英语

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With the development of science and technology,our lives have changed a lot in the past century。

Many things that wouldn’t happen before have come into reality now。Therefore,our lives will change as well in the future。

Our pace of live will greatly speed up,because we will help many machines to finish our work。Many things can be done autonomously。Therefore,people will have more time for fun。People can travel the outer space freely。

Space shuttle can bring people to planets far from the earth。Besides,our environment will be much better than now,because some effective measures are taken to protect the environment。Earth is still a beautiful home for human。

随着科技的发展,上个世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。很多以前不可能发生的事现在都成为了现实。

因此,我们将来的生活也会改变。我们的生活节奏会大大加快,因为我们会让很多机器帮我们完成工作。很多事情都可以自动完成。

这样人们就有更多时间来玩了。人们可以自由到外太空旅游。

航天飞机可以把人们带到远离地球的行星上。此外,我们的环境会比现在好,因为我们可以采取一些有效措施来保护环境。地球仍旧是人类的美好家园。

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篇6:寒假生活小学英语作文

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Do you know why Chinese New Year lantern hanging do? Let me tell you.

Saying that in ancient times, there is always a monster attacks a few days

before the year all the village people. Therefore, the village had one door

figuring out ways to rid of that monster, a villager said: "The better we have a

monster attack on the village during those few days we hung the red things, such

as: red lanterns. Red couplets and red tape and so on. "The villagers door speak

with one voice, said:" good, youre really clever ah, you use this method you

have it. "Upon saying this, the villagers were on their respective home-prepared

things.

The next day, it is also the spring. Gejia households entrance doors and

the room were covered with red lanterns. Red tape and covered with red couplets.

At this time, that monster ready to attack villagers, visitors have arrived to

the door, he saw Gejia households covered with red lanterns, and my heart

suddenly feel a bit scared, like a red torch to see fluttering.

Because the monsters are terrified of running with a torch so we left the

village. Villagers saw the monster left the village on the happy dancing. From

then on, people will hang red lanterns at the Chinese New Year. Labeled red

couplets.

Chinese New Year is one such hanging lanterns come.

I love the festive Chinese New Year!

你知道为什么中国新年灯笼挂吗?让我来告诉你。

说,在远古时代,总有一个怪物攻击前几天今年所有的村人。因此,村里有一个门想出办法来摆脱怪物,一个村民说:“更好的我们有一个怪物攻击村庄在这几天我们挂红色的东西,如:红色的灯笼。红色的对联和繁文缛节等等。”村民门以一个声音说话,说:“好,你真聪明啊,你使用这种方法。”说这,村民们在各自home-prepared东西。

第二天,也是春天。革家家庭入口门,房间里满是红色的灯笼。繁文缛节和覆盖着红色的对联。这时,怪物准备攻击村民,客人到门口,他看见革家家庭满了红色的灯笼,我的心突然感到有点害怕,就像一个红色火炬看到飘扬。

因为运行与火炬的怪物害怕所以我们就离开了村子。村民看到了怪物离开了村子上快乐的跳舞。从那以后,人们会挂红灯笼在中国新年。贴上红色的对联。

中国新年就是这样一个挂灯笼。

我喜欢中国新年节日!

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篇7:英语高考作文漂亮句子之图画说明

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1、这副图描写了我们的学校生活。

This is a picture of our school life.

2、有一个男孩站在那儿。

There is a boy standing there.

3、有一些学生在打篮球。

Some students are playing basketball.

4、另外一些人在彼此交谈。

Others are talking with each other.

5、甚至有一个人在打太极拳。

There is even one who is practicing taichi.

6、阳光明媚。

The sun is shining brightly.

7、天空蔚蓝。

The sky is blue.

8、微风吹拂。

The wind is blowing softly.

9、鸟儿在树上欢快地叫着。

The birds are singing happily in the trees.

10、树木充满了生机。

The trees are full of new life.

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篇8:高考英语作文万能句整理

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on the whole总的来说

On the whole the outlook appeared bright .

总的来说,前景看来是光明的。

in conclusion总之

In conclusion , education will spread more and more online .

总之,在线教育波及的范围会越来越广。

in a word一句话

In a word , practice is far more important than book knowledge .

一句话,实践远比书本知识重要。

to sum up总而言之

To sum up, success results from hard work .

总而言之,成功是艰苦努力的结果。

in brief简言之

In brief , the study claims that they improve mental sharpness .

简言之,该研究宣称甜食让你的头脑灵敏。

in summary总之

In summary , when leaving a position, keep your good-ayes short and sweet .

总的说来,离职的时候,要保持温馨而简短的告别。

to conclude最后

To conclude , city A is my preference for living , as it provides the comparably nicer surroundings and better safety .

总之,A城市是我选择居住的首要选择,因为相对来说环境更好,也更安全。

to summarize概括来说

To summarize my point: Not eating enough calories results inmuscle loss, dehydration, slower fat burning, and your bodywill always adapt to a lower calorie intake.

概括来说,不摄入足够的卡路里导致肌肉的减少,脱水,减缓脂肪燃烧,身体将总适应低卡路里摄入量。

in short 总之

In short , just because people have more choice does not mean they will opt for more obscure entertainments .

总之,正是因为人们有了更多的选择不意味着他们会选择更多的冷门娱乐产品。

[高考英语作文万能整理

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篇9:关于生活英语年级

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I get up at seven o’clock in the morning every day. After I brush my teeth

and wash face, I eat my breakfast. My mother makes the breakfast for me. I go to

school at 7:30am, and come back from school at 6 pm. Before I go to bed I will

do some homework. I usually go to sleep at 10 pm. On the weekend, I will go to

play football with my friends, in the summer we like to go swimming. These are

my daily life.

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篇10:大学高校的生活英语MyFirstYearatcollege

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College is always considered as a turning point in our educational career and life. I would use adaptationas the key word when describing my first year at college.

As we enter a new school, we first have to adapt a new environment and meet new people.As we leave home and move into the school dormitory, we need to learn to live and get along with other people who have different living habit. And as we start a higher level education, we need to adopt a new way of study. Teachers are no more like the ones in high school that will push us to learn.

Instead, we have more options and spare time to do what we want.

I am glad that I have overcome the difficulties and adapted the new life of college. I have achieved a lot more than I expected at my first year of college. First of all, I have made new friends who share the same hobbies and met new teachers who inspire me in all way. Secondly, I have become more independent. I have got used to a new way of study and often study different things by myself. I can take care of myselfwithout parents being by my side all the time. Last but not least, I have learnt to make full use of my time. I believe time management is a very essential skill in college life as we have more freedom than ever before. It has helped me not to waste time and turned me into a well-organized person.

My first year at college is excellent and I really appreciate all that I have learnt this year.

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篇11:暑假生活的英语

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Summer the sun baked the earth at jolly, then think of the first word is "nobody". At this point about how we hope to have a bowl of chill water in the body. Its not, parents took me to go with Li Xinyue the pearl spring water world to play.

Everything is not so easy, however, as soon as we get there in the sun baked a period of time. Ok no sweet without sweat, I put on swimsuit, set the swimming laps, bare feet run into the swimming pool. After a while, to my favorite show, "tsunami", at this moment, how much I was ecstatic swimming I pulled her mothers hand, and all things that damned wave will be against me, I was not easy for a few steps forward, its easy to push me to step back N.

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篇12:高考英语作文模板——举例说明段

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【示例一】

①There are many cases/examples to explain ________(主题句). ②Take ________ as a typical example./The first example is that ________ (阐述例子), ________(可进一步阐述). ③The second example is that/In addition/Here is a counter example./Opposite case in point is that/On the contrary ________(第二个例子的内容或举一个反面例子). ④Therefore,/Only ________can ________(总结主题句/段落总结句).

【示例二】

① ________ (观点句). It can be best/well illustrated in/explained by(例子). ② ________(阐述例子). ③________(进一步阐述例子). ④Therefore, ________(段落总结句:进一步总结观点句的必要性和重要性).

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篇13:写课外活动的英语

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Some students like to participate actively in after class activities. They think after class activities are an integral part of school life.

By going in for such activities, they can learn what they cant learn from books, which will be beneficial to them in the future.

Others, however, dont like after class activities at all. They think that a students work at school is learning theoretical knowledge and nothing else. Taking part in after class activities is a waste of the valuable time at school.

In my opinion, every student should engage in some after class activities because from these activities we can learn many valuable things that we wont learn in classrooms.

School is not just a place for learning the difference between "lie" or "lay", or what caused the hours of the daily schedule.

Finally, after class activities broaden our circle of acquaintances. No amount of ordinary school work can take the place of friends acquired in the informal familiarities of activities.

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篇14:三个一活动专题组织生活会简报

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5月16日下午,审计处党支部在审计处会议室召开“三个一”活动专题组织生活会。会议由审计处党支部书记崔跃武主持,审计处全体人员参加。

会前,党支部按照机关党委《关于在全校开展“三个一”活动的通知》文件精神,开展了专题学习讨论,就推进“两学一做”学习教育常态化制度化进行推进部署,重温了习近平总书记视察安徽重要讲话精神,按照合格党员标准,进行了自我对照和检查。

会上,崔跃武带头开展批评与自我批评,并结合前一阶段专题学习和审计工作实际从三个方面深刻剖析思想体会:一、要牢牢把握习近平总书记视察安徽重要讲话精神的目标要求。认真学习习近平总书记系列重要讲话精神,坚持学用结合、知行合一,从习近平总书记系列重要讲话中找方法、找路径,不断提高政治理论素养和实际工作能力。二、认真学习和贯彻党章党规,深入推进全面从严治党。时时刻刻以党章为总依据和总遵循,强化科学理论武装,严守政治纪律和政治规矩,牢固树立“四个意识”,把审计处各项工作放到学校大局中去谋划和推进。三、不断加强党支部和和党员自身素质建设。严格按照学校党委制定的党支部建设标准,推进党支部建设,认真执行“三会一课”制度,充分发挥党支部的战斗堡垒作用和党员先锋模范作用。深入推进党风廉政建设和反腐败斗争,切实改进作风,推动各项目标任务落地见效。

会上,各位党员依次发言,深入开展批评与自我批评。此次党支部专题组织生活会让大家经历了一次严格的党性党风锻炼,起到了相互勉励、相互帮助的作用。大家对组织生活会查找出的不足提出了解决问题的思路,表示将认真整改,进一步提升思想认识,强化责任担当,确保“三个一”活动落到实处。

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篇15:校园生活英语作文

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Everyone has what happened in their school. Let me tell you something about when I first came to school.

I came from grade three, when I didnt know any of my classmates, so I was very strange when I came here. When I first came, I was in the wrong class. It was called Wang Lutong and took me back. It was fun to watch. After I returned to class, I met Mr. Zhu and my lovely classmates.

We have to wear jeans and athletic shoes for sports in that school. Its really troublesome, but what year did I know? There are two Korean schools in the school. Oh, thats awesome. Later I heard that only our school could accept it.

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篇16:描写暑假生活的英语作文

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When summer holiday comes, I always go back to my hometown and spend the time with my grandparents. I like the life there, it is so simple and happy. Living in the countryside, I feel the peace in my heart. It seems the days become longer. In the morning, I hear the cock make out the sound, as if it is singing, then I wake up. Sometimes I will go to the mountain and I can hear some birds singing. I enjoy listening to these birds’ sound. I am so close to the nature. I love everything that the nature brings. The green tree, the colorful flower, the clean water even the fresh air. I find its beauty.

暑假的时候,我总是会回到老家跟爷爷奶奶在一起。我喜欢那里的生活,它是如此的简单和快乐。住在乡下,我心里感受到了平静。在这里的日子似乎变得更长一些。早上,我听到公鸡的声音,好像是在唱歌,之后我就醒过来了。有时我会跑到山上去,可以听到一些鸟儿唱歌。我喜欢它们的声音。我是如此的接近大自然。我爱大自然带来的一切。绿色的树,五彩缤纷的花朵,干净的水甚至是新鲜的空气。我找到了它的美。

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篇17:关于我的小学生活英语作文

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My School Life

I like my school .My school life is nice,too.Now,I will tell you something about my school life.I usually qo to school at seven o"clock.We have eight lessons every day.At about five o"clock,Igo homeand do my homework.My school life isn"tvery intreseting,but it is very useful for me.

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篇18:高考英语作文预测:微信的利与弊

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导语:微信,不仅能够发送传统的文字和图片还有语音讯息,甚至可以直接语音通话,因此成了不少年轻人拜年的首选方式。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Weixin has many functions. Weixin has basic functions, such as send hold-to-talk voice messages, text messages, pictures and videos. Weixin supports Wi-Fi and 3G data network. And it supports China, Hong Kong, Macau, Taiwan, Japan and US Phone Number.

Weixin has speakerphone. Gently press the button to speak. The other party will be able to receive the voice after the button release. Weixin can enjoy group chat up to 20 people. What’s more, Weixin has many other attractive functions. The most attractive function is search people around you. Weixin can search people near you who has Weixin base on your own location. This function can make user to know people around you and then to built a new relationship. Weixin alsosupports to send video. Shoot a video and send it to the other party immediately.

The compressed video is also suitable for transmission in mobile network. So you can always share the wonderful pieces of life with other people at any time. Weixin also has drift bottle function.

This function can share your messages to the world anonymously and make new friends. Weixin also has voice notes function. This function not only can save your voice memo, but also keep your pictures and texts in a convenient way. Weixin also can help you to catch your messages and keep you always updated. Weixin has QQ mail notifications which can alert you when new mails come to your QQ mailbox and you can read the mails right away. It supports sending and receiving messages from Tencent micro blog.

Weixin has English language edition. It is convenience for foreign to use it. It can help the company to dominate the market outside of China.

【参考译文】

微信有许多功能。微信的基本功能,如发送保持说话的语音邮件,短信,照片和视频。微信支持Wi-Fi和3G数据网络。它支持中国,香港,澳门,台湾,日本和美国的电话号码。

微信的扬声器。轻轻按按钮说话。另一方将能够收到的声音后,按钮释放。微信可以享受群聊的最多20人。更重要的是,微信有许多其他有吸引力的功能。最吸引人的功能是搜索身边的人。微信可以搜索你周围的人谁有威信的基础上自己的位置。这个功能可以让用户了解你周围的人,然后建立一个新的关系。微信还发送视频。拍摄一个视频,并立即发送给对方。

压缩视频也适用于移动网络的传输。所以你随时可以和别人分享美好的生活。微信也有漂流瓶功能。

此功能可以匿名分享您的消息,并结交新朋友。微信还具有语音记录功能。此功能不仅可以保存您的语音备忘录,而且还保持您的图片和文本以方便的方式。微信也可以帮助你抓住你的信息,让你随时更新。微信的QQ邮件通知可以提醒您,当新的邮件到你的QQ邮箱,你可以阅读邮件吧。它支持发送和接收消息从腾讯微博。

微信有英文版。它是方便外国使用它。它可以帮助公司主导中国以外的市场。

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篇19:2024年高考英语写作指导:写人篇

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写人英语作文在高考中不少见,什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。

写人记叙文,一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写,应根据要求,灵活掌握,突出重点。

【几点注意】

1.使用正确人称和时态。

①时态:

一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等

一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹

②人称:第一人称或第三人称

2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等,包括所给的全部信息点,不能遗漏或随意添加。

3.对所给的信息进行适当重组,安排好写作顺序,突出重点信息。

4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

【常见词语】

①外貌特征:

pretty, beautiful, good-looking,handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big

smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired,1.80 metres tall, …

②性格特点:

absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty,talkative, diligent,

lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,

have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …

③童年情况:

as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,

spend his childhood in, ...

④兴趣爱好: be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…

⑤教育背景: be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s

degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, …

⑥ 成就或事迹:

become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the

Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze

medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,

concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ...

⑦他人评价:

an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be

considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make

great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ...

例文

你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。

请根据下列信息准备一篇发言稿,介绍赵郁的成长经历。

注意: 1、词数不少于60。

2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。

3、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

提示词:首席技师 chief technician

Ordinary but Great

We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good

at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.

______________________________________

【范文】

Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.

Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.

【评析】

1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息:姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组,突出了重点信息(赵郁的经历),内容完整、详略得当,体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。

2. 正确使用人称(第三人称),灵活使用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理使用过渡词,使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。

3. 语言规范,表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式,如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等,增加了文章的亮点。

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篇20:人际关系和情感态度高考英语作文

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As students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently.

On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways; sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do evthing for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t communicate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.

[人际关系情感态度高考英语作文

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