英语中考作文阅卷评分标准(最新20篇)

春节习俗与计划，如何过2009年的春节，假如你是LINGLING给外国朋友JHON发一份电子邮件。

The spring Festival

Dear Jhon :

The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中国的农历). It’s China’s New Year’s Day. So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(装饰) for houses.

About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner. And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses. People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion（团聚）.

On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night. And there will be some interesting programmes on TV. The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.

On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings. When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friengs . I ’m going to Diseyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessinos do exercise every day help the old and children .Wellcom to China. Waiting for your e -mail.

Yours

Lingling

目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。

原因：

1.考试太滥

2.自身勤奋不够

3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上

4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议：

1、作弊有害；

2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；

3、学校应减少考试。

要求：

1、字数80—100；

2、围绕要点可适当发挥；

3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit——cheating in examinations.

On Christmas morning， the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light attwo o‘clock， and most of them are awake by six o’clock although it is not light in England for another hour or two at this time of the year.

Children look for their presents ， and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one o‘clock in the afternoon， the Christmas dinner is brought in . The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten . Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it . The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas hollidays comes to an end.

英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。

提高中考写作水平，需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧，两者缺一不可。

正确无误的造句能力

这得从初中一开始就抓起，首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练，做到有效积累，扩大视野，灵活运用。

如：如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的“说”？我们就可以写出许多：say some thing gladly（merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently）

还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词，生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。

扩词有：play football——play foot ball in the play ground——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames，play the piano…等，后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。

又如：a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary.以此类推，我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.——The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复，我们还可以转换不同的句型，来表达同一内容。如：The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.

这样训练写句的方法，可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻译的不良习惯，从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。

在平时的学习中，我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇，设计一些中译英句子，虽然对初中学生有一定的难度，但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构，巩固所学词汇，做到活学活用，为中考作文作好铺垫。

在《牛津》7B开始，我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景，设计了许多中译英，如：

1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了，他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)

2.你与其他同学不同，你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)

3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun…)

4.我有个建议，把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角，这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)

5.在暴风雨中，我们最好不放风筝，因为它可能让我们触电。(because,get a electric shock)

6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkup…with)

7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)

8.我们赢了这场比赛，他们看上去很失望。(win，look)

9.你们校运会准备工作进展如何？(get on with…)

10.我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会.(look forward to)有了扎实的组词、造句能力，要写好一篇中考作文，就如同裁缝做服装准备好了上等的面料，如果学生对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式，一般行文规律能了解掌握，那么中考作文定能获得满意的成绩。

环境保护问题是中考热门话题，出现频率高，难度较大，必须掌握。

1 、6月5日(June 5)是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛，要求：(1)、举例说明环境存在的问题1-3方面;(2)、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1-3方面进行说明，字数80左右。

As we all know，the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places，we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping，and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment ，there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

2、保护环境

( 四川乐山) 从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含：

(1)。在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;(2)。尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;(3)。离开教室应关灯;(4)。最好走路或骑自行车上学;(5)。简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等。

参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保护protect 能源energy

污染pollution 课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

our environment is becoming worse and worse，what can we do for the environment?I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.

In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

3.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词;1.save water，the source of life，protect drinking water，stop polluting，make full use of it;2.save electricity，crucial，turn off，other electric machines;3. save forests，useful，stop cutting down;4.recycle useful rubbish，save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better，the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them，something must be done.

Save water. Water is the source of life. No water，no life. So its very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it，but also make full use of it.

Save electricity. It is crucial. We cant imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Dont forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.

Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.

Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans，paper，bottles，and so on.

We can save resources in this way. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

英语是世界上最流行的语言，也是所有语言中使用最广泛的语言，学好英语有利于我们对外交流。下面是小编带来的是关于期中考试的英语作文，希望对您有帮助。

Today, I feel very unnatural when I go to bed together. No wonder! Mom and dad kept telling them that the air around them seemed to be frozen together.

After breakfast, our classmates went upstairs to do the preparatory work. The first two classes to test Chinese, I excitedly took out the pencil box, take out the Chinese book, began the last review. I havent had such a big exam for a long time, and Im nervous! I have learned Chinese books do not have to worry about basic questions, can recite fluently from memory, the key lies in reading, my level is not very good. Writing is OK, maybe get a full score.

Suddenly, the bell rang, and the faces of the students were so ugly that I got serious. My father always told me, "dont giggle in exams, it will distract your attention."." This is a very common examination, parents are stirred in disorderly fashion not tense, and are not calm down! The teacher rolled it, I got the first volume and looked back, huh?! Thats easy! I was secretly happy. But I still clear my throat, ready to jump into the "sea" to travel, explore. I also believe that peace is an important point, so that it can be static thought; seriously is also very important, the so-called "nothing is unachievable, as long as seriously, what things can be solved; also must be careful, careful person, who will love you!

I finally wrote my name, class, and started thinking about every question! The first question seems like I started doing it from grade one. Its a piece of cake! After second volumes, I suddenly realized that it was so hard and difficult to read. I read three times and didnt come up with the answer! Oh!

Finally, its time to roll in, and Ill have to take a good look at the next door! I think.

"Ding ding." The bell rings again, and I have to start doing some boring questions again.

After several I have done very well, that is, to the last one - English, and I am stumped.

Was that right? Whats this again?! Listening to a very vague English word, I really dont know what to choose is the correct answer, ah! Another door is doomed! What a bad luck!

Then I want to treat bad places I have seriously, for the future to test out koko!

今天，我一起床，就感觉十分不自然。怪不得呢！爸爸妈妈不停地叮嘱，周围的空气好像都凝固在一起——要期中考试了。

吃完早饭，我们班同学陆续上楼做准备工作。前两节课要考语文，我激动地拿出铅笔盒，取出语文书开始最后的复习。很久没有举行这样大型考试了，我不免有些紧张！语文书我已背得滚瓜烂熟，不用操心基础题，关键就在于阅读题，我的水平不是很好。作文倒是还可以，说不定能得个满分。

突然，上课铃响了，同学们的表情十分难看，我也严肃了起来。爸爸总是告诉我：“考试不要嘻嘻哈哈，这样会分散注意力。”这本是很普通的一个考试，都被家长们搅得糊里糊涂，不紧张的人，都冷静不下来！老师发卷了，我拿到第一卷后一看，咦！好简单呀！我心中暗暗高兴。可我还是清了清嗓子，准备跳入“题海”中去遨游、探索。我还认为平静是重要点，这样才可以静心想；认真也很重要，所谓“天下无难事，只怕有心人”，只要认真，什么事都可解决；还必须具备细心，细心的人，谁都会喜欢呀！

我终于写好姓名、班级，开始思考每一题啦！第一题好像是我从一年级就开始做的啦，简直是小菜一碟！一直做到第二卷，我突然发现，阅读题好难好难，我读了近三遍都没想出答案，算了，凑合凑合编一个吧！唉！

终于到收卷的时候了，下一门我一定得好好考！我想。

“叮叮叮。”铃声又响了，我只得又开始做那一些无聊的题目。

之后几门我都考得挺好，就是到了最后一门——英语，又把我难住了。

刚才是不是啊？这个又是什么呀！听着一个个极其模糊的英语单词，我真不知道选什么才是正确答案，啊！又一门要完蛋了！真倒霉！

以后我要认真对待我掌握的不好的地方，争取以后科科考满分！

1、改变作文没有满分的观念，只要符合要求者，就可以得满分。

2、重内容，重真情实感，重创新轻模仿。

3、激励为主，不吝啬分数。

4、作文内容分数值(100分制)：

思想健康，中心明确(30分)(附标题可占5分)

内容相符具体(20分)

条理清楚、段落分明(20分)

语句通顺(20分)

会用标点，错别字少(10分)

5、评分参考：(30分标准)

一类文(90—100)(27—30)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容具体，层次清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面清洁。

二类文(80—89)(24—27)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容比较具体，层次较清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面整洁。

三类文(60—79)(18—24)：基本切题，思想健康，中心基本明确，内容欠具体，层次不够清楚，语句基本通顺，标点使用大体正确，错别字多。

四类文(40—59)(12—18)：不合题意，中心不明确，内容很不具体，层次不清，语句不通，标点错误和错别字多。

五类文(39分以下)(0—12)：内容有错误，语句表达很差，不会使用标点，错别字很多。

这种评定法还可规定，错别字每个扣0.5分，扣足5分为止;标点错误每个扣0.5分，扣足3分为止;卷面太乱，字迹潦草酌扣1—2分。

导语：写英语作文是有规律可循的，你记住了一些英语句型，就可以直接套用。下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

1.welcometosp欢迎到某地

Eg.WelcometoChina。

2.What’sthematterwithsb./sth?

出什么毛病了?

Eg.What’sthematterwithyourwatch?

3.bedifferentfrom与---不同

Eg.TheweatherinBeijingisdifferentfromthatofNanjing。

4.bethesameas与……相同

Eg.Histrousersarethesameasmine。

5.befriendlytosb。对某人友好

Eg.Mr.Wangisveryfriendlytous。

6.wanttodosth。想做某事

Eg.Iwanttogotoschool。

7.wantsb.todosth。想让某人做某事

Eg.Iwantmysontogotoschool。

8.whattodo做什么

Eg.Wedon’tknowwhattodonext。

9.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事

Eg.Lethimentertheroom。

10.letsb.notdosth。让某人不做某人

Eg.Lethimnotstandintherain。

11.whydon’tyoudosth?

怎么不做某事呢?=

Eg.Whydon’tyouplayfootballwithus?

12.whynotdosth.?怎么不做某事呢?

Eg.Whynotplayfootballwithus?

13.makesb.sth。为某人制造某物=

Eg.Myfathermademeakite。

14.makesthforsb。为某人制造某物

Eg.Myfathermadeakiteforme。

15.What…meanby…?

做……是什么意思?

Eg.Whatdoyoumeanbydoingthat?

16.likedoingsth。喜爱做某事

Eg.Jimlikesswimming。

17.liketodosth。喜爱做某事

Eg.Hedoesn’tliketoswimnow。

18.feellikedoingsth。想做某事

Eg.Ifeellikeeatingbananas。

19.wouldliketodosth。愿意做某事

Eg.Wouldyouliketogorowingwithme?

20.wouldlikesb.todosth。愿意某人做某事

Eg.I’dlikeyoutostaywithmetonight。

21.makesb.dosth。逼使某人做某事

Eg.Hisbrotheroftenmakeshimstayinthesun。

22.letsb.dosth。让某人做某事

Eg.Letmesingasongforyou。

23.havesb.dosth。使某人做某事

Eg.Youshouldn’thavethestudentsworksohard。

24.befarfromsp离某地远

Eg.Hisschoolisfarfromhishome。

25.beneartosp离某地近

Eg.Thehospitalisneartothepostoffice。

26.begoodatsth./doingsth。

擅长某事/做某事

Eg.WearegoodatEnglish。

Theyaregoodatboating。

27.Ittakessb.sometimetodosth。

某人花多少时间做某事

Eg.Ittookmemorethanayeartolearntodrawabeautifulhorseinfiveminutes。

28.sb.spendssometime/money(in)doingsth。

某人花多少时间做某事

Eg.Ispenttwentyyearsinwritingthenovel。

29.sb.spendssometime/moneyonsth。

某事花了某人多少时间/金钱

Eg.Jimspent1000yuanonthebike。

30.sth.costssb.somemoney。

某物花了某人多少钱

Eg.ThebikecostJim1000yuan。

31.sb.payssomemoneyforsth。

某人为某物付了多少钱

Eg.Jimpaid1000yuanforthebike。

32.begin/startwithsth。开始做某事

Eg.Thestartedthemeetingwithasong。

33.begoingtodosth。打算做某事

Eg.WearegoingtostudyinJapan。

34.callAB叫AB

Eg.TheycalledthevillageGumtree。

35.thanksb.forsth./doingsth。

感谢某人做某事

Eg.Thankyouforyourhelp。

Thankyouforhelpingme。

36.What……for?为什么

Eg.WhatdoyoulearnEnglishfor?

37.How/whataboutdoingsth.?

做某事怎么样?

Eg.Howaboutgoingfishing?

38.S+be+the+最高级+of/in短语=

Eg.Lucyisthetallestinherclass。

39.S+be+比较级+thananyother+n。

Eg.Lucyistallerthananyotherstudentinherclass。

40.havetodosth。不得不做某事

Eg.Ihavetogohomenow。

41.hadbetterdosth。最好做某事

Eg.You’dbetterstudyhardatEnglish。

42.hadbetternotdosth。最好别做某事

Eg.You’dbetternotstayup。

43.helpsb.todosth。帮助某人做某事

Eg.LucyoftenhelpsLilytowashherclothes。

44.helpsb.dosth。帮助某人做某事

Eg.HeusuallyhelpsmelearnEnglish。

45.helpsb.withsth。帮助某人做某事

Eg.Isometimeshelpmymotherwiththehousework。

46.makeit+时间把时间定在几点

Eg.Let’smakeit8：30.

47.takesb.tosp带某人到某地

Eg.Mr.WangwilltakeustotheSummerPalacenextSunday。

49.havenothingtodo(withsb)

与某人没有关系

Eg.Thathasnothingtodowithme。

50.主语+don’tthink+从句

认为……不……

Eg.Idon’tthinkitwillraintomorrow。

2018中考英语作文预测：Talk about Internet

Today，I’ll talk about going online. We know thatthere are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable.Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to usethe computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English.We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us cleverthrough playing computer games. I can sende-mails to our friends quickly. We can chatonline with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系) people from all over the world, but unfortunately the government doesn’t allow communication with many people.

But some students spend too much time playing computer games and some stay in net bars all day and all night.As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons andthey don’t study well any more. I think we shouldn’t goonline when it is time for us to study. We can do it in summer or winterholidays.

Animals are friends of human beings, everybody is responsible for animal protection, we should take good care of them. Because, there are a lot of insects are beneficial to human. For example: the bee, it is industrious, very early in the morning to go out honey, again and again. In the dark, after the bite honey, non-stop to adopt to carry on the processing of honey. The appearance of the bees and ordinary, life is very short, only about 3 months, Can it all his life not rest, work diligently, and them nothing in humans, but for people to make sweet and delicious, nutritious, honey can cure sickness.

And the frog, the frog is covered with green clothes, two big eyes, like two stars glittering and translucent and transparent glass ball, it hid in the field, only eat insects, protect crops. Two a push with its back when it catch insects, a jump, nimbly hind legs up, jump up high, long tongue out, like a vacuum cleaner quickly eat insects to the stomach. But we humans can use them as delicious food on the table.

There are many lovely animals, my favorite is the giant panda. The giant panda is our precious animals, my mother told me that the giant panda is a national treasure of our country! Long giant pandas are cute, chubby, plump, start to counteract a, particularly funny. Its head and body are white, only the rim of the eye, ear, and the shoulder is dark brown. Especially that a pair of black rim of the eye, long in white face, like wearing a pair of sunglasses, plus the clumsiness and start to look in all directions, looks like a little gentleman.

You look! They are adorable, they are our humans good friends, how are we going to have the heart to hurt them?

动物是人类的朋友，保护动物人人有责，我们应该爱护它们。因为，有很多昆虫都对人类有益。比如说：蜜蜂，它很勤劳，每天早上很早就出去采蜜，一次又一次。到了天黑，吃几口蜜糖后，就马不停蹄地对采来的蜜进行加工。蜜蜂的外形并不起眼，生命也很短暂，只有3个月左右;可它一生都不休息，勤勤恳恳地工作，它们对人类毫无所求，却为人们酿造了甘甜可口、营养丰富、可医治病痛的蜂蜜。

还有青蛙，青蛙披着碧绿的衣裳，两只大眼睛，像两颗晶莹透明的玻璃球，它藏在田里，专吃害虫，保护庄稼。它捉害虫的时候两条后腿一蹬，一纵身，敏捷地将后腿一蜷，跳起老高，长长的舌头一伸，就像一个吸尘器一样转眼就把害虫吃到肚子里去了。可是，我们人类却把它们当成美味佳肴摆在餐桌上。

还有许多可爱的动物，我最喜欢的是大熊猫。大熊猫是我国珍贵的动物，妈妈告诉我大熊猫还是我们国家的国宝呢!大熊猫长的很可爱，胖乎乎、圆滚滚的，走起路来一摇一晃的，特别逗人。它的头部和身体都是白色的，只有眼圈、耳朵和肩部是黑褐色的。特别是那一对黑黑的眼圈，长在白白的脸上，像是戴着一副墨镜，加上那笨拙的动作和走起路来东张西望的神情，显得像个小绅士。

你瞧!它们多么可爱，它们是我们人类的好朋友，我们怎么忍心伤害它们呢?

假设你是李华，现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory)规定，如不整理床铺，休息时间大声拨打电话，未经许可(permission)动用他人物品，离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯，做个文明室友，你决定写一封电子邮件给他。

要求：(1)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;

(2)字数：60-80词(信得开头和结尾已给出，不介入总词数);

(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名，学校名和地名。

From：lihua2758 sina com

To: wangming63 sohu com

Subject: To be a great roommate

Dear Wang Ming,

Im writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.

………

Best wishes,

LiHua

写一封电子邮件英语作文范文：

Dear Wang Ming,

Im writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. Whats more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Dont make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Dont use others things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.

Best wishes,

LiHua

My family, there is a mountain, this is my father. He is a man of humor, sometimes is also a serious person, when I did on the exam, he is engaged in the smile, said: "my daughter is really cool." But when I take an examination of is not good, also a in two different conditions. See if my paper is careless mistake, my father will be severely criticized me. 2. Hell take a look at my test paper, if I really dont, he doesnt speak, I also want to pull me to the in front of him, ask what the hell am I going, sometimes he told me more than an hour, you know I will so far, this is my father, a sense of humor and serious man,

In my family, there is a beauty, this is my mom, is a man with big eyes, the nose is very clever, how to say, she is probably the most beautiful Ive ever seen a young mother, my mother wont say me, but when I get bad she cant talk but with his eyes looking at me, I can see thick affection from her eyes, and my eyes is deeply sorry, and I will take an examination of well, next time to give them a replacement.

Dont forget, I still a little people in the family,I am a very happy person, from say, I am an optimist, and one more thing, my father and mother are all people, with a pair of glasses to me here, didnt wear glasses, and his eyes still surprisingly good, may come to me is a variable. I always say: "you have to wear glasses, why I dont wear glasses?"

Anyway I have a happy family!

我的家庭，有一个大山，这就是我的父亲。他是一个幽默的人，有时也是一个严肃的人，当我考得好的时候，他从事眉开眼笑，说：“我的女儿真棒”。但当我考的不好的时候，也分两种情况一。看看我的试卷如果是马虎错的话，我的爸爸会狠狠的批评我。二。他也会看看我的试卷，如果我真的不会的话，他不会说我，也要把我拉到他的面前，问我到底会不会，有时他会给我讲上一个小时多，知道我会为止，这就是我的父亲，一个又幽默又严肃的人，

我的家庭中，有一个美人，这就是我的妈妈，是一个眼睛大大的人，鼻子非常灵秀，怎么说的，她可能是我见过的一个最美丽的年轻妈妈了，我的妈妈不会说我，但是当我考的差的话她不会说话而是用眼睛看着我，我从她的眼睛中能看出浓浓的亲情，而我眼中是深深的歉意，而我下次一定能考好，给他们一个交代。

别忘了，这个家庭中还有我一个小人，我是一个非常愉快的人，从之说，我是一个乐天派的人，还有一件事，我的爸爸和妈妈都是戴眼镜的人，惹到我这里的，不到没戴眼镜，而且眼睛还是出奇的好，可能到我这里是变异了吧。我总是说：“你们都戴眼镜，为什么我不戴眼镜呢?”

总之我有一个快乐的家庭!

1、最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。

Recently， the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.

2、互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。

Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-daylife. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems aswell.

3、如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。

Nowadays，(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

4、随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…

With the development of science and technology， more and more people believe that…

5、任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages anddisadvantages.

6、关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。

7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and moreserious.

8、……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on theirway.

9、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

_____ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-daylife.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problemsas well.

10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bargraph/line/graph，it can be seenthat______while. Obviously，______，but why?

11、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that____。

12、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct inmany cases eventoday.

13、现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……更为糟糕的是……

Today， ____， which have brought a lot of harms inour daily life. First， ____Second，____。 What makesthings worse is that______。

14、现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……

Nowadays，it is common to______。

Many people like ______because ______。 Besides，______。

英语写作是学生学习的一个盲点，缺乏对写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢？

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全；人称时态，逻辑清楚；

关键词汇，动词第一；组词成句，结构完整；

组句成文，连词增色；此路不通，绕道迂回；

字迹工整，留好印象；从句适量，高分有望。

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料；同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

1．习惯是养成的；

2．好习惯是福气；

3．坏习惯必须克服。

[写作导航]习惯不论好坏都是后天形成的，一旦形成，就很难改变；好习惯是祝福，许多成功人士都承认守时、早起、诚实和毅力等是早期形成的；坏习惯如粗鲁、懒惰、说谎、偷盗和诽谤等恶习是我们应努力避免的。

[范文]

Habits, whether good or bad, are generally acquired. When a person does a certain thing once and again, he is impelled by some unseen force to do the same thing repeatedly; thus a habit is formed. Once a habit is formed, it is difficult, and sometimes impossible, to shake it off. It is therefore very important that we should take great care in the formation of habits. Some bad habits formed in childhood may remain lifetime. Older persons also form bad habits, and in some cases they are ruined by these bad habits.

There are good habits which, when formed in early life, are great blessings. Many successful people declare that they owe much of their success and prosperity to the formation of such good habits as punctuality, honesty, and perseverance in early life.

Such habits as rudeness, laziness, stealing and slandering are bad habits. If we want to be useful to society, we ought to keep away from ail these vices, and strive to acquire those habits that are proven to be good for ourselves and others.

1. 不用说…… It goes without saying that …

= (It is)needless to say(that)…

= It is obvious that …

例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。

It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours。

2. 在各种……之中，…… Among various kinds of …，… /= Of all the …

例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑。

Among various kinds of sports，I like jogging in particular。

3. 就我的看法……;我认为……

In my opinion，…

= In my mind，…

= As far as I am concerned，…

= I am of the opinion that …

例：In my opinion，playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health。

就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。

4. 随着人口的增加…… With the increase/growth of the population，…

随着科技的进步……With the advance of science and technology，…

例：With the rapid development of Taiwans economy，a lot of social problems have come to pass。

随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。

5. ……是必要的 It is necessary(for sb。)to do / that …

…… 是重要的 It is important/essential(for sb。)to do / that …

…… 是适当的 It is proper(for sb。)to do / that …

……是紧急的 It is urgent(for sb。)to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean。

It is proper that we(should)keep the public places clean。

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

文章摘要：1. 遇见你的那一刻，世界轰然倒塌；两人抬起头有点不相信的盯着我。英语如何写出中考高分作文儿子出院那天，已经夕阳西下了，他笑了笑对儿子说：乖啊，不怕，有爸爸呢，我还有办法。关于事业:没有什么高低贵贱之分,人人为我我为人人,只要合法,能干什么就干什么,口袋没钱最丢人,死要面子活受罪的事千万别干.！

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so...that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true......等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest ...

趁现在，没有孩子，没有牵绊，我也不贪图他什么，该是离婚最好的时机吧；他还能自己走路，朋友却已经站不起来了。英语如何写出中考高分作文12、诚实是上策。他们用钱去做坏事!多么痛的领悟，你曾是我的全部，只愿你挣脱情的枷锁 ，爱的束缚，任意追逐，别再为爱受苦。最后只能采取自愿加班的方式。

Winter holiday will soon be over, really is coming. See, it is such a rich and colorful holiday ah, what to compare it to, it is like seven rainbow of colors, like a changeable clouds, like colorful shells... Always beautiful, brilliant. How could such a good winter vacation life, I was the only one person alone, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!

One of my winter holiday life: study. Holiday life, learning is indispensable, consolidate the previous knowledge that can let you can also preview in advance once you are going to learn after the part. Learn to learn well, dont half-hearted by playing. I have more than 4 hours of study time every day. Of course, I also have a few hours of exercise time, go out for a walk, many activities, some exercises. Sometimes I read some books, the expanded aspect of knowledge, of course, is the computer class, because I like computer, dont make the vision loss.

My holiday life # 2: sports. To do more sports is the guarantee of a healthy body. Everyone should have a favorite sports, I like most is skating and playing badminton. The skating sport is very simple, but you really come to ice are different! This is not your imagination of so simple and easy. Stand up, it is very simple, of course, but you slip a lap down is very difficult. Because I spent a long time, technology also can also wrestling this word is very strange to me now. Badminton everyone who will, learning to learn tired want to relax, you can play a minute ball, it can be you tired when I let you relax.

My winter holiday life # 3: the computer.

Computer is wonderful its hard to express in words. Do you know? The size of a small mouse mouse, can bring you into a magical world of computers. You can use it to play computer games interesting, to carry out the exploration of one adventure; You can use it to mail hair net friend, share strangers friend sent joy; You can also use it on the Internet, enjoy the fun of surfing the Internet. In this high-tech virtual world, how can you know the progress of modern science and technology rapidly, the pace of the modern human is powerful.

This is my winter holiday life, my life colourful winter holiday. It has trained me a loving heart, I love all beautiful things in the world. All, how can I was the only one, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!

寒假马上就要过去了，真令人依依不舍。看，它是一个多么丰富多彩的假期啊，把它比喻成什么呢，它像七色的彩虹，像多变的云朵，像缤纷的贝壳……永远美好，灿烂。这么好的寒假生活，怎能只有我一人独享呢，把它写出来，让大家一块享受吧!

我的寒假生活之一：学习。假期生活中，学习是必不可少的，这样可以让你巩固以前的知识还可以提前预习一下以后将要学的部分。学就要学得好，不要三心二意边玩边学。我每天都有大于4小时的学习时间。当然我也会有几小时的运动时间，出去走走多多活动一下，锻炼一下身体。有时我看一些课外书，扩大知识面，当然是电脑类的，因为我很喜欢电脑，千万不要使视力下降。

我的假期生活之二：体育运动。多做些体育运动是有个健康身体的保障。每个人都应该有个自己最喜欢的体育项目，我最喜欢的就是滑冰和打羽毛球。滑冰这项体育运动说起来很简单，可是你真正地来到冰场上可就不一样了!这可不是你想象中的那么简单那么容易。当然站起来是很简单的，但你滑一圈下来就是很难的。因为我花了很长一段时间了，技术也还可以现在摔跤这词对我是很陌生了。羽毛球大家是谁都会，学习学累了想放松一下你就可以打会儿球，它可以在你疲劳之际让你轻松一下。

我的寒假生活之三：电脑。

电脑的奇妙真是很难用语言表达出来。你知道吗?一个小老鼠般大的鼠标，就能带你进入一个神奇的电脑世界。你可以用它玩有趣的电脑游戏，进行一个个惊险刺激的探险;你可以用它接发网友的邮件，分享素不相识的朋友寄来的欢乐;你还可以用它上网，享受网上冲浪的乐趣。在这高科技的虚拟世界中，你能知道现代科技的进步是多么迅速，现代人类的步伐是多么有力。

这就是我的寒假生活，我多姿多彩的寒假生活。它培养了我一颗充满爱的心灵，使我爱世界上一切美好的事物。，怎能只有我一人独享呢，把它写出来，让大家一块享受吧!

导语：昨天已成为历史。我们不能做什么来挽救它。明天不是我们力所能及的。我们能做的就是珍惜今天，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Time waits for no one. If it flows away, it will never come to us again. We can t take charge of our time but we should know the importance of time and cherish time.

Yesterday has become the history. Nothing we can do to save it. Tomorrow is not within our reach. We don t know what will happen tomorrow. So the only thing we can do is to cherish what we have today and fight for tomorrow. Victory only belongs to those who work very hard! Therefore, we should make full use of today, fighting for what we want.

【参考译文】

时间不等人。如果它流逝了，它就永远不会再回来。我们不能控制时间，但我们应该知道时间的重要性并珍惜时间。

昨天已成为历史。我们不能做什么来挽救它。明天不是我们力所能及的。我们不知道明天会发生什么。所以我们唯一能做的就是珍惜今天，为明天而战。胜利只属于那些努力的人!因此，今天我们应该充分利用今天，争取我们想要的东西。

家对我意义重大。「不管家是多么简陃，家是世界上最好的地方。」我珍视家庭温暖，并且认为家是世界上最光辉的地方之一。

每当我在日常生活中遭遇到困难、失败甚至挫折时，家就是我寻求庇护之所。在家中，我亲爱的父母和兄弟姊妹会安慰我a、鼓励我。而有了他们的关心与鼓舞，我将恢复自信，并能鼓能我的所有的力量和勇气，来面对严酷的生活现实。对我而言，家永远是一种喜悦，我总是可以在其中找到爱、了解、关怀与帮助。

home means a lot to me. “be it ever so humble, there is no place like home.” i appreciate the warmth of my home, and regard it as one of the brightest and dearest spots on earth.

it is the place where i can take refuge whenever i meet with difficulties, failures and even frustrations in my daily life. at home, my dear parents and brothers and sisters will comfort me and cheer me up. and with their concern and encouragement, i will regain my self-confidence and muster up all my strength and courage to face the stern realities of life. to me, home is forever a joy where i can always find love, understanding, care and help.

[中考英语作文家永恒的喜悦

christmas day falls on the twenty-fifth of december. it is a very happy day for many boys and girls. before the term ends in some schools, the children act a nativity or “birth” play, showing how jesus was born in a stable.

on the twenty-fourth of december, all children are very excited. usually they are sent to bed early so that their parents can get the presents ready. the younger children think that father christmas will come down the chimney or fireplace, so they hang up a sock for him to put presents in. the greedy ones even hang up a pillow-case or a sack to try to get more presents. later that night, father or mother will put presents in the sock, and leave others at the side of the bed.

on christmas morning, the children wake up very early. some even turn on the light at two oclock, and most of them are awake by six oclock, and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. at about one oclock in the afternoon, the christmas dinner is brought in. the turkey or chicken is quickly eaten. children search in their christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it. the rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all christmas holidays comes to an end.

12月25日是圣诞节。对许多男孩和女孩来说，这天是个非常开心的日子。在某些学校，学期结束前，孩子们会表演有关(耶稣)诞生或出生的戏剧，用来(向大家)展示耶稣是如何在马厩里出生的。

在12月24日这天，所有的小孩都很兴奋。他们常常被(父母)早早地赶上床去睡觉，以便他们的父母能准备好礼物。年幼一点的小孩认为圣诞老人将从烟囱或壁炉里下来，所以他们挂起袜子，方便圣诞老人把礼物放进去。有些贪心的人，为了能得到更多的礼物，甚至把枕套或布袋挂起来。晚一些时候，爸爸或妈妈将礼物放进袜子，并把其他礼物放在(孩子们的)床边。

圣诞节的早上，小孩们很早就醒来了。一些人甚至在凌晨两点开灯，但大多数小孩会在六点醒来，孩子们在(大人们)准备晚餐的时候玩耍。下午一点，圣诞大餐出炉了。火鸡或鸡腿总是很快被抢光。孩子们寻找着属于他们的圣诞布丁是为了确认金币是否有藏在里面。在剩余的时间里，(人们)便是玩游戏和吃食物直到最开心幸福的圣诞节结束。

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