中考英语作文高分秘诀介绍(实用20篇)

South is the province with the largest number of ethnic, apart from the Han, is inhabited by 26 people and the minority population of the province accounted for nearly one-third of the total population. Different nationalities have their own characteristics, so in Yunnan, you can enjoy the national and culture and nowhere else

Flowers of the town: Yunnan is known as "Kingdom of plants" said. Europe and the United States to cultivation of Rhododendron, Primula, camellia, orchid lily flowers, mostly from Yunnan, let alone the domestic cultivation of flowers. Yunnan eight flowers: camellias, azaleas, Magnolia, primrose, lily flower, gentian, Meconopsis, orchid. With Yunnan the four seasons such as spring weather, here is an ocean of flowers. Mountain bamboo forests, lush bamboo shoots.

Karst: Eastern Yunnan Guizhou Plateau, after two million years of erosion and weathering erosion, forming a unique magnificent primary karst landform, karst terrain, especially in the Lunan Stone Forest, Jiuxiang scenic area.

Tropical rain forest: Xishuangbanna is located in the northern regression line to the south edge of the tropical north, the tropical monsoon climate, year-round warm, sunny, rainy and humid is Tropic of cancer of the earth desert line with only a piece of green state, is Chinas tropical rain forest ecosystem preservation is the most complete, the most typical, area of the largest area, is now the earth on rare animal and plant gene pool, was hailed as one of the earths natural wonders.

I have a white dog.Its name is Bobo.She is a female dog.She comes from Beijing,China.She has two big eyes and a small month.She wears white clothes.

She often walks around at home.It has nothing to do.She likes eating ice-cream so much,So do I.When I eat ice-cream,she will look at the ice-cream carefully.So I will give her some to eat.

Jinan is in locate northern latitudes 36 degrees 40 cent, east longitude 117 degree. Jinan is in South of Mount Taishan and North of Yellow River.there is belonging to warm temperate zone greatly six sex monsoon weather area,clear all the year round,sunshine full in Jinan. The year average air temperature is 14 Celsius degrees, the year average rainfall is 650-700 millimeters.

Jinan is called "Quan Cheng（泉城）"and is coast in Chinese the east economic big province-Shandong the provincial capital of the province.Jinan is a whole province politics, economy, culture, science and technology, education and banking center.Jinan is also a national approval of the coast open city and vice- province class city.The benefit goes down south to govern six areas, one County class City, the total area is 8227 square kilometers, population 5,960,000, among them downtown population 2,600,000.Helping the south is one of the city of"national city comprehensive real strenght 50 strong" and"whole country invest hard environment 40 excellent.

Winter has gone，and spring is coming on .

Watching the ice melting，I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter. A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance .It is a feast for our eyes and souls. The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring .

Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine，enjoying the beautiful scenery，listening to the wonderful music，drinking the new tea，my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire. Spring is the most fantastic season in the year .It means so much to the other three seasons.

In my mind, mother is the greatest. Because my mother not only gave me life, gave me lots of love. When I meet with difficulties, always can hear mother encouraging words, and when I am happy, my mother is also the most happy.

Remember, when I was two or three, economic difficulties in the home, in order to life, mother left me to work in another city. That day, my mother and I are very miss each other. My mother often calls, is to listen to my voice. And every time I hear the phone ringing, I will be the first to pick up, because I guess may is mothers call, but many phone not mom, that moment I felt very disappointed. As long as I heard my mother to come back to see me, I will jump for joy. But mother come back each time only two or three days of time, and separate time is so long. After mother left, I miss my mom every night to cry, want to mother came back with me. Let me the deepest impression a telephone is: mom, lets move to changsha, I am very happy, because I can always and mother living together.

Finally reunited, but mother because of work need to travel a lot. Every time mother on a business trip, I hate to mother, looked at his mother out of the house, I will run to the window and looked at his mothers shadow gradually disappeared in the crowd. I wonder: mom is in order to make my life better, just work so hard. When I grow up must repay mother well. Now, I want to said to mother: mom, I love you!

导语：英国是一个丰富多彩、充满国际和多元文化的国家，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Britain is a rich and varied, with international and multi-cultural society, to welcome students from all over the world come here to learn and to value their contributions.

Britain is a tolerant, democratic society, where different political views and beliefs are respected. You will find many people wearing and eating habits and you do not have their own different major cities around the world have sales of snack food, meat from an Islamic shop, the Islamic meat from the shop. Asia to sell fruit and rice kind of Jewish food store to store, everything.

In different towns and cities, the year has a variety of activities to celebrate the worlds major religious festivals and activities, for example, in the city of Leicester at the Stradivari outside the Indian sub-section is the most spectacular Festival of Lights.

Britain itself from England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland, they have different characteristics and personality.

Britain from all over the world to accept immigrants and refugees has a long history, many people have been here for permanent settlement. London may be the largest gathering of minority British city, other cities also have a large number of minority residents.

All the worlds major religions are British. Mosques, Sikh temples, synagogues, churches and India Fodou together with a variety of Christian churches (Anglican and Roman Catholic from the Protestant and Orthodox) co-exist.

This diversity means that you will come to Britain is easy to integrate into Britains multi-ethnic society. You will also come from different religious and ethnic groups and people contacts, enhance understanding of different cultures.

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英国是一个丰富多彩、充满国际和多元文化的国家，欢迎来自世界各地的学生来这里学习和珍惜他们的贡献。

英国是一个宽容、民主的社会，不同的政治观点和信仰受到尊重。你会发现很多人的穿着和饮食习惯和你没有自己不同的大城市在世界各地有销售的零食，从伊斯兰商店的肉，从商店的清真肉。亚洲卖水果和大米的犹太食品店，所有的东西。

在不同的城市，每年都有各种各样的活动来庆祝世界主要宗教节日和活动，例如，在莱斯特市在斯特拉迪瓦里在印度部分是光的最壮观的节日。

英国本身来自英国、苏格兰、威尔士和北爱尔兰，具有不同的特点和个性。

来自世界各地的英国接受移民和难民有着悠久的历史，许多人在此定居。伦敦可能是英国少数民族最大的聚集城市，其他城市也有大量的少数民族居民。

世界上所有主要的宗教都是英国的。锡克教寺庙，教堂，清真寺，教堂和印度Fodou与各种基督教教会(圣公会和天主教一起从新教和东正教)并存。

这种多样性意味着你来到英国很容易融入英国的多民族社会。您还将来自不同的宗教和族裔群体和人们接触，增进不同文化的理解。

Yesterday, my parents were not home. And I had to stay at home by myself for one day and one night. I was very happy at first, because there wouldnt be anyone criticizes my behavior. I can do whatever I want. But later I felt desperate. There was nobody cook for me, asked me to do things or criticized me. I felt empty and desperate as the house is only me. When the night fell, I was afraid. The computer games or the cartoons couldn’t attract my attention. I hate living alone.

昨天，我的父母不在家。我得自己一个人呆上一天一夜。我一开始很开心，因为没人会批评我的行为了。我可以做任何我想做的事。但后来我感到很郁闷。没人给我做饭，没人叫我做事情也没有人批评我。整个房子只有我一个人，我感到很空虚和郁闷。当夜幕降临的时候，我就开始很害怕了。电脑游戏或动画片都无法吸引我的注意。我讨厌一个人生活。

Good afternoon everyone, my name is XXX, I’m 29 years old, and I’m from Beijing.

I’d like to introduce myself through the next points:

About working: There are three main aspects of my daily work:

The first, I teach courses such as basic laws and politics. I can feel the strong responsibilities on a teacher, because I have to not only teach knowledge well, but also let students know how to be a good person.

The second, I’m responsible for some administrative work, such as students recruiting and employment. The main majors in our college are urban metro, car repairing, transportation management, logistics and so on.

I think the students recruiting and employment are very important to our college as well as to students and their parents, the serious working attitude and consciousness are highly required.

The third part of my daily work is to be a head teacher, there is an idea I respect very much: there is no bad students, but only bad teachers. If a family is a component of our society, then the class is a component of the school.

When we judge a class good or bad, the key ruler is the organization and management ability of a head teacher, as well as the good working attitude and teaching methods. A head teacher is the pathfinder on the way of students growing, as a young teacher, I’ll try my best to be an excellent head teacher.

About daily life: I have a wide range of hobbies, especially sports and reading.

Sport: We have very good sports facilities in our college, I play badminton every Tuesday, and play basketball every Friday. I think that sports is the best flavor of our life, it can release the pressure and relax our mood.

Reading: I have good reading habits since I was a child, I like the famous four classic very much, and I’m also interested in some biography and news commentaries. I think books can help people being mature, they affect me gradually.

And of course, I have the confused moment, but I think the difficulties can help me grow. Thank you.

考研复试英语口语一般涉及这样几个话题，象自我介绍、家乡和大学的状况、研究生期间的科研设想等等。如何在这些地方让老师满意呢？下面这些话题的模板和范文，供广大考生参考。

自我介绍

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is ***, 24. I come from ******, the capital of *******Province. I graduated from the ******* department of *****University in July, 2001. In the past two years I have been preparing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO. ****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two. Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interviewed by you。

I am open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of history. In my spare time, I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books, especially those about *******. Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line. In addition, during my college years, I was once a Net-bar technician. So, I have a comparative good command of network application. I am able to operate the computer well. I am skillful in searching for information on Internet. I am a football fan for years. Italian team is my favorite. Anyway, I feel great pity for our countrys team。

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. Of course, if I am given a chance to study ****** in this famous University, I will spare no effort to master a good command of advance ******。

Good morning, my dear teachers, my dear professors. I am very glad to be here for your interview. My name is Song Yonghao, I am 22 years old. I come from Luoyang, a very beautiful ancient city. my undergraduate period will be accomplished in Changan university in July, 2004; and now, I am trying my best for obtaining a key to Tongji University。

Generally speaking, I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. When I was sophomore, I found web design very interesting, so I learned it very hard. To weaver a homepage for myself, I stayed with my personal computer for half a month, and I am the first one in my class who own his homepage. Furthermore, I am a person with great perseverance. During the days preparing for the first examination, I insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like. And just owning to this, I could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end。

Well, in my spare time, I like basketball, tennis and Chinese chess. Also English is my favorite. I often go to English corner to practise my oral English on every Thursday, and write compositions to improve my written ability. But I know my English is not good enough, I will continue studying。

Ok, that is all, thank you for your attention。

[考研复试英语口语自我介绍经典作文

Hello everyone！ My name is Amy, this year twelve years old, I am from Xiaoshan District of Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province, the first primary school, is the sixth grade students.

You see, I am slim, so I round face, the nose is not high but it is the most important, because I protect their eyes, so my face is not a small pair of glasses.

I am warm and generous hospitality and a love of helping others, remember that in an emergency evacuation drill, we are reading poetry, suddenly broadcast rang, the students rush out of the classroom, in the course of my run, the students saw his feet twisted, he left behind. The other students, have run to the playground, to see this scene, I quickly ran back to the past, to help him up, I helped him, we went to the playground, and afterwards, the teacher praised me for the disciplinary board, not only that, but also let the students to learn from me do you know? At that time my heart.

I am good at skateboarding, write a soft brush, and speak English, my English is not good, in an English exam I ranked second last time, I felt very unhappy, I encourage myself to Study hard to win glory for the class, then, although I did not get the first, but I am not discouraged, I have tried my best.

I also have a very great dream. When a pilot is flying, he can fly his own airplane one day and fly freely in the blue sky. What an exciting and happy thing it is!

目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。

原因：

1.考试太滥

2.自身勤奋不够

3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上

4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴

看法与建议：

1、作弊有害；

2、要做人诚实，学习发奋；

3、学校应减少考试。

要求：

1、字数80—100；

2、围绕要点可适当发挥；

3、文章开头已给出，不计入总字数。

At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit——cheating in examinations.

我是一棵美丽的樱花树，每当春天来到，小草从地下羞涩地探出小小的脑袋好奇地环顾四周，发现没有危险才出来透气的时候，我便发芽长叶了。

三月多的时候，我长出了小小的花蕾。一个个花蕾好像一个个娇羞的小姑娘。过了几天这些小姑娘不再娇羞了，她们大方地绽开笑脸与大家打招呼。每天一大清早，勤劳的小蜜蜂“嗡嗡嗡”地飞来飞去，对我说：“你好啊，小樱花树，我来采蜜了。”我对他说：“你好小蜜蜂，欢迎你。你可真是勤快呀。”小蜜蜂红着脸说：“这是我应该做得呀!”树上的小姑娘们见了小蜜蜂更加的热情了，一个个穿上了美丽的粉红带白边的小裙子，高高兴兴地跳起优美的舞蹈。傍晚晚霞照的红光映射在我的身上，大地和我都穿上了金色的纱衣。夜晚悄悄的来临了，人们都深深地入睡了。第二天一早，小鸟在枝头“叽叽喳喳”地唱歌，泉水“叮咚叮咚”地向前跑着，一边跑一边与鱼儿做着游戏，我慢慢地醒过来，新的一天开始了。

这是多么美好的生活呀!可是有一天改变了这美好的一切……

五一劳动节放假，一大批游客来到我们的家园玩耍。嘈杂的吵闹声，惊跑了小鸟。人们大吃大喝，把吃完的果皮扔到小溪里，把无数条小鱼惊跑，他们还往水里扔塑料袋，有的人甚至脱了鞋下河捉鱼、小蝌蚪和青蛙。这时我感到了一阵头晕，原来是个调皮的孩子不停地晃我，还爬上我的胳膊，折下树枝，扔到地上。过了一个多小时他们终于走了，可这里却一片狼藉，我是多么悲伤呀!

无知的人们，地球是我们共同的家园请爱护我们的家园，保护我们的环境!

My name is Li Yang.I graduated from Lanzhou University and majored Mechanical Engineering.

I was once a poor student of English,and it was my biggest headache and trouble-maker.I got sick and tired of learning boring grammar rules and lifeless words.

But through hard work in practicing speaking English and breaking away from the traditional grammar games,I found myself a totally different and exciting new world.Not only did I pass Band four and Band six College English Exams very easily with high marks,but importantly,I began to use English.

Finally,I developed a new Language Cracking System myself,I began to teach German not long after I started to learn this terribly difficult language in my own way.It was a miracle but I made it.英语口语自我介绍篇二

Hello everybody.My name is (Lily) .Im (twenty )years old. I live in (beijing)。I very love English. I read English every day. I yell English every day, My favorite sports are tennis and swimming.

I play tennis all the time since Im a child. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. We are all interested in English. My parents want me to be an English thacher when I graduate. I hope we can be friends.lets help each other from now. 英英语口语自我介绍篇三

My name is XX .21years old. Graduated from XX school. My hobbies, such as reading extensively, dancing, singing, etc. I think English is very useful to us, because the world many people speak English, if I can speak good English, I can talk with them and with their friends.

So I hope to have the chance to exercise myself. In my home, my father has three people in the catering company work, my mother is a housewife, I sometimes very outgoing personality sometimes love quiet, I believe I can do this job. Glad to meet you can today.

I hope you can give me this opportunity, thank you。

I am very lucky because I have a happy family. There are three people in my family.They are Dad,Mum and I .

My father is a worker .He works in a factory near our school. He likes his work very much.In his spare time, he often goes fishing.Sometimes he likes watching TV at home. My mother is a farmer. She is very diligent and kind.She works hard on our farm every day.I am a middle school student. I am studying in No.5 Middle School . I am in Class Three, Grade One. I am very good at English , I love our school and teachers . I like oranges ,pears bananas and apples very much . I also like doing housework and watching TV. I love my Dad and Mum verymuch. They also love me, and are very strict with me .Sometimes ,I also teach them a little English. I am vey glad to have such a happy and warm family.

我很幸运，应为我有一个很快乐的家庭。我们家有三个人，就是我，我爸爸和妈妈。

我的父亲是一位工人，他就在我们学校附件的工厂工作，他十分热爱他的工作，闲暇时分，他喜爱钓鱼。有时他也喜欢在家看电视。我的母亲是一位农业劳作者，她十分勤奋，也很仁慈，她每天都在农场上辛勤劳作。我是一位中学学生，就读于第五中学一年级三班，我的英语很好，我爱我的学校和老师，我十分喜欢吃橙子，香蕉，梨子和苹果。我也喜欢做作业和看电视。我喜欢我的爸爸妈妈，他们也爱我，虽然他们对我很严厉，有时我还教他们几句英文，我因为有这样一个快乐温暖的家庭而开心!

The schools campus activities are rich and colorful, learn to sing folk songs, learning folk dancing, the squadron will show --- in this one activity, I love the most is the May 31st meeting of the group in the water cube, the harvest and the feeling of campus activities.

At about 5 that day, we came to the Olympic swimming pool, the National Swimming Center (Water Cube). After all, the team will begin. The first chorus singing songs, and is the first grade student initiation ceremony. The representatives of the first grade students went to the stage in an energetic manner, and presented the garlands to 55 minority students, accompanied by the team song, and the minority nationality classmates wore a red scarf for the first grade students. After the ceremony, the minority students met with us to greet each other. "I am the Dong nationality, my name is Huang training Festival.". "Minority partners do self introduction, and simply introduce their own nation." After listening to them, I was surprised.

I didnt even hear about so many ethnic groups. Let alone understand their customs. I should learn more and have more knowledge. Several ethnic minority partners also performed a show for us, including a unique style of dance, a lot of distinctive songs, and so on. This time I really know the minority people, they have their own custom, unique singing and dancing. Though I cant understand the dialect in the song, I still feel it has an unknown and special beauty. Though I dont know the dance, I still feel the dance is very graceful. I deeply comprehend the colorful national culture and the profound and profound national culture. The performance was over, then, all the students of our present for minority students Oh performed 5 of this folk dance. The dance was very beautiful, and the students of the minority nationalities jumped with us. For a time, we all merged into the dance. With the beautiful songs, the team will end this time. In order to celebrate Childrens Day, we also watched the drama Beijing legend.

I like this national activity, it makes me know a lot of knowledge, and it has brought me a lot of joy.

Goodafternoon, teachers! Today, I`m very happy to make a speech here. Now, let me introduce myself.

My name is ZhuRuijie. My English name is Molly. I`m 12. I come from Class1 Grade 6 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing basketball. Because I think it`s very interesting. I`d like to eat potatoes. They`re tasty. My favourite colour is green. And I like math best. It`s fun. On weekend, I like reading books in my room. I have a happy family.

My father is tall and strong.My mother is hard-working and tall, too. My brother is smart. And I`m a good student. My dream is to be a teacher, because I want to help the poor children in the future. Thank you for listening! Please remember me!

The Great Wall

The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon,It winds its way from west to east,across deserts,over mountains,through valleys till at last it reaches the sea.Its the longest wall on the earth,also one of the wonders in the world.

The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years.The first part was built during the Spring and Autumn Period.All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by hand.Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came into existence.

Since then,it has been rebuilt and repaired many times.Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world,has taken on a new look.Its visited by large numbers of people from all partsof thecountry and the world.

长城

长城,像一条巨龙横亘华北地区,它穿过沙漠,越过高山,跨过山谷,由西到东蜿蜒曲折,最后到达大海.它是地球上最长的墙,也是世界奇迹之子.

长城有2000多年的历史.它开始修建于春秋时期.秦朝时,所有的城墙联结在一起.所有工作都是用手完成的,成千上万的人在修建长城时死去.长城就是这样出现的.

目前为止,长城重修多次.现在的长城面貌一新,迎接来角全国和全世界各地的游客.

My favourite animal is fish. Because they are very interesting. There are many kinds of fish. They are liveing in water very free. They are very colorful, some fish are red, some fish are white, and some fish are gold... So I like them very much !!!!

我最喜欢的动物是鱼。因为他们是非常有趣的。鱼的种类非常多。他们是在水中自由自在的生活。他们是五颜六色的,一些鱼是红色的,一些鱼是白色的,一些鱼是黄金色的……我非常喜欢它们! ! ! !

I came from * * university of technology, has the good professional knowledge and operating ability, and in * * * month by the national human resources management division (level 3) exam. Solid grasp of human resources management related knowledge, be familiar with human resources development, performance management and appraisal, compensation management and enterprise strategy management process, familiar with the study and master the "labor contract law" and relevant theory of the social security act.

My English level is outstanding, in the second grade passed cet4 test, have a good reading writing and spoken English. During the period of school, has repeatedly take part in the national college students English contest and get good grades.

During the university, I actively participated in various activities, has held various positions in the community. I love the team activities, have a very strong team cooperation consciousness, during the period of school also served as captain of the football team in the area, has a strong organization and coordination ability. Strong dedication and sense of responsibility that I can face any difficulties and challenges.

根据以下要点提示写一篇60-80词的短文。

1、在学校学习汉语、英语、数学、历史和一些其他学科；

2、我学习很努力，最喜欢的学科是英语，经常找机会练习英语；

3、现在中国已经加入世贸组织wto，并且2008年奥运会将在北京举行，英语正变得越来越重要；

4、我将更加努力学习英语，将来为祖国作贡献。

I study Chinese、English、maths and History and some other subject at school.I study hard. My favorite subject is English.I often find chance to practice English.China has joined WTO and Beijing will host the 2008 Olympics,English is more and more important .I will study hard and be dedicate to my homeland.

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2019中考英语作文命题预测 如何拿高分?

随着中考逼近，考生都进入了紧张的备考状态，初三老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里，如何让考生更有针对性的复习，如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。

中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实，一般拿分没多大问题。如今，令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心，老师为学生们解析历年的中考英语作文题目，并作出预测，为同学们指点迷津。

首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。

2006年作文题目：

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”。

2007年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”。

2008年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)&rdquo,周记;。

2009年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”

2010年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m proud of myself”

2011年作文题目：

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I‘m a member of… ”

我们可以发现，中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关，为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分，到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出，中考作文的写作思路通常为：what—why—how.评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时，最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分，另外，注意连接词的使用以得结构分，同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文，让同学们更能感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。

If you ask me what I want to do for my school， my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard， so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there， maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover， students can read under the trees. Of course， I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study.

此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出为什么这么做，最后写出我会怎么做。

全文立意好，贴近实际，可行性强。从语法来看，没犯语法错误;从结构来看，用了so、after、moreover等连接词使行文更加流畅;从文采上看，文章多处用了从句，用到了形容词的比较级等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口，是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。