大学英语日记20篇【精品20篇】

On Sunday morning, my parents took me to the zoo. We dint go there for a

long time. Last week, my classmates told me that the zoo added some funny

entertainment facilities. I was very curious. So, I asked my parents to took me

there and they promised to. We got there at 9 oclock. There were many people.

Most of them were parents and children. We first went to see the animal. I like

parrots most. And then we saw the animal shows. Elephants, tigers, lions and

monkeys did wonderful shows for us. People were happy, especially the children.

After that, we went to experienced the entertainment facilities. My mum was too

scared to be with us. So, only my dad and I played. It was so exciting, but I

was a little dizzy. However, I was very happy. It was a great day.

I met a girl called Sue on the Intemet.We are of the same age.And we talked

happily with each other. So we decided to write to each other daily, of course

through e-mail.We can write down what we feel and what we think and then forward

to each other.We also try to write in English. She once lived in the United

States with her parents, so she can speak native English.In this way, we are

getting closer and closer. And furthermore both of our English has improved

quickly and greatly.How nice it is to have a "pen pal" !

我在网上认识了一个叫苏的小女孩.我们年龄相仿,谈得也很投机,所以就约好天天通信联系,当然是电子邮件了.我们把自己一天的生活和所感所想记下来,然后发给对方看,就像记日记一样.我们还试着用英文通信,她曾经跟爸爸妈妈在美国呆过几年,所以能讲纯正的英语.这样,不但我们的友谊越来越深了,而且我们的英语水平和写作能力也有了很大的提高.有个“笔友”真好!

Hi, My name is Jay, Im from the beautiful ancient city of Kaifeng. As you  can see, I am a very casual girl, and a lot of people here, like 18-year-old, I  love a lot, I love guitar, love to sing love dancing, very fond of English, I am  very love to watch "Prison Break", like the actor micheal clever wit.

I like making friends, and hope you will be able to and I have become good  friends, I think I will, and you get along with.

日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。由于记载的内容通常已经发生，谓语动词多用一般过去时。但也可根据具体情况，用其它时态。如：记叙天气、描写景色，为了描写生动，可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情景。再如文后发表感想或评论可用现在时态或将来时态。记日记力求简单明了，有连贯性。若有文字提示，则应重视提示，把握要点。在句式上尽量使用简单句，以防繁杂，造成语法、句型错误。

范例：

I was very sleepy in the morning, so I didnt go running as usual. I had

something for breakfast. My new day has began. The results would come out today.

My classmates all felt very nervous, so did I. Then one of my classmates called

me, and invited me to play basketball in the afternoon. I like play basketball,

though Im really poor at play it.

My parent and I visited redstart farm last Saturday,the environment is so

good there.Were scavenge the horse,The horse was leaded into the stable and

each was put in a stall.Cows and sheep depends forage to feed.this so

lifelikeness,were got a lot of enjoyment from my job. in the end.owner

preparative feasted on me.

加:

Though my daily life is extremely monotonous, I try hard to adapt myself to

it. Why? Because I intend to be a good student. I wish to render service to my

country.

I get up at six o’clock every day. After I wash my face and brush my teeth,

I begin to review my lessons. I go to school at seven o’clock.

After school is over, I return home. We usually have supper at seven

o’clock.Then I begin to do my homework. I want to finish it before I go to

bed.

例：

It was the first day of our winter holiday. All of us were very happy. Why?

Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we

have some homework. we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can

make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter

holidays, I want to have full sleep and eat good food in order to replenish

myself.Last but not least, I will have a good rest.

It was the second day of our winter holiday. I felt good. I felt I’m free.

I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Beijing. So I live

alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at

home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an English daily composition. It was my

homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours. I thought I was very tired. It is

time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business

in my mother’s company. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager

of my mother’s company. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the

telephone. While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a

lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I

had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t

do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.

翻译：

我早上非常困,所以我没有像平常一样去跑步。我吃了早饭。我的新的一天已经开始。结果将在今天被公布。我的同学们都感到很紧张,我也是。后来我的一位同学打电话给我,并邀我在下午打篮球。我喜欢打篮球,虽然我的水平不怎么样。

我和我的父母上星期六去参观农场,那里的环境很好。我们清洁了心爱的马。马被牵入马棚,而且每匹马都被放在各自的栏内。牛和羊依靠喂给它们的饲料,这是多么的生动啊。我们从我的工作里得到了很多乐趣。最后，农场主宴请了我。

加:虽然我的日常生活十分单调,但我却竭力去适应它。为什么?因为我打算做一个好学生。我希望能为国家服务。

我每天六点起床。在洗脸、刷牙之后,我开始复习功课。我7点去学校。

放学后,我回家了。我们通常七点吃晚饭。之后我开始做家庭作业。因为我打算睡觉之前完成它。

例:这是我们寒假的第一天。我们都很高兴。为什么?因为我们有一个月的时间可以做我们喜欢做的事。我们很自由。虽然我们有一些作业，但我们能在几天之内完成。我们能利用好休息的时间。天啊!我们在学习之后总是感觉很累。在寒假期间,我想拥有充足的睡眠,享用丰富的食物来补充自己。最后但同样重要的是,我要好好休息一下。

这是我们寒假的第二天。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多的时间做我喜欢的事情。我的父母在北京。所以我独自生活,但我不觉得寂寞。但我从来没做一件特别的事。我呆在家里看电视。哦!我写了一个英语日常写作。这是我的家庭作业。今天,我睡了14个小时。我想我很累。到吃晚饭的时间了。我必须去了!我饿极了。

这是我们寒假的第三天。今天,我妈妈的公司有不少事情。所以我妈妈告诉我帮助她公司的经理，我的叔叔。我坐在我妈妈的办公室,帮她接电话。当我空闲的时候,我写我的家庭作业。虽然我也有很多时间做家庭作业,但我还是写了。因为在我妈妈的办公室,我无事可做。如果我什么都没做,我是在浪费我的时间和我的生命。我没办法做那么愚蠢的事。我们应该充分利用我们的时间。

This morning,i woke up with a start: my clock was alarming. unwillingly

opened my eyes, i found it was 6:30 already.nevertheless, the room was very

gloomy, for it was raining outside. what a cold day! how comfortable it would be

if i could stay in bed for the whole day, reading a favourite book in the sound

of rain. but, i did have to go to work.

Though it was a rush hour, on the way, there were fewer people than usual.

many people arduously held an umbrella which was always blown down by a blast of

wind.fortunately , i was dressed in a raincoat. several yards away, a policeman

was guiding the traffic in the rain. i was filled with deep esteem for his

seriousness.i kept thinking of todays plan for a short while and,then,i was in

my office. a busy day is beginning …

Mother told me that we will go to Guilin for a trip today. I am very excited because the views there are beautiful. But there is still one day to go and I feel impatient. I think people there must be polite and so should I. Otherwise, we couldnt get well along with each other.

【参考翻译】

妈妈今天告诉我马上我们就要去桂林玩了。我很高兴也很期待。因为那里的景色很美。但是还要等一天，我有点迫不及待了。我想，那里的人一定很有礼貌。我也要学着礼貌一点。只有这样，我们才能和睦相处。

May 18， 2002Fine

Our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class this morning。 He said，"Now in the countryside many children are very poor and still can＇t go to school。 Can you help them?"

After school， I went home。 In my room， I saw the little box on the table， in which I kept my pocket money。 Though I wanted to buy a pocket recorder， I decided to send the money to the children in the countryside。They are eager to go to school。 I wrote a letter to them at once。 After finishing writing it， I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money together with the letter。

I felt very happy today because I＇ve done a good deed。

2002年5月18日星期一晴

上午，老师在课上给我们讲了希望工程的事。他说：“现在，乡村的许多孩子很穷，还上不了学，你们能帮助他们吗?”

放学后，我回到家。在我的房间里，我看到桌子上的小盒子，里面是我存的零用钱。虽然我想买一个便携式录音机，可是我还是决定把钱捐给乡村的孩子们。他们渴望上学。我立即给他们写了一封信。写完后，我去了邮局，把我的全部零用钱和这封信一起寄出。

今天我感到非常高兴，因为我做了一件好事。

MondayMay 18， 2002Fine

This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class。 He said that there were children in the countryside who were so poor that they couldn＇t go to school。 After school， I went home。 In my room， I noticed the little box in which I kept my pocket money on the table。 I should do something to help the poor children。 So I decided to send the money to them。 Thinking of the eager eyes of the children who wanted to go to school， I wrote a letter at once。 Then I went to the post office and sent all my pocket money and the letter to the children。 Today I felt very happy for what I had done。

2002年5月18日星期一晴

今天上午，老师在课上给我们讲了希望工程的事。他说，现在在乡村，有些孩子很穷，上不了学。放学后，我回到家。在我的房间里，我注意到桌子上的小盒子，里面是我存的零用钱。我应该做些事来帮助那些穷孩子们。所以我决定给他们寄钱。想到那些想上学的孩子们渴求的眼睛，我立即写了一封信。然后，我去了邮局，把全部零用钱和这封信一起寄给了那些孩子们。今天我为我所做的事感到高兴。

[希望工程英语日记

My chinese name is 范依昀。My English name is Kate. Brown. My family name is Brown. My first name is Kate. I’m 12 years old. I am chinese. I’m from Huzhou. I have many hobbies. I like playing football, and playing computer. I like blue best. I have a friend. Her name is 蒋姣姣。 She looks happy, she is lovely. I like her very much. She likes watching TV and singing.there is three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a doctor, my mother is a doctor too. I like them very much. I am happy every day. My telephone number is ********. Welcome to my home.

班主任评语：very good! Your hand-writhing is very nice.

I have stayed in shanghai alone for a week. it’s time for me to go to my

real home—it is in beijing. my parents are waiting for me. although outside is

no matter how beautiful, beijing is still my home. in fact, there is many fresh

things. like red bayberries. in the afternoon, i took a bus to beijing. i was

very unlucky that my mp3 was stolen. i was very sad. i didn’t know why thieves

went to steal other’s things. why don’t they hunt for a job? i don’t why! i hope

there is no thief in our motherland.

星期和日期写在左上角，天气写在右上角。

日期格式用月日年（美式）或日月年（英式）都可以。

1. 年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如：december 18, xx或者dec. 18, xx。

2. 如果要写星期，星期要紧挨日期，它既可以放在日期前面，也可以放在日期后面，星期也可以省略不写。星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。例如：thursday dec. 18, xx或dec.18，xx thursday

3. 天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如:sunny, fine, rainy, snowy等表示。天气通常位于日记的右上角。

下面列出了一篇日记的开头，有兴趣的同学可以回忆一下，再接着往下写。

mon.sept. 1, xx sunny

today is the first day of my senior high school life ...

Today I was at home lonely, due to my husband need to work overtime and no time to accompany me. I make my own way to leave SZ city to come to him, but unfortunately, my love lost his job and try to find a job in SZ city. Bad news for us, but we have no choice. We need to make money, I know it is hard for him to find a satisfactory job due to the overall economy situation is bad in 2012. But the New Year for 2013 is coming soon. We really hope that everything will be ok with us. I have to make meals by myself and just sit in front of computer. Since I have not showed my concerned to my friends for a long time, I made some phone calls to my friends and say hello to them. Happily, most of them are living a good life. I visited some page or QQ Zone in some old friend’s space. Some of them got married and best wishes for this guy.

I am a couch potato and crazy about the USA soap opera whose name is broken sisters. This series is very funny, so I will watch them as long as I am available. I really want to make some relaxation by listening to songs and watching funny series / movies. I guess I over use my eyes in the company, due to frequent overtime at the normal working days. My neck and my eyes feel terrible. I feel uneasy that I always dream a lot when I was asleep. The next morning when I woke up, oh, my god, I do not feel like doing anything at all, just feel headache. I hated to dream a lot in the sleeping time.

Sometimes I feel ashamed for my poor oral English. So many girls in our department can speak fluent English and absolutely do not have difficulty in communicating with foreign guys. I envy of them and I just too lazy to make some useful effort for spoken English. All the mangers in our company are proficiency in written and spoken English and all of them are from HK. Maybe I should learn something from them.

I need to work 5 days per week, after two days rest. Every time when I back to office on Monday, just feel verysleepy. Somehow I have the same feeling every Monday. I just call it black Monday. Because I have to back to normal and resume to work. I have not written something in English to record my daily life for couple of weeks. I think I need to make it up once I am available. No matter how busy I am, my strong interested in learning English will never stop. I think I‘d better go to bed early tonight, in order to avoid laziness for work tomorrow.

[英语日记无聊的周日

清晨的风把我从朦胧的睡梦中叫醒，起床擦了擦脸，在阳台上往下看，原来苏醒的不只是灵魂，还有那些有波动的生命，那些即将盛开的花儿。六点的天空，湛蓝且宁静。漂泊着的白云，天边一角刚露出的微红，所有的所有，所有的一切，都迸发着新的生命力，这是个新生的早晨，是个新生的世界。这个世界接下来该是如何美丽，如何缤纷。要由我们去填图色彩，用不同的颜色凑拼出不同的世界，用不同颜色描绘不同的世界，这便是摆渡人的意义了吧。

大巴从高楼林立的繁华驶向烟囱纵横的村庄，随着车辆的前行，我的心才退化，我的灵魂也跟着退化，我不再是枕边的听书人，我也终于来到了这，繁华俗世的一角，一个最初的梦想开始的地方。来到这里才发现，我不是一个过路客，我是个归家人。

看到校长的第一反应是惊讶，嘴边的参差不齐的胡渣，洗的褪色的不知道是什么颜色的衬衫，一口雷州口音的普通话，是个山井市民，是个乡下人，是个农民。他嘴角一直都泛着微笑，笑得时候两眼角的皱纹好像折了几次的角，仿佛浇点水能开出一朵花。他的座驾是有车篮的，一个像单车一样的车篮。小家子气，俗，丑。朝阳把他的身影拉的很长很长，他不高大，甚至还有些佝偻，这是这样的一个男人，他撑起了一个学校。我想他很累吧，但他应该是幸福的。

头顶是夕阳，孩子们围着小老师们，有的人在认真学切菜，有的人帮忙烧热水，有的人在搬柴，有的人在写新闻稿，有的人在拍照。脚下是泥土与灰尘混合的土地，那是有生长的树苗，离巢的乌鸦，阳光撒在地上，一切都金光闪闪，生锈的铁门也焕发着光芒。夕阳西下，我们这里就好像是一个家。

Good morning sunshine, sprinkled on a page, such as dim as a brilliant

sunset, a long drag on the tip of the partner. The wind always blowing more cold

than usual, people could not help chills.

Think about it, only more than thirty days from the final exam, while only

four days away from the monthly exam. At this time, preparing for Christmas in

foreign countries, next Thursday is Christmas Eve, Friday is Christmas, we began

monthly exam.

The eve of Christmas Eve last year, early in the morning, desk or drawer

will have one apple, a chocolate flower branch, a branch length of the plum

sugar … Bang Bang … and greeting cards, but also in a few days ago to quietly

fashion today.

My winter holidays plans me studying for my English , I will make great

efforts to learn English. Persist in listening to half hours of English every

day. I will accomplish the school assignment that the teacher arranges best with

the quickest speed. I can not forget to take the body exercise certainly also ,

I may take the body exercise coming drawing out 30- - 1 hours in time in every

day. I play with the once computer coming certainly may draw out one small Duan

time , watch one meeting TV or. Certainly need only 1 hour. This it is my winter

holidays to plan!

201X年X月X日 晴天

I will be at grade two of middle school this term, I have a new plan. I

want to start running after school. I am not very tall, I want to do the

exercise to grow tall. I plan to run two rounds of the runway on the playground

every day, which will be eight hundred meters. I wish I can be taller this term.

Running is good for health too, I like running.

For most university students, dormitory life is a new experience. Most students have never lived far away from their parents before coming to university. They have always had their parents to depend on for advice and guidance, and when they become university students, their lives begin to change.

There are striking difference between home life and dormitory life. Student must begin to be responsible for their own action. They must depend on themselves to get up in the morning on, time for class, to eat properly, to keep their clothes and themselves clean ,and to set aside an appropriate amount of time for study and relaxation. They must also learn to take care of their money, making sure to preserve enough for both necessities and for fun.

In general, there are both good and bad points about life in student dormitory. Often, dormitory?rooms are small and crowded. This lack of space can limit ones privacy and make it?difficult for students to concentrate on their studies. On the other hand, in a dormitory, student have a great deal more freedom than?they might have at home. They can act according to their own will and desire than to that of parents.

大概在五六年前，有一本《考拉小巫的英语学习日记》的书横扫几大论坛，好评如潮，销量达百万册。作者叫考拉小巫，是伊甸园字幕组组长，写书的时候已经逆袭成功，到美国求学。

这本书在豆瓣上的评价很高，万人以上评价，评分8.1，相当不错的成绩。这本书即是一本收录了她实战经验的外语学习招法集，也是她自我的回忆录，一部从差生到优生的奋斗史和逆袭史。考拉小巫本科不是特别好，后来通过努力，出国留学，攻下硕士学位。作者考拉小巫在整本书中都流露出一种真实的态度，行就行，不行就不行。阅读整本书就感觉在和读者的内心进行一次真诚的对话。看他人的人生，用于反思自己。几年前我也读过，几年后重读此书，自然也有一些新的感悟。

关于坚持

现在最新的成功学都提到了一件事，就是专注加坚持，尤其是坚持。我们中大多数人的努力其实都没有达到需要拼天赋的程度。什么时候才是拼天赋的时候?梅西和C罗那个层次，天赋才可能会起到决定性作用，不要忘记C罗是一个极度自律的人，他走向人生巅峰绝对于此不无关系。

考拉小巫在自己的书中里面无数次提到她自创的“傻子哲学”。她说“傻子为什么能成功，因为他很傻，不管做不做成他都一直在坚持”。很多人学外语可能最多两个月就坚持不下去了，我想说，母语者以高负荷的方式训练了几十年的技能，你一业余选手凭什么和人家比。

关于发音和模仿

她在书中着重强调了是语调问题。这个问题是绝大多数中国英语学习者忽略了的问题。因为汉语是声调语言，单个字的声调以固定频率的形式出现，所以句子的语调基本是平的。很多外语学习者可能不知道，英语语调有传递情绪的功能，语调变化甚至能传递说话人的潜台词，比如：反语、讽刺、犹豫、建议等等。错误的语调会让听话人疑惑。考拉小巫的纠正方法是录音，和原文对比。不过几年之后的今天有简单的解决办法，下个配音软件，一切就OK了。

光比对原声不行，还得改善，考拉小巫的方式简单粗暴，就两个字——模仿。

口语自我修炼法

考拉小巫用方法的核心和十二国外语大神本尼·刘易斯的“一分钟迷你讲话稿”不谋而合。也是准备一些小的短文，从向对方描述自己的一天，从这些简单的开始，慢慢加大难度，用口语去形容一个事物和形容一个人物。后面开始甚至还要求举实例论证，最后是现学现用，把学过的词马上使用起来。

隐藏的听写大法

考拉小巫有字幕组的经历，我认为这可能是她英语突飞猛进的一个关键因素。她在做电影字幕，很多时候有听译，听译实际上我们平时的听写是差不多的，而且字幕是要见人的，所以从头到尾容不得一点马虎，可以说，考拉小巫在强迫自己一次一次做高强度听写+理解输出。而且在听译这么多电影的过程中，她一定大量有反复听同一电影的经历。所以，她被她嚼烂了的电影的量，甚至高过一部分人泛读的量。精听精读是提高技能的一个关键步骤，如果她精听的量超过了普通人精读的量，那么我们有理由相信，她至少在接收信息这一方面，有了很大的提高。

关于词汇量的论述

在这本书中，考拉小巫研究来研究去，最后发现影响阅读速度的第一大天敌还是词汇量的问题。她引用了一句话说：“GRE的单词是有用的，在美国读研究生的时候自然就知道了”。

被忽视的机械练习

现在我们提得最多的是刻意练习，学外语都想到的是克拉申、交际法等等。殊不知刻意练习的基础是机械练习，习得一切复杂技能的基础也是机械练习。没有把单个子技能练到炉火纯青，是逃不出舒适区的，更不用说把各个子技能最后串联起来，形成我们所说的技能。考拉小巫说她初中一个吴姓老师奉行fifty

times，就是简单重复50次，我比较赞同这种观点，大量的重复有助于深层次的机械及肌肉及本能记忆。

与高手过招

与高手过招

从初级走向高级的精进之路

精进之路只有一条，坚持，拓展。不过注意到下面这几点，可能会拓展得快一点。

第一，适当接触一些方言和非标准口音。

第二，逐渐积累俚语。

第三，扩充自己的知识面，其中以母语所在国的文化最为重要!

最后呢，考拉小巫还分享了很多小技巧，包括应试、申请材料等很现实的东西。如果想简单点可以直接先照搬她的计划，再适当调整。

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军人的职责是保家卫国，为了国家付出自己的一切。军训的生活让我们感到了军人的艰苦与困难，军人是用血与汗著就的。我们经过军训也应有军人那种顽强拼搏的精神与坚韧不拔的斗志。或许我们没有办法象真正的军人那样手握钢枪，守卫在祖国的大江南北。可是，我们依旧可以不断拼搏，不断奋斗。

在知识的海洋中，我们也面对着一场没有硝烟的战争。只有不断拼搏，不断奋斗才能立于不败之地。未来无法预知的。谁也不知道自己前途是一帆风顺还是挫折重重。但是，只要我们拼搏进取，顽强拼搏，再大的痛苦与苦难也会过去。只要我们拿出军训中坚韧的意志，那么在不远的将来，胜利的花环终究会戴在我们的头上!

“流血，流汗，不流泪，掉皮，掉肉，不掉队。”我们以实际行动为军训生活画上了完美的句号。我将全力以赴迎接学业上更大的挑战，争取做到更好!

初中英语日记（一）

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

初中英语日记（二）

As is well known, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. They increase our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In other words, they are our good teachers and wise friends. This is the reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

Reading is a good thing, but we must pay GREat attention to the choice of books. It is true that we can derive benefits from good books. However, bad books will do us more harm than good.

如众所周知，书籍教我们学习 人生，真理，科学以及其它许多有用的东西。它们增加我们的知识，扩大我们的心胸并加强我们的品格。换句话说，它们是我们的良师益友。这是为什么我们的父母终是鼓励我们要多读书的理由。

读书是一好事，但我们必须多加注意书的选择。不错，我们能从好书中获得益处。然而，坏书却对我们有害无益。

初中英语日记（三）

In my dream

Last night ,I dreamed I became a very beautiful brid.I dreamed that I was in a forest. In tht forest,there were a lot of animals.Then,an old bird told us,"we have a very beautiful forest,we should therefore protect it from pollution."All the animals agreed with him.

But the second day,people came into our forest.Many animals were caught.The people wanted to build house and parks in our forest.Many old trees were felled.And then suddenly,nothing was left standing.

I was so shocked and then I bursted out crying.I woke up at midnight.It was only a dream.

在梦中

昨晚我梦见我变成一只非常漂亮的鸟.我梦见我在一座森林,森林里有很多动物.然后有一只老鸟告诉我们,"我们有一座非常美丽的森林,

因此我们应该保护它,免受污染"所有的动物都赞成他.

但是第二天,人们进入我们的森林,许多动物被逮捕.这些人要在我们的森林地上建造房子和公园.许多年老的树木被砍下,然后,突然间,一切都被夷平了.

我很震惊,接着突然大哭起来.我在半夜醒来,原来只是个梦.

一、四级作文概述

四级作文是提纲作文，一般按提纲写出相应段落即可。在文章内容上无需追求高深新颖，切题合理便可落笔；在思路逻辑上则要求句意通顺，文字流畅；在文字表现上要求无语法错误，个别小错可忽略(如动介搭配，单词拼写等不涉及语法类小错)。另外，值得一提的是，在篇章结构上建议写三段，所以即便题目只给出两个提纲，最好在完成两个提纲后，再多补充一段，所补内容不限，但须跟话题相关。

二、四级作文例题分析

(1) The Shortage of Fresh Water

1. 目前淡水资源非常紧缺

2. 为什么会出现这种情况

3. 该如何解决

96年6月份曾考过此题，今天来看，似乎更有现实意义。这是一道负面社会现象题，那么挖掘其背后根源，并找出解决方案，就成为探讨的主要方面，而提纲也正是如此。三个提纲各属其类，界限清晰，直接按提纲写三段即可。段1为提出现象，确立研究对象。提纲1翻译后仅一句话，作为一段话则显内容单薄，字数匮乏，所以需进一步发挥。不妨从例证角度扩充，举例时即可基于国内现状，也可纵观全球，显然前者更易行。可从我国西南地区的生活缺水，水价上升，以及河流干涸等细节方面铺陈。段2是原因分析，建议分析主观原因和客观原因两方面。所谓主观原因即是基于人的思想意念，心理意识，行为动机以及行为举措，比如人们节约意识的淡漠或者人们误认为淡水取之不尽等不当想法。而客观原因则是从非人角度出发，如社会发展，人口激增，甚至污染的加剧等方面出发，这些因素均使得淡水消耗的增加。当然，考场上由于时间紧迫，无法细想，可能会写出的两个全是主观类或客观类的原因，其实也无妨，只要二者不同即可，谨防虽言明两原因，但实则彼此混淆，出现逻辑不清的窘况。段3是措施分析，措施可从官方措施和民众措施两方面写起，也可加入作为现代年轻人，我该如何约束自己，从生活中小事做起节约水资源等内容。总之，在内容上考生尽可发挥想象力，纵马驰骋，原则依旧：切题者皆可。

(2)Part-time Jobs for College Students

1.目前大学校园里很多学生业余时间做兼职

2.对于大学生是否该做兼职工作，人们看法不一

3.我的看法

这是一道校园话题，在内容上即涉及现象，又涉及观点，能很好地考察到学生的综合分析能力。提纲1依旧是现象提出，看到提纲1，大家脑海里会浮现很多熟悉的场景，如校园布告栏里张贴着的兼职广告，校园论坛上也经常发布的一些兼职信息等等，这些都可反映在段1中。所以当我们第一眼看到话题或提纲时，脑海中常常会浮现出相关场景，把这些画面定格，进行详细描绘即可，即自然又切题。当然，段1也可从学生的兼职渠道以及兼职类型等方面加以发挥。总之，提纲是总领，而符合总领的任何附属内容都可写。段2是人们对此学生兼职的不同看法，一正一反。切记在表达上述两类观点时，提出其相关论据。段3是提出作者本人看法。本人看法既可选择上述任一方(只要不极端)，也可提出与上述均异的第三类观点，对于极度偏激的正反方观点则需做一番调和与勾兑(这个一般很少见)。需要提醒的是，继提出己方观点后，还应补充其他内容，如论据；也可写我的下一步做法，甚至可写我所认为的大家对此问题所应采取的对策云云。

(3)Private Cars of Today

1.目前私家车越来多了

2.私家车为人们带来的益处和问题

这道题只有两个提纲，所以建议在完成提纲要求内容之后再补充一段相关内容，可以在提纲2之后续补段3(如举措类：如何合理地限制私家车的出行以减少废气排放等等)，也可在1，2之间插入一段(如原因分析，即为何私家车越来越多)。先来看提纲1，依然是事实陈述，看到提纲1，会很容易联想到马路上川流不息的过往车辆，以及高峰期令人沮丧的堵车，那么即可将这些内容付诸笔端。再看提纲2，是私家车给人们生活带来的影响，该事实是一中性事实，则需辩证地分析其影响的两面性，一方面它带来好处，如让人们的出行变得更自由更方便，另一方面它带来坏处，如排放废气，污染环境，或造成交通堵塞等等。