高考英语作文求助信模板（精选20篇）

从世界各地来看，读书节已成为当代社会的文化景观，而且是最近20年的新风潮。不过，现代意义上的第一个“读书节”，最早可追溯到1926年西班牙国王首次设立的“西班牙自由节”，并把伟大作家塞万提斯的生日10月7日作为这个节日的庆祝日。

From all over the world, Reading Festival has become the cultural landscape of contemporary society, and it is a new trend in recent 20 years. However, the first "Reading Festival" in the modern sense, the earliest can be traced back to 1926, the king of Spain for the first time to set up a "Spanish freedom festival", and the great writer Cervantess birthday in October 7th as a celebration of the holiday.

1930年庆祝活动移到4月23日――塞万提斯的忌日，碰巧这一天也是加泰罗尼亚地区大众节日“圣乔治节”。传说中勇士乔治屠龙救公主，并获得了公主回赠的礼物――一本书，象征着知识与力量。每到这一天，加泰罗尼亚的妇女们就给丈夫或男朋友赠送一本书，男人们则会回赠一枝玫瑰花。由此相沿成习，如今每到这一天，书籍减价10%，玫瑰花的价格则陡然上涨。

Celebration on 1930 to April 23rd -- the anniversary of the death of Cervantes, to this day is also the Catalonia area public holiday "St. Georges day". The legend goes that the knight George slew a dragon and saved a princess, and was granted a gift in return: a book, representing knowledge and power. Every year on this day, Catalonia women will give a book to their husband or boyfriend, the men will give a rose. Thus become a custom through long time usage, and now every day, the book price by 10%, prices rose sharply rise.

世界读书日就来源于此。巧合的是，这天是著名作家塞万提斯、莎士比亚、维加3位著名文学大师的辞世纪念日，又是美国作家纳博科夫、法国作家莫里斯・德鲁昂、冰岛诺贝尔文学奖得主拉克斯内斯等多位文学家的生日。巧合之外，则是人们对书籍的热爱和对阅读重要性的深层认识。主旋律都是一样的：无论是年老还是年轻，无论是贫穷还是富有，无论是患病还是健康，都能享受阅读的乐趣，都能尊重和感谢为人类文明作出巨大贡献的文学、文化、科学思想大师们，都能保护知识产权。

World Book Day comes from this. Coincidentally, this is the famous writer Cervantes died, Shakespeare Vega, 3 famous literary masters of the day, and Nabokov, French writer USA writer Maurice de Rouen, Iceland Nobel prize winner Laks Ness and many other writers day. Coincidentally, is that people love of books and a deep understanding of the importance of reading. The main theme is the same: whether old or young, whether rich or poor, whether it is sick or healthy, can enjoy the pleasure of reading, respect and gratitude can make great contributions to human civilization, literature, culture, scientific thinking gurus, can protect the intellectual property rights.

全国卷英语作文最后几天的备考资料。备考目的性、指导性、猜押性都很强。最后几天一定

要看的。

一、全国卷书面表达分析

2015全国I：应用文、写信约稿、介绍美节日风俗和中学生生活。

2015全国II：应用文、邮件邀约、去敬老院陪老人过重阳节。

2014全国I：应用文、写信咨询、英语学习班广告的咨询。

2014全国II：应用文、报社正文、十年后的我

2013全国I：应用文、写信问是否接机（带着中国画）

2013全国II：应用文、写信让友代卖中国结

2012课标卷：应用文、写邮件、申请参加夏令营

2012大纲卷：应用文、邀请信、邀请外教参加生日聚会

二、综上分析，干货如下：

1.都是应用文。

说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议文不考，尤其要杜绝那些高大上的，平时经常训练的正反观点对

比的文章也要果断抛弃。

2.与学生生活、学习、交友息息相关。

生活相关：15I、15II、14II、13I、13II、12大纲

学习相关：14I、12

交友相关：12大纲

注意生活、学习、交友三大话题。有些作文也许会跨其中两个话题。凡是不符合这三个话题

的作文，高考最后这10几天少复习，甚至不复习的好。地震、环保、食品安全、雾霾、河流

空气污染、交通拥挤、良心道德、服不服等等的高大上，都抛弃吧（这些都是大学作文解决

的问题）。所以与学生生活、学习、交友相关的词汇、句式还是好好总结的。

3.渗透传统文化的元素。

传统文化：2015II重阳节、2013中国画。

这方面的词汇还是要适当准备一些滴。例如：paper cutting 剪纸，Lantern Festival 元

宵节， Mid-autumn Day 中秋节，tang yuan/ sweet rice dumpling 元宵，Chinese New Year’

s Eve 除夕，Dragon Boat Festival 龙舟节，DoubleNinth Festival 重阳节, Chinese tea

中国茶

4.生活、学习、交友三大话题·必须掌握的【词汇 + 短语】

①schools English newspaper,Chinese / foreign cultures， more information,

volunteer, great fun,opportunity, confidence in, experience,lecture,

excellence in, speech competitions, a better idea,

②be popular with/among,especially, exciting,excited, patiently,be

patient with,be interested in,the most important, various, outgoing,

successfully, successful, be good at/for, more than glad, be willing to help you

with,be familiar with，delicious, with joy

③welcome, spend their holidays,invite you to join us,make dumplings,intend

to join,enjoy,invite sb. to, gave him a warm welcome, have a try,give

me a piece of advice, takeseriously,depend on, get a higher education,

improve ourselves,would like to, interview,I believe,learn a great deal

fromabout, organize class activities,deal with, stick to, share

with,express myself, go for an outing, manage to do,persuade, accept,

receive,have a good/wonderful time,benefit, benefit from,different,

give up, have a picnic, go to a museum, have lots of fun,take pains to improve,

get prepared for, be able to, get along well with,have a good command of,

appreciate, made up my mind to do, make a great difference (to someone), think

highly of, pay much attention to,take notice of,keep it in mind that,in

return, helpwith, feel nervous, make you familiar with, long to, broaden

my mind, have trouble doing,communicate,suffer from, speak English fluently,

visit some famous places, chat with， participate in， take part in, won prizes,

take into consideration, it’s necessary to do,respect, trust,protect

from,agree with, in order to,encourage sb. to do,organize

5.必须熟练运用的【句型 + 连接词】

Im writing to tell you

I wonder if youd like to

Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I am writing an e-mail to tell you something about

Only in this way can we make a great contribution to

If I could ,I would

Hard work pays off.

We shouldWe’d betterIt is better to do

I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if

you could give me a kind consideration.

Only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress

Could you give me some advice on how to

If you are able to come with us, please let us know and

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Looking forward to your reply.

May I have your attention

First,Second,Third

so long as，even though, at the same time, By the way, Besides, not onlybut

also, What’s more, as well as

6.三大从句和非谓语的运用是必不可少的。每篇文章这两类至少运用一次。同学们都知道，

在此不必多说。

三、透过2015年全国Ｉ的作文，看清标准范文的猫腻

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。

请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1.栏目介绍； 2.稿件内容； 3.稿件长度：约400词；4.交稿日期：6月28日前。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

下面把标准答案给与了分解，同学们务必要逐字逐句地研读，找出标准范文为什么这样

写，发现范文写作时的思考过程，挖掘范文和作文原题中的一一对等的字眼提示。通过研读

分析，再回扣题目本身。写作也就那么回事儿，其实一点也不难。希望同学们可以悟出基本

的写作思路、技巧。以下英语连起来就是标准范文。

称呼，已给：

Dear Peter,

开头语，已给：

Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.

开篇，介绍“外国文化”栏目概况 (要点1：点出栏目名称、特点popular、进行栏目介绍)：

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.

It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home

countries. (搭配be popular among、carry一词用得好、过去分词短语written by作后

置定语)

进行约稿 (写作目的，这可是正事儿)：

Would you please write something about the culture in your part ofthe United States

稿件内容 (要点2）：

And (and一词虽然简单，但用得巧妙，呈上衔接，过渡自然，读起来还有抑扬顿挫之感觉) we

would especially (强调递进) welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays

and festivals (节日风俗，扣栏目) and the life of American high school students (中

学生生活，扣栏目).

适当拓展，根据字数灵活安排

You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. (高

级词汇、so long as好句式)

稿件长度 (要点3)：

400 words would be fine.

交稿日期 (要点4)：

Could we have your article before June 28

合适的结尾 (万能句式,一定背下)：

Im looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

四、2016作文模拟猜押如下：

（一）书信/邮件

Passage 1（建议信、学习、文化）

你打算毕业后到美国留学, 想咨询你的美国朋友Chris。请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1．目的：增长见识，体验文化；2．困惑：语言障碍，学业压力；3．征求建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不

计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

Yours，

Joe

One possible version

DearChris,

I’ve finally made my decision to go to America for further study after high school.

I’ve been longing to go to America, mainly for two reasons. One is that I

can experience American culture, and the other is that I can broaden my mind in this

country. But I have some worries. My English is a bit poor, especially spoken English.

I’m afraid I’ll have trouble communicating. Besides, I may suffer from heavy pressure

from college courses.

I hope you can offer me some practical advice.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Joe

Passage2（学习、文化）

假如你是李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况，并征求

教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1.对英语学习的认识。

2.自己目前的英语水平。

3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题。

4.对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：1.词数100左右。2.信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher

_________________________________ Thank you!

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more

important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel

it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking

English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.

Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can

make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Passage3（学习、文化）

作为班长，请你根据以下内容给新任外教Mr. Smith 写一封信,向他表示欢迎并转达同学们

对英语课的希望：

1.介绍西方文化；2.组织多样活动；3.关注学生发音。

注意: 1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计

入总词数。

Dear Mr. Smith,

_____________________________________________________________

Yours,

Chris

One possible version

Dear Mr. Smith,

I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.

First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture. We are all very interested in knowing more about culture behind the language. Besides, we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved in speaking English. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Thank you very much. Looking forward to meeting you!

Yours,

Chris

Passage 4（生活）

假定你是刘芳。今年暑期加拿大的一所中学将组织该校的学生来你所就读的学校访问。其间，Lucy将借住在你家。请你给她写封信，代表全家欢迎她的到来并告之有关事宜，内容要点如下：

上午：参观学校各教学场所及设施。

下午：游览繁华市区及周遍景点。

晚上：看电视、玩游戏、聊天等。

注意：词数100左右；

Dear Lucy,

_____________________________________________________________

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Liu Fang

One possible version

Dear Lucy,

I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.

My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. As far as I know, you will be shown around the school in the morning, but in the afternoon I’ll take you to the downtown and then some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, or meeting people. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time and learn more about Chinese culture.

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Fang

Passage5（生活、文化）

假设你是高三（1）班的学生李华。你的英国朋友Chris八月份来北京度假，来信向你咨询如

Li Hua is my good friend. We are classmates. He is tallest in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. We have many in common, so that we have many things to talk. For example, we both like playing basketball and we like the same basketball player Kobe. Besides, we both like cartoon very much. We always watch cartoon program together. At weekends, we oftenplay basketball. Whats more important, he studies hard. So do I. We can make progress together. He is a good friend.

李华是我的好朋友，我们是同学。他是我们班上最高的。他很善良，总是随时帮助其他人。我们有很多共同点，因此我们有很多事情可以交谈。比如说，我们都喜欢打篮球，我们都喜欢同一个球星——科比。除此之外，我们都很喜欢卡通。我们经常一起看卡通节目。周末的时候，我们经常一起打篮球。更重要的是，他学习很努力，我也一样。我们可以相互进步。他是一位好朋友。

记叙文

假如你是武汉大学附中高三(1)的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。

(1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;

(2)消除与同学之间的误会;

(3)努力学习，实现人生梦想;

(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。

注意：

(1)可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯;

(2)词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。

High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior 3 student, it wont take long before I graduate.

_____________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

【猜题理由】本篇书面表达能比较真实地反映学生的生活实际，话题内容关注学生的社交生活和树立健康的人生观，具有考查的现实意义和指导意义;在语言表达上，能够让学生充分运用所学知识，毫无词汇障碍地表达自己的思想;此外，在语言表达的设置上也有一定的伸展性，能有效地激发学生个性观点的创建。

【构思点拨】本篇书面表达是常见的提纲类型的写作，要点明确清楚，便于学生组织文章，理清脉络。行文时要注意处理好语言表达的控制性和伸展性之间的关系。

【参考范文】

High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, no pains, no gains.

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

Everyone knows thatFailurealways accompanies us in our life. No matter what we do, none of us can say we will surely succeed, because there is no such thing as plain sailing.

大家都知道,失败总是伴随着我们的生活。无论我们做什么,没有人能说我们肯定会成功,因为没有所谓的一帆风顺。

About failure, different people have different opinions. Generally speaking, on one hand, people think "failure is the mother of success". They think we wont understand the profound meaning of success until we go through failure. On the other hand, for some people, failure is frustration. They think if a person goes through too much failure, he will collapse and lose confidence in his life.

对失败,不同的人有不同的观点。一般来说,一方面,人们认为“失败是成功之母”。他们认为我们不会理解的深刻含义成功直到我们经历失败。另一方面,对于一些人来说,失败是失望。他们认为如果一个人经历太多的失败,他将会崩溃,在他的生活中失去信心。

In my opinion, failure is the footstone and catalyst of the edifice of success. "You dont know what you have until its gone." If you have never lost it, and always get it easily, you will not cherish what you get and own.

在我看来,失败是成功的基石和催化剂的大厦。“你不知道你所拥有的,直到它消失了。“如果你没有失去它,总是很容易,你不会珍惜你所得到的,自己的。

Now more and more children in the countryside are out of school. One of the reasons is that their parents havent much money to afford their school. They have to stay at home to earn money to support their families. What a pity! And another reason is that many parents think it is useless for girls to study and they would not like them to go to school. On the other hand, some children are not interested in their lessons and would not like to go to school.

I think all the children, including girls, should have the right to receive education. We have the duty to lend them a hand when they are in trouble. All the people should pay attention to the education of children who will play a very important part in the future of our country.

现在，越来越多的农村孩子失学了。一个原因是因为他们的父母没有很多的钱供他们上学，他们不得不在家里赚钱养家。太可怜了。另外叶个原因就是很多家长都认为读书对女孩子没用，所以不让她们读书。另一方面，一些孩子对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。

我认为所有的孩子(包括女孩)都有权利接受教育。我们有义务在他们困难时伸出手来帮助他们。人们应当重视孩子的教育问题，因为他们对国家的未来将起到非常重要的作用。

Now in the country areas, there are more and more children out of school. The reasons vary. First, many of the parents are too poor to send their children to school and children have to stay at home to get money to support their families. Second, many parents think it useless for girls to study and they would not like them to go to school. Finally, some children are not interested in their lessons and would not like to go school.

I think children are the future of our country and all the children including girls should have the opportunities to receive education. Knowledge can change the life of a person. I hope more attention will be paid to the solution of the problem, because children will play a very important part in the future of our country.

现在在农村，越来越多的孩子失学了。造成这种情况的原因很多。首先，许多父母太穷了，无法送他们的孩子上学，孩子们不得不在家赚钱养家。另外一个原因是很多家长都认为读书对女孩子无用，所以不让她们读书。最后一个原因是有些孩子对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。

我认为孩子是国家的未来，所有的孩子(包括女孩)都应有机会接受教育。知识能改变人的命运。我希望人们应更重视孩子上学问题的解决，因为他们对国家的未来将起到非常重要的作用。

成人教育的繁荣 A Boom in Adult education

A Boom in Adult education

Directions： For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Adult Education. You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

1.现在许多成年人都利用业余时间去大学或夜校读书

2.出现这种成人教育热的原因是……

3.结论

范文：

A Boom in Adult Education

Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li， my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard days work， gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class. Miss Lis case is not unique， and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.

There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education. Some people， like Miss Li， are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society. To them more knowledge， or rather， more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.

Other people， especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market. They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade， administration， education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.

There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine， painting， calligraphy and photography. As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their hearts desire.

Out of necessity or out of interest， people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves， and this boom in adult education， in turn， helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.

成人教育的繁荣

每个星期二和星期五晚上看到李小姐，一天的辛苦工作之后，我的邻居，在一个公司赶回家，一个秘书，吞下她吃饭然后赶紧去车上她的英语课。李小姐的情况并非独特，现在越来越多的城市成年人度过他们的业余时间，试图提高自己在学校或学院。

有很多理由可以为他们的教育。有些人，如李小姐，都在做这件事来获得另一个学位或文凭来给社会留下深刻印象。对他们更多的知识，或者说，更多的证书意味着更多的机会，更好的工作和更快的晋升。

其他人，特别是下岗或失业的人去职业学校，准备回到就业市场。他们渴望新的技能，使他们能够胜任在零售行业，管理，教育和其他服务类的工作，他们是奇怪的，因为他们大多是蓝领工人在工厂。

也有人前来参加中国传统医学、绘画、书法、摄影等课程。当他们工作周的时候，人们开始有时间来满足他们对他们内心的渴望的梦想。

出于必要或出于兴趣，人们为了共同的目标去上学，为了提高自己，而这一热潮在成人教育，反过来，有助于提高整个国家的智力水平。

在新概念三册中，对比论证的方法反复被运用到，至少出现了五次，分别在篇章L12，L23，L38，L41 和L54的第一段出现。如果对这五篇文章中的对比论证段落仔细研读，会发现这些段落有着几乎完全一样的结构，有规律可循，所以对比论证方法应该是三册学习中不可忽略的一个部分。

这里我们就拿第12课为例。对比论证出现在了第一段。作者在第一段开门见山提出了论点：Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island（我们许多人对于荒岛生活有一种不切实际的想法）。之后作者讲了两种截然相反的想法：一种想法是imagine it to be a sort of paradise（认为荒岛是天堂）；另一种想法是Life on a desert island is wretched（荒岛生活很可怕）。最后一句话是个总结句。作者正是通过两种呈对比的想法来论证“人们对荒岛生活有不切实际的想法”这一观点。需要读者关注的是，在两种成对立的想法之间作者用了一句非常漂亮的过渡句：The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. （另一种想法恰恰相反）。于是，一个结构清晰严谨、论述有理有力的段落跃然纸上。

读罢上述五篇文章的第一段，不难发现它们都是由两种相反的观点组成，而在相反的观点中间，作者都运用过渡句，这里对对比论证的过度表达稍作总结：

The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. (L12)

on the other hand (L23)

but (L38)

…be only part of the picture. (L41)

however (L54)

了解了对比论证之后，我们不妨思考下如何运用这种手法，毕竟学以致用才是我们的最终目的。如果针对当前的英语高考作文题，我们完全可以让它在我们的考场上发挥作用。这里以上海2004年和2005年的英语高考作文题为例，看看这一新概念三册中反复出现的手法如何作为应试技巧运用到考试中。

2005上海英语高考作文题：

古人云：“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)。通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。

写作文首先要做的是审题，这个题目要求你在写文章时做到两点：你的观点是支持“天生我才必有用”；用你生活事例论证。如何引出自己的观点呢？我们可以运用对比手法，可以先就题中话题先找到两个对立观点，然后再抛出自己的观点。值得一提的是，考官在批阅一片作文时首先会注意考生是否偏题。那我们如何避免偏题呢？一个很好的方法就是在开头就告诉改卷老师你扣题了。比如笔者写下如下一段作为作文首段：

People have formed an unrealistic picture of their talents. Some imagine themselves to be unconquerably intelligent. On the opposite, others tend to consider themselves a drop in the ocean, powerless and useless. There is an element of truth in both ideas, but I am convinced that there must be a use to out talent, as it can be proved by my own experience.

先写人们对自己的天赋形成了不切实际的看法，然后写两种极端的看法：一种是认为自己绝顶聪明，另一种是自己如沧海一粟，微小无用。在这两个相反的观点之间有了on the opposite来过渡。这正是运用了对比论证的手法，但是别忘了上述的两点考题要求。在列举了两种相反的观点之后就可以抛出自己的观点：I am convinced that there must be a use to out talent.而后自然用过一个as it can be proved by my own experience的句子过渡到以下的事例对这一观点进行论证。如此一写，完全不用担心是否扣题的问题，因为在这一文章首段告诉了考官自己的观点，并且通过一个过渡句说明下文内容是起到论证作用的事例。当然不要忘记这里是通过对比的手法来引出自己的观点的。

上述高考题属于比较严肃的话题，如果遇到的话题涉及生活事件呢？下面再列举另一种风格的高考作文题。

2004上海英语高考作文题

老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。

我们首先还是要捉摸清楚考题的要点：你的决心；你的想法。负责班级墙报貌似是个小话题，但是我们完全可以运用上对比论证的手法。比如在写自己的决心时，不妨先写一般人对这样一个老师指派的任务是何种态度，而后引出自己的决心。而在写一般人的态度时完全可以用上对比的手法。比如笔者写下如下一段作为作文首段：

People show different attitude when appointed to be in charge of wall newspaper. Those who regard the task as a great burden would decline it while those who long to serve their fellow students would accept it with great pleasure. As for me, it is a golden opportunity to practice myself, so when the challenge comes, I will accept it.

可以先用一句话总起人们会有不同的态度，而后写两个呈对比的观点：一种是认为这是个负担因而拒绝承担；另一种是渴望为民服务因而欣然接受。中间运用的过度是while，这样可以将呈对比的做法浓缩在一个句子里，句子结构的复杂性提升。然后通过as for me来表达自己的态度，也就是我的部分决心。

当然，不要忽略作文题中的另一个非常重要的要求，即该作文是以日记形式出现，所以不妨将将这一比较正式的段落放在文中而非文首。

这里暂以两个高考作文题为例，运用上新概念三册中的对比论证手法，希望可以给大家一些启发，帮助大家真正地将这一结构手法活学活用。

Look out the window, suddenly found that cant see the blue sky, white clouds, a gray sight between heaven and earth, even the other side of the building there is only a hazy outline. This weather is more and more frequent, haze is silently hung over our city.

Haze is mist floating a lot of smoke, dust and other particles and formation of the turbidity phenomenon. January 29, according to the ministry of remote sensing satellite monitoring: China has 130 square kilometers of regional haze shrouded, serious pollution of air quality.

The fog haze weather how? Many families have a car, we have to travel more convenient, but the car exhaust pollution of the air; Power plant, oil refineries, chemical plants in our city "game", but the clock keep emit soot and dust; The colorful fireworks let a person too many things to see, but air ZhongYan WuTengTeng, become very muddy, air quality has fallen sharply, PM2.5 and PM10 index has soared, these are the main cause of fog, they bring us quick and convenient and enjoyable at the same time, also quietly gave us the unintended consequences.

Haze weather, our breathing is cloudy gas. The haze in the air can cause diseases such as pneumonia, sore throat, bronchitis, heart, decline. In 1952, the fog in London, England is like invisible killer, seized 4000 people in just five days of life, after two months has killed 8000 people in the life, the power of the fog, and this is a wake-up call for us.

We need the fresh air, is a healthy body. Please do not at the expense of the health, and for the so-called good life. Driving less, green travel, a variety of trees, protect forests. Haze, starts from me.

望一眼窗外，突然发现看不到蓝天、白云，天地间一片灰色的景象，连对面的楼房也只有朦胧的轮廓。这样的天气越来越频繁，雾霾正无声无息地笼罩着我们的城市。

雾霾是雾中悬浮着大量的烟、灰尘等微粒而形成的混浊现象。据环保部遥感卫星监测：1月29日中国范围内有130万平方公里的地区被雾霾笼罩，空气质量严重污染。

那雾霾天气是怎样来的呢?很多家庭都拥有小汽车，我们的出行更便捷了，但汽车的尾气排放污染空气;电厂、炼油厂、化工厂在我们的城市里“大显身手”，但夜以继日地不断排放出煤烟和灰尘;绚丽的烟花爆竹让人目不暇接，但空气中烟雾腾腾，变得非常混浊，空气质量急剧下降，PM2.5、PM10指数直线上升，这些都是造成雾霾的主要原因，它们在带给我们快捷方便、赏心悦目的同时，也悄悄给我们带来了意想不到的后果。

雾霾的天气，我们呼吸的是混浊的气体。空气中的霾会引起肺炎、咽喉炎、气管炎、心脏衰落等疾病。1952年，英国伦敦的那场大雾似无形的杀手，在短短五天内就夺取了4000人的生命，在之后两个月内有夺去了8000人的生命，可见大雾的威力，也该给我们敲响了警钟。

我们要的是清新的空气，要的是健康的体魄。请不要以牺牲健康为代价，而换来所谓的美好生活。少开车，绿色出行，多种树，保护森林。治霾，从我做起。

为迎接奥运会在中国举行，请写一篇关于讲究文明礼仪的倡议书，具体内容包括：

1、讲究文明礼貌是中华民族的传统;

2、面对外国友人应热情大方、彬彬有礼;

3、要坚决杜绝公共场所大声喧哗、拥挤打闹、随地吐痰等不文明行为;

4、奥运即将召开，我们将代表中国形象。

参考词汇：喧哗 uproar

[范文]

My dear fellow students,

The Olympics are just around the corner. Today I want to talk about good manners and courtesy.

We Chinese have always been respected and highly praised for good manners and courtesy, which have, as well, become precious traditions of our people. In a couple of weeks beyond, a large number of foreign friends will come to China to join us in enjoying the Olympics. Before foreign guests, we should have an easy manner and behave politely and warm-heartedly. In public places, such ugly behaviors as uproar, pushing or squeezing together, spitting and so on should be determinedly forbidden. In a sense, each of us will not simply stand for ourselves but stand for China. Therefore, boys and girls, let’s do it well right now and the eyes of the world are to on us!

[高考英语满分作文一篇讲究文明礼仪的倡议书

1、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.

2. 俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct inmany cases even today.

3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. Whatmakes things worse is that______.

4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

nowadays，it is common to ______. many people like ______ because ______. besides，______.

5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

people’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. some people say that ______.to them,_____.

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?

according to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while. obviously，______，but why?

Dear dad and mum,youre so selflethat you always keep all good things for me.Youre so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving my life.Thank you for your love.Please believe me.I will try my best,I want to see the smile in your eyes.I love you forever .

Mama, thank you for so many years of my education and training, ignorance of the past, I always Jalan you angry, but now I grow up, self-reliance, and I feel that I should not be so na-iv-e, and her mother, I will work hard Learning, you will not live up to my expectations! Really very grateful to my mother to take care of. When I was sick, my mother is always in every possible way to take care of me. When I failed the examination, the mother also encouraged me to refuel, not to become disheartened. Really grateful to my mother has done, I know it was my mother I love the performance, really would like to thank my mother. I think in this world, I love you people, my mother

My Mother isa kind and gentle woman. She is always very gentle. She takes good care of her children and keeps them all at school. I have one brother and two sistets. So she gets four children in all. She gives us every comfort. We all love her and she loves us also.

My mother has too much to do in bringing us up. As our family is too poor to keep a servant, my mother has always to do very much work. She gets up very early and sleeps very late every day. She works hard, yet without complaining.

She is also a thrifty, and industrious woman. She saves every cent that she can and keeps everything in order. As she has been busy eversince she was young, she looks older than she really is. Her face is wrinkled, her hair becomes silver white, but she works as hard as ever.

Often she says to us, "work while you work, play while you play. If you do not work, you will become lazy and of no use to society." What piece of good advice this is! We must worth it well and always keep it in our mind.

亲爱的爸爸妈妈,你太无私,你总是把所有好的东西给我。你这么勤奋,你继续工作整天为了谋生。谢谢你给我的生活。谢谢你的爱。请相信我。我将尽我最大的努力,我希望看到微笑在你的眼睛。我永远爱你。

妈妈,感谢您这么多年对我的教育和培训,无知的过去,我总是道路你生气,但现在我长大了,自力更生,我觉得我不应该那么na-iv-e,和她的母亲,我会努力学习,你不会辜负我的期望!真的非常感谢我的母亲照顾。我生病时,我妈妈总是照顾我在每一个可能的方法。当我考试不及格,妈妈也鼓励我去加油,不要灰心。真的很感激我的母亲所做的,我知道这是我妈妈我爱性能,真的要感谢我的母亲。我认为在这个世界上,我爱你的人,我的母亲

我的母亲是亲切和善的女人。她总是很温柔。她很好地照顾孩子们,让他们都在学校。我有一个弟弟和两个妹妹。所以她得到了四个孩子。她给了我们每一个安慰。我们都爱她,她也爱我们。

我的母亲有太多的事要做在我们。我们家太穷了,保持一个仆人,我母亲总是做很多工作。她每天很早起床,很晚睡觉。她工作很努力,但没有抱怨。

她又是一位节俭勤勉的妇女。她可以节省每一分钱,她可以,让一切井井有条。以来,她就一直忙着从那时起她年轻的时候,她看起来比她老。她的脸布满皱纹,头发也变成了灰白,但她仍像从前一样辛勤地操劳。

通常她对我们说:“工作时工作,游玩的时候游玩。如果你不工作,你将变得懒惰,对社会无用。“这是块好建议啊!我们必须值得很好,总是在我们的思想。

减压

假设你们班要在下星期一举行题为"The Ways for Students to Relax"的班会，请结合报道的内容。用英语写一篇80字左右的发言材料。

内容包括：

1. 简要介绍造成现在学生学习压力大的原因。

2. 你认为来自于English Online调查结果的放松方式是否有效，为什么？

3.谈谈你个人自我放松的有效做法（至少三点）。

Dear fellows,

Not only adults but also we students often feel stressed because we have too much homework to do, and we are very busy studying every day, we don’t have our own time to do what we are interested in. We are very tired and sleepy all day, so we should learn to deal with it. What should we do to relax?

From the result of the survey, I think doing sports with classmates is a good way to relax. Because it’s good for our health and it can make us relaxed.

I also have three ways to relax ourselues. First, we can listen to music. Second, we can go to the movies with our parents on weekends. Don’t study at home all the weekend. Third, when we feel tired, we can think about something interesting.

I hope my suggestions can help you.Thanks!

[高考英语话题作文减压

一、对全文进行归纳总结的句型

1.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…

2.Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that…

3.Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that…

4.All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that…

5.From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that…

6.To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that…

7.In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it is…

8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that…

9. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that…

10. It is believed that…

二、表达个人观点的句型

1. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.

2. As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/policy.

3. In conclusion/a word, I believe that…

4. There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of… outweigh its advantages.

5. In my opinion/view, we should…

6. As for me, I…

7. As I see , …

8. From my point of view, …

9. Personally/ I think…

10. My view is that…

11. I think/consider…

12. I take/hold a negative/positive view of…

三、表达建议的句型

1. It’s high time that we tried every possible means to put an end to…

2. It’s really high time we took measures to solve the problem of/put an end to…

3. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to…

4. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of…

5. There is no easy solution to the problem of…, but… might be useful.

6. There is no quick answer to the question of…, but … might be helpful.

7. It is necessary that effective/proper/quick actions/steps/measures be taken to…

8. It’s suggested that great efforts be made to…

9.To check/control the tendency/trend is no easy task, and it requires a good/deep awareness/consciousness/understanding of…

原因

1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.

A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the

phenomenon(problem).

2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.

3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...

4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...

5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...

6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...

7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...

One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...

Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...

Perhaps the primary factor is that …

But the fundamental cause is that ...

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

使用鼠标是人与电脑交流最有效的装置。

For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

对大多数人来说，它没有鼠标操作电脑是不可能的，更不用说上网。选择一个好的鼠标是非常方便的，在控制屏灵活方便。具有插入，删除，移动和复制，它使我们能够测试编辑，浏览网页和下载我们想要的东西。它甚至可以给我们带来大量的音乐，电影和电脑游戏。想象一下，所有这一切都可以做一个可爱的小老鼠。

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

一个方便的工具，可以使我们的工作更容易，但它并不总是能提供一种积极的方式。在我们的指尖留下太多准备好的资料很少追求知识的空间。太多的现成的答案让我们在寻求真理不那么兴奋。过分依赖鼠标使我们懒惰和缺乏创意的身心。

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英语作文精彩句子集锦

1. Nothing is more important than …没有什么比。。。更重要

Eg。Nothing is more important than health./ to be independent.

没有什么比健康独立更重要。

2. sb./sth. is the +最高级+(n.) that I have ever met/ seen/ known.。。。

是我所遇到、见到、知道最。。。

Eg。 Mr zhang is the kindest teacher that I have ever met/ seen/ known.

张老师是我所遇到/见过/知道的最好的老师。

Freindship is the most valuable thing that I have ever had.

友谊是我所拥有的最宝贵的东西。

3. We can not/ never emphasize the importance of(doing)sth … too much.

We can never attach too much importance to(doing)sth ….

我们再怎么强调。。。的重要性也不过分。

Eg。 We can not/ never emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不过分。

We can never attach too much importance to reading books widely and wisely.

广泛而聪明地看书是非常重要的。

4. Only when we。。。。。can we….只有当我们。。。时候，我们才能。。。。。

Eg。Only when we devote ourselves to study can we achieve great success.

只有当我们投身于学习，我们才能获得成功。

Only when we have a healthy body can we do what we want.

只有身体健康我们才能做想做的事。

5. As the saying goes 正如谚语所说

There is a saying that goes,

As a proverb says,

Eg。As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

正如谚语所说，“有志者事竟成”。

There is a saying that goes, “failure is the mother of success.”

有谚语说：“失败乃成功之母。”

As a proverb says, no pains, no gains.

正如谚语所说，“不劳则无获。”

6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…

也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……

7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。

历史上，……的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。

8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…

也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。

9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。

越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。

10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…

对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论：……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……

2015高考英语热点话题：中国梦

最近，你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己的感受。内容要点如下：

1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解;

2.你谈到了自己的梦想;

3.如何实现自己的梦想。

注意：

1.总词数不少于100。

2.不可逐条翻译。

3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

April 8 Monday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream....

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April 8 Monday Fine

Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Inspired by(受启发)President Xi’s Chinese Dream, everyone talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future.I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be (想成为)a doctor. Not only(不仅) can doctors save people’s lives but also they aredoing a respectable(值得尊敬的) job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life with their professional knowledge(专业知识).To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequately(充分) for the job of a doctor. Only in this way can I accomplish my goal.

高考英语之关键词大揭秘 从供给侧结构改革到万众创新，从大山的相声到阿喀琉斯之踵，从对一代拳王阿里的名言直引到向莎士比亚经典的致敬，今年的高考英语(江苏卷)可是吸足了考生的眼球。 关键词揭秘之阿喀琉斯之踵(Achilles Heel) 上世纪九十年代的那部《特洛伊》，还是一枚小鲜肉的布拉德·皮特主演的就是阿喀琉斯。传说刚出生的时候，他母亲特意提溜着他的脚踵将他放在冥河之中浸泡，从而打造了他的刀枪不入之身。而唯一没有浸到冥河水的脚踵，也就成为了这位英雄的唯一弱点。 关键词揭秘之拳王阿里( Muhammad Ali) 今年考卷上阿里的那句话，让人震撼“Champions arent made in gyms. Champions are made from something they have deep inside them. A desire， a dream， a vision.”(冠军不是诞生在体育馆里，而是来自人的内心。成就冠军的是渴望、是梦想，是愿景!) 关键词揭秘之莎翁( William Shakespeare) 今年的书面表达问了考生一个让人纠结的问题：面对微信上铺天盖地的“最萌宝宝”、“最美小学生”投票，你是投还是不投。“To vote or not to vote”就是对莎翁悲剧《哈姆雷特》中经典名言“To be or not to be”的致敬。

[英语高考作文真题该不该参加网络投票

home to a strong earthquake, the people working outside xinjirufen. their first thought is that their loved ones are safe » how home-like » rush to return home as soon as possible, to participate in the rescue and rebuild their homes. but natural disasters which blocked the railway, the train decommissioning, long-distance truck capacity shortage, more than 10,000 from around the convergence of sichuan province to xian transit workers in disaster areas anxiously awaiting the return home!

qualcomm situation in the heart, blood is thicker than water. migrant workers in the disaster areas to return home affect the way the hearts of the people of xian. provincial party secretary zhao leji, governor yuan chunqing the first time made important instructions, xian municipal government immediately made arrangements to mobilize all the forces can be mobilized quickly organized the citys capacity to the fastest speed sending migrant workers to go home.

to the secretary, to the mayor, to the commander and political commissar of the past, public security, traffic, traffic police and health departments to the person in charge. migrant workers came to the middle, wenhanwennuan, a certain commitment to send them home as soon as possible, so that migrant workers have been anxious the warm comfort. metro, the mobilization of yanta, who conscientiously fulfill their duties; bureau of transportation, bus companies to mobilize, they transferred the bus in good condition; xian tourism groups to mobilize, they prepared the way migrant workers the necessary food and drink; policemen mobilized, they clear their task is to maintain order and cleared the way by police escort; oil companies to mobilize, they ensure that the fuel is sufficient; mobilization of the health system, ambulances and medical staff accompanied all the way to the bao kang; our troops mobilized, they built the road vehicles and all the necessary supplies. a few hours, xian on the mobilization of the 268 long-distance bus, eager to return home to the migrant workers send home the road.

no valentines love in the earthquake. party committees at all levels of xian, the love, the urgency of radical workers, migrant workers would like to think, to handle the affairs of migrant workers in the hearts. xian love in all walks of life, their real actions, another interpretation of "a difficult one, p plus assistance," the traditional chinese virtues.

家乡遭受强烈地震，在外打工的人心急如焚。他们的第一个念头就是，亲人可安全?家园怎么样?尽快赶回家，参加抢救，重建家园。但灾害使铁路受阻，火车停运，长途车运力不足，一万多名从各地汇聚到西安中转的四川灾区民工在焦急地等待回家!

情通于心，血浓于水。灾区民工的回家之路牵动着西安人民的心。省委书记赵乐际、省长袁纯清在第一时间作出了重要指示，西安市委、市政府立即作出了部署，要求动员一切可以动员的力量，迅速组织全市运力，以最快的速度送民工返乡。

书记来了，市长来了，司令来了，政委来了，公安、交通、交警、卫生等各部门的负责人来了。来到民工中间，问寒问暖，承诺一定尽快送他们回家，让焦急的民工得到了温暖的抚慰。新城、雁塔政府动员起来了，他们认真履行着自己的职责;交通局、公交公司动员起来了，他们调来了状况良好的大客车;西安旅游集团动员起来了，他们备好了民工路上所需的食品饮料;公安干警动员起来了，他们明确自己的任务是维持秩序，并用警车开道护航;石油公司动员起来了，他们确保的是油料充足;卫生系统动员起来了，救护车和医护人员一路相随为的是保康健;我们的部队动员起来了，他们自带车辆和路上所需的一切给养。短短的几个小时，西安就调集了268辆长途客车，把急切返乡的民工送上了回家的路。

地震无情人有情。西安各级党委、政府有情，急民工所急，想民工所想，把事情办在了民工的心坎上。西安各行各业有情，他们用实际行动又一次诠释了“一方有难，八方援手”的中华传统美德。

This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.

Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.

In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.

[One possible version高考英语作文

说明文是对事物形状、性能、特点、成因等进行的理解式表达表述的文章。其形式多为文字提示或图表。这种文体使用比较广泛。科普文、产品介绍、国情或民俗介绍都属于这类文体。说明文是陈述客观事实，谓语动词通常用一般现在时态。说明文具有以下特点：

1. 科学性。介绍事物或解说事理必须揭示其本质特征。做到概念准确，判断恰当，分类清楚。

2. 客观性。写说明文时，要按照事物的本来面目如实地加以介绍、说明和解释。不能带有个人愿望或主观倾向。

3. 知识性。说明文以说明为主要表达方式，用简洁的语言介绍事物或阐明事理，使人们获得关于某一事物的知识和道理。

4. 解说性。说明文的目的就是在于把事物、现象或道理解释、介绍清楚，让读者明白。

几点写作注意

写说明文要注意以下几点：

1. 抓住中心，分清主次。首先根据要仔细阅读文字提示或观察图表，确定文章的中心内容。再根据内容把文章文分成几个段落，每段都要拟定一个主题句。然后确定中心人称和主体时态。

2. 列全要点，扩编句子。以拟定的主题句为中心，选择恰当的词和句型组织材料，编写句子，形成段落。

3. 布局谋篇，连段成文。按照一定的逻辑顺序，用适当的过渡词把已经写好的段落串连成一篇完整的文章。

具体写作实例

例如：根据下列提示，写一篇介绍你们学校的短文。

1. 位于市中心。

2. 有50多年的历史。

3. 现有60个教学班，近3000名学生。

4. 校园美丽，教学设备先进。

5. 教师经验丰富，工作努力。

6. 已为国家培养了许多高素质人才。

7. 本校为全市最好的学校之一。

要求：词数100左右。

写作示范：

Our school is located in the center of the city. I t has a history for more than 50years. Now, there are nearly 3000 students studying hard here, who were divided into 60 classes. I t has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities. The teachers are well experienced and they all put their hearts into teaching. Many students with high quality have been educated since the founding of the school. It is now one of the best schools in the city.