高中关于保护动物的英语作文（合集20篇）

唉，现在的人们啊，真是越来越不懂的珍惜了。

下午，我正在和妈妈说话呢，突然，姑姑走了进来，还把我的侄子和侄女给带来了，手上有一只鸟，好像是大伯抓的。

“有没有带子?”

“有，在那里。”

说到这里，我就已经猜到姑姑要做什么事情了，肯定是要把小鸟的腿给扎起来，不过后面就不知道要干什么了，说不定还会烧着吃掉呢。果不其然，姑姑抓住小鸟的一只脚，绑了起来，然后把袋子的另一端递到侄子的手里，带着他就出去了，在我家门口玩了起来。

不会吧，居然捉小鸟用来玩耍，天呀，这是什么节奏，我最看不惯了，这些关于伤害小动物们的事情对我来说是特别特别的严重的，因为我经常看一些关于动物之类的书，所以觉得对于动物，它们还是十分可爱的，不要再伤害他们，要不然会破坏生物链的。我看着那麻雀不断的在挣扎着想要飞起来，翅膀一扑一扑的，可是根本就没有什么用，我就奇怪了，明明它是可以飞起来的，小孩子的力气是没有那么大的，要是飞起来根本就拽不住的，可能是被剪掉了翅膀吧。不过呢，我现在只能希望他们能把小鸟给放掉，不过就算这样，能活下来的几率是很小的。再看看这四周，都没有什么鸟了，连一个影子都看不到，也是，现在的环境越来越差了，而又由于我们人类的原因，有的动物都快要面临这灭绝的危险了。“哈哈哈……”我的耳边传来一阵阵笑声，转过头来看着我的小侄子，在那儿看着麻雀不停的傻笑着，开心的不得了，一蹦一跳的，把麻雀在地上拖来拖去，姑姑也跟着他一块笑，麻雀真无辜啊。

希望人们以后能保护动物吧，不要等失去了再来珍惜。

What is your favorite kind of music? Do you like jazz, popular music,

classical music, folk songs, blues, and so on? In high school I took one course

called music appreciation which I greatly enjoyed. This was not to learn how to

play a specific instrument but to learn how to read and listen to music as an

art form. We read the stories about the lives of many composers and the history

of the musical instruments themselves. Sometimes we listened to tapes at the

language laboratory, or concerts. Music is sometimes called a universal

language. A composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us

feel joy and pride, exaltation and despair, peace and mystery through his

music.

有一次，我看见在学校门口有一群人围在那，我就好奇的走过去看看，我看见有一位阿姨在那里卖小蝌蚪，那些小蝌蚪非常的活泼可爱，它那小小的身体就像一个个逗号，在盆子里游来游去，它们还不知道它们即将变成小朋友的玩具，它们可能即将死于非命，因为这种贩卖小蝌蚪的行为，让我看了十分心痛。因为小蝌蚪长大了会变成青蛙，青蛙可是庄家的“守护神".

青蛙是动物世界里最出色的“小小捕虫专家”，就连农民伯伯也亲密的称它为“农田卫士”.青蛙眼睛锐利，舌头吞吐迅速，专门捕捉苍蝇.蚊子.飞蛾等害虫，一只青蛙一天捕食害虫少说也有五六十只，多则两百多只，照这样推算一只青蛙一年至少要吃掉一万八千只害虫.你想如果你杀死一只青蛙就等于杀死一个庄家“小卫士”，也等于让几万只害虫逃之夭夭，从而使庄家招到更多的危害，捕捉青蛙会让青蛙的数量减少甚至绝种，失去这些好朋友是多么可惜啊！如果青蛙绝种了那么谁来保护庄家保护良田呢，有句农谚说的好：“春捕一只蛙，秋少一担粮”！可见青蛙和庄家息息相关！

不但青蛙是益虫，就连它们的宝宝蝌蚪也是捕虫能手，一只蝌蚪每天可以吃掉一百多只蚊子，如果每亩田多有四百多只青蛙农民就可以不用喷洒农药了，我们也就能够吃到无公害的绿色食品了！这样不仅庄稼获得了丰收，生活用水也可以少受到污染了，大家也不用担心因为水的污染身体收到伤害了.这是多么美好的一件事啊！

世界不能没有动植物，保护动植物就等于人类，让我们携起手来保护动植物保护青蛙吧！

导语：春节算是中国最热闹的节日，春节那段时间到处都洋溢着热闹幸福的气氛，下面是小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与鉴赏，谢谢。

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It‘s to celebrate the lunar calendar ’s new year .In the evening before the Spring Festival ，families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food .Children like the festival very much ，because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune .

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long .People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”。 People enjoy the Spring Festival ，during this time they can have a good rest .

春天到了，青蛙又开始“呱呱”地唱歌了，我发现又有人在田野里开始捕捉青蛙了，使青蛙成为那些人的“盘餐中”，我感到非常痛心。

Spring is coming, "Gua Gua" frog began to sing, I found someone in the field to catch frogs, the frog became those who "plate", I feel very sad.

青蛙是动物世界中最出色的“庄稼的保护神”。它头上那两只圆而突出的眼睛，能让它看清庄稼天敌，但捉害虫全靠它又长又宽的舌头，舌根长口腔的前面，舌尖向那么一伸，快速地伸长长的舌头，一下子把害虫粘住，然后吃掉。青蛙的背上有绿色的深色花纹，腹部是白色，能帮它逃脱天敌血盆大口。身体下面有四条腿，前腿短，后腿长。青蛙是两栖动物，不仅能在地上跳，而且也能在水里游。

The frog is the protection of God the best in the world of animal "crops". Its head of the two round and protruding eyes, to make it clear the enemy, but to catch insects on which all the long and wide front long tongue, tongue mouth, tongue to a stretch, rapid elongation of long tongue, all of a sudden the vermin stick, and then eat. The frog is green colored patterns on the back, abdomen is white, can help it escape from natural enemies ones bloody mouth. Has four legs, the body below the forelegs are short, long hind legs. Frogs are amphibious animal, not only on the ground to jump, but also can swim in the water.

青蛙吃苍蝇，蚊子，蝗虫，小飞娥等害虫，一天大约能吃掉120只，半年下来就能吃掉15000只，这是多么大的功劳哇!就连青蛙的幼虫 ------ 蝌蚪也能消灭许多害虫哩!真不愧“庄稼的保护神”，农民伯伯的好助手呀!

Frogs eat mosquitoes, flies, moths and other insects, locusts, a day can eat about 120, half a year down to eat 15000, this is how much credit wow! Even the frogs, tadpoles can destroy the larvae of many of the pests! Really deserves to be called "the protection of God, the farmers a good assistant!

从现在开始，我们一起保护“庄稼的保护神”------ 青蛙吧!让我们共同保护[动物]生态平衡!

From now on, we work together to protect the "protection of God" crops, frogs! Let us work together to protect the ecological balance of "animal"!

This weekend I visited Beijing Wildlife Zoo. There are many wild animals there. Many visitors enjoyed themselves. They gave food to monkeys and played with tigers. Animals and people get on well with each other. We should be friendly towards them. It is important to protect environment. We mustnt litter about the zoo. Now everyone knows the importance of protecting the wildlife because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.

这个周末我去北京野生动物园。有许多野生动物。许多游客喜欢自己。他们给猴子和老虎玩食物。动物和人彼此相处得很好。我们应该对他们友好。保护环境是很重要的。我们不能到处扔垃圾动物园。现在每个人都知道保护野生动物的重要性,因为保护动物就是保护我们自己。

It has been admitted that 22 is the important point for many young people,

because they graduate from college and go to the job market. Then 25 is believed

to be the marriage age for the parents, as they start to worry about their

children’s future life and wish they get married as soon as possible. Before the

coming of 30, girls are in their best situation for the old idea.

It is an

outdated thought, because people should be limited by their ages. It is never

too late to get restart. An airline stewardess got fired because she was almost

30, then she decided to started her business by selling products online. Now she

is a successful businesswoman and she enjoys her career. So never listen to the

words that limits your movement, just do it.

All things cannot be separated from water, and fish cannot leave water.The theme is: water, the root of all things.

It is true that the seven parts of the sea are right. We are from one of the creatures in the sea, and we have the same gills of fish when we are young...Everything shows that we are connected to the sea.

Maybe we were just a little fish, but now we are the greatest humans.

The sea is so kind and mysterious, what is it that we humans are, the most intelligent creatures at the top, what are our ancestors?Its a low-grade fish or an advanced dinosaur, and everything is a mystery.

Now the sea is being developed by us, the sea ranch, the Marine oil base is so amazing.The sea gave us life, and gave us so much energy, and we?Marine oil base causes large oil spill, resulting in Marine oil pollution!What are we doing with the indiscriminate killing of whales and the salivating of shark fins?Is the environmental protection or the destruction of the ecological balance?

If the sea could wash everyones heart like a shell, there would be no creatures in the world because of our indiscriminate killing.Is it a reward that the sea is our mother, and it has created the destruction of all that it has created?No, it isnt.What else can we do when black oil covers the ocean, and when black exhaust fills the sky?The sea belongs to nature, nature belongs to us?We belong to the sea, and the sea belong to us?

What are we doing here?To kill for personal gain?Destroy for yourself?No, no, no.I do not believe that we will destroy our oceans, and I do not believe that people will despair when the oceans disappear.Because everyone is selfish.

Is it humane that the oceans have created us and destroyed us?

Although were trying to protect the environment, its too late, unless time goes backwards, unless theres a miracle, unless its all over again.I believe we can get the ocean back to our youth, and we are the smartest intelligent creatures.

Everyone, for the sake of the bright future of the sea, also protect the sea for ourselves.thank you

Animals are the best friends of man who can all care for them? I am a favorite little animal, small animals are cute and naughty, like a naughty child.

I like the puppy, the puppy is very cute. I used to have a name: snow and snow to listen to the name to know is a lovely little dog, its hair like snow as white, with a pair of round black eyes, two ears in the head. Cute, but snow is also very naughty, then Ill tell you its naughty it!

One afternoon I came home from school, snow and snow as usual to pick me up, I and it walked on the stairs, to the stairs, it saw my hand bag, all of a sudden bite in the past, I chased it, while chasing Cried: "Snow snow to my bag back, hurry or else I want to teach you." Snow seems to understand, so obediently ran back, hand over the bag. Rub me a bit like me in the request of my understanding, I touched it, and it returned home.

Snow is very cute and very naughty. But I and it is a good friend, I like it snow snow.

Now,I am a senior student in high school, who worked so hard in the past two years.As we all know, the study burden of high school students in China is heavy.

Therefore,we spend most of our time in study and we have little time to have fun.

However, I still consider the days in high school are the greatest, because I developmy strong will, improve my comprehensive abilities and make good friends inhigh school.

In daily life, I meet many problems in life and study, but I overcomethem all.

In the process, I get improvement. In addition, I develop deep relationshipswith my classmates while we study together.

We help each other and makeprogress together. We share our happiness and sorrows and support each other.There is an old saying that a friend in need is a friend indeed. It’s the supportand sharing that make the days cherished.

现在我是一名高三的学生，在过去的两年里我很努力地学习，因为众所周知的，在中国中学生的学习负担非常重。

因此，我们花费大部分的时间在学习上，玩乐的时间却很少。

然而，我始终认为高中是我最美的时光，因为在高中的两年里，我培养了坚强的意志，提高了自身的综合能力，更重要的是，我交到了许多朋友。平时，在生活和学习中我都遇到了许多问题，但我都克服了，在这个过程中，我得到了提高和进步。此外，在平时的学习生活中我也与同学们建立了深厚的感情。我们互相帮助，共同进步，也一起分享喜怒哀乐，互相支持。患难见真情，正是这份互相支持一起分享的感情使高中的时光变得弥足珍贵。

[高中英语作文：美丽的时光

导语：很多东西都面临灭绝的危险，我们应该保护动物，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. For example, with the developmet of cities, the using of insecticide and serious pollution, their living areas have become narrowcr and narrower. Many of the wild animals, now are confronted with food crisis. At the same time, man is killing off species just for getting their fur, skin, horns, teeth and meat.

In order to protect our resources of ecology, people should realize that the loss of any species is at least the loss of source of knowledge and a source of natural beauty. There fore, measures of the following should be taken: pollution standards are made to keepdown poisons; killing off certain rare species is prohibited; national parks should be set up as wild life, reserves.

Only if we human beings take some drastic measures can wild animals be preserved.

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许多野生动物正面临灭绝的危险，因为它们生活的环境已经发生了巨大的变化。例如，随着城市的发展，杀虫剂的使用和严重的污染，他们的生活区域变得越来越狭小。许多野生动物现在面临食物危机。同时，人类为了获取皮毛、皮肤、角、牙和肉而捕杀物种。

为了保护我们的生态资源，人们应该意识到任何物种的损失至少是知识的源泉和自然美的源泉。因此，本应采取以下措施：制订污染标准以降低有毒物质;严禁杀害某些稀有物种;应建立国家公园作为野生动物，保护区。

只有人类采取一些激烈的措施，野生动物才能被保存下来。

引导语：关爱动物，人人有责。下面是小编为大家精心整理的关于关爱动物的英语作文范文，欢迎阅读！

一：Animals Need Protecting

Everyone knows animals are our friends. So we should be friendly to them. But some people kill the rare animals, such as pandas, golden monkeys and so on in order to get money. It will cause these animals to disappear soon. I think our government should punish those people severely who kill the rare animals. It is our duty to protect the endangered animals.

二：Animals Need Protecting

There are more and more endangered animals at present,so how to protect them has been our task of top priority . Its wrong for people to hunt animals for their meat and feather,for they are our good friends.We should protect them instead of killing them.Giant pandas,which are one of the endangered animals,live in the forests and live on bamboo lealves.They can just live safely in the natural protection zones.We should stop killing animal and protect them.

三：Animals Need Protecting

It is suggested that people have been aware of the issue--lack of preservation for endangered spieces, animals and plants, but as you see , they placed little efforts to cope with the problem.despite the versatility and intricacy of instruments , I would pore over some of the most striking ones and offer alternatives afterwards.

One of the major reasons , causing peoples inocence of protecting animals, is that the government did not function well as an educator, arosing peoples initiative in shielding wild animals, which led to the consequence that people do not know their responsibility to prevent animals from dangers, and specific knowledge in guarding them. what is equally important as the reason mentioned above is that media did not meet our satisfaction to inform the mass of the emergency which is crutial in arousing peoples conciousness to keep animals safe.

In spite of the serious problem, measure leading to profound improvement still can be taken. owning to the fact that funds are insufficient in some developing countries, developed countries or international organizations should shoulder more burden -- finacing them in order to capacitate them to accompolish the protection of animals. at the same time, education in telling people the way to make animals harboured ought to be focused on, thus resulting in peoples better awareness in the camouflage of our planets cutest creatures.

It is belived by me that if correct actions are taken to preserve animals, any kind of them will be far away from extinction forever.

[关爱动物的英语作文

I have a parrot. Its name is Nancy. I call it Nancy， because it is my passed grandmother’s name. I love her and hope she can accompany with， so I name my parrot her name. Nancy is very beautiful. Its fur is special comfortable. It is clever， too. At first， it can’t say any words， but now it can say many words. Like， good morning， good afternoon， good night， good bye and so on. it learns fast. I love it very much.？

however mean your life is,meet it and live it ;do not shun it and call it hard names.it is not so bad as you are.it looks poorest when you are richest.the fault-finder will find faults in paradise.love your life,poor as it is.you may perhaps have some pleasant,thrilling,glorious hourss,even in a poor-house.the setting sun is reflected from the windows of the alms-house as brightly as from the rich mans abode;the snow melts before its door as early in the spring.i do not see but a quiet mind may live as contentedly there,and have as cheering thoughts,as in a palace.

the towns poor seem to me often to live the most independent lives of any.may be they are simply great enough to receive without misgiving.most think that they are above being supported by the town;but it often happens that they are not above supporting themselves by dishonest means.which should be more disreputable.

cultivate poverty like a garden herb,like sage.do not trouble yourself much to get new things,whether clothes or friends,turn the old,return to them.things do not change;we change.sell your clothes and keep your thoughts.

[保护环境作文英语80个单词

I have a little white rabbit. It is snow and white, really like a mass of white cotton. Eyes are very beautiful, like two rubies inlaid in the white face. Ears are very long, put up is particularly clever. It signed the front legs short and small, hind legs are fat and strong, so can only jump, can not run. Tail is also very small, almost can not see. It stands like a man.

I remember one time I pulled a radish from the yard, it did not even jump with me in front of me, while I do not pay attention to the mud with the mud to Diao away. I always do not want to let it eat unclean things, this time and as usual, we have done a fierce "struggle", of course I will win, when I put the clean radish in front of it, it thought me Throw in the towel, they triumphantly eat radish.

My little rabbit is so cute!

今天放学的时候，同学们正在教室里收拾书包，突然有一只小鸟飞进了教室。调皮王石亮看到了，便大声喊了起来：“大家快来看啊！有一只小鸟！”边说边跑过去把小鸟捉住了。大家都闻声而来，班长少文看到了，便对石亮说：“石亮，快把小鸟放了！别让小鸟难受。”石亮捉着小鸟，对少文说：“我为什么要听你的话，我捉住了就是我的，我要把它带回家饲养。”说着拿起书包就要往外走。刚好老师走进教室，石亮看到老师来了吓了一跳，赶紧把小鸟藏在身后。这时班长少文走到老师面前，向老师说明了情况后。老师走到石亮面前，说：“石亮，我们必须保护动物，如果人人都像你一样，看到了动物就捉起来，视为己有的话，那么世界上的动物，不就都没有了吗？”石亮听完老师的话后，惭愧极了，于是当众把小鸟放了，得到了老师的夸奖。从这件事中使我了解小学生还必须多认识保护小动物的知识。学校必须注重小学生对保护动物的认识，多教小学生一些关于保护动物的小知识。我相信只要这样做，不久人和动物一定能够和睦相处。

The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.

However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

尽管世界发展得更快，更好，地球上的资源越来越少。为了保护它们，必须做些什么。以下就是小编整理的怎样保护环境英语作文，一起来看看吧！ 篇一：怎样保护环境英语作文

The environmental protection is the most major problem which in the modern life the humanity faces. Must solve this problem must start from foundation. First, must massively propagandize, enhances peoples consciousness with understanding, strengthens the

environmental protection consciousness. Next, must carry on waste recovery use, reduces to forest-trees felling. Also must strengthen to white pollution processing, little uses the plastic product. Finally, must make improvement to clean aspect. Causes the citys appearance to be neater. For Earths tomorrow, we must start from the now diligently, will want the well local constable to protect the environment. To this us proposes as follows suggests: Implementation trash classification packed in bags. Like this not only can reduce the environmental sanitation workers work load, but also can even better basically arrive makes use of waste, to reduce the pollution, saves the resources. 篇二：怎样保护环境英语作文

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them,something must be done.

尽管世界发展得更快，更好，地球上的资源越来越少。为了保护它们，必须做些什么。

Save water. Water is the source of life. No water, no life. So its very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.

节约用水。水是生命之源。没有水，就没有生命。所以，我们这样做是非常重要的。我们不仅要保护饮用水和停止污染，而且充分利用它。

庆幸的是,越来越多的人们已经意识到这种严重情况。许多国家已经通过了法律来阻止环境受到进一步的污染。人们正在努力想办法使地球保持清洁:他们对待废气、保护水资源和净化废水。可以肯定的是,控制人口的增加是一种最有效的方式。

然而,在未来将需要更多的努力赢得了战斗反对污染的法律控制污染,必须严格执行,而且最重要的是,在教学中应重视对人民的教育,使每个人都将显示他正在关注环保

A larger and larger part of society is expressing its concern about environmental protection. Active in their concern, teachers and students hold specific meetings to discuss environmental protection. Also, city planners take environmental problems into serious consideration. And, though reducing pollution can be expensive,

factories often take every possible measure to do their part. Many people are concerned and active because air and water pollution affects everyone and makes it difficult for cities to survive and businesses to make a profit.

一个越来越大的社会的一部分是表达他们的担忧关于环境保护的。活跃在他们所关注的,教师和学生举行特别的会议来讨论环保。同时,城市规划者们把环境问题进行认真的考虑。还有,尽管减少污染可能会很昂贵,生产厂商经常会采取一切可行的措施来履行自己的职责。许多人都关心和积极的,因为空气和水的污染影响每个人都大打折扣,使得城市生存和企业盈利。

[怎样保护环境英语作文2篇

星期日早上一家人刚刚吃完饭，爸爸说：“儿子咱们去钓鱼吧。”儿子回答道：“小鱼也是一条生命呀，我怎么能伤害他呢？”“没事儿，世界上的鱼，到处都是伤害一条而已。”爸爸说着。儿子拿爸爸没有办法，只好跟着爸爸去钓鱼。

爸爸和儿子来到河边，爸爸坐在床头，嘴里叼了根烟，闭上眼睛悠闲地坐在船头等鱼儿上钩，而儿子呢，非常着急，他一定要想一个办法阻止爸爸伤害小鱼儿，儿子眼珠子咕噜一转，想出了一个办法来，他掏出一张纸拿起笔，来写信。

爸爸仍然在等待儿子的信，写完了，他马上跳下了河，游到鱼钩旁，把信从脖子上摘下来，儿子眼看鱼儿就要被爸爸钓上来，他手忙脚乱地把信挂上去，儿子把鱼钩拽了一下，又以迅雷不及掩耳之速游了上来，爸爸感觉到鱼钩往下沉了一下，立刻睁大眼睛喊道：“儿子，咱们有鱼吃了，猜猜，你长什么样呢？”儿子在心里头哈哈大笑。可爸爸钓上来发现，是一张纸。爸爸把纸条展开上面写着，今天我们不，想来，敬礼，鱼儿！

爸爸很快就认出这是儿子的字迹，爸爸才明白儿子的用意，从此爸爸再也不伤害动物了，儿子高兴极了。

Dont drop than wood sent to mountain, changping bacc the exhaust and the sea. Life is easy to fight old heart not old, is the so-called: never too old to learn, learn seventy also too few. Brief is life, but should not be in a hurry traveler, and it should be: June struggle of passion, such as fire, forward steps if the river waves, in the mountain mountain, the water cut of water! When we failure on the way of life, see more Mozart, Bach, Beethoven, shi tiesheng, Helen Keller... They are art and literature have these, but unfortunately in life. They bowed their heads? The fall? Complain about? Give up?

"Ups and downs of life," "I see the road, I will search up and down", "spring breeze willow ten thousand, millions of shenzhou ShunYao" poets are all in the pursuit of exploration. Life, have their own value. If a person cant make my life brilliant, but also have no reason to make it dull; Life can be ordinary, but not vulgar, vice; Life doesnt care about how much tear, and the process of lies in the pursuit of perfection and excellence!

Life is more precious than time. Life, the most dazzling is career. Life, the most happy is struggle.

Everyone has a tomorrow, everyone has a next year. A foothold today, look forward to tomorrow, based on this year, next year.

I believe that no matter how bumpy the road in the future, as long as you seize today, sooner or later, will taste the sweetness of life in the struggle. Seize the moment in your life, rather than waste a year in January!

The pursuit of positive, one percent of the hope may also become a reality; Passive waiting, ninety-nine percent sure will be ruined!

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.