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我的姐姐,外形还可以样子有点笨笨,眼睛圆圆,可是也可爱。你的姐姐是怎样的呢?下面是小编整理的电脑游戏的坏处英语作文,一起看看吧!

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网络游戏危害英语作文

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As a product of modem computer and the Internet,online games have won great popularity among people,youngsters in particular.However,some people believe that young people who lack self-discipline can easily get indulged in these games and their health and academic performances are severely affected.This phenomenon can be found on TV reports from time to time,and many teachers and parents have expressed

However,some others argue that online games are not always harmful.They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly.  Moreover,they Can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science.More importantly,it does bring people much pleasure and satisfaction,and release their pressure greatly.

From my point of view,online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a reasonable way.When they interfere too much with your life,you’d better give them up at once.Yet if you have enough self-control over them,you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.

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篇1:关于努力英语作文高中

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There is a saying that man proposes, god disposes, which means man plan the

things and the rest of the outcome lies in the luck. This saying reflects the

connection between hard-work and luck, which is though sometimes we have worked

so hard, luck occupies great position, the unexpected things happen and refrain

us from succeeding. In order to be successful, people work so hard, they believe

they can achieve their goals, but lacking luck stops them achieving their goals.

So working hard doesn’t mean bringing people success directly, they just need to

try more times, without luck, they still can make their goals. Luck can help

people close to success, without hard-work, they can’t be successful. Hard-work

and luck make people realize their goals, but without luck, people still can

make it by trying more times.

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篇2:关于好莱坞英语

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Oscar Golden Statuettes is short for Academy Award, which is awarded by

Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences. It begins in 1928 and hold once a

year in the United States of Los Angeles Hollywood. It’s aim is to encourage the

creation and development of outstanding movie. It enjoys a good reputation more

than half a century. It is not only the most important activity for American

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It is worth mentioning that as the Chinese film market is expanding, the

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篇3:关于人与自然英语

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We often say that the earth is our homeland and human society comes from

nature. Therefore, I think our society is a part of nature. People should live

harmoniously with nature. All the materials we need to live with come from

nature, but we should also repay the nature, rather than blindly solicit. For

example, we should plant more trees and take actions to protect the environment.

In addition, we have to control population. Due to excessive population growth,

human beings require much more natural resources than before, which lead to

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篇4:写信的英语作文100字

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Dear mother:

Hello

Dear mother, you have given me life, and my body has run through your

blood. It is your milk, heart, blood, tears and sweat that have become the

greatest liquid of human life and have nurtured me. It is you who feed me from a

hungry child to a primary school student.

Dear mother, there are many kinds of love in the world, but maternal love

is the most selfless, sincere, broadest and most merciful. When praising the

affection of human beings, you are the eternal theme. When you sing the sincere

love of the world, your love is called the first love in the world. Selfless is

your character, dedication is your feelings. You are the embodiment of goodness.

You are a symbol of greatness. Everything beautiful in women is condensed in

your image.

My dear mother, though the hardships of life have made your hands rough,

however, these hands are still so gentle, it always soothes my heart and gives

me infinite comfort; although the heavy work makes your head white hair, but the

body is still like the wing, caring for me all the time. The hard work of hard

work makes your face wrinkle. However, the face is still so kind. It teaches me

the true meaning of life and gives me confidence and strength at all times.

My dear mother, you are the resting place for your daughter. You are the

harbor for your daughter to escape from the wind. With you, our home will be

peaceful and warm. With you, our family will be happy and happy.

Dear mother, your great love is the greatest and selfless, your love in the

heart of the daughter turned from the bottom of the heart from the bottom of the

heart out - only the mother is good, the mother of the child like a treasure,

into the mothers embrace can not enjoy happiness.

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篇5:历年高考满分英语

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I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a lovely child.I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer.I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I’ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time,I’ll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball games.On my holidays,I’ll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and more colorful.

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篇6:高一英语作文运动会

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Every year in October, our school will have the tradition to hold a sports

meeting. It is the biggest event of the year, so all the students will practise

very hard to win the biggest honor. Relay race is the most important match,

because it involves so many students to take part in, showing the unity of a

team. Last year, our class won the second place. We lagged behind the champion

just a little distance, so we hoped to defeated them this time and won the first

prize. We have practised very hard, and every student in the team wanted to make

the breakthrough. When the match finally began, we ran very fast and kept our

space. Even though other team tried to disturbed us, we focused our attention.

The moment when our team first crossed the line, we cheer and cried. We made

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篇7:记一次游戏四年级优秀作文

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今天,我在家写完作业后觉得有些无聊。妈妈正在打扫卫生,我抓了抓后脑勺,咦,有了。我对妈妈说:“妈妈,我们来玩猜脑筋急转弯游戏好吗?”妈妈说:“可以呀!”

“猜脑筋急转弯游戏现在开始。”我说道。我先问:“大明补考总不过关,那他念完哈佛大学得花多少时间?”只见妈妈眉头一皱,说:“根本没上。”我哈哈大笑道:“错,要不要公布正确答案?”妈妈紧张地说:“等等,容我再想想。”我像裁判似的说:“给你十秒钟倒计时。”妈妈更急了,叹了口气,说:“唉,你说吧。”“是一秒钟。”我说。妈妈“啊”的一声,我们两个哈哈大笑起来。

第二道,我说:“大明视力不好,但这次射击靶子为什么会一次中十环?”话音刚落,只见妈妈又紧锁眉头,想了三秒回答道:“他戴眼镜了?”我摇摇头说:“不是。”我又对妈妈说:“你不能按平常思维想,要异想天开的想。”妈妈听了点点头说:“明白。”接着继续皱着眉头,嘴里念着:“他在电脑上玩?”“错”。妈妈投降似的说:“你公布答案吧!”我开心地说道:“因为靶子就在枪口下前。”妈妈输了两局了。

这时,卫生也打扫好了。看着干净整齐的房间,我转身去厨房倒了杯开水,端到妈妈面前说:“妈妈您辛苦了,请喝杯水休息休息吧!”妈妈递过水杯开心地说:“谢谢宝贝。”

今天的游戏真有趣!

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篇8:描述生活英语高中

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However mean your life is, meet it and live it; do not shun it and call it

hard names. It is not as bad as you are.

It looks poorest when you are richest. The fault-finder will find faults in

paradise. Love your life, poor as it is.

You may perhaps have some pleasant, thrilling, glorious hours, even in a

poor-house. The setting sun is reflected from the windows of the alms-house as

brightly as from the rich mans abode; the snow melts before its door as early

in the spring. I do not see but a quiet mind may live as contentedly there, and

have as cheering thoughts, as in a palace.

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篇9:写信的英语作文100字

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Dear mother:

Hello!

Mom, this is my first time to write to you, very excited, many words do not

know where to start, usually I am more willful, there are a lot of thanks to

you, and do not want to say to you. Today, let me take this opportunity to tell

you a daughters gratitude.

When I was young, you began to have long hair for me. You said girls had

long hair and beautiful hair. But this is a lot of trouble for you, but for your

daughters beauty, I wash my hair once every 32 days and comb a beautiful

hairstyle. Every time I wash my hair, Im afraid Im cold or ironed. You always

adjust the water temperature so well. The children in the community envy me that

I have a good mother.

After I go to primary school, you always get up early every morning and

wake me up after a good meal, but sometimes I still pick and pick, and dont eat

well and make you sad. But you never get angry with me. Instead, you do it for

me on the second day. On the way to school, I saw other children taking the cake

and eating while walking. I wanted to tell you, "Mom, how nice you are!"

Remember last semester, when the math unit test, there was a simple

formula, because of my carelessness made a mistake, you see after very angry,

very hard to criticize me. At that time, I almost cried by your quarrel, but I

knew in my heart that your severity was for my good.

Mom, here I want to say to you, "Mom, I love you!" You are hard! "

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篇10:玩电脑游戏

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我今年十岁了,长着一张瓜子脸,一双水汪汪的小眼睛,一个小小的鼻子,一张能说会道的嘴巴,特别是小小的手臂,最引人注目。

我是个爱发脾气的孩子,常常为了一点儿小事而争吵不休。就拿一二年级的事情来说吧:每当发了新书,哥哥就惹我生气,我就把书当成“出气筒”,撕了一点,撕了书又哭,害得我常常被爸爸、妈妈骂。我不仅有这么多缺点还有:好动、爱讲闲话、很懒……别看我缺点很多,优点也不少呢!有时热心助人,有时会帮妈妈做家务,有时是体贴爸爸妈妈……

我的兴趣爱好广泛,喜欢;唱歌、跳舞、画画、弹钢琴……其中我最喜欢玩电脑。每当我听见星期五的放学铃声响,我就特别开心,因为今天是爸爸妈妈发定我玩电脑的日子,走在放学的路上,我哼着走在乡间的小路上的小曲,觉得今天的天空格外的美,景色格外的美,心里比吃了蜜还甜,我迅速飞奔回家,掏好钥匙,就开了门,把书包扔到一米多外,连鞋子都没脱就跑到电脑面前,很快就把电脑打开了,连爸爸妈妈回家了我都不知道,过了一会儿,我看见有两个大黑影,抬头一看,呀!是爸爸妈妈,他们叫我下线,过了一会儿我才念念不舍的下线了。

这就是我,爱玩电脑的我,你愿以和我交朋友吗?

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篇11:介绍教师节的英语

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Teachers Day, September 10th, is a national teachers festival in China. It is celebrated since 1985. It expresses respects to the labors and contributions of teachers to the Chinese society. The goal of Teachers Day is to form a social climate in which teachers are respected and knowledge is valued. The date of Teachers Day is set at the beginning of the school year in order to arouse teachers and students enthusiasm for their work, and give a good start to teaching and learning. On teachers Day, students usually send greeting cards with good wishes to their teachers to show their respect. In Taiwan Province, Teachers Day is celebrated on September 28 annually. Choosing this day is to celebrate the birth of Confucius for his great contribution to Chinese culture. In some other countries, Teachers Day is also celebrated. In the United States, this is on the first Tuesday in May. In India, Teachers Day is celebrated on September 5. In Vietnam, it is celebrated on November 20.

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篇12:记一次游戏满分400字作文

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“六一”那天,在班上举行了抢椅子大会。

“开始!”主持人一声令下,音乐响起,六个人纷纷围着椅子转了起来。“游戏可以输,但气质不能少。”张梦凡一边说一边跳着舞,大家笑得合不拢嘴。“三二一,停!”大家纷纷找椅子坐下,方浩和胡雨琪环顾四周,看看还有哪把椅子没坐上。大家也帮他们拼命呼喊:“在方思怡旁边还有一个椅子,快去!”两个人都奔向那椅子,你争我抢,一人坐到了一半,谁都不甘示弱。但由于胡雨琪坐的占地面积大,成功pk走了一个。

五个椅子都那么刺激,后面肯定会有更大的惊喜。我想想都激动。

音乐还在继续着,人一个一个地减少,椅子也一把把抽掉,最终“战场”上只剩下洪卓然与陈晨。她们俩可是好朋友,可谓是朋友相见,相爱相杀呀。可她们好像不是这样,随着音乐响起,她们转了起来,步子慢悠悠的,主持人都急了:“你们可要转快点哦,这样更刺激。”陈晨笑道:“这要怎么快啊。”洪卓然则哭笑不得。“停!”听了口令后,她们却迟迟不入座,这是为什么呢,我们走近点瞧,陈晨和洪卓然都笑眯眯地看着对方,站在椅子旁边,陈晨大方地说:“你坐吧。”洪卓然却摇摇头:“你坐吧!”一个好好的抢椅子游戏,竟被她们玩出了新玩法。谁都不坐,也不是个办法,陈晨把洪卓然一拉,说:“你不坐,我们就绝交!”陈晨这么一说,洪卓然不好意思地坐了上去。

哈哈,今天可开了眼界了,真是应了那句“友谊第一,比赛第二。”

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篇13:赞美英语作文初一80词

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What a colorful world of the fall,this is a credit to the leaves,they have

red and green,the autumn dress up like a large garden.

Red maple leaves,like palms,just five piece children.Leaves a small number

of prominent teeth,the base of the heart-shaped,dark green to dark green above

to below the axillary vein has hair sense,the edge is also trimmed with lace

irregular.Bark grayish brown,with the old growth,the surface grooves and

scales.Maple leaves,autumn brings a festive and warm.

Holly tree is the symbol of vitality,crown thriving,flourish.Leaves

oval,pointed at both ends,like the two tilt of the boat.Stem and leaf surface

veins is very clear,long from bottom to top,from coarse to fine.The front of

dark green leaves,very smooth,negative light green,because there are many

prominent veins and coarse stems.Holly leaves have wavy lines on the edge of the

same jagged,but not scratchy.

The campus,red maple,holly green,a passionate,full of vitality,this is

really the mental outlook of our young pioneers it!I love autumn,I love the fall

on campus.

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篇14:有关艺术英语作文高中

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China has the history of more than 5,000 years. Many foreign people are

attracted by this big old country. They come here and want to know about the

traditional culture. However, Chinese young people dont show much interest in

the old culture, instead they chase the fashion and some even abandon the

precious culture. For example, paper cutting, one of the excellent arts that is

inherited by our ancestors. Many foreign media speak highly of this great

handicraft and they are astonished by the wisdom of Chinese people. I have seen

this art when I stay in my hometown. Only few old people can do it. They just

take it for killing time. Paper cutting is like the old fashion and is forgotten

by the young generation. The media should report more positive information about

the traditional culture to inspire the young people to learn.

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篇15:高一英语作文我的理想

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When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their ownthings to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up asa cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That isnot my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries."Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiarwith it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it.From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to makecontributions to the cause of national computer. But my father said I couldonly do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, andalways let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what hesaid is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have aveteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will beplaying the game that the network server to the black. My account will revisethe highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caughtby the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computerskills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advancethis goal, to improve their computer skills.

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篇16:中秋节英语

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I think Mid-Autumn Day is an old traditional festival in China。 Everybody

likes it because its a family get-together。 You see it is called"Mid-Autumn

Day", so it often es in September or October。 It is on the 15th of the 8th of

the lunar month。 Now, lets say something about this interesting festival。

Firstly, Id like to say something about the moon。 I like it very much

because I want to be an astronaut in the future。 That day the moon is round,

big, just like a beautiful plate hanging on the blue cloth。 When I see the moon,

I will remember the ancient myths——the godess Chang Er and her little rabbit are

playing under the tree which Wu Gang grows。 I will also think about Armstrongs

first moonwalk。 I will also miss the friends in Tai-wan island, in Macao and

Chinese people who are abroad。 I know they are missing us very much, too。

Secondly, I11 say something about the tradition on Mid-Autumn Day。

Look!Theres a big tree in a garden of a Chinese fami-ly。 All the family members

are sitting around a big table under the tree in the open air。 They are eating

the mooncakes and admiring the full moon in the sky。 That is a family reunion

dinner。 The mooncakes and the moon represent the love from a family。 I think

this is one of the most valuable things in the world。

Thirdly,it is a very good opportunity to make three wishes on Mid-Autumn

Day。 My wishes are: the first, I, an astronaut in the future, would like to go

to the moon one day, and stay with the sky and stars; the second, I hope every

person in the world will stay with family, share love from the family forever;

the third, I hope everybodys dream will e true。

That is the Mid-Autumn Day in my mind。 I will always re-member: East or

West, home is best。

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篇17:共享单车高一英语词

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Now more and more bike sharing brands have emerged, such as ofo, Mobai,

Wukong bicycle, Xiaoming bicycle and so on, which are convenient for our travel.

As long as we download a software, we can pay some money to rent a car. However,

since I saw some phenomena, I have asked myself, "is bike sharing convenient or

harmful?"

Bike sharing is very popular recently. Ofo software or other sharing

software can be found in almost all mobile phones of "mobile phone family".

However, once my mother came home full of anger, scared me to speak. I shuddered

and asked, "Mom, what makes you so angry?" She put the bag in her hand on the

table and made a loud "pa -". "Your sister helped me install an ofo software in

my mobile phone. I wanted to make it easy to ride back with good medicine, but

today I rented a" broken car "!" I was puzzled: "ofo still has a broken car

"That is, otherwise, how could my feet be bruised?" She moved her foot to me,

and a black wheel mark was still visible. "When I was riding, the chain was

loose. If it wasnt for my fast braking speed, I would have fallen off!" Since

then, Ive been less fond of bike sharing.

Once I went to a make-up class, I saw two workers sitting on a Mobi

bicycle, shaking and laughing. Dad was very indignant and said: "this kind of

person really does not speak of public morality! Make fun of the public car I

know that they wont do this with their cars. My heart is like bleeding. Why,

they want to "bully" bike sharing.

Once I went out to play. The weather was very good and I was in a good

mood. I look up to the side, really do not see do not know, a look scared. A man

secretly removed the wheel of an ofo and replaced it with a bad one on his own.

After that, he rode off on the ofo wheel. Only the ofo little yellow car was

lying alone, and the wheels were not installed properly. It is like a injured

little girl, whose legs have been taken away, like vanca, can not endure the

sunshine of life. At that time, my tears began to drop. Is bike sharing "shared"

or "exclusive"?

There have been news reports that a boy under 12 years old riding a shared

bicycle was run over by a car and killed. At that time, the boys mother shared

the companys money to compensate for her sons death. Its clearly her sons fault.

He didnt ride a bike before he was 12 years old. I didnt say he deserved it. But

the fact is better than eloquence. The death of her son is not the

responsibility of the sharing company, but his own fault!

I once saw a young man riding ofo without scanning the code. A middle-aged

man pushed ofo into his home. Have you ever seen someone use Mobi without

decoding as fitness equipment? The sound of chain jingling is like a demon with

a chain in his hand crawling out of hell. Thats selfish!

Someone took an image that put the broken ofo and Moby together to fill a

small parking lot. After riding shared bicycles, people park them on the side of

the road at will. As long as a passer-by gently knocks down a car, it will fall

down like a domino.

Have you ever thought that sharing resources is closely related to each of

us, but all the harm they bring is due to selfishness. Bike sharing is just one

example. Ive seen shared bookstores where people leave books on their desks

after reading, so that they cant go home. "Convenience to others, convenience to

oneself." As long as we are convenient for others, we will also benefit

ourselves.

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篇18:高二英语作文及翻译

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Today, as the development of the medical, people can slow down their aging. As for the celebrities, they use the developed technology to keep young, seeing their unchangeable faces in the screen for so many years, the audience also want to imitate the celebrity, they believe that by using the developed technology, they can keep young all the time. While in my opinion, the way to keep young is to hold a young heart, some people look young outside, but in their hearts, they are old enough and refuse to keep pace with the time. While for another group, even they have wrinkles, they are curious about all the things and are willing to change. My grandpa is old, but he knows all the fashionable things, sometimes I have to ask him for the new things. The young heart is the way to keep young forever.

今天,随着医疗的发展,人们能够延缓衰老。对于名人来讲,他们使用高科技来保持年轻,看到他们常年在屏幕上保持不变的容颜,观众也想要模仿名人,他们相信通过使用高科技就能一直保持年轻。然而在我看来,保持年轻的方法就是拥有一颗年轻的心,一些人表面看起来年轻,但是在他们的心里,他们足够的老,并且拒绝去与时俱进。对于另外一些人来讲,虽然他们有皱纹,但是他们对一切都保持好奇,并且愿意去改变。我的爷爷年纪大,但是他对一切时尚的东西都了如指掌,有时候我不得不问他关于新的事物。年轻的心是永葆青春的方法。

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篇19:生活初中英语

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I have studied in my middle school for three years.My life in middle school

is rich and I have learned a lot. I get knowledge from text books as well as

from extra curricular activities. I studied hard in the past three years so that

I got perfect scores. But, I also attach importance to other aspects, such as

making friends, hobbies, health and sports. I build good relationships with my

classmates. They become an important part of my life.I like to chat with them

after class that makes me relax and comfortable. My hobby is swimming. Every

Sunday morning, I go to swim with my friends or my father. When I have fun, I

build a healthy body. Its so great to me. In one word, my life in middle is

colorful and unforgettable.

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篇20:电脑游戏的利与弊

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我为什么说电脑游戏是两面派呢?因为电脑游戏对身体有害,又对脑子有好处。

坏处是,对视力有影响。本来帅帅气气的小男孩,可是一旦跟眼镜打了交道可就不好了。如果戴眼镜时间长了,眼睛就会肿起来,甚至眼睛还会变形。

好处是电脑游戏可以激发你学习的兴趣;锻炼你的记忆力;扩展你的想象力;增加你的知识面……如果玩的是那些“连连看”一类的,还可以练习你的反应能力,像游戏“赛尔号”。所以我觉得,玩电脑游戏是可以的,但是千万不要玩得时间太长,最好玩一个小时歇一会儿。如果玩得时间太长,对身体非常有害。

比如,有一个小孩子,没人管教,所以他一直玩电脑游戏,一下子打游戏打了三天三夜,第四天时,由于太过疲劳,当场死亡。

还有一个小孩子,玩游戏玩得着迷了,而后把自己当成了电脑游戏里的人物,从8楼往下跳,一下子摔死了。

通过这两件真实的事例,我们大家一定要明白:电脑游戏利用好了,它可以带给我们好处;利用不好,它会带给我们坏处。所以我们大家一定要合理安排自己的时间,控制好游戏时间,不能过分迷恋电脑游戏,更不能因为它而影响了自己的正常学习。

妈妈评:一、老师布置的这篇非命题作文你能一气呵成,相当不错!二、更为可喜的是,你的标题起得非常新颖,让有人耳目一新的感觉。三、你的文章段落过度非常自然,一环扣一环,衔接很紧密,我知道这应该你爱阅读的好习惯有关。四、文章结尾点明中心思想,电脑游戏利害兼具,要合理利用。首尾照应,很棒!

不足之处是:一、错别字要尽量消灭。二、学着用一些你学习过的修辞手法,比如写电脑游戏的好处时,因为好处很多,你可以用排比的手法来写,这样不仅文章结构比较紧凑,而且阅读起来也比较有气势。

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