英语作文：给外国朋友提建议（经典20篇）

As the saying goes, "A friend in need is a friend indeed". Friends play a very essential role in our daily life. However, how to make goods friends is a problem for most of us. As for me, I have three principles to choose friends.

正如谚语所说的那样，患难见真情。朋友在我们日常生活中扮演着非常重要的角色。然而，如何交到一个好朋友是我们大多数人都遇到过的问题。

In the first place, good friends should have their own principles. We should take into account the fact that people who insist on their principles have high quality. Therefore, it is worth making friends with them.

首先，好朋友应该是有他们自己的处事原则。我们应该认识到这样一个事实，坚持自己原则的人一般都是具有高尚的品格。因此，这样的人值得我们去交朋友。

Then, I want to point out that good friends should be full of trust. This kind of person has a pure heart, so we can communicate with each other by heart.

然后，我想说的是，好的朋友应该是充满真诚的。这样的朋友有一颗赤子之心，我们能用心来彼此交流。

Finally, active friends are just like beautiful sunshine. They can light up our blue mood, drive away the dark clouds and give us courage.

最后，拥有积极心态的朋友就像美丽的阳光。他们能够照亮我们忧郁的心情，驱走乌云，给我们鼓励。

Friends who have above three characteristics will be great wealth for us.

能交到有以上三个特征的朋友将会是我们巨大的财富。

亲爱的外国小朋友：

你们好！

我们虽然没见过面，但是我知道罪恶的战争给你们带来了苦难。

战争正所谓是一个无情的杀手，使妻子失去了丈夫，使孩子失去了父亲，使父母失去了孩子……我想你也受到了一定的伤害，虽然战争给你刻下了深深的阴影，但是你身边一定有许多的朋友，希望他们能给你带来快乐！

都说“有志不在年高”所以我们要有志气和勇气，要勇敢地用自己的生命去维护和平！制止战争！

我知道你们有的缺了腿，有的缺了胳膊，我很同情你们，但是嘴上说并没有用，我希望你们要向健康的人一样，尽力的去做自己认为该做的事，要学会坚强，勇敢地面对这一切，战胜这一切。

虽然我们现在生活在和平的环境中，但是世界并不像我们想像的那样和平，不少地区还弥漫着战争的硝烟，我们一定要维护和平，请你们一定要坚强！

祝你们身体健康！

一个中国小女孩

The shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo bring great convenience to people. You

needn’t lock them by simply using your smart phone. They can take you where the

subway and bus don’t go. And they can be left anywhere in public for the next

user.

However, bad things happen. Some people damage the QR code on the bike, or

use their own lock, which causes trouble to other users.

In my opinion, it’s difficult to turn these people’s ideas in a short time.

Therefore, bike-sharing companies like Mobike and Ofo need to do something. For

example, those who damage the bike should pay for their actions. Also, because

people use their real name to register as a user, it’s a good way to connect to

one’s personal credit.

In the end, what I want to say is to take good care of public services.

阿虎是一只燕鱼，嗐，他真长到一只燕子那么大了。这是我们从一个金橘大小的鱼仔养大的，只是它离开了这个世界，真是可惜!

我的爱鱼阿虎身披米白色的鳞甲，闪闪发亮，草缸灯发出的红光被它反射的更是晃眼。许多块儿大大的黑斑嵌在阿虎身上，黑得如墨，黑得发亮。一根比椅子腿还长的背鳍像风帆似的立在他身上，一抹苹果红点在“风帆”上，显出一点霸气。它的头更是惹人喜爱，整体是红色的，两颗黑亮亮豆大的小眼旁一边黑一边黄，而头下面是一对奶白色、细长的胸鳍，它们总是傲傲的动着。最引人注目的便是阿虎大大的尾巴，它上面一半儿是墨色的，而下面却是透明的。“噗啦”一声响，阿虎便摇着尾巴游走了。

别看阿虎长得秀气，可它却是一个“鱼缸霸主”呢。平时它最爱干的事儿便是吃了，而且无肉不欢。就连我平时把手指肚贴近鱼缸，它也会大打出击：径直向我扑来：只见它胸鳍横着一摆，背鳍往上一挺，摆摆尾巴，再大摇大摆地向我游来。我赶紧往回抽手，怕阿虎“头晕眼旋”，可它还不知趣地向我游，好像刹不住车似的。

阿虎爱吃，可不大会吃，有时竟边吃边拉出便便来，可谓大煞风景。我和他最好的交流便是喂它红虫了，每一次我拿出冻红虫，阿虎便兴奋得不得了，游来游去，焦急地等着我，直打转。我把一点红虫用镊子夹起来，在鱼缸上晃了又晃，他便飞快地游到水面。我有时把红虫放到水里，它便急切地游来，可我又把红虫拿出水，它就急得不得了。看它急成这样，我才把红虫撒到水里。

阿虎真是一条美丽、有趣、架子十足的燕鱼，是我的动物朋友。它可爱，它也霸气，它皮实，但它却与世长辞了。我爱我的阿虎!

I remember the first day when I move to the new home, there is girl who

lives next to my house. She is very nice and willing to help me solve my

problems. Thanks to her, I get used to the new environment soon. I have made

many friends, but in my heart, this girl is my best friend. I hope our

friendship can last forever.

如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。

Obviously， it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?

更多句型：

Accordingly， I recommend that some measures be taken.

Consequently， to solve the problem， some measures should be taken.

英语作文自我介绍 带翻译

To introduce myself（介绍我自己）

Hello,every one!（大家好）

My name is **** . （我叫****）

Im a 15 years old boy. （我是一个15岁的男孩）（具体情况自己改） I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.（我住在美丽的Rizhao城）（你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音）

Im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩）

In the school , my favourite subject is maths .（在学校，我最喜欢数学）

Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .（也许有些人认为这很难学）

But I like it.（但我喜欢他）

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.（我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果）

I also like sports very much.（我也很喜欢运动）

Such as,running,volleyball and so on. （像跑步、排球等等） Im kind-hearted.（我很热心）

If you need help ,please come to me .（如果你需要帮助，就来找我） I hope we can be good friends!（我希望我们能成为好朋友） OK.This is me .A sunny boy.（好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩

英语作文(关于朋友)

1、让妩媚的阳光照耀大地，让温柔的秋风吹拂脸庞，让细腻的秋雨湿润心田，让真挚的祝福映入眼帘。祝国庆节快乐!

2、把烦恼抛之脑后，让快乐跟着走;把忙碌甩在身后，让身体放轻松;把疲惫统统丢弃，让好运来作陪;把幸福来收集，让国庆心欢喜。祝国庆佳节笑声连连!

3、国庆叫，国庆闹，国庆回家睡大觉;国庆喜，国庆乐，国庆放假不干活;国庆欢，国庆安，国庆心情乐翻天;国庆好，国庆娇，国庆一切烦恼消;国庆到，国庆妙，国庆祝福愿你笑。

4、烟花绽放了，绽放了精彩;花儿盛开了，吞吐了芬芳;彩旗飘动了，拂动了快乐;鸟儿鸣叫了，叫出了美好;祝福发出了，温暖了心房：朋友，国庆快乐!

5、你用乳汁养育了千千万万英雄的儿女，你用汗水浇灌了这富饶的土地，你用勤劳培养了我们坚定的信念。

6、有一种快乐从心底溢出，有一种幸福发自肺腑，有一种甘甜如糖似蜜，有一种有爱恋不离不弃。有一个母亲今天过生日，祝我们的祖国生日快乐!

7、国庆到了，鞭炮响了，花儿笑了，心儿醉了，共同乐了，快乐多了;祝福来了：愿你笑了，祝你美了，幸福乐了，好事来了，美死你了!

8、祖国在花海中前行，我们吹起号角敲响锣鼓;祖国在春风中前行，我们把祝福写在脸上把期盼写在心里;祖国在新世纪的大道上前行，我们用歌声串成一颗颗星星。

9、一缕阳光，开启美好的一天;一点思念，让真情在心中展现;一个微笑，为你把快乐增添。

10、金秋的岁月，丰收的季节;收获的硕果，成长的脚步;祖国的生日，盛大的节日;祝您的事业随着祖国的发展而腾达，生活一天比一天好!

11、祖国是大海，我就是大海中的一滴水;祖国是母亲，我就是母亲的一个儿女;祖国是大地，我就是大地上的一粒泥沙。

12、唱起红歌，日子美美;跳起热舞，欢喜连连;挂起灯笼，福气满屋;端起酒杯，阖家欢乐;燃起烟花，美好无限;放飞祝福，心花怒放：祝国庆开心!

13、送你一首歌谣，唱去心中的忧伤;送你一丝微笑，拂去心底的寂寞;送你一缕相思，倾诉心中的惦念;送你一句祝福，传递真诚的问候：祝国庆欢乐!

14、祖国啊!我是你巍峨大厦上的一粒石子;我是你滔滔江水中的一朵浪花;我是你无垠土地上一片的泥土;我是你连绵群山中的一个皱褶。

15、有了牵挂，心不再落寞;一字一句，都暖在心窝;生活的幸福，愿你不错过;把微笑留下，快乐多又多;洒下汗水后，得满满的收获。国庆节，祝你幸福快乐!

16、春天的故事唱起来，喧闹的锣鼓敲起来，节日的盛装秀起来，快乐的节拍踏起来，真心的祝愿飞过来，幸福的翅膀展开来，国庆佳节，愿你好运快乐滚滚来!

17、日子轻轻松松，天天欢欢喜喜，在家和和美美，出入平平安安，爱情缠缠绵绵，身体健健康康，事业顺顺利利，收入稳稳当当，心情快快乐乐，国庆高高兴兴!

18、季节没到，花儿不能提前绽放;黑夜没到，月亮不能提前高照;时间没到，上班不能提前跑掉;国庆没到，祝福却可以提前送到：国庆快乐，合家幸福!

19、国庆期间，你有万个理由拒绝加班，有千个理由释放压力，有百个理由放松心情，有十个理由蛮不讲理，但没有一个理由不开心，因为我会祝你：节日快乐!

20、走一步有一步的乐趣，睡一觉有一觉的意义，聚一回有一回的情意，笑一声有一声的运气。国庆到，为你收集所有的吉祥如意，祝你享受全部的顺利福气!

我有一条可爱的贵宾犬，它的名字叫“粽子”，因为它是端午节来到我家的，所以我就给它取了这样一个名字，有意思吧!

粽子是一条黑色贵宾犬，它全身都是黑黑的，只有它的牙是白白的。它有一个聪明的大脑，还有四条细小的腿，全身毛茸茸的!可爱极了!

粽子特别黏人，每天早上我去上学的时候，它就会很不高兴地在门口狂叫，好像在说：小主人，带上我一起去上学!每天傍晚我放学回家时，它总是远远地就能分辨出我的脚步声，紧接着又是一阵狂叫，好像在说：小主人快抱抱我!每天晚上我在写作业时，它就乖乖的趴在我的脚边，陪我一起学习。

粽子最喜欢和我一起游戏，我们经常一起玩球，我把玩具球扔出去，粽子总是如同离弦的箭一般的冲出去，把球捡给我，然后我再扔，它再捡，就这样反反复复我们重复着一扔一捡，我们都玩得很开心，玩累了的粽子会趴的地上，伸着舌头直喘气，我会坐在它身边拍拍它的头，对它说：粽子真棒!粽子就会异常兴奋的摇头摆尾。看到粽子憨厚可爱的样子，所有的疲惫和烦恼都会顿时烟消云散。

我的小狗粽子给我带来了欢乐，我爱我的小狗!

Sally is my good friend.She is slim with long black hair.She is a pretty

girl with big eyes and small mouth.She is good at English,so she can speak

English very well.She also likes singing and dancing.Well,she likes doing

sports,and she is good at playing badminton.Her favorite hobby is collecting

stamps,so she has many beautiful stamps from all over the world.She is kind and

funny too,all of us like her.

1、For this reason, I have always felt it a blessing if a friend comes to console me in my sadness, cheer me up in my low spirits, or heartedly share with me my happiness. 因此，我常期待在我悲伤的时候，朋友能够过来安慰我，让我低落的精神好起来，或者与我分享我的快乐。

2、Yet, they, too, have mercilessly accused false friendship, for there are always some mean characters who approach you and act as dear friends when you are wealthy or influential, but desert or even betray you the instant you come down in the world or are entrapped by unfortunate things.

3、 The old saying "A friend in need is a friend indeed" has become the teaching and standard for true friends.俗话说“患难朋友才是真正的朋友”。

4、 So long as a person has a heart of gold, being warm-hearted, selfless, honest, open-minded, but not brutal, cold, shortsighted nor narrow~minded, I am willing to make friends with him or her, give my due support and help, and remain faithful to him or her all my life.

As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend, for life without friends will be a lonely voyage in the vast dark sea or one in the barren desert. Traly, a friend gives out light and warmth like a lamp. For this reason, I have always felt it a blessing if a friend comes to console me in my sadness, cheer me up in my low spirits, or heartedly share with me my happiness. It is wonderful, too, to feel that someone is standing by me and ready to provide help and encouragement in my pursuit of a noble and glorious cause.

For millions of years, people have heaped beautiful verses and essays upon friendship. Yet, they, too, have mercilessly accused false friendship, for there are always some mean characters who approach you and act as dear friends when you are wealthy or influential, but desert or even betray you the instant you come down in the world or are entrapped by unfortunate things. Therefore, people all attach great importance to the recognition of true friendship. And a faithful friend is considered even more precious than a priceless pearl or a precious stone. The old saying "A friend in need is a friend indeed" has become the teaching and standard for true friends.

Still, it is natural that different people observe different principles in making friends. Some view it important to make friends with whom they may share similar interests or hobbies with. Others are liable to befriend VIPs so as to gain some favors or privileges. And I am of those who think very little of similarity or position or power. So long as a person has a heart of gold, being warm-hearted, selfless, honest, open-minded, but not brutal, cold, shortsighted nor narrow~minded, I am willing to make friends with him or her, give my due support and help, and remain faithful to him or her all my life.

She is the person whom I just came to little lotus to know at the earliest stage.I know she is a good student from the other peoples.She upholds the law strictly in the little lotus, no matter who it is, plagiarizing her to stop, her personality is very bright, meeting the affair calm and steady dispassion.She loves to make friend very much, so her friend is a lot of, this lets me envy very much.

Hoping her to continue makes great effort!

翻译:

她是我刚来小荷最早认识的人.从别人的口中我知道她是一名好学生.她在小荷执法如山,不管谁抄袭她都制止,她性格十分开朗,遇到事情沉着冷静.她很爱交朋友,所以她的朋友很多,这点让我很羡慕.

希望她继续努力!

[英语作文：我的一位朋友

Dear Mr. President,

I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports

facilities on campus. I have noticed that our university has very limited

resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given

that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.

As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young

people. If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able

to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to

build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.

My proposal is to build a new sports area. It should be designed with

soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind. It should

have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year

round. I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.

Thank you for your reading this letter.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

For the first time, I climbed to the top of the mountain and enjoyed the

beautiful scenery.

It was a weekend when a good friend of mine asked me to climb a famous

mountain here. Ive always heard of this mountain, but I havent found the time to

climb it. So when my friend asked me out, I readily agreed.

On the way to climb mountains with my friends, we also met many climbers,

including young people and old people. The young mans speed of climbing was

fast, and he disappeared in a flash; the old mans climbing was very casual, at

least slowly, with a happy face. Maybe young people climb the mountain to get to

the top of the mountain, while old people climb the mountain to enjoy the

scenery along the way.

My friends and I are neither the first nor the second. We will carefully

taste the scenery along the way of climbing. The speed of climbing is not so

fast and slow. Although its not as fast as those brothers who cant be seen in a

moment, its faster than those masters.

When my friends and I climbed to the top of the mountain, it was the

setting sun, and the red sun dyed the sky red, which was shocking enough. My

friend and I found a place with a wide view. At a glance, the mountains were

rolling. Those mountains were like a line of waves, rolling away to the

distance.

"Wow, its beautiful!" I couldnt help sighing, and my friend followed. The

scenery on the top of the mountain is really beautiful. Its the majestic

atmosphere that makes people feel shocked. My friend and I stood at the top of

the mountain for a long time. Finally, as the light in the sky became more and

more dim, my friend and I went down the mountain reluctantly. When I went down

the mountain with my friends, we were sitting in the corridor. We enjoyed the

scenery. On this day, my friends and I got a lot.

The first time I climbed the mountain, I felt the fun of climbing the

mountain, and also read the scenery of the mountain top. If I have time, I will

go climbing again.

我家有一个大鱼缸，里面养着十几条可爱的七彩神仙鱼，扁扁的身体，形状有点像鲳鱼，有全红的、黄底红点的、红白相间的、蓝色的等，游动时候鱼鳍和尾巴就像舞动的绸带，可漂亮了！我最喜欢的是蓝色的神仙鱼，它的身上有许多亮闪闪的淡蓝色鱼鳞，在灯光的照射下，从远处一看，它就像穿上了宝石做的衣服，亮亮的，真美啊！神仙鱼喜欢吃鱼汉堡，红棕色一块块。

每次当爸爸把鱼汉堡放进水里，小鱼们就像饥饿的小狮子一样，争先恐后的围拢过来，没几秒食物就被它们抢了个精光！我和爸爸喜欢站在鱼缸前面看它们，有时候会发生很多有趣的事！又一次，爸爸把鱼缸的底下的玻璃擦洗得干干净净的，就像一面镜子，这时神仙鱼们纷纷低下头，看玻璃，像臭美的小女孩在看自己的样貌，好可爱啊！还有一次，爸爸把鱼缸的盖子打开，想给它们透透气，可爱的神仙鱼们都一起游到了上面，脑袋凑一起，原来它们以为爸爸又要喂鱼汉堡了，我和爸爸全被逗乐了！我喜欢我家可爱又漂亮的七彩神仙鱼！

Dear Lisa,

How was your day off?Did you have fun playing volleyball?Iwas very happy in my day off.I went to the movie with my friends.That movie was interesting,and I went to my cousins home.I played computer game with him.It was so great .I went to the gift shop and saw many nice gifts.Of course.I bought a gift for my friend. It was a really nice gift.Oh,that day was so great!See you soon!

Love,

Jack

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am delighted to know that you will be able to visit me for a week during

the National Day holiday. I am looking forward to your visit and to the

opportunity to catch up. Welcome to my home in Nanjing!

As you know, Nanjing has many places of interest to see, to discover, and

to enjoy. Among its historical sites are stone city wall, the Confucius Temple

with its magnificent night view, and Dr. Sun Yetsens Mausoleum. With all its

universities, Nanjing is a cultural center, offering an abundance of artistic

and musical performances. Its also a city of beautiful gardens and parks, such

as the Xuanwu Lake Park. With all these features, we will have a fun-filled

week, especially that in early-October, there are many sunny and mild days for

outdoor activities. So, I would suggest visiting these places first, and

deciding on the others as our week develops.

Finally, since at this time of the year the weather gets a little chilly in

the evening, I would suggest that you bring some warm clothing with you. Also,

as there will be crowds of people at the stations and on the trains, you need to

be very careful with your belongings!

Best wishes for a pleasant journey!

Yours,

Zhang Ying

I have a friend call Yang Linrui, he is medium height, thin body, a white frame, he likes to wear a jacket shorts. In the summer.

Yang Lian likes playing basketball, usually a free will go to the playground for a while. Each PE lesson, as long as the teacher ask what students want to play basketball, he like already ready, shoot high up, also put up your hands and say: "I, me, me." For fear that the teacher couldnt see him. However, he did play well play basketball, is our class basketball team player, especially 3-pointers, especially well.

Although he was a valiant soldier on the basketball court, off the court is a crying ghost, a little bit of injustice will red-rimmed and shed tears, to have much sorrow. At ordinary times, by whom is inadvertently touch, he would cry. Remember once our class basketball training, after training, I suddenly grabbed his ball, is originally wanted to open a joke, didnt think he suddenly cried, hands and feet. Make me very embarrassed.

He has a bad habit, it is to eat eat not to clean. Every noon meal at school, the teacher give him having meal, no matter how many, she will always remain a few metres in the dish, also change not to drop.

Because both of us as basketball players, often practice together, love will come in time, we gradually become inseparable friends.

我有一个朋友叫杨林瑞，他中等个子，身子瘦瘦的，一张白净的瓜子脸，夏天他喜欢穿短衣短裤。。

杨涟瑞喜欢打篮球，平时一有空就会去操场上打一会儿。每节体育课上，只要老师一问哪些同学要打篮球，他就像早就准备好了一样，一下子把手高高地举起来，还一边举手一边说：“我、我、我。”生怕老师看不见他似的。不过，他打篮球确实打得好，是我们班的篮球队主力队员，尤其是三分球，投得特好。

别看他篮球场上是一员猛将，场下却是个爱哭鬼，一点点委屈就会眼圈红红的并流下泪来，跟有多大伤心事似的。平时，就是被谁无意中碰一下，他也会哭。记得有一次我们班训练篮球，训练结束后，我把他的球一下子抢了过来，本来是想跟他开一个玩笑，没想到他一下子哭了，手脚无措。弄得我十分尴尬。

他还有一个不好的习惯，就是吃饭吃不干净。每天中午在学校就餐，老师给他舀饭，无论多少，她总会剩几颗米在盘子里，老也改不掉。

由于我们俩同为篮球队员，常常在一起练习，日久生情，我俩渐渐地成了形影不离的好朋友。

这只小白狗是姐姐的朋友给我的，我抱着这雪白的大狼回家，放在客厅里，它伸着爪子好像要和我握手似的！

狗的耳朵竖直，似兔子。姐姐的朋友告诉我：养他就等于养了一只顺风耳，因为它的听力特别好。后来我看果然如此：凡是一点动静，它也能听得清清楚楚；甚至我光脚下地，狗必然飞奔过来，不亚于兔子。

狗的嗅觉更是灵敏了。大体上与白狮相似，但白狮的嗅觉没有狗好。狗的鼻子灵敏，闻这闻那，像一个没见过世面的狗子。它常闻完一个东西就想吃，吃完又不吐出来；有时非但不吐，还咬人！

狗的性格常常使我们感到神奇，我们的狗是会吃醋，每当爸爸下班的时候，我和狗都会找爸爸抱，看见我趴在爸爸的背上，它就不让，不停地用爪子扒拉我。后来我下来了，它上去了。对妈妈也是这样。

晚上我们说带它出去玩，它常就咧着嘴笑，露出舌头。如果我们说不出去了，它马上苦找脸，耳朵以0。01秒速度耷拉下来，然后转过头回房间找爸爸告状去了。

吃饭时如果给它肉，它就赶紧接着，我姐说：有毒！它立马就把肉给吐了，之后一步一步生气地走向走廊，好像在抗议：为什么给我吃有毒的东西？是不是不爱我了？我们怎么叫，它都不理我们，三天后气才消。

哈哈，真是一只古灵精怪的小狗。

假设你是李华，你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文，唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。

比赛时间：7 月18日 。报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台

注意：1.词数：100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show

Dear Peter,

I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you‘ U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

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从整体上说，书写得简洁明快。语言简单平实，要点囊括齐全，结构完整。的主要特点是让步状语从句的使用，最后两句话，采用了if引导的让步状语从句，结合将来时使用。

[高考英语作文：给美国朋友的信

My favorite fruit

I like banana very much.

Banana always grows in the warm area.

Its nice to eat, and it is good for our healths.

Like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas.

You can see th is in the zoo.

Im a student.I like eggs and coconut.Because eggs is very good for me .Its very healthy.The coconut is a very sweet .The HauNans coconut is very great.I like them.

【参考译文】

我最喜欢的水果

我喜欢非常香蕉。

香蕉一直生长在温暖的地区。

它很好吃的，并且有利于我们的健康。

和我们一样，猴子也喜欢吃香蕉。

你可以在动物园看到它们。

我是一个学生，我喜欢鸡蛋和椰子。因为鸡蛋对我来说也很好。非常有益健康。椰子非常好吃。华南的椰子很好吃。我喜欢它们。