英语作文：给外国朋友提建议【优秀20篇】

Dear Tom，

I got my report card.today.I got an A in Chinese.math，science.My Chinese

teacher said that I did well in writing.My history teacher encouraged me to read

more stories.And I need to be more careful in math.I did OK in physics. I got a

B，but my teacher said I could do better.The worst was a C in English.My teacher

said I should do more listening and speaking.Could you give me some advice on

learning English?

Write soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

I have a good friend whose name is Chen Yingxi. She doesn‘t work very well at her study, but she is very willing to help others.

One day, my lunch box disppeared from our class‘ lunch-basket, so I had to look for it in other classes‘ lunch-basket. Chen Yingxi said, Let me go to look for it with you. Then we went to the third floor and the fourth floor to look for my lunch box. At last, we found it, and sweat covered both of our foreheads. I expressed my thanks to her, but she said, Don‘t mean it. This is what a friend is all about.

I am very glad to make friends with Chen Yingxi.

[我的好朋友为题的小学生英语作文

Dear Headmaster,

Im writing this letter simply to tell you something about the canteen

service in our school.Im the minister from the life department of the Students

Union.

In general, the service is satisfactory. The dishes look inviting and taste

delicious as well. The price of the meals is OK for us and the variety of dishes

changes every week.Whats more, the workers there treat us as their friends,

which makes us feel very happy.

However, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get

the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore,

may I suggest something be done to solve the problems such as the dish quality

and surroundings so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?

Thanks for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

我是一个喜欢小动物的人，我曾养过许多动物：“荷兰猪，猫，兔子，蜻蜓，公鸡，小鸭……”可是最让我印象深刻的，还是我的小狗——黑妞

黑妞，顾名思义，它是一只黑色的小母狗。它身上绝大部分是黑色的，眉心是棕色的，脖子是淡黄色的，尾巴尖有一点白色，爪子上也有一点白色。它的眼睛亮亮的，在夜晚会发出绿色的光；它的鼻子小小的，但是很灵；它的耳朵总是耷拉着，可是稍微有一点动静就能听到……

黑妞是一只很馋的狗。只要家里有人吃东西，它便会迅速的窜过去然后扑上去抢吃的。无论是肉，还是菜，甚至连糖果也不放过。

一次我们一家三口吃饭，黑妞听见了，连蹦带跳的就过来了朝我们要吃的。那就给呗，它狼吞虎咽的，不一会儿就全吃完了。它眨巴眨巴眼睛，露出一副可怜样。于是我又给了它一点。结果它吃完还不满足。这时，我玩心大起，随手抓了一块姜扔给它，它竟然看都不看就吃了。于是这一天，它都便叫唤边跑，还眨巴眼睛看我。我们都笑了。

黑妞不仅馋，而且很胆小。一次，我买了一个玩具球给它玩（就是那种塑胶刺刺球），他用爪子碰了一下。看到球动了，就赶紧跑走，只敢偷偷的看球。直到球没气了，扁了之后它才敢靠近。

黑妞真是可爱，虽然它已经死了，但它永远是我最好的动物朋友！

This illustration depicts_________ (图画中的人物)with______________(补充说明)Recently

it has become commonfor people in many ways of life to_____________(进一步阐释) It

seems to me that thecartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题)，which

is______________(进一步的说明)He seems to be sayingthat_____________(给出细节)In my

opinion，___________(个人阐述)This simple picture is a wakeup call for

______(所涉群体，如thewhole of the human race)Therefore，it is imperative for us totake

drastic measures to put an end to ___________(问题所在)One the one hand，we

must_________________(建议一)It is clear that the drawerof the illustration is

urging us to _________(进一步说明)On the other hand，_______________(建议二)Onlyin this

way can we___________(展望前景)

亲爱的非洲小朋友：

你们好!

我是东方文明古国――中国的一名小学生。在我很小的时候，就从电视中了解到你们那里气候炎热、物资匮乏。许多地方生活贫困，甚至连喝一口洁净的水都是一种奢侈。我很同情你们。这几年，我们中国给过你们大量的经济支援，帮助你们建设家园。我们都希望你们的家园能早早建设好，希望我们成为朋友。你们想来看看美丽富饶的中国吗?我向你们介绍一下吧。

中国这片960万平方公里的土地上，有太多太多的美丽。雄伟的泰山屹立在中国的东方，明珠般的西湖镶嵌在人间天堂般的杭州，野生动物自然保护区汶川，童话般的仙境九寨沟，原生态森林西双版纳，还有凝聚了中国人智慧的万里长城，气势恢宏的三峡大坝……无一不向世人展示出中国的美丽。来吧，到中国来吧!我带你去看巍峨的华山，秀丽的桂林，川流不息的长江、黄河;带你去看宝岛台湾，东方之珠香港，一望无际的呼伦贝尔大草原……在蓝天白云间，让我们一起看遍名山大川，相信你会有不同于家乡的感受。

中国五千年的文明，拥有太多太多的智慧。看，那一个个方方正正的汉字，结构巧妙、工整美观。把他们巧妙的搭配起来，只用短短几十个字，便能生动地描绘一处美景，讲述一件事情，抒发自己的感情，表达自己的心情，这是其他文字所不能比拟的。我们的汉字读起来朗朗上口，给人一种听觉上的美感。最近，世界上刮起一阵汉语狂潮，说汉语成了一种时尚。我就听到过这样一个故事：一位不会讲日语的法国人和一位不会讲法语的日本人聚在一起，因为语言不通无法交流，经过一番连手带脚的比划后，两人不约而同地说起了中国话，他们的交流也容易多了。看了这个故事，我顿时为自己是一名中国人而骄傲。

朋友们，你们看过2008年8月8日晚上的北京奥运会开幕式吗?我睁着疲惫的双眼，直勾勾地盯着电视机。在五星红旗升起的那一刻，在《歌唱祖国》的乐曲奏响的那一刻，在奥运圣火点燃的那一刻，心中的自豪与骄傲油然而生，因为这是祖国在向世人宣布：中华民族从此强大起来了!我心底里一直在回响着这样一句坚定有力的声音：中国，我为你自豪!

非洲的小朋友们，我相信你们看到了中国美丽的山川，看到了奥运健儿胸前闪闪发光的奖牌，看到了我们的幸福生活。希望你们接受我的邀请，到中国来做客!我随时恭候你们的光临。

祝你们身体健康，快乐幸福!

你们的中国小朋友：李若琳

2009年9月3日

Its spring now. The weather is warm and comfortable. Its a good time for

hiking. Therefore, my teacher organized a climbing for us. There is a beautiful

mountain in my city and its target this time. We took bus there and arrived

there at 9 p.m.. After we took off the bus, we started to climb. The mountain is

high but the scenery is beautiful. We are so excited that we climbed fast at

first. But after a while, some of us were tired,especially girls. They did not

want to go on anymore. But some others encouraged and helped them. All of us

slowed down our speed, so that no one was left behind. About 11:00 p.m., we got

to the top of the mountain. We were so happy that we did it. We feel that all

the tiredness were worth it.

I have a lot of friends but Amy is my best friend.He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.

Dear X:

We have not seen each other for a long time. I miss (think of) you very much. I wish (that) I had wings and could fly to your home. However, this is impossible!

Father (My father) has gone abroad of late. If I had had time then, I would have accompanied him. Only Mother (my mother) and I are at home now (at present). We are leading (living) a quiet and happy life. We look as if we were fairies. I hope (that) I can hear from you very often.

Sincerely yours.

去年过年的时候，大姨把她的宠物狗放在我家寄养了几个月，它是一只活泼可爱的咖啡色小型贵宾犬，名字叫钟钟，我觉得最特别的是它的眼睛，在黑暗无光的时，它的眼睛会变颜色，有时会变成黄色，有时会变成蓝色，像玻璃珠一样闪闪发光，很漂亮。

钟钟最喜欢玩具球了，每当我们出去玩时，它总喜欢跑到空旷的草坪上，嘴里叼着球跑过来，放在你的腿边，暗示你把球扔出去，如果你不扔的话，他就会用小爪子，轻轻碰你一下，提醒你快点扔球。只见它噌的一下，就飞快地跑出去了，欢快地把球叼回来，就这样重复着，它玩得到是乐此不彼，可我们却累得快趴下了。

钟钟是只养成了好习惯的狗，每当家里开饭时，他就会蹲在餐桌边，眼巴巴的等着我们喂它吃东西，如果谁在吃排骨或者其他肉，被它闻出香味儿，它又会用小爪子碰一下你的腿，暗示你给它吃，而且不会跳上餐桌偷吃。它还知道自己去卫生间上厕所，不会随地大小便呢。这些习惯都是从小养成的。我非常喜欢狗，但是我妈妈说现在家里还不能养狗，等我长大了能独自照顾狗狗时才允许我养，这让我有了加速长大的愿望。

钟钟是一只活泼可爱的狗，是我的忠心的小伙伴，虽然我和它相处的时间不多，但是我早已把它当成家里的一员，它就是我最喜欢的动物。

I have several friends. Wang Lin is my best friend. He is eleven yearsold. He comes from Beijing.Wang Lin came here three years ago. He came with his parents. His father is an engineer and his mother is a middle school teacher. He has no brothers or sisters. He is the only child of his parents.We are classmates at school, so we see much of each other.He is fond of English and I am good at maths. We always help each other. Both of us have made great progress in our studies.We have made up our minds to study harder and win success in our studies.

[我的朋友英语作文5篇

“夏天穿貂儿，冬天穿袄。一个长嘴，会汪汪叫”这就是我家的动物朋友，也是我的好伙伴，它是谁呢？它就是我们家的宠物小狗呀！它叫“毛豆。”让我给你介绍介绍吧！

毛豆十分可爱，它有着一双水汪汪的三角眼，而且还有一双像芭蕉扇一样的大耳朵。仔细摸的话，会发现头顶还有个小鼓儿包呢！

毛豆性格十分古怪。它若是高兴，比谁都温柔，它会用身子拼命蹭你的身体，好像在说：“跟我玩一会呗！小主人。”它若是生气，会对你一直不理，或是龇牙咧嘴，仿佛在对你吼：“别来理我，我很烦。”可是过了一小会儿，它会跑来跟你道歉，还会再深深鞠一躬。它有时还会摇身一变，变成“小棉袄”。在你难过的时候，它会来到你的身边，用它那细长的舌头，舔着你的小手。在你受到危险的时候，它会用自己的性命来保护你。

毛豆不仅性格奇怪，而且又十分的馋。记得有一次，我特意把肉干埋在狗粮下，只见它摇摇晃晃的来到狗粮旁，伸出舌头，凑过去，嗅了嗅。这时它灵机一动，扒开狗粮卷起小肉干就跑，一边跑一边说：“跟我斗，再等几百年吧。”

我是真拿这个“毛豆”没办法呀！

Zang gram house once said: "reading a good book, like made a friend." And I made friends with books when I was three years old.

I have been in the kindergarten at the age of three, with the support of the teacher I learned a lot of Chinese characters, mom and dad often buy some to read a book to me. At six years old, I began to read comic books and story books, I read a book, not only the contents of the book also bold, word for word read to mom and dad. Dont know if they met in the book of the words, I will put in a little book, such as mom and dad come back, I will pass it to mom and dad, let them to teach me how to read.

So I know the word more and more, the scope of the study is becoming more and more widely.

Now, I not only have a fairy tale, comic books in the bookcase, KeJiShu, and one of my favorite novels: turn the water margin ", "three kingdoms", "historical records", "journey to the west", etc.

I may see it and forget all about eating and sleeping.

Remember once, I with relish looking at books in the study, the mother has to call me to dinner, but I already immersed in the "colorful" books. Which also could hear her voice, then mother raised his voice, to shout a few times in a row, but I havent heard. Mother is angry, she angrily pushed open the door to vigorously to I scold a way: "have a meal!" I just woke up from the books. When the mother will say to me a lot of words: "fascinated reading dont take it too, so, next time will have to watch your ass..."

Time flies like an arrow, the sun is like a boat. I have five grade in a twinkling of an eye. In the few years, accompany me through the countless times; The book let me understand a lot of truth; Book is my best teacher, is also my best friend!

臧克家曾经说过：“读一本好书，就像交上了一个益友。”而我在三岁的时候就和书交上了朋友。

我在三岁就已经上了幼儿园，在老师的呵护下我学会了许多汉字，爸爸妈妈也常常买些识字书给我看。到了六岁，我开始看漫画书和故事书，我不但看书，还大胆的把书中的内容一字一句的读给爸爸妈妈听。如果在书中遇到不认识的字，我就会把记在一个小本子里，等爸爸妈妈回来，我就把它递给爸爸妈妈，让他们教我怎么读。

就这样，我认识的字越来越多，读书的范围也越来越广了。

现在，我的书柜里不仅有童话故事、漫画书、科技书、还有我最喜欢的长篇小说：《水浒转》、《三国演义》、《史记》、《西游记》等。

我看得如醉如痴，废寝忘食。

记得有一次，我在书房里津津有味的看着书，妈妈却来叫我吃饭，可是我早已沉浸在那“五彩缤纷”的书海之中了。哪还听得见妈妈的声音，于是妈妈便提高了声音，一连喊了几声，可是我还没听见。妈妈生气了，她怒气冲冲的地推开房门对我厉声骂道：“吃饭了!”我这才从书海之中醒了过来。这时妈妈便会对我说一大堆的话：“看书别看得那么着迷，下次再这样，就得小心你的屁股了……”

光阴似箭，日月如梭。转眼间我已经五年级了。在这几年里，书陪我走过了无数的岁月;书让我明白了许多道理;书就是我最好的老师，也是我最好朋友!

亲爱的朋友：

你们好，你们怎么也想不到我会给你们写信吧。自从在电视和报纸上看到你们的国家整日炮火连天，你们每天生活在战争的环境里，特别是听老师讲述了你们的家园被毁，亲人离散，每天吃不饱，穿不暖，整天提心吊胆地生活后，我很难过，我对你们的遭遇深表同情。我多么希望你们能和我们一样无忧无虑地上学生活呀。

你们本来也可以像我们一样过着幸福的生活，但可恨的战争使你们饱受痛苦，那些发起战争的人，以强欺弱，故意制造事端。他们也是父母所生，也有兄弟姐妹，为何他们不懂得珍惜和平呢？地球是个大家庭，我们可能远隔万水千山，但是我们相互依存，谁也离不开谁。为了维护和平稳定，每个国家都要遵守国际社会的规则，任何破坏这一规则的行为，为了妻子不失去丈夫，为了你们能有一个美好的家园，我希望全世界爱好和平的人一起行动起来，维护和平，制止战争。

亲爱的朋友，愿你们早日过上美好的生活。

你们的中国朋友：林玲

Dear Lucy,

Iam so glad to receive your letter and happy to know that you have a

pleasantholiday. Please send my sincere wishes to your parents. I have a happy

holidayjust like you do. This holiday, I visited to Guangzhou with my

parents.Guangzhou, also known as the Flower City, there are many flowers along

the bothsides of streets. It’s very beautiful. Besides, the environment is clean

andthe climate is comfortable. There are many skyscrapers in Guangzhou,

especiallyin the downtown. We visited to many tourist attractions. They are all

worthvisiting. I hope you can visit there personally one day. You must like

it.

Bestwishes.

Sincerely yours,

Alva

My favorite fruit

I like banana very much.

Banana always grows in the warm area.

Its nice to eat, and it is good for our healths.

Like us ,monkeys also like to eat bananas.

You can see th is in the zoo.

Im a student.I like eggs and coconut.Because eggs is very good for me .Its very healthy.The coconut is a very sweet .The HauNans coconut is very great.I like them.

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我最喜欢的水果

我喜欢非常香蕉。

香蕉一直生长在温暖的地区。

它很好吃的，并且有利于我们的健康。

和我们一样，猴子也喜欢吃香蕉。

你可以在动物园看到它们。

我是一个学生，我喜欢鸡蛋和椰子。因为鸡蛋对我来说也很好。非常有益健康。椰子非常好吃。华南的椰子很好吃。我喜欢它们。

一天晚上，我在外婆家吃完饭准备去外面散步。我刚走出厨房，忽然看见一个黑乎乎的东西，正缓慢地往厨房外面的水槽边移动……

我十分讶异，赶忙贴到门边，注视着它的一举一动。原来是一只瘦巴巴的野狗，它一定是饿坏了!我暗暗地猜测着，没有去赶它。

那只野狗一定没有发现我在监视它，仍蹑手蹑脚地走向水槽边的剩饭桶。它骨碌碌地转着两只黑豆般的眼睛，左看看，右看看，然后把头埋在桶里，仔仔细细地翻找着，终于找到了几根肉骨头。

它利索地叼出一根肉骨头，放在地上，整个身子也趴在地上，两只前爪紧紧地按着骨头，露出它锋利的牙齿，迅速地啃着，津津有味地嚼着。

啃完一根骨头后，兴许是怕被人发现，它叼起剩下的几根骨头，向着墙角的方向，跑过去……

我暗暗想：贪吃的野狗，吃完一根还不满足，还学会打包了呢!

难道它还有小伙伴?好奇心驱使我跟了上去。到了墙角，我发现这里竟然有一个狗窝，窝里还躺着几只小小的黑毛球般的狗宝宝。

我明白了，原来它是一只有爱的狗妈妈，它打包的骨头是要喂给自己的宝宝呀!

世界各地的小朋友：

你们好！我是远在地球东边的中国的一名小朋友。中国北京是二零零八奥运会的举办地，在此，我热忱欢迎大家到中国来游玩。

中华民族是一个热情好客的民族，中国是一个文明古国，它拥有悠久的历史和灿烂的文化。造纸术、印刷术、指南针和火药这四大发明是我们中国古代人民的伟大创造，它推动了人类社会的进步，是中华民族对世界文明的伟大贡献。中国也是一个热爱和平的国度，是一个充满阳光、鲜花和爱的人类家园。今天的中国在飞速发展着，明天的中国将会更加美丽和繁华。

北京是一座拥有三千年历史的文化名城，在漫长的岁月里，中国各族人民在这里创造了灿烂的文化。北京又是一座充满现代化气息的城市，名胜古迹数不胜数，有历史悠久的故宫、天坛、天安门、八达岭长城，风景优美的颐和园、世界公园、北海公园……这里还是文化教育中心，汇集了中国多所名牌大学：有弛名中外的北京大学、清华大学和中国航天的摇篮——北京航空航天大学……在既古老又现代的北京举办奥运会，必将促进东西方文化的交流，促进奥林匹克运动的传播。

北京申奥成功，再一次向世界证明，日益繁荣的中国正以坚定的脚步走向世界。中国人民热爱和平、珍视友谊、充满信心的精神面貌将被世界更加广泛地了解和认识。

祝大家天天开心！

你们的朋友：朱亦丹

对网购建议英语作文一

Along with the advance of the society ,more and more person has experienced online shopping .online shopping has come into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology .At the same time ,with the increasing globalization and urbanization , the human race has entered a completely new stage in its history.

Online shopping has its pros and cons just as the saying goes:”so many people ,so many minds .”It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person .From the perspective of consumers .it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time .For retailers ,it can cut some costs for those without much circulating funds .However ,there are still some defects in online shopping .First ,compared with face-to-face deal, it seems less reliable and trustworthy .Second ,people will lose the fun of bargain.

After a thorough consideration ,for my part ,I am in favor of the view that we still should be careful when we “go shopping “though internet although shopping online has been an irresistible trend in modern society .we should check the information carefully that released via the internet .Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being cheated .it is of great importance .

Translation:随着社会的进步，越来越多的人都有过网上购物的经历。网上购物已成为时尚在大部分城市由于互联网技术的快速发展。同时，随着经济全球化和城市化,人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段。 网上购物有其利弊，正如俗话说的：“这么多人，所以有很多的想法。”这是可以理解的，对这个问题的看法因人而异。从消费者的角度。它可以节省一些时间的人谁没有太多的空余时间。对于零售商，它可以削减成本为那些没有多少流动资金。但是，仍然存在一些缺陷在网上购物。第一，与面对面交易，似乎不太可靠和值得信赖的。其次，人们将失去乐趣的讨价还价。 经过深入的思考，对我而言，我赞成这样的观点，我们仍然要小心，当我们“去购物”虽然互联网虽然网上购物已是大势所趋，在现代社会。我们应该仔细检查信息发布通过互联网。只有这样我们才能享受快乐和便利的网上购物不担心受骗。这是非常重要的。

对网购建议英语作文二

In current society, shopping on the Interent is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages and disadvantages .

On the one hand,shopping on the Internet is convient and faster for customers. They can stay at home looking for the items,and they look through the Internet which supplies a variety of products.

People needn#39;t to go shopping in stores . Then it can reduce cars#39; amount on the road. So it also can reduce pollution of the gas. It#39;s unpollution and it can reduce energy.

On the other hand, customers can buy false production. People will becheated and have many bussniss also demaged .

So we shopping on the Internet should notice the quality of theproduction. And we should avoid the false production on the Internet .

在当今社会，网上购物越来越受欢迎。它有许多优点和缺点。

一方面网上购物方便和更快的为客户服务。他们可以呆在家里寻找要购买的东西，他们可以浏览提供各种产品的互联网。

人们不需要去商店买东西。然后，它可以减少道路上的汽车数量。所以它也可以减少气体污染。它是无污染还可以降低能源。

另一方面，客户可能会购买到假货。人们会收到欺骗和有很多行业也会被破坏。

所以我们在网上购物应注意商品的质量。我们应该在互联网上避免假货。

亲爱的小朋友：

你们好！

我是与你们素不相识的小朋友，我叫谭婷然，我的家乡是辽宁的朝阳，虽然不是很大的城市，但也是很繁华，我家的生活条件很好，有香喷喷的红烧肉，还有新鲜美味的鱼翅吃，更重要的是我们还能在宽敞舒适的教室里学习知识，在阳光下朗读课文，和的朋友地玩耍，想要什么，爸爸妈妈就给买什么，什么都有，我爱缝小娃娃、剪纸、折纸、做手工……我还是班上的学习委员和英语课代表呢！

可是你们呢？我从书中看到，你们中有的小朋友因为家庭很贫穷，一直上不起学，或者因为各种原因而缀学，就算是家庭情况稍好一些，上了学，也买不起书本和像样的文具，衣服也破烂不堪，这哪里是21世纪的人呢！喝着可乐，现在我们学校为了帮助你们，决定开展一个手拉手活动，为你们捐献我们不用的文具，把不想穿的或穿小了的衣服、还用完的书，都送给你们，只希望你们不要嫌弃它们，它们虽旧了，可却代表我们的一点心意，希望你们能收下它，最后，希望你们能够早些摆脱困境！ Hello!

I am a child who is not known to you. My name is Tan Tingran. My hometown is the sun in Liaoning. Although it is not a big city, it is also very prosperous. My family has good living conditions. And fresh and delicious shark fins. More importantly, we can learn knowledge in spacious and comfortable classrooms, read texts in the sun, and play with friends. What do you want? Yes, I love sewing dolls, paper -cutting, origami, handicraft ... I am still a study member and representative of English class in the class!

But what about you? I saw from the book that some of the children of you have been unable to learn because the family is poor, or because of various reasons, even if the family situation is slightly better, after learning, you can’t afford books and books and can not afford books and books and books and can not afford books and books and can not afford books and books and books and can not afford books and books and can not afford books and books and can not afford books and books. Decent stationery and clothes are also broken. Where is the 21st century? Drinking cola, now our school decided to carry out a hand -pulling activity in order to help you, donate the stationery we do n’t need to wear, and give you all the clothes that do n’t want to wear or wearing. Dont dislike them, although they are old, they represent our heart. I hope you can accept it. Finally, I hope you can get rid of the predicament earlier!

亲爱的小朋友：

你们好！你们怎么也想不到我会给你们写信吧！自从在电视上和报纸上看到你们的国家炮火连天，每天生活在烽火战争里，我心很不舒服！特别是听老师说你们有的家园毁灭，有的失去父母双亲，每天吃不饱、穿不暖，流浪街头，整天提心吊胆的生活，真是太可怜了！我对你们的遭遇也十分同情！我多么希望你们可以像我们一样无忧无虑、自由自在的生活、学习、快乐地过节日呀！

你们原本可以像我们一样过着幸福快乐的日子，可是可怕的战争、可恨的战争让你们不得不远离那样幸福、快乐的生活。那些引发战争的人很自私只为自己可以得利益就胡作非为，从来都没有顾及过（到）别人的感受，已强欺弱、已大欺小，真是另人愤恨！为什么他们都不懂得珍惜和平的环境呢？利益就可以抵的过一切吗？为了孩子不是去父母，为了妻子不是去丈夫，为了你们今后有一个美好的家园，我希望你们要一致行动起来，维护和平，制止战争！

朋友们，我们中国每一个人都欢迎你们的到来（来到）你们要是来了我们会热情款待（招待、接待）你们的！

祝：

平安、和平、快乐！

中国小女孩：穆妮热