关于人物描写英语作文【合集20篇】

昨晚，我在梦里见到了一个老人，安详地躺在安乐椅上，就是他，让我烦躁不安的心平静了下来。

他是我的爷爷。严厉和沉默，是我对他仅有的记忆。

“梨花淡白柳深青，柳絮飞时花满城。惆怅东栏一株雪，人生看得几清明。”那是我第一次背诗，并不明白什么意思，只是爷爷让我背，便拼命地背着。有人说，智慧与年龄是成正比的，而当时，我还不满5岁。

每一背错，爷爷就打我一个手板。在当我的左手心肿胀起来的时候，我终于囫囵吞枣地啃完了这首诗。一回到屋子，我就开始痛哭，直到我发不出声来，仿佛泪水的喷涌能带走痛苦的记忆，抚平肉体的伤痛。

第二天，床头放着一枚白兔糖，我惊喜的拿起来，迫不及待的撕开糖纸，吞咽来之不易的甘甜。那时候，我吃过的糖不多，一颗大白兔，足以贿赂我。我一直以为那是奶奶对我的怜惜，可是那却是我最“讨厌”的爷爷对我的甜蜜的心意。

当我再次见到这个严厉的老头的时候，他不再严厉了，他安静的躺在病床上，脸色苍白的吓人，可能我的动静有点大，爷爷醒了，他艰难的睁开眼睛，用温和的口气说：“小四，过来。”我有些害怕了，因为那个黑面包公不再严厉了，我胆怯的走过去，站在床边，爷爷从被子里伸出那双皱纹密布的手，轻轻的拉住我，没有说话，这时候我觉得他显得慈祥了许多。在临走的时候，他说了很多话，可惜我没有记住一句。

这是我最后一次见到爷爷，然后便去了他的葬礼上，天空中淅淅沥沥的下着雨，我安静的跪着，尽力不沉浸在周围的悲声中，但是看着相框里抿着嘴的倔强老人，我的眼眶忽然的湿润了。我那时后悔自己为什么没有听进去他的话，那充满爱意的话。

“梨花淡白柳深青，柳絮飞时花满城。惆怅东栏一株雪，人生看得几清明。”正如这首诗，我们真正顿悟人生的时候，又有几次，我想爷爷应该早就看透了人生，才会如此突然但又安详的离去。当迷茫的我通过那迷离的灯火看清爷爷意味深长的微笑，我烦躁的心情蓦然消失了，我不必在雾里云里寻找唯一的答案，因为一阵狂风吹散了这一切，我感受到了人生。

我看着无数的人从身边走过的时候，我想他们都有对自己人生的认识与理解，但我们还未看清他，或许当我们到了不惑之年我们些许就会明白。看透人生，理解人生，享受人生，当你明白自己人生时，你的一举一动也带给了他人人生的萌芽，爷爷便给予了我人生的开端，爷爷让我感受到了真正的人生，那蓬勃、努力的人生。

我轻轻的拾起爷爷墓旁不知名的白花，轻轻的笑了。

I plan to go to travel alone this summer vacation. I have traveled several times, but gone with my family or friends, never did it alone. I want to do it once, so I can train myself to be stronger and more confident. I told my parents about my plan, they supported me very much, and they thought it is a good opportunity to help me grow up. They also told me many tips of traveling and prepared the package for me. I am grateful that my parents understand me and respect my decision. I won’t let them down.

我计划这个暑假独自去旅行。我曾经去旅游过几次，但是都是跟我家人或者朋友去的，从来没有自己去过。我想独自旅行一次，这样可以锻炼自己更坚强更自信。我把我的计划告诉了我的父母，他们非常支持我，还认为这是帮我成长的一个号机会。他们还告诉了我许多旅行要点，并帮我准备行李。我非常感激父母的理解以及他们对我的决定的尊重。我不会让他们失望。

My family bought a new goldfish. This goldfish can be beautiful! They are bulging on their heads, like wearing a big hat; eyes round bulging, but surprisingly small; lovely mouth a together, spit out a string of pearl-like blisters; body dressed in scales, in the sun Under the whole body glittering, swimming when a shake, like a wearing a gold armor, arrogant generals; lovely tail in the water like a blossoming transparent flowers, but also like a butterfly in the water dancing.

I watched them kept swimming in the water.Happy look, I am curious: these goldfish seems to never sleep like, not tired? How do not rest? In order to solve the doubts, I began a careful observation, and access to the relevant information: the original goldfish will sleep. Because they have no eyelids, so can only sleep with eyes open. If you see the goldfish in the rock crest in motionless, eyes do not turn, only the fish gill cover kept in a together, gently flip, in fact, is the goldfish in bed. But it is a shallow sleep state, so a movement, will wake up.

I finally know that the goldfish will sleep, and how to sleep, but also understand the truth: pay attention to all the knowledge!

Winter is my favourite season.Winters coming also means snow " following.

I believe no one dislike snow ,the white ,beautiful flowers.When it snowing,we will rush out of the warm and comfortable houses,run and play on the ground in snow,enjoying the happiness that belongs to us children.

I also like to skiI with several boys.So, how can I forget the winter,and the white ,beautiful flowers,and our simple happiness

My day is busy.In the morning,I get up at six.I brush my teeth and put on my clothes.Then I eat breakfast at half past six.At six fifteen I go to shool.I get to school at around seven oclock.Classes begin at half past seven.After have two classes,I do sports at nine.And then I play game with my friend.In the afternoon,I eat lunch at twelve oclock.I go shopping in the shop with my sister.School over at ten past four.I go home and get home at around five oclock.At six oclock,I eat dinner.Then I take a shower and do my homework.At nine,I watch TV.I go to bed at around ten oclock.

人物描写的运用非常普遍，人物描写的目的是刻画人物的性格，表现人物的精神面貌，这同时也能更深刻地表达文章的中心。小编精心为你整理了关于人物的描写作文，希望对你有所借鉴作用哟。 篇一：我的太奶奶

我有一个95岁的太奶奶，她非常和谒也非常勤劳，可就是脾气太犟，我总觉得她没事找事。可到了今天我才知道长时间以来隐藏着的秘密。

“蹬……”什么声音？我放下手中的遥控器走了出去，正看到太奶奶要走下楼梯去，我急忙跑过去挽住她的手说：“太奶奶别乱走了行不行啊？”。太奶奶一话不说和我一起回到了客厅。终于安静了一会儿。可又像蚂蚁一般无声无息地走到房间里去了，随着“呯”的地声，我回过神来，太奶奶正捂着膝盖不停的揉。我生气的走向太奶奶似责备又似叮嘱的对她说：“太奶奶坐着看电视不好吗？”太奶奶只是笑笑不作答，回到客厅郁闷的坐了下来，眼睛眯成了一条针缝，似乎非常生气。这里在田里干活的奶奶回来了，我滔滔不绝的诉说着太奶奶的不是，可是奶奶也只是笑笑，回去干活了。之后太奶奶不管去哪里我都把她拉回来。十足像一条铁链。我正生气着呢，只听太奶奶嘀咕着说“老了没用了。”我好像没听见似的对太奶奶说：“我们出去走一走吧！”，到了街上太奶奶真的年轻了许多，我再回想起来太奶奶做的事是为了让我们发现她不忘了她。

老人是需要多多照顾，可也要带她多出去走走看看，不要经常锁着她，而是要陪着她。 篇二：我的弟弟

我有一个弟弟，叫余荣皓，但我习惯叫他皓皓。他长着一双水汪汪的大眼睛，就像两颗晶莹剔透的葡萄，皓皓的鼻子非常小，他的嘴巴则有点大。皓皓是一个古灵精怪、调皮又可爱的小屁孩。

有一次，我和皓皓在玩玩具，他拿了两个可以变怪兽的圆球打来打去，说了一声：“可恶，美国队长太厉害了，得让猪猪侠来帮我。”当时他用蚊子般非常小的声音自言自语着，不过我还是听到了，就问他说什么，皓皓非常小声的说：“猪猪侠是也。”小不点敢撒谎！“你不说实话我就把你的直升机扔掉！”我威胁道。他终于把原话说了一遍，我听了后捧腹大笑。你们说我这个弟弟是不是非常可爱呀！

都说孩子的脸就像这七月的天，时而晴，时而雨，说变就变。这一点在我的弟弟身上也体现的淋漓尽致。一天晚上，我、皓皓和奶奶去广场上玩，路上，皓皓在一块被我踩过的石礅子上发现了一张贴纸，撕下来玩了起来，我说：“这个非常脏，扔了！”他不听，继续拿着玩，我一把抢过来扔进了旁边的垃圾桶，他非常生气，几乎快哭了，我见不妙，忙给他讲了一个笑话，还真没想到，他居然被我逗笑了，可没过十五秒，他又变回了原来那个表情，唉！

看！这就是我的弟弟，是不是既可爱又调皮呢？ 篇三：我的同桌侯芷琪

一年级的时候，我转到五班，自我介绍以后，吴老师让我坐到侯芷琪旁边。侯芷琪？好奇怪的名字。我疑惑的想。是不是那个人长得像猴子我扫视了整个班级，那有一个长得像猴子的人啊。哎！算了。我无随便找了个位子坐下。

从一到五年级，我和侯志集都没咋么接触，只知道她是一个文静的女孩。直到上小学六年级的时候，我和侯芷琪成了同桌，我才开始渐渐了解她，和她成为了朋友。

六年级的新学期的第一节数学课时，数学老师出了一道题，写在了黑板上。我视力本来就不好，黑板上的内容我看不清，又不好上讲台上去看，只好问四周的同学，可是到头来总是碰了一鼻子的灰，听到的总是一句话“自己上讲台上去看”。我望了望四周，打算问问侯芷琪。我猫着腰小心翼翼的问道：“侯芷琪，能不能帮我把黑板上的题目报一下”？侯芷琪停下手中的笔，转过身来。我没有听见预料中的“自己上讲台上去看”。只见她小声地对我说：“等一下，我把题目抄给你。”她从抽屉里拿出一个本子，认认真真地抄好后递给我。我拿起本子一看，只见本子上，字迹清秀，字写得工工整整，明显是她一笔一画用真心写的。

看着那清秀的字迹，我认认真真地答好题，在这大雪纷飞，北风呼啸的冬天里，如一股暖流，映入我的眼里，流进我的心里，是那样的温暖，温暖……

同学是人生中陪伴你学习的左膀右臂，是陪着你一起受罚的好朋友，你犯错，他就为你求情。

同学的友谊，很坚固又很脆弱。它是人间的宝藏，需我们珍爱。友谊的不可传递性，决定了它是一部孤本的书。我们可以和不同的人有不同的友谊，但我们不会和同一个人有不同的友谊。友谊是一条越掘越深的巷道，没有回头路可以走的，刻骨铭心的友谊也如仇恨一样，没齿难忘。

结尾：长留史册的，不是锱铢必较的利益，而是肝胆相照的情分，和朋友坦诚的交往，会使我们留存着对真情的敏感，会使我们的眼睛抹去云翳，心境重新开朗。

记得有一次，快考试了，晚上我吃完饭后就去睡觉了，没有记得复习，第二天到校，我急急忙忙的翻开课本。不巧，打了上课铃，我很后悔昨天晚上没好好复习。卷纸发了下来，我看了看，唉!还好还好，大部分都会写。快写完时，我忘了个字，实在是想不出来，只好发出求救信，我看了看老师没有往这儿看，就把信仍给了小易，信的内容是：小易，教我一个字，考完试后，我请你吃东西。我心里暗暗高兴，可没想到小易却说：很抱歉，我不能帮你了，这样会害了你，这个字你再好好想想吧!我相信你一定能想出来的，加油哦!我看了看表，时间不多了，我又生气又着急，怎么办呢!一声清脆的铃声让我彻底失望了。我很生气，觉定以后再也不理易万琴了。易万琴特意跑来跟我说对不起，我没有接受。易万琴解释说：“对不起，我并不是要害你，如过我教你写，你一定会急急忙忙的把答案写在卷纸上，而不会去记它。但是，是你自己想出来的话，你就会把它记在你的脑海里。”

我听了小易的解释，惭愧地低下了头：“对不起，我误会你了，我们还是好朋友吗?”小易牵起我的手，说：“当然，我们本来就是无话不谈的好朋友!”

最好的朋友就像一盏灯，亮光虽微弱，却能照亮你前进的道路!

同学，一个多么美丽的字眼，它永远用它的纯洁打动着我的心.无论下一个起点在哪里，我都会记住曾经同窗六年的同学。六年的风风雨雨，我们一同经历了无数酸甜苦辣。未来，他们也许都会因为时间的变化而消逝，可是无论如何，也抹不掉我们之间的友谊以及那珍贵的同学情……

Hometown is a beautiful picture scroll, sometimes also is a book, when you think of my hometown, just opened the book and have a look.

My hometown, although not what big city, but my hometown - wenling city a very beautiful place, have played a lot of foreigners also come to my hometown. My Alma mater west primary school is a beautiful campus, every morning will be LangLangDe pup - into your ears.

Hometown has a famous lakes - jiulong lake. Although it is comparable to the west lake is not so famous west lake, lively, every time the National Day, our whole family go to jiulong lake barbecue with my good friends, everybody together talking and laughing. Play tired sitting on a chair to enjoy the scenery of the lake.

There is a place that is Yintai city, countless goods inside, just entered the door will feel like in heaven. Yintai city sometimes make an activity.

My hometown - possessing is heaven. Hometown scenery never, but better than but peoples heart.

Birthday remember once, my grandmother came to my house, after the villagers know, have run to come over to my grandmother to send blessings, there is a foreigner specially bought a gift for my grandmother, when the grandmother thanks to him, he said: "old woman, your grade, this gift to you, I wish you a healthy body, foreign affairs luck!" Said, and turned to go, grandma said to himself: "this guy is interesting, send a wish to go, also the gifts, disorderly spend money." Listen, I know that I am I old woman says, in fact heart already feel very gratified.

The next day, I and friends to play, on the way home, I saw the foreigner sitting on the doorstep to paint. I went to ask the foreigner life situation, finally in a barbecue on hearing his name is wang, now a year old, earn money by him and his wife in the home, he didnt work, only to make money by painting.

I love my hometown!

家乡有时是幅美丽动人的画卷，也是一本书，当你又想起家乡，就翻开书看一看。

我的家乡，虽说不是什么大城市，可我的家乡——温岭市一个很美的地方，有不少外国人也来到我的家乡玩过。我的母校城西小学是一座美丽的校园，每天早晨都会有琅琅的读书声传进到你的耳朵。

家乡有一个有名的湖泊—九龙湖。它虽然没有西湖那么有名，可比西湖热闹多，每次国庆节，我们全家和我的好朋友一起去九龙湖烧烤，大家在一起有说有笑。玩累了就坐在椅子上欣赏湖面上的风景。

还有一个地方，它就是银泰城，里面有数不尽的商品，刚进门口就会感觉像是到了天堂。银泰城有时会搞一个活动。

我的家乡—温岭是天堂。家乡的风景真没，但是比不过人的心灵美。

记得有一次，外婆来我家过生日，村里人知道后，纷纷跑过来给外婆送祝福，有一个外地人特地买了礼物给外婆，当外婆向他道谢时，他便说：“老太太，您年级大了，这礼物送给您，祝您身体健康、外事如意!”说完，转身就走，外婆自言自语：“这小伙子真有趣，送一句祝福就行了，还送什么礼物，乱花钱。”我听了，知道我I阿婆嘴上这么说，其实心里已经觉得很欣慰了。

第二天，我和朋友去玩，回家的路上，我看到了那个外地人坐在家门口画画。我又去打听那个外地人的生活处境，终于在一个烧烤摊上打听到他姓王，今年三十一岁，家中靠他和他妻子打工赚钱，他没有工作，只有靠画画来赚钱。

我爱我的家乡!

The dog was small, yellow hair, walk like a roll of small balls; big eyes like two stones, moist; sleeping lying on the ground, small ears drooping, looks like a slob; its thin and short tail swaying that is very attractive.

The dog is a good friend of human beings. This is a good word. Sometimes as long as you call it, it will catch up at once, turn around your leg, then jump on you, licking you with your tongue, and rubbing you with your body. Sometimes when you play the ball, you accidentally run the ball away, and the puppy will run past it. Its nose is everywhere like an odor detector. After a while, the puppy returns with a ball in its mouth.

The puppys character is also naive and lovely. Sometimes I fight with a kitten, and I will scold him. No matter how to beat it or curse it, it will not bite you. It will not bite you like a child who has done something wrong.

Its good to keep a dog and save the food. When we eat the leftovers, its a pity that two of them are polluting the environment. But with puppies, they can eat leftovers, which are both green and hungry. It can not only help to see the home, but also like my friend to share happiness with me.

My favorite little animal is a small white rabbit, because the rabbit looks very cute.

Little white rabbit with white hair, shrink up like a small pompon. It is a pair of red eyes, like embedded in the pomp of the ruby, shiny, very beautiful. Little rabbits ears are particularly long and moving, it is scared to hide in the corner, that is very interesting.

The white rabbits mouth is very, very special, the upper lip, became a veritable "three petals". There is a story of the original white rabbits mouth and other animals. One night, the white rabbit to small fast carrots into the mouth and then into the sweet dreams, greedy little mice came along the fragrance of the room to the small white rabbit, the mouse smell the smell of carrots is From the mouth of the white rabbit came out, little mouse regardless of thirty-seven one on the bite down, the white rabbit pain woke up, touched the lips children, was bitten by a small mouse a small hole, blood " "Flowing. White rabbit shouted: "greedy mouth bad mice, why should my lips?" Mouse said: "Who told you like me greedy miles!" Little rabbit is regret to eat while eating side, so little rabbit The mouth will become the current "three petals".

White rabbit front legs short, hind legs long, it often put the front leg on the chest, hind legs support the "station" where the front legs from time to time the paddling. It took a way to jump, that posted on the buttocks behind the small tail of a stick, a few steps after the bounce will stop, vigilant to look around.

Rabbit is a fun little animal.

In my home, there is a dog just two or three months. I named him little angel, but my sister always called him a small climb. Because my sister was only two years old, speak clearly.

Only a small part of the hair is black, the last part of the tail is black; it was small, can now grow up, and now grow about 20 cm long, about 10 cm high , And now just born when the length and height are almost 5 cm it, and now compared with the past, about 15 cm long!

It was once, saw a birdie. His eyes staring at the birds, the front foot shop, head leaning on the money, the rear foot lift, ready to take off. Hey! Did not catch, it seems little guys agile skill or no bird that sharp eyes good!

Before eating, little good jumping. In the time of eating it, it is like crazy hungry wolf like, gulping. Eat to go to sleep, I use the dog tail grass tease her, it was bar bite bite, put aside, and then sleep.

It will be a housekeeping dog yo. Ill be a test to show you: I walked like a thief, it has been staring at me, I suddenly a big foot on the ground, it is "barking" to call, began to chase me. Suddenly, every time you go to a white line above to stop and not chase. For fear of being a tiger in the tiger.

This is my puppy, is not it interesting?

秋天带着一身金黄，迈着轻盈的脚步，悄悄地来到了我们身边。

Autumn, with a golden body, walked with light footsteps, quietly came to us.

天空瓦蓝瓦蓝的，蓝得像一汪海水，像一颗刚洗过的蓝宝石。一朵朵白云像一条条小鱼在游动，真像一幅优美的水墨画。

Sky blue, blue like a sea, like a washed sapphire. After a white clouds, like a small fish swimming, really like a beautiful ink painting.

我们来到果园，苹果咧开嘴，好像在欢迎我们来品尝果实，鸭梨的香味把我们的小脚钩住了，石榴咧开嘴露出了一颗颗红宝石。

We came to the orchard and the apple opened its mouth as though it were welcoming us to taste the fruit. The aroma of pear caught our little feet and the pomegranate opened its mouth and revealed many rubies.

我们来到田野，秋姑娘已经把这里撒成了金黄色，整个田野变成了金色的海洋。玉米露出了一粒粒黄宝石，高粱笑弯了腰，农民伯伯在收割水稻，水稻好像在说：“农民伯伯把我们从小养大，谢谢他们的养育之恩，

We came to the fields, where the girl of the autumn had cast it into gold, and the whole field turned into a golden sea. The corn showed a yellow jewel. Sorghum smiled and bent. The farmers uncle was reaping the rice, and the rice seemed to say, "Uncle farmer raised us from childhood. Thank you for bringing up their children.",

现在我们终于可以报答农民伯伯了，农民伯伯也在为自己的成果感到自豪。

Now we can finally repay the farmer uncle, and the farmer uncle is also proud of his achievements.

秋天真美丽啊!我爱这迷人的秋天。

Autumn is really beautiful! I love the enchanting autumn.

Do you know our English teacher?  Look!  There is a young man standing over there.  He isnt tall, and looks very thin.  Who is he?  He is our English teacher. His name is Sun Feng.

Our teacher is strict not only with himself but also with us. We all like him, because he is a good teacher and often helps us with our English.

My classmate Wang Haiyan was not good at Eng-lish at first. He often thought: "My English is poor, what can I do?" Mr Sun knew it and said to him: "Dont be disappointed, keep up with your classmates! I believe, you can. " With the help of our teacher, he decided to catch up with his classmates. So he began to put his heart into English and did better in English. At last, he took part in the English contest and got a prize.

Our English teacher works hard and he is as busy as a bee. He often prepares lessons and studies until late at night. In Grade three, we often have tests and have more English homework. Mr Sun always goes over it carefully.

Mr Sun gets on well with us. He likes singing very much. One day before classes began, he said to us: "Now, let me teach you an English song. "

We all like our English teacher. He is not only teacher but also our good friend. Dont you think so?

Autumn is a charming wonderful season, she is not spring colorful, flourishing, and no summer passion, and romance. There is no winter holy and beautiful. But the fall has his unique beauty, is unparalleled in other seasons.

Look, that blue sky, autumn, the people from the sleepy summer heat into a cool cool world.

In the field, the golden wheat. Has been laughing at the waist. Revealing a mouthful of lovely white teeth of the corn is also full of energy. One of the orchards in the orchard is like a red lantern, and the fruit of the tree is a mouthful of water.

Watching the leaves floating in the autumn wind. Some people say that autumn is desolate season, is the depression of the season. No, autumn is the season of thoughts, is the season of return. That piece of leaves, not just a distant child riding a girls windmill singing the crashed song, stepping on the beautiful pace, Pina lightly back to the mothers arms? So that the distance of the wanderer to the mothers arms to recuperate.

Autumn gives the joy of bringing the harvest also brings the full, so I love the autumn.

一、教学目标：

1、知识与能力：了解并掌握人物刻画的方法技巧，将人物写活，提高人物形象塑造能力。掌握考场作文的构思过程。

2、过程与方法：阅读分析判断文学作品中使用描写的让人物活起来的方法。

3、情感态度与价值观：培养学生学会真诚做人，学会生活。

二、教学重点、难点：

掌握人物描写的方法技巧，生动形象地塑造人物形象。

三、教学时数：

一课时

四、教学过程：

一、情境导入。（同时设置情景：一个学生迟到从外面匆忙走进来。师：哟，不知鄙人在此军事演习嗦，怎么才大驾光临呢？请入座）

下面请同学们猜猜他是谁？

忽然，他看见脚底下有东西在动，他猫腰一看，原来是一堆报纸他刚要伸手拿报纸，“哗”地一声响，从报纸堆里坐起一个睡得迷迷糊糊的孩子，光光的脑袋上只有三根毛！   这个孩子是--（三毛）（屏显）

（过渡语：你是根据什么猜出来的呢？一下子就猜出来的原因呢？是抓住了人物的独特的特征）什么特征呢？

师：瞧，这就是典型的细节与描写结合以后所产生的文字魅力。让我们认识了苦命的三毛。

那同学们想不想学习如何把人物写得如此传神呢？好吧，那今天我们就来学习人物描写的方法。（板书：人物描写）

二、探究方法。

“问询人物描写法”的秘笈在哪里？“为有大师作品里。”

读下面大师作品选段，小组内思考、讨论，(分七个大组，每小组第3人，每两组完成一个题)(（完后抽生汇报并屏幕显示）(过渡语;概括起来的方法有)（板书：方法）（过渡语;通过这些描写的作用呢？）（作用：刻画性格）

三、小试牛刀（口语表达）。

1、（过渡语：刚才同学们从大师那里学到这么多的描写人物的方法，想不想试一试呢？现在我们就用刚才概括的方法）说说这节课迟到的同学。（选择一点，放在具体的情境中，说你印象最深刻的地方，看谁说得最生动形象）（屏显）

2、展示学生眼中的迟到同学的形象文字。

展示时思考：你们是通过哪些方法将迟到的同学写活的？（屏显）

（那现在我们给这个片段命一个题目）

（过渡语：通过刚才的描绘小结一下）

3、小结：作文中人物描写有哪些要求？（屏显）

人物描写的三大要求：真、精、细。

4、那推而广之：“写人物的记叙文体片段作文”有哪些要求呢？（屏显）（学生回答后才显示）

四、退而结网--学以致用

过渡语：好，我们有了如此多的巧方法在手，现在我们“磨刀霍霍向生活”，相信同学会把生活中的人物描绘得很精彩。

同学们，在你们与同学们相处的过程中，肯定有许多精彩感人的情景：一个背影、一次牵手、一句叮嘱、一则短信、一个电话、一个手势无不蕴含着浓浓的深情和深深的爱意，请同学们打开记忆的闸门，以“难忘                          ”为题，描写这个情景中的一个人物，100字左右。

（过渡语：成功的写作要先构思，怎么构思呢？围绕以下几方面来进行。）

1、酝酿构思。（抽生回答后才写）

⑴、主人公给我印象最深的一件事（标题或事件）：

⑵、事件中凸现的主人公的性格是：

⑶、我打算用什么方法将主人公写活？（2种以上）

2、要求内容充实，要写活，要有真情实感，写一百字左右的片段作文。

3、初写草稿。

（过渡语：下面我们一起来分享一下成果）

五、作品展示。

（读后，教师或学生点评。点评时围绕场面描写和人物描写的要求，可适当根据评分标准打分。如果没完的，可适当补充和修改。）

六、总结：

通过这节课的学习，你有什么收获？说出来与大家分享。

今天仅完成生活情景中的人物描写，至于情景描写还有哪些要求呢？我们留待以后的作文教学中。同学们，说屏显祝语

Autumn rain is a password, it shut the heat, opened the cool autumn.

Autumn rain has a box of colorful paint. It gives the purple to the grapes, a string of purple grapes like a crystal gem, sparkling in the sun. It to the red to the jujube, red Yan jujube heavy hanging in the branches, like a gem. The red is given to the apple, the red apple is like our face. Sweet-scented osmanthus fairies get more color, golden, pale yellow, red ... ... they are scattered in the fall bursts of fragrance.

Autumn rain, blowing a loud little horn, it tells everyone that winter is coming soon. The cheetah is looking for food that it likes to eat. The snake crawls and crawls it quickly into the winter. The peach trees and the leaves of the pear floats to the feet of the mother of the tree. The pipa tree wears thick, green clothes. They are preparing for the winter!

Autumn rain, bring the farmer uncle is a harvest song, bring the children is a happy song.

I’m a dog lover， because dogs are tame， friendly and easy to communicate with。 I have kept one in my house， whose name is Chocolate。 She is covered with brown curly hair and looks like a Teddy Bear。 Now we have been living together for two years， so I’m very familiar with her characteristics。 When she is hungry， she often barks loudly。 At that time， I begin to realize that it’s time to feed her。 She is keen on beef and fish。 Sometimes， she also eats some rice。

我是一个爱狗的人，因为狗是很温顺，友好，也很容易交流。我在我家养了一只，它的名字叫巧克力。她的毛是棕色的卷毛，看起来就像泰迪熊。现在我们已经一起生活了两年了，所以我很熟悉她的性格。她饿了，她经常会大声吠。那个时候，我就会开始意识到是时候喂她了。她喜爱吃牛肉和鱼。有时候，她也吃一些米饭。

Every day when I come home， she always jumps up to me happily， with her tail moving。 She seems to be my best friend。 As time goes by， the relationship between us becomes closer and closer。 Therefore， I think her as an important member in my family。 I really have the pleasure of her company。

每天我回到家的时候，她都会用她的尾巴开心地跑向我。她就像是我最好的朋友一样。随着时间的流逝，我们两个的关系变得越来越亲密。因此，我觉得她是我们家里很重要的一员。有她在我真的很开心。

Winter, the Snow White like a mischievous elf, climbed up the roof, lying on the ground, turn the country into a white canvas.

In one of the country, with snow folks all wear into the ball, walking in the snow, left a deep a shallow footprints. The children ran in, play snowball and make a snowman, are their strengths. Everyone all is a great little painter, they put the countryside land as the wallpaper.

On the front of GuaJia, some distance away. Snow instead of it, climb GuaJia, dressed GuaJia in white cotton. Changed into the same interesting decorations to the country.

River, the river frozen, no longer flow. The farmers above touch with stones, ice cracked. At this point, they took out fishing tools, suddenly caught a and a fish. In the winter when you go to their home, they also will warm you eat fish, please.

Farm landscape in the cold winter also is attractive, unique scenery, and the scenery is hard to forget.

冬天，雪白的雪花就像一个个调皮的小精灵，爬上屋顶，躺在地上，把乡下变成了一幅白色画卷。

在白雪一片的乡下，乡亲们个个穿成大球，在雪地里行走，留下了一深一浅的脚印。孩子们在奔跑着，打雪球，堆雪人，都是他们的长处。大家个个都是一个了不起的小画家，它们把乡下的土地贴上了壁纸。

门前的瓜架上，瓜藤枯了。雪花代替了它，爬上瓜架，给瓜架穿上了雪白的棉衣。给乡下换上了一样有趣的装饰品。

小河上，河水结成了冰，不再流淌。农夫们在上面用石头碰一下，冰几裂开了。这时，他们拿出捕鱼工具，一下子就抓到了一条又一条的鱼。在冬天的时候你去他们家做客，他们还会热情的请你们吃鱼。

农家风光在寒冷的冬季也也一派迷人，独特的景色，而这些风景又难以让人忘怀。

My dog is very cute. Body hair is light yellow, it has small ears, and eyes twinkle like black stones. Its very thin. Foreleg short, long hind feet and ran ran fast, wind.

Its living habits, is lying down to sleep, like to eat dog food, more like bone or meat, I tease it, holding the dog food for very high, it suddenly jumped up and just eat here. He eat very cute, it exhaled eat, eat with relish, it was lying bed lazy, looks very sleepy. In the evening, however, it becomes very spirit, eyes also will shine.

He like cat likes to play with thread, he when I write my homework on my side. Darling. And I watch TV together, it will look very ecstasy. When I was playing on the computer, it is very curious staring at the computer, while wang wang cried, as if to say: I want to play too!

It also likes to play football. It will roll the ball with its claws as he ran.

I sometimes lose a fly basin to make it to pick up and then back it with my mouth.

I like the dog, because it is very cute. Can also know from it the knowledge of the animals, so my dog, I like it very much.

我家的小狗很可爱。身上的毛是淡黄色的，它的耳朵小小的，，眼睛像黑宝石一闪一闪的。它很瘦。前脚短，后脚长，跑步跑得很快，像风一样。

它的生活习惯是这样的，睡觉是趴着的，喜欢吃狗粮、更喜欢吃骨头或肉，我逗它的时候，手拿的狗粮举得很高，它就猛地跳起来，一下就吃到了。他吃东西的样子很可爱，它大口大口的吃，吃的津津有味，它睡觉趴着懒洋洋的样子，看起来很困。可是，到了晚上，它就变得很精神，眼睛也会发光。

他跟小猫一样喜欢玩揉线团，他在我写作业的时候趴在我身旁。乖乖的。它和我一起看电视，还会看得很入神。我在玩电脑的时候，它就很好奇的望着电脑，一边汪汪的叫着，好像在说：我也要玩!

它还喜欢玩足球。它会一边跑一边用爪子滚着球。

我有时侯丢一个飞盆让它去捡然后它用嘴叼了回来。

我喜欢小狗，因为它很可爱。还可以从它身上知道动物的知识，所以我家的小狗，我非常的喜欢它。

The autumn girl drove the summer heat of the summer heat, and brought the cool autumn.

Autumn girl ran into the orchard with her wand a little, the orchard faction of the scene. Mature grapes like a string of crystal clear agate, looks like a mouth-watering, taste a grape in the mouth of the sweet juice in the mouth aftertaste infinite, really people eat a want to eat the second and third Stars. Orchard in the orchard fire red, like a group of burning fire is burning. I could not help it temptation to take off a red hawthorn taste, sour me. I think this hawthorn is really looking good, but eating is really not delicious ah I can no longer be confused by the appearance of the future. Orchard jujube also one by one hanging on the branches, picked down a large and red dates, a taste of sweet and delicious, sweet and crisp very delicious.

The orchard of the persimmon one by one to the branches bent to the waist, one of the Huang Chengcheng persimmon is like a hanging in the branches of a small lantern. I taste really amazing, it is very sweet taste, like sugar as sweet, very delicious really want to eat one. Pomegranate in the orchard is also cooked, one by one grinned his mouth, inside the fruit is like a piece of ruby. In the mouth of a bite rotten, sweet juice to spray out, sweet and sour, very delicious.

Autumn orchard is really a good harvest season it!

中学作文教学，方位广，角度多。人物描写在作文教学中不失为一个重点，而人物描写中，就数肖像描写最易落入俗套，大多数中学生在对人物进行肖像描写时，无非是一张脸谱：男人多为浓眉大眼，女人多为柳眉杏口，依葫芦画瓢，把一个个活生生的、充满灵性、富有个性的人描绘成为木乃伊。究其原因，绝大部分是没有把握住作文技巧。那么，如何才能学好肖像描写呢？

第一、逆笔美。所谓逆笔美，即在肖像描写时，朝着相反的方向运笔。表面上看来似乎南辕北辙，实际上却能取得意想不到的表达效果。譬如，我们要勾勒一位村姑的肖像，有两种写法：例文一：她，披着一头乌黑亮丽的长发，圆圆的大眼睛，白里透红的脸蛋，小巧玲珑的鼻子，一张小口远远望去好像挂在树上的红樱桃……例文二：她没有沉鱼落雁之容，没有闭月羞花之貌。一双明亮的小眼睛犹如一潭秋水，两只麻花辫子在背后一甩一甩的，白花的粗布衬衫掩饰不住她娇好的身材……例文一属传统写法，也是顺承法，是中学生在作文中通常运用的技巧。要么从头到脚，要么从脚到头，描绘人的外貌特征，竭尽渲染之能事，表达效果亦不尽然，例文二即是按逆笔美的技巧来写的，作者意在写村姑的美，两个“没有”却似乎是写村姑的不美，然而还是两个“没有”对比烘托出了村姑超凡脱俗的美，这正是“逆笔”的精髓所在。上文对眼睛、头发、衣着亦没有浓墨重彩的去渲染，而是从平淡中显新奇，按常理说，肖像描写要从衣着服饰上大肆渲染，精雕细刻，而本文只是轻描淡写一笔带过，村姑那朴素、端庄的美貌却尽收眼底如见其人。

第二、朦胧美。文章贵在含蓄，肖像描写亦讲究朦胧美。在肖像描写中，运用侧面烘托手法来描绘人物肖像，亦能取得很好的效果，例如《陌上桑》，要描写罗敷的肖像时，正是采用朦胧的笔法。“……行者见罗敷，下担捋髭鬚。少年见罗敷，脱帽著肖头，耕者忘其犁，锄者忘其锄。来归相怨怨，但坐观罗敷。”文章意在描写采桑女子罗敷的肖像美，却未作一个美字，其美自见，正所谓“不着一字，尽得风流”。文章通过人们观看罗敷的反映来勾勒罗敷的肖像，把罗敷描绘得面如白玉，貌似达鹅、沉鱼落雁、闭月羞花。而罗敷的美是朦胧美，从字面上我们无法感受到，只有认真咀嚼字的深层含义，才能品味出罗敷的美来。

第三，和谐美。和谐是一种美，这是无可厚非的，有肖像描写中，我们亦可以运用和谐美的技巧，例如《白荷花》中对新媳妇的肖像描写：“一会，门帘一挑，露出一个年轻媳妇来。这媳妇长得很好看，高高的鼻梁，弯弯的眉，额前一溜蓬松松的留海。穿的虽是粗布，倒都是新的。我看她头上已硬挠挠的挽了髻……”短短几句话，淋漓尽致地勾划出了一个朴素、善良、羞涩的新媳妇形象，新媳妇的衣着，头饰在她身上是那样的和谐，一点也不觉得牵强。这正是运用了和谐美的肖像描写技巧，即我们所描写的人物身分，要与衣着、服饰外貌和谐统一，天衣无缝。

第四，对比美。有比较才有鉴别。在人物肖像描写中，我们可以尝试运用对比美原则，把所写人物与人所共知的人物进行对比，突出人物的外貌特征。或者把所描写的人物在不同时期的外貌进行对比，更能够活灵活现地刻划人物。例如《祝福》中对祥林嫂的肖像描写，正是通过祥林嫂在不同时期的外貌对比，从而使人物的形象更加鲜明的。作者初见祥林嫂时，她的脸上还有红晕，衣服也蛮新。可是第二次见到祥林嫂，她已变了许多，脸上开始出现皱纹。第三次见到祥林嫂，她明显地衰老了许多，头发也有些篷乱。通过一次次的对比，一个受封建礼教迫害的勤劳善良的劳动妇女形象活生生地展现在眼前，挥之不去。

掌握上述四招肖像描写的技巧，相信在对人物进行肖像描写时能取得事半功倍的效果。