有礼貌的例子英文【经典20篇】

Good afternoon, teachers.

I am very glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is abc, 25 years old. I come from Weifang, a beautiful city of Shandong Province. I graduated from Commercial College in July, 2001 and major in finance. Then, I was a teacher in abc, When I was a senior school student, I am interested in thought and began to read a certain classic work of Marxism, especially I finished reading “the florilegium of Mao ZeDong”. From then on, I have dabbled in more and more theoretical works and accumulated great interests in theory study, especially in Marxism.

I have a dream, a dream of my study. I wish devote my whole life and energy into the development of the Marxism. If I have the opportunity to study in abc University, I’ll dabble in as much as document about the specialty as possible. If it is possible, I want to get the primary accomplishment in my major, at least, a stable basis.

Personally, for today’s China, the first task to the development of Marxism is a process of construction. That’s to say, we should understand Marxism mostly from the aspect of construction and development of social society. Only when our socialistic country has a more rapid and balance development than the capitalistic, we can enhance the attractiveness and persuasion of Marxism eventually.

Last weekend we and sister family to ski resort to play.

When we are armed to the teeth into the indoor ski field,feeling came to a world of ice and snow, into the moment Ifell heavily, my face covered with snow. Later my father taught me when I slip up forward was not easy to wrestling.Then I follow father method tried again, really better. Sisteror where not to go, uncle is more funny, slide to half fell on his back! Could have been playing for 4 hours, but only play for more than an hour, we were exhausted, and thenslipped not move. Although very tired, but I am very happy.

翻译：

上周末我们和姐姐一家人到滑雪场去玩。

当我们全副武装地走进这个室内滑雪场，感觉来到了一个冰雪世界，走进一会儿我就摔了一大跤，我的脸上粘满了雪。后来爸爸教我滑的时候身子要往前倾才不容易摔跤。然后我按照爸爸的方法重新试了一下，果然好多了。姐姐也好不到哪儿去，叔叔就更好笑了，滑到一半就摔了个四脚朝天呢！本来可以玩4个小时，可是只玩了一个多小时，我们都筋疲力尽了，再也滑不动了。虽然很累，但是我很开心。

Dear Michael,

You want to know the changes about my hometown. You know, great changes

have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many

buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowded into

a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications

were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far

away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent

years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are

wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people live in big new

houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. I think our lives will become

better and better because of many good policies.

Sincerely

Kang Min

My favorite sports is playing basketball. I liked playing basketball when I

was a child. I think playing basketball is a very interesting and healthy

sports. Usually, after class, I always go to play basketball with my friends.

Meanwhile, it is beneficial for our health to play basketball. Most importantly,

playing basketball can makes me become stronger. Besides, I can also get the

opportunity to comunicate with each other, which makes me get well along with my

classmates. In short, I can benefit a lot from palying baketball reasonably

every day.

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想在网上预订开心人大酒店的房间。请根据下面提示的要点给酒店客房部杨小姐发一封

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该乘几路公共汽车？在哪一站下车。3，酒店能否帮忙找一辆出租车专供你使用？4，你想坐

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DearMissYang

DuringtheNationalDayholidays.I’mgoingtoShanghaitovisittheOrientalPearlTV

TowerofShanghai.Iplantoreserveastandardroomformyselfinyourhotel,soIwanttoget

someinformation.First,couldyoupleasetellmehowfaryourhotelisfromtheOrientalPearlTV

TowerofShanghai?Willyoupleasetellmeifitisconvenienttogetthere?Second,couldyou

tellmehowIcangettoyourhotelfromthetrainstation?Which

busshouldItakeandatwhichbusstopshouldIgetoff?Third,Iwanttoknowifyourhotelcan

getataxithatwillonlyserveme.Finally,IplantogetbacktoNanchangbyair,andIwonderif

youcanreserveaplaneticketforme.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou.

JeffGreen

I have a lot of friends, but my best friends are Alex and Liu Jingyan! They can help me when I am in trouble, and when I am sad, they can comfort me, and when I am happy, I will share happiness with them. And you?

Im sure youll be the same as me. Theyre two introverted little girls, just like me, because of that, Ive made good friends with the two of them. Not only for reasons, but also for other reasons, they will always be my best friends!

1、作文如做人，从你的生活感受中可以看出你是个积极上进的好青年，你看事物有自己的独到见解，认识深刻，真是难能可贵。

2、作文随感，你的文章文思敏捷，意愿纷呈。字里行间流露出的人生体验的丰富和思想感情的细腻让老师感到惊讶。希望你再接再厉，在今后的写作中形成一道属于自己的风景线!

3、真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读了大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示了你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。

4、这篇文章选择了一个全新的角度，让你的思想可以在这里自由的驰骋，这是你最大的成功之处。老师要提醒你的是透过纷纭的世事，总有一些准则可供我们处世时把握，让你的思想更深刻些，你将会时时收到“滴水看世界”的效果。

5、语言得体而富有浪漫色彩，文脉畅通，彰显出知己“书虫”的形象以及“我”与“知己”的“知”“己”之情分，灵动、俊雅。

6、文如其人，你的文章和你的为人一样朴实、豁达。你的作文功底很好，这也是你长期磨练的结晶。希望你在未来的学习过程中，用心感受和体味生活，写出更加感人的好文章。

7、文能怡情。不能把写作文当成自己的一项负担，而应该以积极的心态、细腻的笔触记录下自己的心路历程。

8、文能言声，我想文章正是你心灵的反映。人生的路途确实很曲折，也很漫长，但只要你努力执着地往前走，成功的桂冠必将属于你。

9、虽然写作对你来说并不是很喜欢的，但你却像蜗牛一样踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持写作，从不辍笔。你的精神着实令人钦佩，以你的个性定会闯出自己的一片天地。

10、虽然你能身心愉悦地生活在自己的天地里，但社会的发展已经全球化，所以你应该以崭新的姿态投入到集体生活之中，适应社会的发展。

11、少年人生，总写着许多梦幻般的故事;少年心中，总装着许多神奇的向往。这一篇短小的文章，像是一叶载满梦幻的小舟，盛装着作者的童真、梦幻、向往和刚刚起步成熟，向着远方进发。

12、清秀脱俗的字迹透脱着你的聪明智慧，稳中求进、扎扎实实是你今后写作努力的方向。

13、你是个很有主见又不乏真知的学生，对你的观点我十分认同，但如果行文安排中结构再紧凑些，那就是锦上添花了。

14、可以说你的文章充满了真情实感。人嘛，失败在所难免，有勇气能面对失败就更加难能可贵。我相信是金子，总会有闪光之时。希望你尽快调整心态，你将会发现天空更加湛蓝。

15、看了你的文章，仿佛眼前流过一条小溪，清纯，可爱。希望你能保持住这样的文风，用纯净的语言表达出丰富的内涵。

16、娟秀的字迹，清晰严整的结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文学习中互相促进好吗?

17、精心的构思，深邃的思索显示出你在写作天地中正在不断成长起来。今后的写作之路还很漫长，望你能努力思索，不断创新。

18、关心生活，关注社会，并不是成年人的特权。通过这一篇《保护大自然》看得出来，在你的心中，不仅装盛着童真和书本、学校，而更多的是不尽的关注社会的心事。这一篇文字，一波三折，尤其心理描写很突出，结尾的议论升华了文章的主题。

19、读你的文章真是一种享受。首先是思想感情的愉悦，当然来自你文章深邃新鲜的立意。所谓“登山则情满于山，观海则意溢于海”，你是个生活的有心人，你用真情打动了别人，这是你作文的最大成功。

I was so excited when i entered the college. For so many years, I worked hard to achieve this dream and finally i made it. Everything seemed fresh and curious to me. I was so pleased that I would enjoy my college life soon.

when i was in high school, I had to study all the time and hardly had spare time to do what i wanted to.Besides, I had to focus on my textbooks and doing exercise again and again. Therefore, I had little time to read magazines and novels and watch TV. what was worse, I couldnt play with my friends a lot, which I couldnt stand the most. In a word, all i did in high shool should be considered for the College Entrance Examination. dedecms.com

However, my college life is totally different from the life in high school.I can arrange my time freely. I spend most of my time reading in the library, where I can open my eyes and broaden my mind.In my free time, I also join some clubs,where i can make a lot of friends of different majors. My teachers in college are so kind and knowledgeable that they not only teach us knowledge but also how to be a person and how to get on with others. In addition, there are more opportunities for me to improve myself.

I believe college life is an important stage in my life. In college, i can learn how to learn by myself, how to get on with others, how to live independently.College provides me with a stage where i can show myself and be myself.

中国曾有“君子不失色于人，不失口于人”的古训，意思是说，有道德的人待人应彬彬有礼，不能态度粗暴，也不能出言不逊。礼貌待人，恰当的使用礼貌语言，是我们中华民族的传统美德。

我有这样一段经历：有一天，我和楼下的朋友小明一起去小区玩捉迷藏。他先藏，我找。正巧，我看见旁边有一位老爷爷在晒太阳，我上前去问：“老爷爷，您知道刚才有个穿蓝色T恤的孩子藏在哪儿了？”老人见我很有礼貌，便耐心地给我指路。在老爷爷的帮助下，我不费吹灰之力就找到了小明。我赢了，我好高兴啊！该小明找我了，我也找了个隐蔽的地方藏起来。这时，小明也去问老爷爷，他吼道：“老头儿，看没看见一个身高1米60左右的男孩藏在哪？”老爷爷不但没给他指路，还骂他是个不讲礼貌的孩子。结果小明始终没找到我，甘愿“受罚”。这正如俗话所说：“礼到人心暖，无礼讨人嫌”。

还有一次，我在坐公交车时，不小心踩到了一位大姐姐的裙子，大姐姐回头看了看，我连忙说：“对不起，猜到您的裙子了。”那位大姐姐微笑着说：“没关系。”于是一场可能发生的纠纷，就这样避免了。看来礼貌待人可以在人与人之间架起一座理解的桥梁，减少相互间的矛盾。可见文雅、和气、宽容的语言，不但沟通了人们的心灵，而且反映出一个人的思想情操和文化修养。

近期，我认真阅读《品经典·悟人生》这本书，其中《昂贵的单纯》这个故事，使我受益匪浅。我深深体会到：在与他人交往的时候，我们也要尊重别人的意愿，不要强迫别人去做事，即使以为自己的建议对他人有好处，也要让他人在明白后自觉采纳你的建议，而不能强迫他人。记住，尊重别人，就等于尊重自己。

人在社会生活中，总要和别人交往。学会文明礼貌待人，恰当地使用礼貌语言，就能使人与人之间的关系更加和谐，社会生活更加美好。

Tea is a kind of fragrance and with a variety of flavor drink. Smell, pure and fresh and tangy, drink it, first a little bitter but is another kind of sweet savor. My fathers day is like the a cup of strong tea...

My fathers day is a cup of fragrant tea has experienced various process made the tea. Tea, need to go through a variety of processes: picking, stirring, drying..... Are made after a careful step by step process to finally make the tea. And my father is the man who experienced many hardships, he has a wealth of experience, he is like a cup of strong tea, he experienced many twists and turns to eventually become a successful person. The first cup of tea need to carefully taste slowly, to taste the sweet tea, I need to get to know the fathers day to know his bitter bitterness.

My fathers day is a cup of tea looks seemingly calm, but there is a little bitter taste tea, too. My fathers day in other peoples eyes may be a man of humor, he often in front of other people very happy, but in my eyes he is very sad, he always to work hard for the mother and I went to, he wanted us to be happy. He never put his own distress in front of outsiders and difficulty, looks very stable, but he always bury sadness in the heart, a person to bear. Seemingly calm is like a cup of forks mild, but may be cold.

生日是每个人一生中，非常重要的时刻。这样特殊的日子，不仅预兆着你的诞生日，更预示着你年岁的增长。为大家分享了英文的生日贺词，一起来看看吧！

1、Happy birthday to a wonderful person!

——祝一位极帅的人生日快乐！

2、Happy birthday. I hope today treats you well.

——生日快乐，祝你今天过得愉快！

3、Congratulations and warmest wishes for your birthday and every day.

——祝你生日快乐，天天快乐！

4、Here comes today with special pride in all the achievements you have made. May your dearest wishes through all the years in store come true, and make you happier than you have ever been before.

——愿你宿愿得偿，快乐幸福更胜以往。

5、Wishing you a wonderful day and a year filled with happiness！

——祝你生日妙不可言，整年沉浸在幸福里！

6、May you enjoy to the fullest the joy of today. Wishing that your special day be a winner all the way!

——敬贺诞辰！愿这一切充满欢乐、成功！

7、May every special happiness fill this day for you and may the year bring all the best things you are looking forward to.

——愿你享尽今日之欢乐，祝你的生日百事顺心！

8、Congratulations on your birthday. May the coming year be filled with happiness and success.

——愿你的生日特别快乐，愿新的一年中心想事成！

9、May your life brighter as each birthday comes and goes. The nicest kind of birthday that could be wishes for you.

——愿你每个生日都使生命更加亮丽，祝生日无比美好、快乐！

10、Many happy returns of this special day. All our best wishes go to you on your birthday.

——祝你生日快乐，给你我们所有的祝福！

11、May your birthday be a celebration of the life. Wish you all happiness, health and prosperity with many returns of the day.

——愿你的生日是对生命的歌颂，祝健康快乐，事业蒸蒸日上。

12、Hope your birthday is like you——special.A Happy Birthday!

——希望你的生日像你一样——不同寻常。生日快乐！

13、May your birthday bring lots of joy in the year you have begun. Accept my wishes for many happy returns on your birthday.

——愿你的生日带给你无限快乐的一年，请接受我的生日祝福！

14、Warmest wishes that your birthday holds nothing but the best. The finest things in life today and every day!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，愿生日中最美好的一切属于你！

15、In hon our of your moving out of the twenties, we are giving you a marvelous birthday party.

——为庆祝你跨越二十岁，我们准备了一个盛大的生日宴会。

16、The kindest friend there could ever be is the kind of friend you are to me.Happy Birthday!

——世上如有诤友， 那就是像你对我那样关怀的朋友。祝你生日快乐！

17、Its time to celebrate your birthday. Happy birthday to an attractive and intellectual girl.

——是庆祝你生日的时候了，祝福美丽、聪颖的你生日快乐！

18、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

19、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

20、Wishing you a birthday that is among your very best. I hope that all the years ahead will be as happy as you have been in the past.

——祝你度过一个最美好的生日，希望你未来的日子与以往一样快乐！

21、Happy birthday. May gladness fill your every hour on this special day.

——生日快乐！愿这特殊的日子里，你的每时每刻都充满欢乐。

22、We hope that you enjoy this special day and your birthday grows happier by the minute!

——我们祝你欢庆这一天，愿你生日的快乐与分俱增！

23、My heartiest birthday greetings to you, a feeling much warmer than anybody can know. Best wishes for everything your heart desire in the year.

——我诚挚的生日祝福，情深意重，祝你在未来的一年里，心想事成！

24、Wishing you a happy birthday! May the best and loving things be some of the joy your birthday brings.

——祝你生日快乐！愿生日带给你的欢乐中蕴涵着一切美好！

25、It is not everyday you have a birthday, so hope you have a wonderful one. May it be followed by days and weeks and months and years of happiness for you!

——不是每天都能过生日，希望你今天生日快乐，愿你年年岁岁幸福永伴！

26、Have a great day, for today is your birthday and a wonderful event. Wish you happiness unfolding like the petal of a rose.

——生日之际，祝你度过妙不可言的一天，愿你的幸福如绽放的玫瑰般芬芳！

27、Each birthday is a milestone we touch along lifes way. May your birthday be happy in more ways than one.

——每个生日都是我们人生之旅的一个里程碑，愿你的生日百事顺意。

28、Warm wishes on your birthday. I send along my love and affection for you as well as a small gift. Take care!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，捎给你我对你的爱，也寄去一件小礼物，多保重！

29、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

30、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

31、Let me join all your other friends in wishing you a happy birthday. Today specially belongs to you. Take this chance to enjoy yourself in everything you do.

——让我与你的朋友们一道共庆你生日快乐，今天属于你，祝你欢欢喜喜！

32、My birthday wishes to you are the warmest. May all the plans you are making work out just right for you and may life always bring the best things your way.

——热烈祝贺你的生辰！愿你的计划都能实现、愿你的生活永远美丽！

33、May each hour be happy one on this special day. May the day ahead be more than happy, too, as all your dreams and plans work out just right for you.

——祝你在这特殊的日子里，时时刻刻都充满快乐，祝你来日多福，捷报频传！

34、A little birthday wish just to let know how much I care about you. May you seek all the best that the world has to give. May you never stop learning for as long as you live.

——小小的生日祝福。略表我的心愿。愿你的追求孜孜不倦，愿你永远学而不厌。

35、A wish for your wonderful birthday that brings a world of bright and lovely things to remember each day through the year.

——生日来临，带给你无数的快乐日子，一年中天天都会想起，生日的快乐、温馨。

36、Allow me to congratulate you with all my best wishes upon your having reached your sixtieth birthday. May you live a long, healthy and joyful life.

——在您六十大寿之际，请允许我向你表示最衷心的祝福，祝你健康、长寿、生活愉快！

37、I want to tell you on this special day that Im very glad time hasnt changed our friendship any. Hoping your birthday is great.

——在这特殊的日子里，我想说我真高兴，时光没有改变我们的友谊，祝你生日其乐无穷。

38、Birthday comes and birthday goes each year, and this leaves the happy memories for ever. May this special day brightens each hour like sunshine that cheers every flower.

——年年生日来而复去，留下永久的快乐回忆。愿今天的每时每刻都充满明媚，似阳光普照鲜花绽放！

39、Wish you a whole world of happiness now that your birthday is here. May your memories today be warm ones. May your dreams today be dear. May your joy last through the year.

——愿你的生日充满无穷的快乐，愿你今天的回忆温馨，愿你今天的梦想甜美，愿你这一年称心如意！

40、Every day is birthday time when thinking of you, and I shall keep one sublime hoping your many dreams come true.

——每当想到你我好似天天都在过生日，可我特别珍视其中的一天，祝愿你在这天美梦都能实现。

41、Affectionate birthday greetings. Birthday means a new beginning and a new chance to take hold on life.

——在你生日之际，向你致以亲切的祝贺。生日意味着一个新的开端，意味着重新把握生活的机会。

42、My special wish may bring you health, luck and happiness each minute! Hope it really proves to be the nicest birthday you have spent.

——给你我特别的祝福，愿它每分每秒都带给你健康、好运和幸福。希望这是你度过的最美好的生日！

43、I sincerely feel a grateful interest in each return of this happy anniversary. Send you a birthday card and the accompanying gift is a token of my best wishes for your success and happiness.

——每到你的生日，我都十分快乐。送上一张生日卡和一件礼物，略表心意。祝事业成功、生活幸福！

44、Be happy, be cheerful. Its time to celebrate. My friend was born today. Hope your course is charted for lots of luck all the year through.

——祝你幸福，愿你快乐，庆祝今天你来到这个世上。在生命航程新的一年中，愿幸运时时与你相伴！

45、Looking back across the years, we come to realize that it takes many birthdays to make us kind and wise. Growing older only means the spirit grows serene. Happy birthday!

——回首以往，我们渐渐认识到，是这些众多的生日使我们宽厚仁爱，更增智慧，年龄的增长使心境愈趋宁静。祝生日快乐！

46、Wishing you a wonderful birthday. You make this world a nicer place just by being so kindhearted. May this day that is all your own hold happiness for you and the years to come be filled with all the best things, too.

——祝你生日快乐，你的善良使这个世界变得更加美好，愿这完全属于你的一天带给你快乐，愿未来的日子锦上添花！

47、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

48、Among the friends we make in life, there are only one or two who can be called ”a special friend“and thats how I think of you.You show the warmth of your friendship in so many different ways,Thats why I hope your birthday is the happiest of days.

——在我们结交的朋友中，只有一、二人堪称”知已“。我正是这样看你。你事无巨细都表现出温馨的友谊，为此我祝你生日幸福无比。

49、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福。弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

50、Permit me to congratulate you on reaching another of these anniversary landmarks today. May each day be as happy as your birthday. Have a wonderful birthday!

——祝贺你抵达了生命的又一个里程碑，愿你每天都象过生日一样充满喜悦。祝你生日无比快乐。

Christmas arouses increasing attention year by year in China. Christmas cards become popular with students. People hold Christmas parties and exchange Christmas girts. A lot or TV and radio programs about Christmas are on. Meanwhile the Spring Festival is less appealing （有吸引力的）to youngsters. Thus some people wonder whether Christmas will replace the Spring Festival.

This worry is fairly unnecessary. Why ？One reason lies that Christmas only affects Christians，college students and joint-venture （合资企业）workers. Another reason is that Christmas is mostly celebrated in cities. Few people in countryside show extreme interest in this exotic（带有异国情调的）festival. By contrast，the Spring Festival is the most influential traditional festival in every family.

I think，it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the West，a lot of Western holidays have been gradually introduced into China. For us Chinese we should never neglect or even discard our own traditional festivals. For centuries Chinese have observed this traditional holiday to welcome the beginning of a new year. And we will treasure the Spring Festival forever.

I have a very happy family.There are four people in my family--my parents ,my younger brother and I.My fathther is working in another city,so he is always very busy.As a famous saying goes :" There is always an able woman behind a successful man .",my mother is a housewife.She can cook very dilicious food and she is often busy with some houseworks.Sometimes,brother and I help her tidy the house,but of course,we couldnt tidy as clean as her.

I love my parents as well as my family.I hope we can be happy forever!

Dear Santa Claus,

Hello, as time goes by, the sun and the moon fly so fast, and it will be

Christmas soon, you have to give gifts to obedient and very good children. It

reminds me of this time last year. Its long before Christmas and Im thinking

about what I want for Christmas. A few days before Christmas, I put my wish card

in front of my bed early, hoping Santa Claus can see it and help me realize it.

You may be asking, "Why put up the wish card so early? Why not wait until

Christmas Eve?" My answer is: That is because I am afraid you sent the wrong

gift, give you enough time to prepare. On Christmas Eve, I went to bed early,

thinking that I would wake up and open my eyes to see the gift you gave me. But

when I opened my eyes in the morning, I found no present at the end of my bed,

nor on my desk. I was worried because I thought you had hidden the present for

some joke with me. I searched my home carefully, but still there was no present.

I waited another day with great anticipation, but you and your gift still did

not appear. My mother told me that because they do not care for the environment,

Shijiazhuang is seriously polluted, haze weather is bad, you lost your way, so

you can not send Christmas gifts to the children on time. Is that right? Three

days later, I finally received your gift, which was accompanied by a letter of

apology. In the letter, you explained that due to the weather, you delayed the

delivery of the gift. At the same time, you also hoped that we could take good

care of the environment and be guardians of the environment.

Dear Santa Claus, another year has passed, in this year, my friends and I,

protect the environment, save water, try to be a good environmental small guard,

at the same time we also mobilize our father, mother, uncle, aunt and we take

action together, less drive a day a week, green travel. After our joint efforts,

shijiazhuang sky blue, water green, I believe this time you will be able to send

gifts to the children on time!

Looking forward to your friend: Li Zijian

亲爱的圣诞老人：

您好，时光流逝，日月如梭，马上又要到圣诞节了，您又要给听话又很乖的小朋友派送礼物了。说到这就又想起去年的这个时候了，距圣诞节还好久我就开始想圣诞节自己要的礼物。圣诞节前几天，我早早的把自己的愿望卡挂在自己床前，希望圣诞老人能早点看到并帮我实现。您也许会问：“为什么这么早就把愿望卡挂上去呢?为什么不等到平安夜呢?”我的回答是：那是因为我怕您送错了礼物，给您充足的时间来准备。平安夜的晚上，我早早的就上床睡觉了，想着一觉醒来睁开眼就能看到您送我的礼物。可是，当我早上睁开眼睛，发现我床头没有礼物，我的写字台上也没有礼物，我着急了，以为您和我开玩笑把礼物藏起来了，索性把家里认真得找了个遍，还是没有。我怀着期待的心情又等了一天，您和您的礼物仍旧没有出现。妈妈告诉我，是因为他们不爱护环境，石家庄污染严重，雾霾天气恶劣，您迷路了，所以不能准时把圣诞礼物送到小朋友手中。是这样吗?三天后，我终于收到您的礼物，伴随礼物而来的还有您一封致歉信，信中你说明了因为天气原因，致使你延误了礼物的派送的时间，同时您也希望我们能够爱护环境，做环境小卫士。

亲爱的圣诞老人，又一年过去了，在这一年里我和我的小伙伴们，保护环境，节约用水，努力当好环境小卫士，同时我们还动员我们的爸爸、妈妈、叔叔、阿姨和我们一起行动起来，每周少开一天车，绿色出行。经过我们大家的共同努力，石家庄的天蓝了，水绿了，相信这次您一定能够准时将礼物送到小朋友手中啦!

盼着您的朋友：李子健

Even Homer sometimes nods.

智者千虑，必有一失。

Everybodys business is nobodys business.

人人负责，等于没人负责。

Fact speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩。

God helps those who help themselves.

自助者天助。

Hear all parties.

兼听则明。

He who does not advance loses grou12

逆水行舟，不进则退。

It is hard to please all.

众口难调。

Justice has long arms.

天网恢恢，疏而不漏。

Measure for measure.

针锋相对。

No man is born wise or learned.

没有生而知之者。

Observation is the best teacher.

观察是最好的老师。

One swallow does not make a summer.

一燕不成夏。

Prevention is better than cure.

预防胜于治疗。

Talking mends no holes.

空谈无补。

Where there is smoke， there is fire.

1、桂花的味道就像是儿时，睡眼朦胧时妈妈的怀抱让我温暖/安心/塌实。

2、桂花的香味儿跟刚出炉的蛋糕一样甜美。

3、桂花树开的很香。像珍藏多年的老酒，一杯，便醉了。

4、桂花真香呀，就像是春日里和煦的阳光或是微风滑过脸庞或是少女的手。

5、桂花真香呀，就像是姥姥酿的槐花蜜甜在口里乐在心间。

6、桂花真香呀，香得像甘甜的蜜酒（醴酪）。

7、桂花真香呀，香得像一阵沁人心脾的微风。

8、月色下的桂花点点绽放，流淌着水蜜桃般沁人心脾的芬芳。

如何让托福作文的"例子"更生动：要想使托福作文逻辑更缜密，更加具有说服力，我们需要在托福作文中添加一些例子以支持自己的论点，然而，有些同学却不能很好的把例子融入托福作文中去，不是干巴巴的讲两句，就是把那些用滥了的例子再炒一遍。这样的托福作文，是不可能取得高分的。那， ，如何选择高分例子？如何在托福写作中更好的添加例子？

在备考托福写作的过程中，不少拿不到写作高分的中国学生遇到的问题不是看不懂题目，也不是想不到理由，甚至也不是写不到300字(有学生写了470字，却只得了fair)，而是不会论证。不会论证这四个字几乎就是托福写作的死穴。ETS的考官们在OG中反复强调fully developed的重要性，说的也就是这个理儿。论证的主要方法有直接论证、举例子、引用他人观点和数据等等。在这里，最适合中国学生操作，也是最容易得高分的就是举例子了。

然而，举例子这个方法向来不为中国学生所重视。因为对于大多数学生来说，举例子实在是太容易不过了，只要写上for example之类的提示词，再写上人尽皆知的诸如Einstein， Newton之类的例子就万事大吉了。而事实上，这样的例子考官早已经看过成百上千遍了，怎么可能再给高分呢?

因此，要想举出高分的例子，最好是写两种例子：

1)美国人所熟知的历史、文化的例子，但一定要有一些新意，不是讲烂了的Galileo， Mother Teresa之流

2)讲自己身边的故事。

若是考生能够选用第一种例子，用得恰当的话自然能让考官眼前为之一亮。例如在讨论媒体对人们的影响时，选用美国人所熟知的脱口秀女王Oprah Winfrey作为例子。或是在讨论学生是否都应该学习历史的时候，选用美国历史上知名的总统，如Thomas Jefferson， Herbert Hoover等进行论证都非常好。这样做既进行了有效论证，又不落入俗套。然而，举这类例子对于考生考前的积累要求比较高。如果距离考试还有三个月或以上的时间，我建议考生可以在考前多准备一些类似的人物或事件的例子，以备考试之用。在这里，推荐给大家几个参考的网站：维基百科/，纽约时报 /， 华尔街日报 / 和 American thinker / 这些都是很好的收集素材的网站。

对于大多数备考时间比较紧的考生来说，花大量的时间去准备第一种例子显得有些不太划算。因此，性价比比较高的第二种例子更适合于备考时间比较短的考生。托福考试仅仅是语言能力考试，只要能用恰当的例子论述清楚问题就可以，因此用自己或身边人的例子对于考官来说也有很大的说服力。

三大技巧学会编例子：

1) 加上姓名、时间、地点等

很多中国学生在写例子的时候会使用比如说有一个人……这样的表达。这样的表达看起来底气不足，且中式思维严重，很难受到考官青睐。考生完全可以改用另外的表达我有一个朋友叫Jason，他在两年前做了XX事……这样写就看起来舒服多了。在叙述个人类例子的时候，尽量使用具体的人名、地名和时间。这样能使你的例子看上去更丰满、富有细节，也更像真实的事件，有说服力。

2) 与论点结合，写出XX之前和XX之后的变化

需要特别注意的是，例子一定是为论证服务的，绝不能脱离主题举例子。有的考生非常心醉于自己编出来的故事，但是却忘了自己在写托福作文，这个故事并不能证明你的观点，那这样的文章得不到高分一点也不奇怪。

这里的XX指的是论点中的主题词。例如在写机经中的一个题目：公共交通是否应该免费时，有一个分论点是公共交通免费以后，私家车会减少，这样尾气排放得少了，环境也就变好了。这里的主题词就是私家车的数量，例子就可以写成N年前私家车很少，环境很好，然后私家车变多以后，环境就变差了。例子可写成：

10 years ago， in my childhood memory， the city which I live in now is one of the most beautiful cities I have ever seen. The blue sky and the clean water were quite impressive to me. However， 3 years ago， when I came back to this city again， I was astonished by those changes. The city developed rapidly during those days.There are far more private cars than years ago on the road every day. On average， every household has one or two cars. The city may be described as developed now，while the sky here is never as clear as ever.

这个例子当中所用的词汇、句型基本都是中学所学过的。但是其中用到了我们刚才所谈的第一个技巧，加上了时间细节，也用到了第二个技巧，扣紧了主题，说明了有私家车变多之前和之后的变化。这个例子看上去文采平实，但却符合托福考试的评分规范，单就这个例子而言，就是可以得到4~5分的高分的(满分5分)。

3) 写完例子以后，一定要再结合论点论证说理

这一点不难理解，却是很多考生所忽视的。再强调一遍，例子的存在是为了更好地论证论点，因此在写完例子以后，需要再加上至少1~2句话重申一下你的论点。例如上文中出现的例子，写完之后，还应再加上If the amount of the cars can be reduced， I believe it will further improve the environment here， and be beneficial to all the citizens here as well. And The free payment of pubic transportation will make this come true.这样就是一个完整的论述段了。

托福作文中如果能够运用上几个生动有趣的例子，文章就立刻丰满起来，如果没有明显的词汇和语法错误，这肯定就是一片高分托福作文。

Hello everybody, my name is xx. Is the xx school students. Very pleased to be able to participate in the Expo volunteers interview, also very grateful to the school for giving me this opportunity and hope through this interview, so I can become a glorious and sacred Expo volunteers.

In my mind, a new generation of young volunteers are responsible and dedicated, without asking, a symbol of selfless dedication.

As a professional student exhibition, the first day of school I took my Expo tight, organic link, looking forward to one day into the Expo, more profound, more direct understanding of the Expo.

Now I have the opportunity near the Expo, more eager I am able to participate as a volunteer in the Expo, I will use what I learned, the enthusiasm for the World Expo services, and through my efforts, to our great, Beautiful China has shown in front of the world, and let the world understand China, love China.

I believe I am capable volunteers for the job. Sincerely look forward to receive the honor. Thank you!

I have a love for my father, and a happy and warm home.

My father has a wide range of interests! Like to go, play badminton, play golf, &hellip, &hellip, and I like to play weiqi best. Every Saturday and Sunday, with me “ kill ” a set.

My mother said that daddy is the sun, mother is the moon, and I am the star. Our family is a permanent combination of galaxies, forever and ever. Father is a huge pillar, support the family, and work hard forever.

My father works in Zhejiang, Wenzhou, and manages a factory. There are twenty days in a month in Wenzhou, ten days in Kunshan. I will cherish this ten days, dad will try to play chess with me, take me out to play.

My fathers birthday is coming. I wish him a happy birthday! Good health！

Do you know Lin Dan? Right! He is the world badminton champion, and also my idol.

The players who trained with me in the little sports school all liked the badminton all-around champion Lin Dan. If there were badminton games, they would either turn on the TV or go to the spot early to look forward to Lin Dans wonderful performance! I dont count outside, either! However, when I went to school, when my classmates opened the box and talked about the game, most of the students didnt even see Lin Dan in the game. Even the names had never been heard of. How can it not be regretted? Lin Dan is my idol, I am actively advancing momentum. Lin Dan in the play, we will be absorbed in watching his every game exciting game in front of the television, his every action makes people admire it; every action make people excited, I always to hand Lin Dan unable to restrain the emotions agile movements, his vigorous pace. Lin Dans superb skills, indomitable fighting spirit, all the people marvel, bring forth the new through the old, the world today wins the. I also love badminton, I look forward to through their own efforts, but also like Lin Dan, let the world sit up and take notice.

It is the duty of every citizen to make the country rich and powerful (To

make the country rich and strong is…)。 In order to accomplish this object one

must be patriotic (love his country)。 I consider this an unchangeable truth.

How can a student love his country (be patriotic)? I find my answer very

simple and clear. He must study hard and store up knowledge so as to serve his

(the) country in the future. If every student can do according to what I said,

the country will certainly be rich and powerful.