中考英语大常见错误解析（实用20篇）

一、假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天 你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。

上午 你用零花钱给母亲买了些鲜花，放在花瓶内

下午 你去市场买菜，为全家人做了一顿简单可口的饭菜

完饭后 你送给母亲自己制作的贺卡，并祝她节日快乐；告诉母亲要多注意自己的健康，不要过度劳累；你还保证今后会帮助她做一些家务劳动；母亲感动得留下了眼泪

注意：

1. 词数80—100 个左右

2. 日记的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3. 日记必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可以假如适当细节和适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯。

参考词汇：pocket money 零花钱vase 花瓶overwork 过度劳累be moved to tears 感动得流泪

11th May Sunday

Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for her.

In the morning, I bought …

….

Today is a special day, warm and meaningful.

Since I was a little child, I had a dream that I wanted to be a doctor.

When I was little, I watched many TV series and movies about doctors. I thought

they were so great. Therefore, I made up my mind to be a doctor. In my opinion,

doctor is the people who can help patience get out of sickness and pain.I want

to be the person who can help others. However, being a doctor needs so much

professional knowledge and there is a long way to go. So I have to try my best

on my study and go to a good college.

果断：有一个6岁的小男孩，一天在外面玩耍时，发现了一个鸟巢被风从树上吹掉在地，从里面滚出了一个嗷嗷待哺的小麻雀。小男孩决定把它带回家喂养。当他托着鸟巢走到家门口的时候，他突然想起妈妈不允许他在家里养小动物。于是，他轻轻地把小麻雀放在门口，急忙走进屋去请求妈妈。在他的哀求下妈妈终于破例答应了。小男孩兴奋地跑到门口，不料小麻雀已经不见了，他看见一只黑猫正在意犹未尽舔着嘴巴。小男孩为此伤心了很久。但从此他也记住了一个教训：只要是自己认定的事情，决不可优柔寡断。这个小男孩长大后成就了一番事业，他就是华裔电脑名人—王安博士。

I imagine a lot about lives in the future. I think two words can summarize

my imagination. The first word is fast. In the future, we will have more quickly

transportation means. Now matter how far we go, it takes only a short time. With

the development of science and technology, we can travel to the moon, Mars or

somewhere outer space. People may can live in other planets. The second word is

convenient. Because of the fast development of our society, many work can be

done by computers or even robots. Lots of things are fully automated. Humans

just need to give some simple instructions to complete complecated tasks.

Many traditional arts are losing nowadays, because some of them have been

replaced by the new machines and the scientific products. I feel so sorry about

the losing arts, in my opinion, they are so classic and their charm will never

fade away. Take my grandma for example. She is good at paper-cut which was

inherited from her mother. But when comes to my mother’s generation, paper-cut

seems to be kicked out, there are less people need it, so my mother doesn’t

learn this skill. The paper-cut art is losing in my family. When I found my

grandma had this skill, I was so surprised and curious about it. I asked my

grandma to teach me this skill. During the process, I found this art was so

great, I was attracted by it. Some traditional arts like paper-cup should be

kept.

You and some friends are organizing an English Festival. Write out a poster you are going to put up outside your school. Dont forget to include place, time, date and any other information students need to know.

题目：你和你的朋友们正在筹备英语节，试着策划一张贴在校外的海报。记得在海报上注明活动地点、时间、日期和其它重要信息。

我家有一棵树，一棵银杏树。

那树既不开花，又不结果。也就像是在做一个自我循环一样，长出它青翠的嫩叶;落下它枯黄的成叶，像一张卡了带的唱片，年复一年的重复着。

好不寂寞。

扇面般开头的小叶子，与外面的青翠高大的树迥然不同，它的枝干也不仅有婴儿手臂的粗细。似一个小小的、无法成长的孩子。又像一个佝偻着背的老头，望着窗外的车水马龙，寂寞得泪流……

妈妈说，以前它是种在大院子的，长得茂盛青翠，夏天会结出像一个竹青果子。秋天成熟后，就是一个个美味的白果。当年曾祖父最爱的曾祖母的白果炖鸡了，那两棵银杏，就是曾祖父与曾祖母结婚时种下的。可因为曾祖女的去世，他种的那棵银杏就移到了他的墓边。而另一株银杏就开始变矮。青翠的叶子变黄开始枯死。

母亲细心栽培终于救法了那棵银杏树。可从那以后，银杏就也不结果了。

从记事起，曾祖母便是寂莫的，好比那一棵不结果的银杏。多时，她会一边摸着树，一边说着她的近况，她的生活。好像树可以听得懂她说的话似的。说着说着，眼角会流下一颗颗浊浊的泪珠。像可以回到从前曾祖会在世时，他们坐在树下聊着天，谈笑间，都是满的情意。

烟花烟花满天飞，我为谁妩媚，不过是醉眼看花花也醉。

流沙流沙满天坠，我为谁憔悴，不过是缘来缘散缘似水。

那，零落的银杏……

我家有一棵树，一棵银杏树。

好的句子运用得到可以为作文提高分值。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语励志名言，希望对你写作有帮助。

1、When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的，也还有未来。

2、Sow nothing, reap nothing.春不播，秋不收。

3、Keep on going never give up.勇往直前， 决不放弃!

4、The wealth of the mind is the only wealth.精神的财富是唯一的财富。

5、Never say die.永不气馁!

6、Nurture passes nature.教养胜过天性。

7、There is no garden without its weeds.没有不长杂草的花园。

8、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

9、The reason why a great man is great is that he resolves to be a great man.伟人之所以伟大，是因为他立志要成为伟大的人。

10、The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.

对明天做好的准备就是今天做到最好!

11、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.

你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。

12、Knowlegde can change your fate and English can accomplish your future.

知识改变命运，英语成就未来。

13、Dont aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

如果你想要成功，不要去追求成功;尽管做你自己热爱的事情并且相信它，成功自然到来。

14、Jack of all trades and master of none.

门门精通，样样稀松。

15、Judge not from appearances.

人不可貌相，海不可斗量。

16、Justice has long arms.

天网恢恢，疏而不漏。

17、Keep good men company and you shall be of the number.

近朱者赤，近墨者黑。

18、Kill two birds with one stone.

一箭双雕。

19、Kings go mad, and the people suffer for it.

君王发狂，百姓遭殃。

20、Kings have long arms.

普天之下，莫非王土。

21、Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量。

21、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.

博学使人谦逊，无知使人骄傲。

22、Learn and live.

活着，为了学习。

23、Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.

好人越学越好，坏人越学越坏。

24、Learn not and know not.

不学无术。

25、Learn to walk before you run.

先学走，再学跑。

26、Let bygones be bygones.

过去的就让它过去吧。

27、Let sleeping dogs lie.

别惹麻烦。

28、Let the cat out of the bag.

泄漏天机。

29、Lies can never changes fact.

谎言终究是谎言。

30、Lies have short legs.

谎言站不长。

31、While there is life there is hope.一息若存，希望不灭。

32、I am a slow walker,but I never walk backwards.我走得很慢，但是我从来不会后退。

33、Cease to struggle and you cease to live. 生命不止，奋斗不息。

34、Never underestimate your power to change yourself!永远不要低估你改变自我的能力!

35、Nothing is impossible!没有什么不可能!

36、Do what you say,say what you do.做你说过的，说你能做的。

37、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say "impossible ".凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。

38、Live a noble and honest life. Reviving past times in your old age will help you to enjoy your life again.过一种高尚而诚实的生活。当你年老时回想起过去，你就能再一次享受人生。

39、You have to believe in yourself . Thats the secret of success.人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。

40、If you fail, dont forget to learn your lesson.如果你失败了，千万别忘了汲取教训。

41、You cannot improve your past, but you can improve your future. Once time is wasted, life is wasted.你不能改变你的过去，但你可以让你的未来变得更美好。一旦时间浪费了，生命就浪费了。

42、There is but one secret to sucess---never give up!成功只有一个秘诀--永不放弃!

43、For man is man and master of his fate.人就是人，是自己命运的主人。

44、What makes life dreary is the want of motive.没有了目的，生活便郁闷无光。

45、Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.困难坎坷是人们的生活教科书。

46、Gods determine what youre going to be.人生的奋斗目标决定你将成为怎样的人。

Tom去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习主动，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。(15 分)

①请你以Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你的感受。

②文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数８０左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

③以下词汇仅供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给……留下印象

Dear Mum and Dad,

Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our school_____________________________________________________________________.

Yours,

Tom

一.不一致(disagreements)

所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等.

例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to .

(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为：once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)

二.修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)

英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化.对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解.例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.

剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末.

三.句子不完整(sentence fragments)

在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.

例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .

剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句.改为：there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.

四.悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)

所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如：at the age of ten, my grandfather died.这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明”谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了.改为：

when i was ten, my grandfather died.

例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college”

五.逻辑主语不清楚.

改为：

to do well in college, a student needs good grades.五.词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)

“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等.例1. none can negative the importance of money.

剖析：negative系形容词，误作动词。

改为：

none can deny the importance of money.

六.指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)

指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句：

mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。)

读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为：

mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.剖析：句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为：

we can also know society by serving it ourselves.

七.不间断句子(run-on sentences)

什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。

例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。

改为：

there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或：there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world

八.措词毛病(troubles in diction)

diction是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。

例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

(农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)

剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。

改为：

the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.

九.累赘(redundancy)

言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：

in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：in spite of his laziness, i like him.例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.

剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。

改为：

diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.

十.不连贯(incoherence)

不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。

例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.

剖析：the fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯。it与things在数方面不一致。

常见联词

表层进

first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly what’s more/also and then/and equally important/besides in addition/further in the first place/still furthermore

last but not the least/next besides/too moreover/finally

表举例

for example for instance/to illustrate as an illustration/after all/表解释

/as a matter of fact/frankly speaking/

雅思考试作文写作技巧与应注意事项

in this case namely/in other words

表总结

in summary in a word/in brief in conclusion/to conclude in fact/indeed in short/in other words /of course/it is true specially/namely in all/that is to summarize/thus as has been said/altogether in other words/finally in simpler terms/in particular that is/on the whole to put it differently/therefore表强调

of course indeed/above all most important/emphasis certainly in fact

表让步

still nevertheless/in spite of all the same/even so after all/concession granted naturally/of course

表比较

in comparison likewise/similarly equally/however likewise/in the same way/

表转折

by contrast although/e same time but/in contrast nevertheless/notwithstanding on the contraryon the other hand otherwise/regardless still/though yet/despite the fact that even so/even though for all that/however in spite of/instead

表时间

after a while afterward/again also/and then as long as/at last at length/at that time before/besides earlier/eventually finally/formerly further/furthermore in addition/in the first place in the past/last lately/meanwhile moreover/next now/presently second/shortly simultaneously/since so far/soon still/subsequently then/thereafter too/until until now/when.

[雅思考试作文写作技巧与应注意事项

寺外烟雾燎绕，寒风刺骨。

一位状元郎跪在庙门口，请求大师收留他。大师来到门外，问：“为什么要出家?”状元郎流着泪说：“我从秀才到举人，从举人状元，全凭文采博得功名，从未遭遇不公，可不想，考取状元达到了顶峰，却被奸人陷害，连个县令也没有当上，实在无脸回乡。”大师听后，若有所思，轻轻地对他说：“你是国家栋梁，尘缘未尽，不应留在寺庙清静一生。”然后转身便进了寺庙。可状元郎坚决要留在这里，跪在庙门口不起来。大师无奈，只好收留了他。

第二天一大早，大师叫醒状元，要带他下山去化缘。

二人下了山。山下有条河，沿河有一条小路向前方延伸。大师不走小路，而是走在结冰的河面上。状元郎为此感到十分不解，但不敢声张。可走着走着，二人都摔了好几个跟头，状元郎实在是憋不住了，对着大师说：“师傅，我们还是到路上走吧。”可大师不语，依然趔趔趄趄地向前走。状元郎又摔了一跤后，实在忍不住了，坐在冰面上对大师喊：“师傅，为何有路不走，走冰面!”大师笑了，问他说：“徒儿有何感觉。”“摔得疼!”状元郎生气地说。“徒儿可知为什么摔倒。”大师接着问。“太滑!”状元郎没有好气地说。“徒儿知道到了疼，知道了冰面太滑，就是没有醒悟。”大师微笑着说。“什么醒悟?”状元依然生气地问。

大师看向远方，对状元说：“冰面容易滑倒，是因没有坎坷，你的人生如冰面，从未遭遇坎坷太平坦了，早晚会摔倒，把这次遭遇当作人生的坎坷吧。”状元一愣，顿有所悟。

英语期中考试优秀作文：Hw t sta health（4篇）

If u want t sta health,u shuld eat re fruit and vegetables.If u want t eep health,u shuldnt eat t uch fried fd.We ust chage ur bad habits.And u shuld have enugh exercise ever da.I thin in this wa,we can eep health.

——孙xx

Health is ver iprtant t us.We shuld be health.If u want t be health,u shuld have enugh exercise,eat health fd and have a gd tietable.I used t watch a lt f TV ever da.But nw I dnt wacth uch TV an lnger.I exercise regularl.S,thats wh I ver health.

——王xx

Ever peple want t eep healeh.But a lt f peple are unhealth because the dnt have a gd diet and the dnt have enugh sleep.If u want t sta health,u shuld nt eat t uch fried fd.u shuld eat se vegetables instead.And u shuld g t bed earl and get up earl.The st iprtant ting is t exercise rugularl.But I dnt have enugh exercise,s I shuld exercise ever da.In this wa,I can sta health.

——毛xx

We shuld sta health.Staing health is iprtant.But hw can we sta health?If we want t sta health,we shuld eat a lt f fruit and vegetables.If we want t sta health,we shuld drin enugh water ever da.If we want t sta health,dnt frget exercise.We shuld exercise regularl ever da.In fact,we can sta health in an different was.Fruit,vegetables,water and enugh exercise are useful t help us t sta health.We als shuld have gd habits.I used t eat a lt f sweets.But nw I dnt eat t an sweets an lnger.Nw I health and teeth are health,t.S if u have bad habits,u shuld change bad habits quicl.If u want t sta health,it will be iprtant t change bad habits.Lets sta health,shall we?

——朱xx

越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)

内容包含：

遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。

劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总数

★ 参考范文

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybodys business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.

We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybodys business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

许多人的生活中都有一个自己最难忘的人，他或许是你朝夕相处的亲人朋友，或许是你仅有过一面之缘的陌生人。而在我记忆的深处，有那样一个人让我终生难忘……

想起来还是三年前的一天，我在图书馆里看书看迷了忘了时间，不知不觉间已经到了下午，天空渐渐下起了淅淅沥沥的小雨。等我反应过来的时候雨已经吓得很大了。

我在书店门口等了一会，眼见天色越来越晚，可这雨丝毫没有要减弱的趋势，我不由得着急了起来。

这时，一阵沉稳的声音在我耳边响起，“小妹妹，需要帮助吗?”我抬头一看，是一个中年模样的叔叔，他手里拿着一把伞。我没有说话，心中暗暗的想：他会不会是个坏人啊，我到底要不要相信他?如果没有伞，我又该怎么回去呢?他仿佛看出了我的心思，安慰我说：“放心，叔叔不是坏人，现在快天黑了，这伞你就拿去吧。”他把伞递到我身前。我看了他一眼，缓缓的接过来。“谢谢。”说完我撑起伞就向家中的方向走去。

走到拐角处的时候，我担心他会不会跟上来，特意回头看了一眼。却发现书店门口早已没了人，而在我的反方向，有一个熟悉的身影在雨中穿梭，然后渐渐消失在了雨中。

我特别后悔自己为什么要那么想那个叔叔，他是个好人。

那位叔叔的帮助我永远不会忘记，我以后也要做一个乐于助人的人。

下面是语文迷网为大家整理提供的中考英语作文高分指导，希望对你有帮助。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于assoonas、stopsomebodyfromdoingsomething、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、givesomebodyahand、giveahandtosomebody、beinneedof等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：MynameisJim.I’mJim.I’mcalled/namedJim.I’maboycalled/named/withthenameofJim.等等。

表达年龄的方式有：Sheis12.Sheis12yearsold.Sheisaged12.Sheisagirlof12(yearsold)。Sheisagirlaged12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

四、耐心修改，提炼句子

很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去修改，相信会让你受益匪浅的。

1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等

当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后，在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力，你务必要选择高级的。例如，就以今年中考的英语作文为例，它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达法，有oldpeople和theold。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，作文中的“病人”的表达法有sickpeople，patients，thesick，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢?当然是thesick了。

2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点

我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办呢?换为最简单的表达法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文题，就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢?怎么不换个说法呢?你看，Ifwehelpourclassmateswiththeirstudyandotherthings，wecanmakeourfriendshiplonger。不就达到目的了吗?

3、大胆改变句型，使之生辉

例如，我们将一些句子改为感叹句，复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何乐而不为呢?

4、高度关注句与句、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。

5、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。

五、一丝不苟抄誊作文

一篇好的作文，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍，那才是大公告成了。

Nowadays, with the development of technology, many young people stay

indoors and play computer all the time. Especially for those who stay up very

late or go out to play for fun until midnight, then they wake up at noon the

next day. This is the unhealthy lifestyle, and they need to make some

changes.

First, having regular break time and enough sleep is the basic way to keep

healthy. Some young people hang out for fun after work. They need to release

their pressure and have fun with their friends. They go home very late and then

next day get up, preparing to work. In the long run, they not only have low

efficiency, but also damage their bodies.

Second, keep the balanced diet. Most people are picky about food. They only

choose the food they like and lose the balance of nutrition. For most kids, they

like to have meat and refuse of the vegetables and fruit. It is not good for the

growth of their bodies.

The healthy lifestyle helps people live the harmonious life. Besides having

enough sleep and keeping balance diet, taking exercise is also in need.

During weekdays, I am busy, because I must go to school. I usually get up

at 6:30 a.m.. And then I do some washing. After that, I will have my breakfast

at 6:50. I usually go to school at 7:15. Now, I can go to school and come home

by myself. I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. I have

my lunch at home. I study Chinese, math, English and some other subjects at

school. At night, I can watch TV or play computer. But I have to finish my

homework first. I usually go to bed at 10:00 p.m..

《程砚秋拒演》

抗日战争时期，日本特务机关企图强迫在北京的京剧界捐献飞机义演，著名京剧表演艺术家程砚秋当即拒绝说：“我不能给日本人唱义务戏，叫他们买飞机去炸中国人。”程砚秋深知日本帝国主义者的凶残，担心自己的拒演连累别人，于是他不卑不亢地说：“献机义演的事，我程某人宁死在枪口下也决不从命，请转告日本人，不要找梨园同行的麻烦。”表现出了崇高的民族气节。

《孙中山的崇高信仰》

伟大的革命先行者孙中山，40年如一日，为中国的独立富强而耗尽了毕生的精力。他自己别无家产，仅有书籍、衣服、一所华侨捐献给他的小住宅。他革命一生的原动力是什么?就是“适乎世界之潮流，合乎人群之需要。”的崇高信仰。

《陆秀夫壮烈殉国》

元兵南进，南宋文武官员拥着11岁的端宗皇帝退到广州海面。不久，端宗受惊而死，大家打算各奔前程。大学士陆秀夫挺身而出：“古人只有一旅一戍，还能中兴，现在百官都在，兵有数万，如果天不绝宋，岂有不能成功之理!”在他的坚持下，宋军继续与元军作战。逃亡朝廷最后以崖山作根据地，在粮食断绝多日之后，元兵发起猛攻，终于打进崖山。为了不做俘虏，陆秀夫背起幼主，毅然跳进海里，壮烈殉国。

I think everyone likes weekend. Because it’s time for relax and fun. Now I

want to talk about my weekend.

I often spend Saturday for fun. Such as playing basketball with my friends,

watching movies and TV shows, having a trip with family and so on. And I always

spend Sunday for homework and have some rest. Sometimes I visit my grandparents

with my parents. It’s very interesting to visit them.

我的妈妈曾是一位让我爱恨交加的人。她每天工作很忙，却依然能把单位和家中的事处理得井井有条。她对我和姐姐一向严厉，尤其是我们的学习，丝毫不含糊。以至于我和姐姐时常感到压力巨大，但是这也成为我们的动力所在。在她生病之前，我对她的感情似乎是模糊的，时而感觉她是我生命中不可缺少的人，时而又希望每天都看不见她，使我压力小一点。

就在去年5月份，一份厄运从天而降，重重击垮了妈妈……

这之前妈妈总感到头疼，虽然全家都劝她去医院看看，但她却倔强地与工作与家务斗争着。最终实在扛不下去，爸爸陪妈妈去银川做检查，我和姐姐在家中焦急地等待检查结果。爸爸在电话中说还需要几天才知晓结果，但是我和姐姐不知道的是妈妈已经住院，开始输液，准备做手术。由于手术的危险性，爸爸不得不回来接我和姐姐去银川。直到看到病床上的妈妈，我才知道一向顽强的她，患的是脑出血。这一噩耗使我备受打击。

才几天不见，本来就瘦弱的妈妈显得憔悴不堪，满头的黑发已被剃光，做好手术前的准备。在前往手术室的路上，妈妈紧紧握着爸爸的手，眼神中流露出少有的不安与胆怯。手术室的门打开了，里面的强光衬着妈妈原本瘦削的背影，愈发消瘦。我只感到心如刀割，泪如泉涌。手术室外，等待、漫长的等待……爸爸、姐姐和我的眼睛紧盯着手术室的门，什么话都不说，仿佛只要一说就会发生可怕的事情。

万幸手术比较顺利。手术后的妈妈，好像变了个人似的，安静、虚弱地躺在病床上。除了为她进行基本的护理，我什么都不能做。

从坚强勇敢到脆弱难过，我知道，妈妈只是生病了;从无知怯懦到勇敢面对，我知道，自己成长了。希望自己可以成为一个让妈妈依靠的男子汉，因为成长就是从一株小草成为一棵遮风避雨的大树

一、解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).

Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)( 这两个变换的词要记住)

Confronted with _ A, we should take a serious of effective measure

s to cope with the situation.(我们应该采取措施认真对待)

For one thing, ------(解决方法一).

For another -------(解决方法二).

Finally, ------(解决方法三).( 这三个变换的词要记住)

Personally, I believe that ---(我的解决方法). In a word , I’m confident that a bright future is a waiting us because------(带来的好处).

二、说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表

明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A(事物) because it has a signific ant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as

follows.(它很好)

First ------(A的优点之一). Besides -------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides.(事物都有两面性).

The negative aspects are also apparent. On the one hand,------(A的第一个缺点).The other hand,---------(A的第二个缺点).

In a word (总之), I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the

negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

So we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circum

stances we are in. Only by this way, it will be better(对前景的测).

三、议论文的框架

不同观点列举型( 选择型 :你会选A还是B，说说理由)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion is different from person to person. A majority of people think (大多数人认为)that _ 观点一________.

There are 2 factors as follows: firstly, ___原因一_______.

Secondly , ___原因二_____.

however,People differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people thin

k that ___观点二_______. On the one hand， ___原因一___ __

__. On the other hand, ____原因二_____.

Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because ____(不仅因为。。还因为。。). The more _harder______, the more __better____.(越努力越好)

四、图表作文的框架

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure inthetable (graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically steadily rising/decreasing from______to ______ . From the sharp/mared decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that(说明) ________.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand,________. On the other hand,_______ is due to the fact that ________.In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons.

But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonlyconvincing.

As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my

opinion is both sound and well-grounded.(我的理由合情合理)

五、说明原因型

(一件事情或事物产生影响的原因)

Currently, A has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than A .It is clear that ( 1 ). if you ( 2 ), as a result ,your dreams will come true . On the contrary(相反), if you ( 3).Failure will be following with you .It turns out that(总结的话) .

No one can deny another fact (没有人会否认事实)that ( 4) .You dont have to lookvery far to find out the truth 。 We all know (5) .It will have a profound influence upon ( 6) For me ,I think (总结全文：题目中观点——某个原因很重要 ).