我的暑假英语作文初二作文60词【热门20篇】

My summer vacation

This years summer vacation, I so happy.

The summer vacation, I at home carefree get boring, until one day, my dance teacher told me that we are still in perfect order, dance dance of the class is rhythm feeling worse, if good rhythm, can go to the match in a couple of months.

Once I listen to, the game soon, then looking for right away. Ah! Where there is a plate to exercise good rhythm?

"Ah," I sighed. Suddenly remind of a computer. Yi? The computer can play MP3, isnt it? Ha ha! Some I le. I immediately opened up the computer, listening to music. I have heard for three weeks, finally recognized the lasting appeal. Turned out to be "dong man dong man" "dong man dong man" every first "dong" is "a" first "man" is "2" the second "dong" is "three" the second "man" is the "four". Rhythm is "1234, 1234" repeatedly, but want to use English.

I believe that as long as we work hard and have good grades.

Happy summer vacation, happy summer vacation, summer vacation without anxiety.

我的暑假

今年的暑假，我过的特别开心。

暑假，我在家闲得无聊，直到有一天，我的舞蹈老师告诉我，我们这个班舞蹈跳的还是井井有条，就是节奏感差些，要是节奏感好，过几个月就可以去比赛了。

我一听，马上就要比赛了，便马上到处找起来。啊!哪里有碟子让了锻炼好节奏感啊?

"哎"我叹了口气.突然想起电脑.咦?电脑不是可以播放MP3吗?呵呵!有的我乐了。我立即把电脑开起来，听曲子。我听了整整三个礼拜，终于听出了里面的韵味。原来是"咚哒哒咚哒哒""咚哒哒咚哒哒"每第一个"咚"就是"一"第一个"哒哒"就是"二"第二个"咚"就是"三"第二个"哒哒"就是"四"。节奏就是"一二三四，一二三四"重复不停的念，不过要用英文。

我相信，只要我们努力比拼，就一定会有好成绩的。

开心的暑假，快乐的暑假，没有忧虑的暑假。

[我的暑假生活英语作文带翻译3篇

In this summer holiday, I didnt attend the summer camp, also did not go out to travel, just stay at home to write my summer homework assignments.

Although it is summer vacation homework, but also do not have a flavor. I take out in writing homework first, open the book, a pen as in the copybook written up a row, particularly serious, because I know if there is no written, there will be a punishment comes. Time soon, after I have finished writing the a, pick it up in the sunlight, she look a look, really good. Followed by a second, I want to write this one looks very little, but it is not good to write to write. After I finish writing the content, a look, there are a lot of grid can collapse, had no choice but to rewrite it again.

Word is a kind of very good leisure, it can let a person quiet short-tempered, also can let a persons word more beautiful, I feel in writing is quite good. Sometimes feel the word hate, tired, why others dont tired, because their word by heart. Summer vacation, I at home day and others to play outside, I envy, but I think the word "game" is also a kind of happy, I like the word!

My English is not very good, so mom and dad give me to quote a cram school during the summer vacation, think of them so hard for me, I also want to more to learn English well.

Mathematics but I didnt make me tired, but mother busy every day during the summer vacation, was going to work and to teach me learn math,

Sometimes learn to learn to feel it is quite interesting.

Alas, I this summer vacation in addition to practice calligraphy, maths and English...... of all the other things didnt do, I live in learning all day.

在这个暑假里，我既没有参加夏令营，也没有出去旅行，我只呆在家里写暑假作业。

虽然是写暑假作业，但也别有一番风味。我先拿出练字的作业，翻开书本，一笔一划的照着字帖临写起来，特别认真，因为我知道如果没有写好，会有惩罚降临的。时间很快，转眼我已经写完一张了，拿起来在阳光的照射下，自己瞧一瞧，真是不错呀。紧接着我要写第二张了，这一张看起来内容很少，不过写起来就不一定好写。我把这些内容写完之后，一看还有很多格子，简直崩溃了，没办法只能再重新写一遍。

练字其实是一种很好的休闲方式，它既可以让一个毛躁的人安静，也可以让一个人的字更加漂亮，我就觉得练字挺好。有时是觉得练字很讨厌，很烦，为什么别人不厌倦呢，因为他们用心练字了。暑假里，我在家练字，别人在外玩，我很羡慕，可是我认为练字也是一种愉快的“游戏”，我喜欢练字!

我的英语不是很好，因此爸爸妈妈在暑假期间给我报了一个补习班，想到他们那么努力的为我，我也要更加学好英语才可以。

数学可是我的老大难，令我厌倦不已，但是在暑假里妈妈每天忙忙碌碌，又要上班又要教我学数学，

有时自己学着学着感觉还挺有意思的。

唉，我这个暑假除了练字、学数学和学英语······其他的事情都没做，我整天都活在学习当中。

Today is a memorable day, because Im going to the bus station when volunteers. Although the sun like a want to sear us, but I Im not afraid.

In the afternoon, I found volunteers set to follow mother, has gathered a lot of people there. A big brother said to me: "kid, you go to the opposite of a pavilion to send tea!" Im glad to go over. Pavilion, there is a table with two buckets, one filled with chrysanthemum, one filled with boiling water. Volunteers sister called Zhang Liyuan and I gave her the cup and convenient passers-by her water to drink. But very few people to take water, mothers will mobilize our to send tea to passers-by. So, I carry water cup, to the passing pedestrians, but gave a lot of people say not to. How to do? I came up with a good way to move, and that is carefully to see the people, once found staring at the pot, immediately gave them water. Sure enough, these people are happy took me into the water.

This is my first time to when volunteers, although busy one afternoon, sweat soaked my clothes, but in the mind very happy.

今天是个难忘的日子，因为我要去汽车东站当志愿者。虽然太阳像要把我们烤焦似的，但我我一点都不害怕。

下午，我跟着妈妈找到了志愿者集合地，那里已经聚集了不少人。一个大哥哥对我说：“小朋友，你去对面的凉亭里送茶吧!”我高兴地走了过去。凉亭里有一张桌子，上面有两个大桶，一个装着菊花，一个装着开水。志愿者姐姐叫我和张力源给她递杯子，方便她倒水给路人喝。可是来拿水的人很少，妈妈们就动员我们去给路人送茶。于是，我端着水杯，递给路过的行人，但是很多人却摆摆手说不要。怎么办呢?我动了动脑筋，想出了好办法，那就是仔细地观察路人的表情，一旦发现目不转睛地盯着茶壶的人，就马上给他们送上水。果然，这些人都开心接过了我送上的水。

这是我第一次当志愿者，虽然忙碌了一个下午，汗水湿透了我的衣服，但心里很开心。

什么是“低碳生活”呢?带着这个疑问，我来到了绍兴科技馆，里面图文并茂地展出了许多关于“低碳生活”的图片，其实，所谓的“低碳生活”就是减少二氧化碳的排放，选择健康地生活，我们每一个球人都应该从节约资源开始做起。

What is "low carbon life"? With this question, I came to the Shaoxing science and Technology Museum, which displays many illustrations of "low carbon life" picture, in fact, the so-called "low carbon life" is to reduce carbon emissions, to choose a healthy life, we each ball people should start from the conservation of resources.

首先从节约用电开始说起吧，发电会消耗许多的能源，像我们这里是用烧煤来发电的，这样就会污染环境。所以平时冰箱里要少存放食品，用完电器后要及时拔掉插座，把家里的白炽杰换成节能灯等。

First, from the conservation of electricity to start, power will consume a lot of energy, like we are burning coal to generate electricity, it will pollute the environment. So usually the refrigerator storage of food less, run out of time after pull out the electrical socket, the home of the incandescent, replaced with energy-saving lamps etc..

其次，我们出行时要少开车，多坐公交车和骑自行车，这样可以大大减少二氧化碳的排放。保护了环境，减少了雾霾的产生，更能有效防止地球变暖后，北极的冰川融化，涨平面升高等。

Secondly, when we travel to drive less, take the bus or riding a bicycle, which can greatly reduce carbon dioxide emissions. To protect the environment, reduce haze, can be more effective to prevent global warming, polar melting glaciers, rising levels of higher.

最后，我们还要节约用水，洗涮时要少用清洁剂，减少水的污染，生活用水要做到一水多用，比如洗脸水可以用来冲厕所，淘米水可以用来浇花等

Finally, we need to save water, wash to use less detergent, reduce the pollution of water, living water to do water use, such as washing water can be used to flush the toilet, washing water can be used to water the flowers.

总而言之，“低碳生活”的方式有很多，少用一次性的碗和筷子，用环保袋来代替塑料袋，用手帕来替代纸巾。

To make a long story short, "there are a lot of low carbon life", use less disposable bowls and chopsticks, use environmental protection bags instead of plastic bags to replace the paper towel, handkerchief.

地球只有一个，需要大家共同的爱护，走近低碳，让世界更加灿烂。

There is only one earth, we need to work together to take care of, to low carbon, to make the world more brilliant.

Christmas Day falls on the twenty-fifth of December. It is a very happy day for many boys and girls. Before the term ends in some schools, the children act a nativity or “birth” play, showing how Jesus was born in a stable.

12月25日是圣诞节。对许多男孩和女孩来说，这天是个非常开心的日子。在某些学校，学期结束前，孩子们会表演有关(耶稣)诞生或出生的戏剧，用来(向大家)展示耶稣是如何在马厩里出生的。

On the twenty-fourth of December, all children are very excited. Usually they are sent to bed early so that their parents can get the presents ready. The younger children think that Father Christmas will come down the chimney or fireplace, so they hang up a sock for him to put presents in. The greedy ones even hang up a pillow-case or a sack to try to get more presents. Later that night, father or mother will put presents in the sock, and leave others at the side of the bed.

在12月24日这天，所有的小孩都很兴奋。他们常常被(父母)早早地赶上床去睡觉，以便他们的父母能准备好礼物。年幼一点的小孩认为圣诞老人将从烟囱或壁炉里下来，所以他们挂起袜子，方便圣诞老人把礼物放进去。有些贪心的人，为了能得到更多的礼物，甚至把枕套或布袋挂起来。晚一些时候，爸爸或妈妈将礼物放进袜子，并把其他礼物放在(孩子们的)床边。

On Christmas morning, the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light at two oclock, and most of them are awake by six oclock, and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one oclock in the afternoon, the Christmas dinner is brought in. The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten. Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it. The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas holidays comes to an end.

圣诞节的早上，小孩们很早就醒来了。一些人甚至在凌晨两点开灯，但大多数小孩会在六点醒来，孩子们在(大人们)准备晚餐的时候玩耍。下午一点，圣诞大餐出炉了。火鸡或鸡腿总是很快被抢光。孩子们寻找着属于他们的圣诞布丁是为了确认金币是否有藏在里面。在剩余的时间里，(人们)便是玩游戏和吃食物直到最开心幸福的圣诞节结束。

我好开心啊!2个月的暑假来到了，心想：这下可以无忧无虑的玩儿了，可以出去旅游了!但是，我转念一想，暑假有两个月，妈妈前几天还说要给我报班呢。一想到这，我的精神头就减了一半，只好耐心的等着妈妈的安排了。

从放假的第一天，我就开始上着妈妈给我报的“补习班”。天天都要上课，早上起的很早，晚上也回来的很晚。刚开始上几天，我一直吃不消，心想：天天都这么累，还要放假干什么呀!要不然我不上了吧。可是，上课虽然累点儿，可还是对我有帮助的。我坚定地对自己说：“不要怕，咬咬牙，坚持过去，不就是一个月嘛。”随后半个多月，我把上课当做一种乐趣。上课认真听讲，回家来除了写暑假作业，我还提前预习，这样，七月份很快被我用掉了。我自己认为：这个七月份很有意义，我过的很充实、快乐。如果我当初放弃了，我也许会碌碌无为一个月，一个月的美好时光就会被白白丢弃。我很庆幸当初自己选择了“坚持”这条阳光大道，这一个月，是坚持让我硕果累累;是坚持让我满载而归。

因为我七月份表现的很好，作业也完成了，所以妈妈奖励我去泰山旅游。

那天，我们一家三口坐火车到泰山游玩，好高的山啊，我和爸爸爬得很快，只有妈妈体力不够，落在我的后边很远的地方，我就跑上跑下的，就像一个撒了欢的小兔子一样兴奋。就这样，我们一边吃，一边爬，一边赏着美景，手中的好吃的越来越少，可是垃圾越来越多。转眼快到“五岳至尊”的地方了，看到有一面峭壁上写了很多的大字，好漂亮的字啊!我一边说着一边朝着那些大字跑过去!心里那个高兴劲就别提了!欣赏完了书法后，我坐在城墙边休息，还是吃着水果，那个高兴劲就别提了。一不小心，就把垃圾袋调到墙外边去了。我心想，反正也不是在路上，就别管了吧，看到墙外边就是陡峭的悬崖，心想我一定要小心!就离开了那里，走出不远，我越想就心里越感觉不是滋味，要是大家都和我一样，把垃圾掉到墙外边，岂不是垃圾就比城墙高了?想到这里，我马上往后跑，就在这时，我看到了感人的一幕：一个外国的大姐姐正拿着我的垃圾袋朝我们走来，我的脸一下子红了!外国姐姐的环保意识真好啊!我与她相比真是逊色了。这个时候爸爸妈妈都走过来了，妈妈不好意思的走到外国姐姐的跟前，接过我们的垃圾袋，不知道该怎么和她解释……我发誓我以后一定要做一个环保的小卫士。

在山中要走很多的路，虽然我感到很疲惫，但我还是坚持了。因为我们做了一件很丢脸的事情!经过了当天那感人的一幕，我的心灵得到了一次彻底的洗涤。

也就是从那一天起，不管在什么时候，什么地点，只要我看见有垃圾，我都会主动的弯腰捡起来，只要我看见有乱扔垃圾的人或事，我都会去进行劝说，让我们的社会多一些和谐的因素。我因此也受到了老师和同学们的好评，这其中的原因只有我自己最清楚。

所以我觉得，有时候一件事情就能改变一个人的一生，我希望每一名同学都能够做一个对社会有用的人，做一个道德高尚的人!

[我的暑假生活是彩色的初二作文

With the development of economy, there are more and more vehicles on the

streets. Governments at all levels have to do something to solve the problem of

heavy traffic in the city.

I would like to share with you some ideas about this problem: firstly, the

government should build more roads. This action can decrease the degree of

street congestion and make it possible for cars to run faster than ever before.

But each coin has two sides. If a city builds too many roads, the streets will

occupy much land. We will have little space used for other purposes. So

secondly, more special bus lines for public transportation should be added. Thus

people can go conveniently everywhere they like; they will not ride bikes or

drive cars. In this way, the number of cars and bikes on the road will be

greatly cut down.

As far as I am concerned, if we want to solve this problem, we should set

up an idea of public transportation first and give a priority to this idea in

our traffic work.

In addition to tension, enrich the study life, I also have a relaxed, enjoyable holiday. The rich content, enriched my life, as well as childish students career added a few minutes of fun and carefree.

At ones go for a walk after dinner is my daily required course. Stroll near the village of flowers and plants, breathing the fresh air, and the bird companion, to enjoy a rich rose, lily of the noble and pure, strange flowers, dinner and beautiful magnolia, cannas brilliant, I will gently said to myself: "life is beautiful." I use the sincere feeling around colorful, with enthusiasm to appreciate the very beautiful flowers around us. I spontaneously from the heart: "I, belong to nature!"

More to the book, I will plunge into the ocean, breathing the smell of the fragrance of bookstores, libraries specific, experience the fun of walking books. Into the ocean of history, qin shi huang burying Confucian behavior and anger, would I be for farewell my sad tears, for the various ge is bright "teacher heel dead" untimely. Stroll the palace of literature, I gradually realize the treasure chai helpless, dai jade talent, experience of Marys stubbornness, colin weak, experience of the early morning rain listen "yu, qian zhongshus" fortress besieged "...

My summer vacation life, is a poem, a green leaf, a song...

除了紧张、充实的学习生活外，我还拥有轻松、愉快的假期生活。那丰富多采的内容，充实了我的人生，也为童稚的学生生涯增添了几分乐趣与悠然。

茶余饭后去散步是我每天的必修课。漫步在小区的花草旁，呼吸着清香的空气，与花鸟作伴，欣赏着玫瑰的浓郁，百合的高洁，晚饭花的奇特，还有玉兰的娇美，美人蕉的绚丽,我会轻轻地对自己说：“生活真是美的。”我用真诚感受身边的五颜六色，用热情欣赏周围的姹紫嫣红。我不由自主地从内心发出：“我，属于大自然!”

更多地，我会一头扎进书的海洋，呼吸着书店、图书馆特有的那种书香的气味，感受漫步书海的乐趣。钻进历史的海洋，我会为秦始皇焚书坑儒的举动而激愤，为霸王别姬的悲惨而落泪，为诸葛亮“出师未捷身先死”扼腕叹息;漫步文学的殿堂，我渐渐体会到宝钗的无奈、黛玉的才华，体会到玛丽的倔强、科林的孱弱，体会到余秋雨的“晨雨初听”、钱钟书的“围城”……

我的暑假生活，是一首诗，一片绿叶，一支歌……

When I grow up , I’m going to be a journalist(记者). I have been eager(渴望的)to do something benificial(有益的)to the world. And I think it suitable(适合的)for me to be a journalist.

To realise(实现)my dream, I will study harder. Whats more, I am going to write articles(文章)for magazines and newspaper in my free time, so I can know more about the job.

If I work hard enough, my dream will come ture.

时间匆匆，放假一个月了。我们在这阳光明媚的下午，练习打羽毛球。

我们拿来了两个羽毛球拍和一个羽毛球。来到打羽毛球的地区，我们开始准备对打。

我先发球，我把羽毛球往空中一抛，然后用羽毛球拍一打。唉!没有打着，只见羽毛球可怜兮兮的躺在地上。我一点也不灰心丧气，我捡起球，一次、两次、三次……的练着，经过反反复复的练习，我成功的发出了球，我高兴极了，只见姐姐在那里没有防备，羽毛球又落在了地上，姐姐把球挑了起来，往空中使劲一抛，对准一打，球就飞向了我这边，我拿起羽毛拍一挥，当然，我没有打着，我只得把球重新捡起来，重新发了一个球。由于我发的有点高，姐姐跳起来一拍，球又飞了过来，我也学样，对准了，使劲一拍，球就飞向姐姐那边，我成功了。“我会打羽毛球了!”我高兴地叫了起来。

接下来，我和姐姐又热火朝天的打了起来，不过，每次都是我输得多。

Last summer holiday I went to Paris with my parents by plane. First we visited the Arc and Triomphe, and we took many photos. Then we went to the Notre Dame, which is very wonderful. We saw a lot of interesting things. Finally we came to the Eiffel tower, and there were so many people, but they were all friendly. After that we sat on the grass, looking at the view. We felt very happy.

去年暑假我和父母坐飞机去了巴黎。我们先参观了阿尔克和凯旋门，我们拍了很多照片。然后我们去了巴黎圣母院，那里很壮观。我们看到很多有趣的东西。最后我们来到埃菲尔铁塔，那里人很多，不过他们都很友好。之后，我们坐在草地上，看风景。我们都非常高兴。

What a pleasant trip! I will never forget it.

真是一个愉快的旅行!我永远都不会忘记的。

In spite of the flood disaster, a good harvest is still in sight.

Yesterday we went to a nearby village to help the peasants get in the crops. We left our school early in the morning. It took us half an hour to reach the village. As soon as we got there, we joined the peasants in their harvesting work. They taught us how to cut rice, and how to tie it. It was in the fields that we had our lunch. After lunch, we had a short rest. We were fascinated by the beautiful scenery of the countryside. It got dark when we returned home. We were very tired, but we felt very happy.

今年暑假，我和爷爷、爸爸、妈妈一起去韩国旅游，一共是六天，在这六天里，我过得多姿多彩。到底这几天我是怎么过的呢?让给我说说吧!

不仅是我喜欢来韩国看一看，竟然在我们同一个团里面，碰到了我们学校的3个师兄。第一天我们就来到了环境优美，气温适宜的釜山，第一次吃上正宗的韩国餐，说真的，所谓的韩国泡菜还真不适合我们广州人口味。第二天我们来了庆州，参观了著名的泰迪熊博物馆，在博物馆里面，通过看泰迪熊的各种造型，让我了解了韩国不同时期的文化，不同时期的穿着。第三天，我们乘坐飞机来到了有“东方夏威夷”之称的济州岛，这个岛果然名不虚传啊，让我第一次见到是黑色沙子的沙滩，第一次见到像蜂窝煤一样的岩石，美丽的大海跟草原交织在一起，形成了济州岛一副美丽的风景。第四天，我们坐飞机来到了韩国首都—首尔，去了我们小朋友最喜欢去的地方——乐天世界，好玩的地方当然多人啦，为了玩一个穿梭火车项目，爸爸妈妈陪我排了两个小时的队伍，但我玩得很开心。第五天，我们来到了首尔塔，这个地方可是妈妈一直梦寐以求来的地方，因为妈妈爱看的{来自星星的你｝就在这里拍摄的，在塔上看首尔的全景美丽极了。第六天，参观了景福宫，也就是相当于我们北京的故宫，可我们的故宫气派很多，快乐的旅程也就在今天结束了。

这就是我多姿多彩的韩国之旅，很精彩吧!

我计划这个暑假独自去旅行。我曾经去旅游过几次，但是都是跟我家人或者朋友去的，从来没有自己去过。我想独自旅行一次，这样可以锻炼自己更坚强更自信。我把我的计划告诉了我的父母，他们非常支持我，还认为这是帮我成长的一个号机会。他们还告诉了我许多旅行要点，并帮我准备行李。我非常感激父母的理解以及他们对我的决定的尊重。我不会让他们失望。

I plan to go to travel alone this summer vacation. I have traveled several times, but gone with my family or friends, never did it alone. I want to do it once, so I can train myself to be stronger and more confident. I told my parents about my plan, they supported me very much, and they thought it is a good opportunity to help me grow up. They also told me many tips of traveling and prepared the package for me. I am grateful that my parents understand me and respect my decision. I won’t let them down.

The day of the holiday is so empty and boring. There is no past Lang Lang reading sound, no past the students laughing and laughing, happy to make trouble, there is no teacher classroom chatter of the lectures and chalk on the blackboard "blah" sound. The only feeling is that it is quiet.

Now, the beginning of the kind of time to get rid of the burden of learning after the relaxed and joy of the mood has long gone. The morning is no longer worried about late, even if the sun rose Lao Gao, or lazy Lai on the bed cranky, but after sleep, wearing a "daydream", and feel bored and ridiculous. So I quickly get up, won a book before the most want to see, but always shaking the beginning of those few words; want to mention the pen to do math problems, but thinking has become so late; helpless had to put down the book Look at the TV, but always let the old ? that couch? Help; ... days so boring dull. This feeling is easy to give a dull monotonous, and will lead to lurking in the heart of the inertia.

All day living a boring monotonous life, someday mood just like to go out to stroll, but God does not buy my single, burning sun baked the earth, the streets come and go kind of people all sweat, had And at home, Im afraid it is boring day. One day, the sky can not see the sun, but rainy, standing at the door, looking at the sky rain is dilute cracking cracking, and then look at the foot of the brand new shoes, forget it, the shoes dirty To be scolded.

Back home, I lay in bed, my mind and involuntarily start cranky. No, the day can not be mixed in this, what should be done. Take out the summer job, facing it tick out my "cut constantly, reason also chaos" thoughts, so reluctantly survive the degree of "when" two years. I came to the computer before, just to sit down, the mother on the opening: "how to play computer ah! The teacher said even if the holiday to ensure that every day to learn six hours Caixing ... ..."

Alas, when the boring summer vacation is a head!

Summer vacation life rich and colorful, flavor, let a person aftertaste endless. The most interesting or learn to swim in the swimming pool of the matter.   Remember the day on August 10, I cant swim, a listen to friends said wantai hotel swimming pool is open, is extremely happy. A school, I was at the speed of fast ran home to tell mom, mom a listen to, say: "good! Your dad and Ill take you to go tomorrow."

翻译：

暑假生活丰富多彩，有滋有味，让人回味无穷。最有趣的还是在游泳池学游泳的那件事。

记得八月十几号那天，不会游泳的我，一听朋友说万泰大酒店的游泳池开放了，就高兴得不得了。一放学，我便以飞快的速度跑回家告诉妈妈，妈妈一听，就说：“好吧!明天你爸爸和我就带你去。

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

啊！十一到了，想念已久的万仙山，我来了！

我们先来到了绝壁长廊，这条绝壁长廊是13名壮士开凿，打坏了不计其数把锤子和錾子在绝壁上建出了一条通往外面世界的路。说笑间，我，赵小豹，丁泰薪发现了天池。天池不像往常那样清澈。湖水上还点缀着垃圾，咳，这些大人一点也不知道保护环境。天池旁边有一条阶梯，哥哥们一点也不让着我，争先恐后的往上爬，把我甩在后面。顺着这条阶梯往上走，我们便来到了另一个景点——崖上人家。到了崖上人家，山上热了起来，无奈间，又累又饿的我们只好停止环游，15个人一一坐在石板上。最倒霉的丁泰薪和赵小豹发酸奶和馍片，吃完东西，我们继续环游。我们在烈日当空的山顶寻找了一个又一个旅馆，可都是因为太贵所离去，终于找到了最好的旅馆。放下了包包，我们继续游玩。我们分别到了喊泉，瑶池，天梯……玩了一天的我们累极了，早早的吃完饭睡觉了，当丁泰薪和赵小豹上厕所的时候，见到了老外，说了一句hello便走了。

第二天，我们赶路去南坪路上摘了不少山里红。到达了目的地，我们去了丹分沟，去的时候我们怀着各种心态去，到达丹分沟，我们小孩集体要求买冰糕。吃完冰糕，我们要走了，我心里暗自自喜：我们凯旋归来了！

万仙山太美了，美得让我流连忘返！拜拜，万仙山！

The Advantages of Travel Alone

I like to travel to different places, I can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. My friends and I always travel together, we make many plans in advance. But the plans will always be interrupted by all kinds of unexpected incidents, like the bad weather, the holiday being cancelled, so we have to spend another time to wait for the trip. Traveling alone can ignore these problems, I can go to travel whenever I want, I just need to pick up my backpack, and then buy the ticket. It is so free, I don’t have to wait for others, I can go to the places I want to. Traveling alone is good.

我喜欢去不同的地方旅行，我可以看到美丽的风景和了解不同的文化。我总是和朋友一起旅行，我们提前订好很多计划。但是计划总是会被各种各样意想不到的事件打断，比如天气不好，假期被取消等等，因此我们不得不花时间等待下次的旅程。独自旅行就能忽视这些问题，我可以随时去旅行，只需要背起背包，买上票。那是多么的自由，我不用等其他人，去我想去的地方。独自旅行真好。

Peer pressure means the influence given by a group of people around you,

such as, parents, friends, classmates, teachers and so on. Their influence will

affect your attitude, behavior, conception or decision. As every side has two

sides, this influence also has two sides. Let me explain my reasons.

For one thing, influence of peer pressure has positive effect. It depends

on the specific thing. Sometimes, the influence of pressure will promote me get

progress. For instance, my deskmate does well in one math exam, while I fall far

behind her. As we are deskmates, i can’t let others look down on me. So i will

take her as my good example to fight. And then next time, I can get a good mark

by my effort. Take my parents as another example, they like clean. They don’t

have the habit to throw rubbish at will. I won’t have this habit either living

with them.

For another, influence of peer pressure has negative effect. Sometimes the

influence will be bad. For example, if my friends ask me to skip class to watch

a basketball match with them, i go with them, even i don’t have that thought

before. And one of my friends has gone through a lot, he always try to convince

me that money is very important. As time passes, i may change my conception.

In summary, the influence of peer pressure has positive and negative sides.

We have to advocate the good side and avoid the negative. We have to be clear

about what is right and what is wrong and firm our position.

Today is Sunday. This morning, I went to the swimming pool with my mum.I decided to learn swimming today.

At first, I could not swim at all. My mother was very patient. She taught me how to swim.Three hours later, I could swim by myself. Although I couldnt swim very well, I was very happy.